雅思基础班写作讲义

《雅思写作》课件CATALOGUE 目录•雅思写作概述•雅思写作任务类型与技巧•文章结构与段落展开方法•词汇、语法和句式运用指导•观点陈述、论证和批判性思维培养•模拟试题与范文欣赏01雅思写作概述CHAPTER雅思写作考试形式与要求考试形式雅思写作考试分为两部分，第一部分为图表作文（Task 1），第二部分为议论文（Task 2）。

字数要求Task 1要求考生写至少150字，Task2要求考生写至少250字。

时间限制Task 1的建议用时为20分钟，Task 2的建议用时为40分钟。

评分标准及考生常见问题评分标准考生常见问题如何备考雅思写作熟悉考试形式和评分标准积累词汇和句型练习写作请教老师或专业人士02雅思写作任务类型与技巧CHAPTER1 2 3理解图表信息选择重要信息使用适当的语言和结构图表作文写作技巧明确观点提供充分的论据逻辑清晰030201议论文写作技巧混合题型应对策略分别应对识别题型针对不同类型的题目，采用不同的应对策略。

例如，对于包含图表和议论的题目，可以先描述图表，然后提出观点并进行论述。

整合信息03文章结构与段落展开方法CHAPTER引言段写作方法开门见山背景介绍提出疑问论证方法运用举例、对比、因果等论证方法，充分阐述主题句。

主题句每段开头明确主题句，概括该段主要内容。

过渡与衔接使用过渡词和衔接手段，确保段落间逻辑清晰、连贯。

正文段落展开策略结尾段总结技巧重申观点01展望未来02简洁明了0304词汇、语法和句式运用指导CHAPTER高级词汇选用及替换建议使用具体、生动的词汇01避免重复使用同一词汇02注意词汇的准确性和正式程度03复杂句式构造和变换技巧使用从句和复合句变换句子结构注意句子的流畅性和简洁性避免常见语法错误确保主语和谓语在人称和数上保持一致。

注意动词的时态和语态的正确使用，避免混淆。

正确使用标点符号，避免句子结构的混淆和歧义。

例如，避免使用双重否定、注意冠词的正确使用等。

雅思基础班写作讲义【观点型作文模板】首段部分：一，（背景句）In this day and age, 主题词is advancing at an amazing rate in a host of arenas.二，（观点导入句）As to/ Concerning the issuewhether…or…, people from all walks of life can hardly reach an absolute consensus. whether+ 从句…or not, there exists a fierce controversy among people.三，主旨句讨论①If it is up to me, my objective analyses for their views will be based on the following parts.②Personally, I think that both of their views have reasonable/rational exposition.单边讨论①For my part, the boons brought by far outweigh its bane. (事物)②Personally, I think that their view has both merit and demerit. （观点）纯倾向①As I see it, my view will be identical with the advocates'/objectors'.②Personally, I am inclined to the advocates'/objectors' view.主体部分：讨论A（第二段）The advocates hold a view that 正面观点，based on the following reasons. To begin with, 理由一；拓展2-3句话Additionally, 理由二；拓展1-2句话Lastly, 理由二；拓展1-2句话讨论B（第三段）The objectors,however, argue that 反面观点, with the following supporting reasons.In the first place, 理由一；拓展2-3句话In the second place, 理由二；拓展1-2句话In the third place, 理由二；拓展1-2句话单边讨论型第二段Admittedly, 话题can bring about numerous benefits to us.In the first place, 理由一；拓展2-3句话In the second place, 理由二；拓展1-2句话In the third place, 理由二；拓展1-2句话Undeniably，doubtless to say,单边讨论型第三段However, it would be erroneous if we failed to acknowledge its drawbacks. On one hand, 理由一；拓展1-3句话On the other hand, 理由二；拓展1-3句话纯倾向（第二段） First and foremost, no one can fail to take into account that +句子（理由一）拓展 3-4句话纯倾向（第三段） In addition, it goes without saying that + 句子（理由二）拓展 3-4句话纯倾向（第四段） Last but not least, there is no denying the fact that +句子（理由三）拓展 3-4句话结尾部分：单边（倾向）To conclude, I concede that we can profit from the advantages of …… immensely. Yet, we should not neglect its disadvantages. On balance, we should seek out the most effective approach to make full use of its advantages and avoid its disadvantages. Ignore, lose sight of ...双边In a nutshell, we can draw a conclusion that both their views have reasonable exposition/elaboration. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to …, but I will not concede that ….纯单边Taking all the reasons into consideration, all the evidence lends the strongest support to my convincing conclusion that +句子（结论）救命结尾模板：To put all into one nutshell,there is no rose without thorns, has no exception.Whether it is ablessing or a curse is dependent on how moderately or appropriately we employ . What we should do is to figure out the balance between them, bringing its strengths into full play and diminishing its weaknesses into least extent.★模板不是千篇一律的，要活用模板！很多观点型作文模板可以相互套用！【现象问题型模板】首段部分：一，背景句In this day and age, 主题词is advancing at a staggering rate in a host of arenas. 二，导入问题，现象句It has been cast into sharp focus that + 句子 . 三，说明句vexing/perplexing problem confronting the modern people. acute/severe/grave/serious This has become a(n)thorny/buring/pressingprominent/striking/noticeableConfront sb with sth, sb confront sth主体部分：分析原因（第二段）As I see it, there are some causes to explain such a phenomenon as the followed.（分析原因，过渡句）【或者】From my own perspective, the causes leading to 现象are manifold/diverse/twofold.First and foremost, 原因一mainly contribute(s) to the phenomenon of ……. （分论点1）拓展部分What's worse/more, we partly attribute the problem of现象to 原因二. （分论点2）拓展部分Lastly, 原因三is also the culprit of the phenomenon of …（分论点3）拓展部分分析后果（第二段）As I see it, 现象、问题perhaps will breed/generate several consequences/effects as the following parts.（主题句1）【或者】From my own perspective, if such a phenomenon is not appropriately disposed of, many problems/dangers/perils/hazards will ensue.In the first place, the phenomenon of ……will mainly spawn the 后果一. （分论点1）拓展部分In the second place, the phenomenon of ……will contribute to 后果二. （分论点2）拓展部分In the final place, the phenomenon of ……will engender 后果三. （分论点3）拓展部分解决措施（第三段）Given the severity of such a problem, we should adopt effective measures without any delay to eliminate the problem as the followed.（主题句2）【或者】With a view to solving such a problem, we have no alternative but to take immediatemeasures as the followed.On one hand, 措施一（分论点1）拓展部分On the other hand, 措施二（分论点2）拓展部分救命结尾措施模板：To walk out of such difficult situation, we have no alternative but to adopt immediate measures to eliminate the serious problem. What the government or authorities concerned should do is to 政府措施. Meanwhile, as an individual, we should 个人措施.【范文1】Nowadays, impacts energy fuels, such as petrol, natural gas and coal, exert on the development of human society are profound on a large scale.(背景句) It has been cast into sharp relief that the development of human society is increasingly demanding for energy fuels.（话题导入句）As I see it, such a phenomenon will breed three main consequences as the followed. (主旨句)In the first place, such a phenomenon may give rise to the rampantover-exploitation of energy fuels.(后果一) More often than not, human society is developing by leaps and bounds with the large depletion of natural energies. Obviously, the surging demand for natural resources will definitely lead to the increasing prices of natural resources. Hence, a growing number of people will over-exploitate these resources for the sake of maximum profits.In the second place, the phenomenon of increasing consumption of energy resources will engender a large quantity of pollutants.（后果二）For example, the process of refining the energy fuels: petroleum, will emit a huge amount of fumes, which include carbon dioxide and sulfur dioxide. Particularly, the sulfur dioxide is the culprit of acid rain which may devastate the forest and crops. Thus, it will exert a negative influence on environment.In the final place, such a phenomenon will generate the regional conflicts.（后果三）Since the energy fuel is limited, more people or nations will be involved in potential conflicts for the precious resources. So, regional confrontations are inevitable.To walk out of this difficult situation, some effective and feasible measures should be adopted without any delay. What the authorities must do is to pass laws and regulation to alleviate the surging demand for energy fuels. And meanwhile, individuals should spare no efforts to economize the use of energy fuels.[314 words]【或者结尾】Given the severity of such a problem, we should adopt immediate measures without anydelay to eliminate the problem as the followed. On one hand, international society and authorities concerned should make joint efforts to alleviate the surging demand for energy fuels.On the other hand, as an individual, we should spare no efforts to economize the use of energyfuels.【范文2】In present-day society, advertisement industry is advancing by leaps and bounds in a host of arenas(背景句). It has to be admitted that there exists a fierce controversy among people as to the issue whether we can get benefits from the ban of all forms of advertisements or not（观点导入句）. For my part, the advantages brought by advertisings far out weigh its drawbacks.（主旨句）.Admittedly, advertisements have some disadvantages in our society.（主题句①）. On one hand, advertisement is annoying(理由①). Internet is always awash with Spam which is disturbing our surfing internet. Besides, TV programs are often interrupted by a sudden advent of advertisements. So it is annoying for us. On the other hand, some advertisements provide some misleading and distorted information to the audience(理由②). For example, some advertisements have exaggerated the products, which cheat the consumers misled by the advertisements. This has infringed on the rights of consumers. Hence, it is proper to ban some irritating and fraudulent advertisements.However, it would be erroneous if we failed to acknowledge advertisements' advantages.（主题句②）. In the first place, advertisements will create a win-win situation to both manufacturers and consumers(理由①). In fact, some consumers demand for a specific commodity, but they are notinformed about which product is suitable for them. Meanwhile, some manufacturers will sell their products but no one knows their products. Under such a circumstance, can advertisement help manufacturer to publicize their commodities and give information to consumers which product can be purchased. In the second place, some non-commercial advertisement is serving for social welfares(理由②). For example, somenon-commercial advertisements educate the public to be aware of the importance of charity or environment protection. In the final place, advertisement is one of the most pervasive industries(理由③). It will contribute a vast amount of money to people and support the huge industry of media. Without advertisement, most of forms media will soon disappear. Thereby, it is not convincing to prohibit all kinds of advertisements.To conclude, I concede that some advertisements serve no useful purpose, or even misleading information in various media, yet we should not neglect the blessings brought by advertisements. As far I am concerned, the ban of all forms of advertisement should be prudent(总结个人看法). On balance, we should seek out the most effective method to make full use of the benefits of advertisements and avoid their drawbacks as possible.【或者结尾】To put all into one nutshell, there is no rose without thorns, advertisements have no exception. Whether it is a blessing or a curse is dependent on how moderately or appropriately we employ them. What we should do is to figure out a rational balance between them, bringing its strengths into full play and diminishing its weaknesses to the least extent.【范文3】In this day and age, technology is revolutionizing the way that we live, and especially communicate. (背景句) Concerning the issue whether e-mail will completely replace the letter-writing or not, people from all walks of lives can hardly reach an absolute consensus.(导入观点句) Some people think that new technology, such ase-mail, will eliminate the letter-writing gradually, while some others say that letter-writing will be retained in future. (提出正反两个观点) Personally, my objective analyses for their views will be given as the followed.(主旨句)Now that e-mail brings about numerous strengths to our communication, the advocates hold their view based on the following cogent reasons.(主题句①：正方观点) First and foremost, using e-mail can augment the working efficiency during the process of going about daily routines.(理由①) For example, it usually takes at least a week to send a letter from China to the U.K, but sending an e-mail is always simultaneous and instant with receiving e-mail in different places of the globe. So, using e-mail is time-saving and efficient. Furthermore, the security of using e-mail can be assured on a large scale. (理由②) Compared with letter-writing, sending an e-mail is processed in the digital programs, not by various means of transportations: ship, plane and car. Lastly, using e-mail is cost-effective. (理由③) In China, it costs at least 1yuan (about 10 pence of the U.K) to send a postcard, but it almost free to send an e-mail to one of your friends. Obviously, using e-mail is money-saving. However, given that letter-writing has its own advantages, the objectors hold such a viewpoint grounded as the following reasons.(主题句②反方观点) In the first place, business letters are very formal paper documents that need to be kept in archives.(理由①) As a case in point, business contracts should be sent。

雅思常用词组1be conducive to 对，，，，有好处的 (be beneficial to)All the above merits are conducive to their self-betterment and self-realisation.2 be detrimental to 对，，，，有害的Besides, staying in front of the computer too long will be detrimental to children’s health，particularly the eyesight. In particular3 pose threat to 对，，，，构成威胁If criminals are set free, they will pose threat to the safety of average citizens. (普通公民)4 nothing seems more,,,, than sth. 没有东西比，，，更，，，，For smokers, nothing seems more difficult than giving up the habit.5 lay too much emphasis on 太强调Those who are strongly against the practice lay too much emphasis on the right of animals.6 there is no evidence showing the direct link between A and B没有证据显示了A和B之间的直接联系。

There is no evidence showing the direct link between smoking and some seriousdiseases.7there is a clear link between A and B 有一个显然的联系It is well known that there is a clear link between smoking and some kinds ofserious diseases.8give priority to sth 给，，，，优先权We should give priority to the development of public transportation.9have easy and quick access to sth 容易快速的接触到With the Internet, we have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide. 10attach greater importance to 更重视After analyzing the causes and effects of juvenile delinquency, we may easily draw a conclusion that we have to attach greater importance to the problem.11be of overriding importance 某事极其重要We must recognize that the cultivation of children’s high moral values is of overriding importance.12a glut of sth 过量的某物We are confronted with a glut of violent films.13 be saturated with sth 充斥着，，，，A considerable proportion of Hollywood blockbusters are saturated with pornography and violence.14lose sight of sth 不重视某事Some companies lose sight of the environmental rules and regulations in pursuing maximum profit.15be more vulnerable to something 更容易成为，，，的受害者The youngsters are more vulnerable to pornographic TV programs.16impel sb to do sth 促使某人做某事。

雅思考虫基础写作讲义1. 雅思考试概述雅思考试是国际英语测试系统（International English Language Testing System）的简称，是全球范围内用于评估非英语国家学生英语能力的一项标准化测试。

该考试分为雅思学术考试和雅思普通考试，学术考试主要用于申请留学，而普通考试主要用于移民和就业。

雅思考试由剑桥大学、英国文化协会和澳大利亚考试委员会联合主办，被许多国家和组织所认可。

2. 如何备考雅思写作在备考雅思写作时，了解考试要求和技巧是至关重要的。

其中，考虫（Kaochong）的雅思写作讲义可以被认为是备考雅思写作的“基石”，提供了系统且全面的备考内容。

该讲义从写作基础到高级写作技巧都有涉及，对于备考考生而言是一份非常宝贵的资料。

下面将对考虫的雅思写作讲义进行深入解读。

3. 考虫雅思写作讲义的基础部分考虫的雅思写作讲义首先从写作的基本结构开始介绍，包括如何组织思路、如何构建段落、如何展开论述等内容。

这一部分内容对于初学者来说尤为重要，因为一个清晰、有逻辑、结构合理的作文是取得高分的基础。

在这部分内容中，考虫提到了写作的基础知识，例如主题句、论点、论据和结论等。

这些基础知识的掌握，可以帮助考生在写作时更加得心应手，写出结构清晰、逻辑严谨的文章。

4. 关于写作技巧的讲解在讲义的第二部分，考虫详细介绍了写作的技巧，包括如何使用丰富的词汇和句型、如何进行论证和举例、如何进行逻辑推理等。

这一部分内容的掌握可以让考生的文章更加生动、具有说服力，同时也可以提高文章的语言表达水平。

考虫还介绍了一些常用的写作模板和句型，这些模板和句型的掌握可以帮助考生提高写作效率，同时也可以提高写作的质量。

5. 个人观点和总结通过对考虫的雅思写作讲义的深入解读，我深刻认识到了写作在雅思考试中的重要性。

考虫提供的讲义内容全面、系统，既包括了写作的基础知识，也包括了高级写作技巧，对于备考考生而言是一份难得的宝藏。

雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行，由两部分组成，TASK1和TASK2。

要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。

普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。

两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同，考试的结构和要求也大体相同，要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。

类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。

一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解，或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。

学术类写作TASK 1（ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE）要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析，并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇不少于150字的小短文。

考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。

也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。

另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。

时间20分钟。

普通培训类写作TASK1（GENERAL TRAINING MODULE）则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。

20分钟内完成150个字的文章。

总之，就题目的难度而言，GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。

评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria: ? 1.T ask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position isclear and effective)2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ?3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级：creep up ≤10edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902．描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级：creep down ≤10edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903．描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例：Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法：①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuated between 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at thesame rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb andchicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams) However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreasedover the period.★考试高分必备表 3——Phrase。