2011上海中考英语作文
【篇一：上海市历届中考英语作文题目】
上海市历届中考英语作文题目
2002 my favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物
2003 to be a lovely shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人
2004leave school 毕业时分
2005 growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼
2006 i have a dream 我有一个梦
2007 a story about my parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事
2008love around me 爱在我身边
2009i want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么
2010im proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪
2011i’m a member of .... 我是……的一员
2012if you are joe.your friend betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议
2013 how to protect myself 如何保护自己
2014 this time next year 明年此时
【篇二：2011年上海市英语中考作文样本】
2011年上海市英语中考作文样本
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family is a person’s best shelter. it provides care, love and happiness for a man. everyone has his own family. so do i. i’m very glad to be a member of my family. in my family, my father works hard and earns money for us. he intends to make us had a comfortable life. my mother takes charge of some important things in my family, and she does the housework. i try my best to study hard and sometimes i help my parents to do not only housework but also other things.
i feel very good being a member of my family. on one hand, the positive atmosphere in my family spreads an active attitude in my mind. it helps me a lot and makes me get rid of my bad habits. in addition, i learn how to face and overcome a
coming problem. on the other hand, my parents gives me care and love all the time. so i get aware of the importance of love and care little by little and bit by bit. besides, my parents teach me how to respect other people and how to live independently. the knowledge they teach me is really useful and i’m really thankful to my parents.family is very precious to a man. no one can live a happy lif e without his own family. so let’s cherish our families and enjoy being members of our families! 2
i think the most beautiful things in the world are the smiles on people’s faces who are helped by me, so i am glad to be a member of volunteer group.
in order to help the people around us or far away from us, ous group members have organized many meaningful activities. last holiday, we made many special newspapers by ourselves which are about the environmental protection. we sold them to the people in the nearby park so that we could send the money we got to the red cross. helping others always makes us feel extremely happy.
as a member of volunteer group, i often call on people around me to do voluntary work, too, because volunteering is great, isn’t it?
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i like reading, so i joined reading club. i;m glad to be a member of reading club. some members of the club always lend me some books which are interesting and meaningful! i think reading is good for me. it’s good for my writing. what’s more,
i can learn many things from books. from lu xun’s articles, i know we must love china. from the books of scientists’ success, i know that he who doesn’t care about the little things will find he can not do the best things.
i think reading is wonderful and i feel happy as such a member.
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i like aogs best so i joined the club last year.
someone told me a story. a little boy faced to his pet dog;s death and said, ‘i know why dogs can only live for about ten years. that’s because dogs have learnt how to lov e others
earlier than our human beings!’ i was moving and i loved dogs more.
the story i heard during the club activity told me how to love my pet dog and understand a dog’s death.
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i am enjoy listening to music. so i think i am a member of like listening to music. by listen to the music i can not only forget unhappy bu
t also all days tiredness. there are many kinds of music in the world, such as cowboy music, pop music, classical music and so on. in the music, i like pop music best. i am glad to be a member of listen to the music.
【篇三：2011年上海中考英语一模各区作文仿写】
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why do we come to school? different people may have different answers. some people say that they come to school
to study just because they dream of a better job, a better future. but in my viewpoint, study brings me happiness. it is said that everyone who is interested in studying may find pleasure in reading. exactly! study can not only eich my knowledge and broaden my mind, but bring me lots of fun as well. whats more, study always teaches me how to be honest, confident and knowledgeable. in a word, i like studying very much.（97）虹口)
what did i use to be? i was not a clever boy and i never thought i should study hard. i hated school and disliked the teachers who were too strict with me. maybe playing computer games and running after fashions were the only interesting things to me. but now ive changed a lot. looking at the boys and girls who are studying hard all day, i feel lonely. study hard, and try my best !
chase my dream and never regret! this is who i am. say goodbye to what i used to be! i feel good!
（98）
changes the world expo has brought us(杨浦)
as we all know, the 2010 world expo was held in our city last year. it was a great success.
millions of visitors from home and abroad came to shanghai to visit it. changes have taken place after the great event. first, we can see haibao here and there. the smiling mascot stands for the friendliness and confidence of people in shanghai. second, streets are wider and our
transportation is more convenient than before. there are flowers and trees on either side of the roads. besides, more and more foreign companies are being built in shanghai. shanghai will be more prosperous in the future! better city, better life. as a shanghainese, i feel very proud.（115）
li huas visit to julias family(徐汇)
li hua is in london on his study trip. last sunday he paid a visit to julias family. this was her first visit to a british family, so she arrived early in the morning. julia welcomed her warmly. she introduced her parents to li hua. li hua gave them a traditional chinese painting as a present. they liked it very much. julia showed li hua around her house. at noon, jilias mother cooked much western food. li hua enjoyed it very much. what a good time li hua had!(89)
i can learn about cooperation from our school activities(普陀) all work and no play make jack a dull boy. so our school always has various activities. they are good for our studies. among them, i liked playing basketball best. i can learn about cooperation from basketball. we know basketball needs team spirit, and a player on a basketball team should cooperate with the others. how will we live and work with others in the future? maybe cooperation with others is the best choice.(74)
the best tv programme ive ever watched(青浦)
the best tv programme ive ever watched is《tom and jerry》《.tom and jerry》is a cartoon tv series and it is very famous in the world. the story is about a house cat(tom) and a little cute mouse(jerry) . tom always chases jerry and fights with him. but tom hardly succeeds in catching jerry mainly because of jerrys cleverness, abilities, and luck. this cartoon tv series brings me a lot of fun. it also teaches me what friendship is. i love it very much. (90)
the best tv programme ive ever watched(青浦)
the best tv programme ive ever watched is《human and nature》. the programme is broadcasted on cctv1 every week. it is about animals、plants and the relationship between human and nature. from this tv programme , ive got to know that nature is full of mysteries. i also realize that humans are responsible for the bad environment. if we dont care about nature, we will pay much more. the tv programme brings me much knowledge. i love it very much. (84)
getting on well with friends(长宁)
everyone needs friends. one cant imagine a life without friends. i always make friends with others, so i have many
good friends. we share our joy as well as our sadness together. of
course ,sometimes friends dont get on well. we may have problems. if so, we need to cool down. after all, trust and tolerance are the best ways to settle these problems. in a short time, we will make up and become friends again. (76)
the best way to make me happy(松江)
sometimes things go wrong and i may feel rather
upset/blue/depressed. when im not in a good mood, i like reading a funny story or playing games with my friends. but
the best way to make me happy is to listen to music. for one thing, music can relax me and give me much pleasure. for another thing. listening to english songs can improve my english skills. in one word, i feel happy while listening. (74)
how to use computers correctly(卢湾)
dear friends,
how time flies! im very glad here to tell you something about computers. computers have both advantages and disadvantages. we can search the internet for information, listen to music, chat with our friends, play computer games .. . but some students have problems. they spend too much time on the computers. this is not good for their eyes and does harm to their studies as well. even worse, some students may watch bad web sites. so it is necessary for us to use computer correctly. here is some advice: firstly, homework first and surf the internet regularly. secondly, dont give your personal information to a stranger. thirdly, do things that are good to your studies. i wish you a colorful school life! (123)
yours,
li fei
new years day 2011(黄浦)
my new years day 2011 was a wonderful day. i had a three-day holiday. during the holiday, my grandma, who lives in the countryside ,came to see my family. she hasnt been in shanghai for several years. so i showed her around shanghai. we visited nanjing walkway road, the bund, the jinmao building ad so on. we also bought lots of things in shopping malls. grandma felt surprised that shanghai has changed a lot. she almost lost her way. we were both very tired, but we were very happy, too. (90)
water shortage(宝山)
as we all know, water is very important in our life. we cant imagine life without water. but now, lots of rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. clean water is less and less. the problem of water shortage is becoming more and more serious.
we should take some actions to solve this problem. first, government should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers or lakes. second, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath. finally, we shouldnt leave the tap running when we are brushing our teeth. if we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.
(94)
i want to be an environment protector(金山)
nowadays the problems of environment are becoming more and more serious. factories pour dirty water (chemical waste) into rivers or lakes. cars give off waste gas and the air is unhealthy for us to breathe. more and more trees are cut down. the earth is our only home and we have the duty to take care of it. so i want to be an environment protector. first, i will tell the people around me to protect environment. second, id like to plant more trees with my friends. finally, i will shop with a reusable bag instead of a plastic bag. i believe if every one of us do something to protect our environment, our world will be greener and more beautiful.(119)
something i will never forget(崇明)
i will never forget the experience (i went through) when i was in junior two. it was an
english lesson. my english teacher, mr. wang, gave us a topic be confident in yourself. we had only five minutes to prepare, and then someone would be asked to give a speech in front of the whole class. i was a shy boy/girl and i was not good at spoken english as well. but suddenly i found that mr.wang. was looking at me. his eyes seemed to tell me that i could be the first
volunteer. i was shocked but full of courage. of course, i was the first to go onto the platform and gave my classmates a speech, not perfect but wonderful.
today im still thankful to mr.wang. this experience teaches me be confident in myself and nothing can beat me.(137)
a thing happened in my class(奉贤）
last friday afternoon, our class held a special class meeting——contest of singing english songs. we sang a lot of english songs , such as far away from home, big big world, my heart will go on, seasons in the sun and so on. the whole class were excited and full of laughter. through this activity, i began to love english songs. also this contest is instructive and it makes me interested in learning english now. (78)
2015年上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文精选 宝山区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷 初三英语 Recently there has been a discussion about the topic “Water Is Precious” in your class. Please write at Host 60 words about the topic "Water Is Precious" to express your point of view,(请以“水是珍贵的”写一篇至少60词的作文，标点符号不占格） (你的作文内容须包含以下几点) 1）Why is water very important in our life? 2）What are the causes of the water shortage? 3）How can we protect our precious water resources? 范文（1） Water is precious Undoubtedly , no man can live without water. When we begin the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work. Farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. The factory needs water to process the production. Animals need water to live their lives. However, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. Some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. As students, we should have the sense of saving water. Saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. Given all of its importance and urgency, we must spare no effort to do what I have suggested you. 范文（2） Water is precious Water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. Although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the earth ,there are many people who can’t get access to water in the world. But how can this be? Above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. Another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry. Facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save water in our daily life and reuse it. Only in this way can we protect our precious water resources. 崇明县2014-2015学年度第一学期教学质量调研测试卷 初三英语 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Changes in my school".(以“学校发生的变化” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the fallowing points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考) -----What changes have taken place in your school? -----What do you think of these changes? (注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
2013上海中考英语作文 【篇一：2013年中考英语作文案例】 how to protect yourself self-protection is a lifelong topic. earthquakes are the most dangerous disasters because they are unpredictable. if you are outside when an earthquake happens, find an open place. apart from tall structures, electric wires can also be dangerous. if you are in a building, hide yourself under a desk or a chair at once. don’t be afraid because the most powerful part of an earthquake lasts for only a minute. as soon as power lessens, rush to the ground carefully. you should never use lifts in this situation. actually the death rate of an earthquake is quite low and it can be still lower if you know the right methods of escaping. i wish that everybody will be safe during earthquakes. 7+8+4 believe it or not, we may confront with many accidents such as natural disaster, electric shock and so on. thus, it’s essential for us to be careful in daily life and calm down when something happens. for example, electricity brings us convenience, but it can also be the killer. we must remember these points to protect ourselves from danger. first, never touch the electrical appliances with wet hands. second, don’t use too much equipment at the same time, this may cause a fire. if we are more careful, we can enjoy more from what the electricity brings us and live a happier life. 8+8+3 self protection is very important in my daily life. it can prevent me from getting hurt. for example, if a fire breaks out in my apartment, i need to calm down and call “119” as soon as possible. if the rescue team can’t arrive in time, it’s w ise to cover my nose and mouth with a piece of wet cloth. and it’s crucial to take the stairs instead of an elevator. only by doing things mentioned above can i get myself out of danger. 8+8+3 life is colorful but full of danger, so our students must learn some basic skills to prevent ourselves. for instance, when a fire breaks out, i can try to put it out by myself if it isn’t very big. but if it is out of control, i must dial 119 to ask for help immediately. i should stay calm and tell the firemen where
长沙市2008年初中毕业学业考试 下图是Gina对班上同学的周末活动进行调查后得出的结果；同学们的周末活动真是丰富多彩。想想你和你的同学是如何度过周末的?写一篇名为“Weekend Activities”的文章谈谈你们的周末活动。 要求：1．语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整； 2．文中不得出现你的真实校名和姓名； 3．词数60—80； 4．开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Weekend Activities In my class, most of my classmates have colorful weekends. _____________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________
2015 年上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文精选 宝山区2014-2015 学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷 初三英语 ”in your class. Recently there has been a discussion about the topic “ Water Is Precious Please write at Host 60 words about the topic "Water Is Precious" to express your point of view,( 请以 “水是珍贵的”写一篇至少 60 词的作文，标点符号不占格） ( 你的作文内容须包含以下几点) 1） Why is water very important in our life? 2） What are the causes of the water shortage? 3） How can we protect our precious water resources? 范文（ 1） Water is precious Undoubtedly , no man can live without water. When we begin the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work. Farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. The factory needs water to process the production. Animals need water to live their lives. However, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. Some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. As students, we should have the sense of saving water. Saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. Given all of its importance and urgency, we must spare no effort to do what I have suggested you. 范文（ 2） Water is precious Water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. Although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the earth ,there are many people who can ’ t get access to water in the world. But how can this be? Above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. Another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry. Facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save water in our daily life and reuse it. Only in this way can we protect our precious water resources.
最新2018上海中考英语作文范文预测 2018上海中考英语作文篇1 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 如何学好英语 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。 First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。 In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。 2018上海中考英语作文篇2 近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以"The Spring Festival"为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。 要求：1、字迹工整，规范; 2、80词左右; 3、根据所给要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。
专题短文填空 【2019】 C.Fill in the blanks with proper words（在短文的空格内填入适当的词，使其内容通顺。每空格限填一词，首字母已给） Paul was my little brother，and he was special.He was different from me because he sat in a wheelchair，and he was blind.Lots of times when we walked with Paul，other kids came over and asked us why he was in his chair and why he couldn’t s___56___.They thought he was different because he had his own school bus and had to go to a special school.But that's not really the reason.Paul was different for the things just our family knew about-only we knew the s ___57___ that made him special . Paul helped me hear small sounds.Every time I was with him，I'd have to beg q___58___to hear the flying birds and the talking trees he heard. Paul helped me exercise.When we went for a walk，we'd often go uphill.When I pushed his chair all the way to the woods at the t___59___，I was really getting my exercise! Paul h___60___ ever complained.He went along with whatever the rest of us wanted to do.One time when he had a fever，he got uncomfortable，but he never shouted or fought or asked me to switch the TV channel. Sometimes Paul let me put things in，his hand.We played a kind of guessing game.I put different toys there for him to f___61___He was always surprised when I let him hold something new. Paul was my friend.He couldn't talk to me like most of my friends，and he couldn't run outside to play.But he was there for all the peaceful times，and he had the best smile in the world. I was l___62___ to grow up with him as his sister.He helped me to realize that there is a good side to every situation，if we simply make the choice to find it.
中考英语满分作文真题解析范文背诵 一、Great changes in my hometown More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life . Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful . 二、Save the earth How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world . It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better . 三、Improve our environment Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ? We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy . 四、Pollution around us In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are
2020中考英语作文：热点话题，优秀范文！ 一. 学术文化篇 1. 沉迷网络游戏 李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2. 怎样学好英语
河南中考英语作文2007-2017年汇编（含范文） ★中考英语作文评分标准 据标准答案和评分标准规定，英语书面表达的满分为15分，分4档评分： 第一档(13~15分)，符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰， 表达清楚，语言无误。 第二档(9~12分)，基本题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰， 表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。 第三档(4~8分)，部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次 结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。 第四档(0~3分)，不符合题目要求，整片表达不清楚，或照抄、拼凑几个词语。
范文： Dear teachers and schoolmates, We are sorry to see so much waste in our school!We students often leave the ta ps on after cleaning our hands,and leave lights on when we leave.In the classroom, we often see a lot of paper is wasted.At the dining hall,we can see food left on t he tables after meals. I think we should save water and electricity.We should make good use of our sch ool things.Don't throw food away.Let's try to make a good habit and save things a round us.Let’s do it from now on! Class1,Grade9 范文： Dear Ms Li, How are you? I have a lot of troubles these days.Every day I have a lot of homework to do at scho ol.I don't have enough time to sleep.I nearly have no time to do sports.My friends and I can hardly find time to talk,or play together.When I get
COMPOSITION 1 I Would Like to Be a Polite Person I am pretty sure that I would like to be a polite person throughout my life. I am brought up in a family whose members are polite to each other. My parents share the same quality with me. I am taught never to be rude to anyone else even if he behaves badly enough. I am aware that a polite person should have an air of tolerance. My mother always says, “Ignore the ill-mannered people because they do not know what they are doing. Be polite to those who deserve your respect.” I also hold many other good manners to be a polite person，such as being friendly and helpful to others, keeping graceful postures all the time, trying to be understanding, talking in a modest way and so on. All in all, my family’s motto, never stop being polite, will stay with me forever. (146) COMPOSITION 2 I Would Like to Be a Soldier My dream changes all the time. But the other day, I happened to hear an English song named Tell Me Why, which tells something about poor kids whose country is in war. At that moment, I made up my mind that I would like to be a soldier in the future. If I become a soldier, I can fight for people’s freedom. I can help those who suffer a lot in war, especially the innocent kids, who are supposed to sit in class studying, just like the ones living in the peaceful world. I will do whatever I can to realize my dream. (103) COMPOSITION 3 I Would Like to Be a Singer The other day, I was on my computer going on You Tube to listen to music. I happened to find out that one song had almost five hundred million views. At that moment, I decided that I would like to be a lead singer in the future. I think it would be awesome seeing tons of fans wearing a shirt with my face right in the center. How great it is to hear my song played on the radio that billions of people will listen to! What a delightful sense to have my face appear on the cover of a magazine! Then I can afford to tour the world purchasing expensive and nice clothes. Maybe I will be rich enough to buy a cruise ship. All in all, being a rich and famous lead singer is my dream. I really hope it will come true someday. (146) COMPOSITION 4 On Helping with Family Chores Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they do not have time to help their parents with the housework. I do not think it is true which make them appear to be all excuses. In my opinion, doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility. We cannot depend on others all our life. Doing housework can make us independent. Thus we can take better care of ourselves when growing up. Besides, sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents. What’s more, I am aware that trying to do some housework, among which hard work can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise, can keep us healthy and strong. On weekdays, I often clean my bedroom every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. Also I offer to carry heavy bags from the supermarket. Just as the saying goes, “One cannot make a big success without being self-reliant.” Therefore, I hold the opinion that it is necessary for students to share the housework. (194)
上海中考英语备考训练：写作 一，一等文要求， 1，结构三段式： 第一段：简单明了，开门见山。 如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。 A. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。 B. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。 第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day! 2，内容和要点： 话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题, 跟主旨无关的话不要写。 3，逻辑合理： 递进：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, what's more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。 转折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。 总结：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。 4，语法和亮点： 单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二，三段十句话： 1，三段布局： 高考作文题型多样, 有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料, 按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。 记叙文：A. 背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B. 故事发展经过结果。C. 结局和感受。 议论文：A. 发表观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 图片文：A. 描述图片内容，提炼观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。 2，十句成篇： Passage 1, 1）Topic 话题 2）Thesis 论点 Passage 2, 3）Transition 过渡句 4）Argument1 论据1