雅思写作 小作文讲义
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雅思作文1.General introduction雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。
其中,写作在听力、阅读部分之后出现,是笔试的最后一项。
雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文(Task 1 and Task 2)。
写作中,以移民为主的培训类(General Training)和以留学为主的学术类(Academic)试题类型有所不同。
2 大小作文如何分配时间写作中大作文的占分比例比小作文高,建议小作文20分钟,大作文40分钟。
先写大作文还是小作文根据个人情况。
小作文和大作文同样重要,不要轻视小作文。
3 格式注意事项(1)不用写题目。
(2)注意分段。
(3)左右留一寸的空间。
传统方法:每段首行向右移两个字的位置.现代方法:段落之间留一行控分段。
只使用一种方向,不要同时使用。
(4)不要分词。
(5)大概10-12个词一行。
4 评分标准雅思评分按9分制。
基本上,移民或读语言学校起码要5分(Modest User)。
留学需要6分(Competent User)以上。
如果读的是法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生的话,写作最好达到7分(Good User)。
但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task 2的简单平均,而是以Task 2为主。
雅思写作的评分标准不象四六级或托福采用整体式的评分,而是分项式评分(analytical scoring)。
也就是说,考官给考生并不只打一个分数,而是根据具体的评分细则分项给分。
Task 1(书信或图表)按照以下三方面评分:Task Fulfilment(完成任务);Coherence and Cohesion(连贯与衔接);V ocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。
Task 2(议论文)的三方面评分标准是:Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证,论点和论据);Communicative Quality(交流质量);V ocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)。
小作文精讲(一)-------柱状图(bar chart)migrant amphibian seaweed gorilla ocean river stream pool pond lakePest insecticide killer whale sperm whale terrestrial aquatic marine lifeEndanger habit habitat nutrient vegetation vegetarian threatenLog restrict=inhibit=restrain maintain territory territorial generateEmerge connect =depend on=lean on=count on erosion intact HR resource Source nurture nurse discard=abandon vital=important =significant =critical abundant =lush sustain overestimate underestimate preserve strip=depriveFracture hibernate hide+ber+nate decline=fall=reduce=depress legal illegalFragile reproduce 同位语require measure be sufficient toEnsure emphasis emphasize=highlight=stress expansion justified=reasonable Destination include exclude graduate postgraduate一写作思路及技巧1.看清横纵轴分别代表什么。
(多数都是纵轴代表百分比,横轴代表时间,年龄,频度等。
雅思小作文折线图(单条)中心段落写作:分段:第一阶段:2001-2002 第二阶段:2002-2005 第三阶段:2005-2007第四阶段:2007-2008 第五阶段:2008-2009趋势+数据趋势的表达:表示变动:A组上升(v):increase、rise、go up、grow、climb(n):an increase in下降(v):decrease、decline、go down、fall、dropB组轻微地(adv):slowly、slighly、marginally平缓地(adv):steadily、smoothly、gradually、moderately剧烈地(adv):significantly、sharply、dramatically、drastically、steeply、surprisingly、strikingly、hugely、considerably、rapidly剧烈地上升?剧烈地的下降?A+B(v.+adv.= adj.+n.)increase significantly= a significant increase= sore= rocket= surge =jumpdecline dramatically= a dramatic decline= plummet= plunge波动性上升/ 波动性下降sth increase with (minor)fluctuationsa upward/downward trend保持不变:keep/ remain+ stable/unchanged/steady/constant at时间的表达from...to.../ between...and...sinceuntilthen、from this time onwards、from then onafter、before(prior to)动态图中的三大句型1.2.3.4.以第一阶段为例The sales of computers increased slowly from 600 to 900 between 2001 and 2002. 变换表达方式:换词换词组换句型第二阶段如何表示?第三阶段呢?第四?第五?数据的表达:顶点如何表达?The sales of computers went up dramatically to the peak in 2005.其他表达方法?最高点:peak at、reach the highest point of最低点:bottom out at、reach the bottom of、reach the lowest point of达到:reach、arrive at、amount to、hit、stand at把所有五个阶段连在一起,中心段落的写作就完成啦!其他词汇补充:大约:approximately、around、roughly分别:respectively、separately雅思阅读之List of Headings1.段落中心句的确定Top Sentences√2.List of Headings解题方法3.段落结构的把握(加强)一.中心句通常在哪里?我家的小狗可爱极了。
机密雅思写作之小作文张家铭CHRISSelf-intro 张家铭Chris四级,考研,TOEFL ,SAT ,GRE ,IELTS ,GMAT.微博:@张家铭Chris微信:zjmxhxmm已接受雅思写作TASK 1TASK 2分数目标 6.5-7分范文分析The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. (C11T3W1)范文分析Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (C13T1W2)It is clear that living in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider.I agree with this statement;however I think that anybody coming in another country should respect national culture.In this essay,I would like to outline the social and practical problems.The social problems would be language barrier,which means that a person coming from another country might not be able to speak and understand the language which might be a problem as far a person who is living in a country,and a person who came in the country.Another problem is linked to the language barrier,but it might influence the behaviour of others.An individual who come into the country might offend others with their behaviour or language.For example;some cultures like English people prefer to be very polite and say things differently from other cultures.Therefore,a person who doesn’t know how to behave in a particular culture might offend others around him.The practical problems would be misunderstanding of culture.That means that a person who visits other countries does not understand other culture and he behaves as he wants to.The second practical problem is finding a job.An individual who works in foreign country might not be appropriate for people who he serves.For example if an individual works in a restaurant,the people who live in a country and they were born in that country might not respect and not like the behaviour of a person who works in a restaurant,it might be because,the cultures are different.To summarise,it can be said that there are a lot of misconceptions which people have when they come in a foreign country,and in my opinion and from my personal experience people should educate themselves in order to know how to behave in different situations with different cultures.TASK 11.题型综述2.Task1的段落结构3.趋势的表达4.副词的写法5.常用短语的介绍Task 1 的六大题型题型考点与难点难度星级Pie chart Diversity of describing percentages **Bar chartCombination ****Line/curve chartTrends & classification ***TableHow to list statistics effectively ****diagramWriting sequence& imagination ****map Location/change *****Task1的段落结构1.Opening改写题目2.Body宏观描写:图标整体特征(main feature)微观描写:趋势,关键数值,对比等3.Ending/Conclusion明显特征:图中稳定的一些趋势、特征,极值隐藏特征:合理客观推理信息Opening一:换词:show:describe,illustrate,demonstrate proportion / percentageinformation / datanumber / figurecategories / kinds / types二.换句Opening 句型1As is shown / illustrated / demonstrated in the (1)图的类型,the (2)图的单位(number/amount/percentage/figure) of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间趋势:vary —动态图Differ —静态图(4)图的时间From...to...During...and...within...The graph below shows the difference modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city, in 1950,1970 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.As is shown in the (1)图的类型, the (2)图的单位of 图的主题(3)图的主要趋势(4)图的时间As is demonstrated in the bar chart, the percentage of travellers to and from work by different modes of transport in one European city varied dramatically from 1950 to 1990.句型2The _____ chart(s) illustrate(s) a clearpicture/overview/information of the characteristics and trends(differentiation/contrast) of _____ .The table below shows the kilometers of route,date opened and passengers per year of the underground railway system in 6 cities.▪The table illustrates the differentiation concerning the length of route, launching year and the annual capacity of the metro system in6 metropolises.句型3▪两图题▪The ____ graph describes data(趋势) about ___ whilst the ____ chart illustrates information about ________.The line graph describes data about water use worldwide while thetable illustrates information about consumption in two different countries –Brazil and Congo.▪剑6 Test 1▪The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Ending/Conclusion写1~2句结论:合理,客观即可1.明显特征:图中稳定的一些趋势、特征,极值2.隐藏特征:合理客观推理信息明显特征1.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreased over the period.2.what is worth mentioning is that before1989 beef was the most popular food and after that chicken became the most consumed meat.trend四种趋势:涨跌平波上涨下跌平稳波动increase decrease词语说明词语说明common words rise fallgrow declineclimb dropswell sinkPreferred words rocket90plummetsoar60slumpsurge45subsideboom30ebbascend20slidecreep up<10creep downSpecial words accrue小平涨abate小平跌leap大平涨plunge大平跌上升表达例1:意大利的工业产值增长了5%。
Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, but she only spends 25 per cent of her money on study materials==Tomoko spends 45 percent of her money on rent and food, 20 per cent more than the money on study materials.But: while/however/whereas3. Tomoko spends more on study materials than she spends on clothes.Tomoko’s expenditure on clothes is 10% less than that on study materials.4. Tomoko spends as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together. Tomoko spends almost as much money on rent and food as she does on everything else put together.5. Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as many as entertainment and clothes.Tomoko spends on rent and food three times as much as on entertainment and clothes respectively.The two pie charts show the types of communication used in 1962 and in 1982.In 1962: P-phone-35%; C-computer-15%; L-letter-50%In 1982: P-60%; C-30%; L-10%T h e percentages exhibited in the two pie charts compare different means of communication usedin 1962 and 1982. The three media surveyed are: phone, telephone and letter.It is apparent from the left pie chart that letter writing was the most popular form of communication in 1962, taking up 50% of the total. However, its use decreased dramatically after that. By 1982, this figure dropped to only 10%, the smallest of that year’s figure. According to the left chart, we can see that during this same period, the use of phone and computers both increased significantly .In 1962, the use of the telephone just occupied 35% and the computer was the least used form of the three (15%). In 1982, the telephone, with a percentage of 60% , has become the most used form of communication. Similarly, the use of computers doubled to 30% .O verall, we can see some important changes in the forms of communication used during the twod e cades. More and more people appreciate the convenience brought about by the telephone and computer.曲线图曲线图的写作要点:•注意横竖坐标的单位及意义;• 极点说明;• 趋势说明;• 交点说明;•1. 数据的起点In 1960, the proportion of the 15-46 age group stood at approximately 65%, compared to 30% and 5% of other two age groups.在描述数据起点的时候,标准的动词词组是 stand at, 当然我们还可以使用其他动词来引导,比如 begin, start 等。
In 1950, world oil discovery stood at 20 million barrels a year.In 1400, the world population stood at approximately 400 million.The following curve shows the changes in the number of visitors to London Zoo, Kew Garden and Regent’s Park over the ten-year period from 1978 to 1987 .===The numbers presented in the line graph compare the numbers of visitors in three different parks in Britain---Regent’s Park, Kew Garden and London Zoo in almost a decad e.From the red line, we can see clearly that _______ remained stable at the level of______ between _______ and _______, then _______to ______ from 1983 to 1984.By comparison London Zoo _______ between 1978 and the mid-1980, the number of visitors ______ from 54000 to 60000 in _____. Since ____, there had been a __________ in tourists’______. From the time onwards there was a ________.As to Kew Garden, there was a _______ from about 48,000 to the highest point of _______ in _______. Then, __________In conclusion, both Regent’s Park and London Zoo are the most ______ to which most people would like to.常用表达:轻微的增长/下降稳定的增长/减少剧烈的增长/降低数量巨大的增长轻微的增长到 4 万/年,然后达到一个平稳的水平九月到十月期间 A 的数字保持平稳,大约在 5 万每年从 2010 年的 900 人下降到 2011 年的 500 人曲线图:四条线有三条线都是上升的,一条线是下降的,则三条上升的一起写,也就是说,趋势相同的一起写,那如果三条上升的当中,有两个上升幅度比较大,另外一个比较小,那么两个上升幅度相同的就一起写,就是说程度相同的一起写,这是第一个原则。
那除此之外注意趋势间的比较,也就是说,幅度大的和幅度偏小的这样要做一个对比。
另外要注意一个比较细节的点就是,线性图定要描述起点、终点以及极值点。
逐渐的/慢慢的/ 轻微的+ 上升/增加/提高Gradually/slowly/minimally +Increase/climb/rise剧烈的/ 显著的/ 迅速的/ 数目相当大的 + 上升Sharply /rapidly/dramatically /considerableSoar V. 上升过去式: soaredleap V.上升过去式: leapt下降 drop / fell/ decline / decrease / come down骤然跌落 plummet = to fall very quickly and suddenlyDramatic increase---big increaseSignificant difference---big differenceHuge drop---go down by a big amountLittle change---to change only slightlyRemained steady/stable---no or very little change over timeSurprising find---something unexpectedThe greatest difference occurredMinor fluctuation---very small changes over timeSteady rise/increase---a gradual change over timeSlight drop/increase/rise/fall/change---a small change1. In 1990, it increased/decreased from ... to ...2. By comparison with 1998, it decreased/increased by(comparedwith3. The figure has nearly doubled, 〈that of last year.as against J(half(increased (|two and a half time s|4. It has 〈decreasedJalmost 〈|, compared with ...(|twice |5. The number is 〈|as much as that of 1990.(accountsfor6. It 〈 ... percent of the total.(less than | |1. As can be seen, from 1940 to the early 1950s, the number of entries to the UK of both countries increased slightly/steadily/sharply/considerably.2. As can be seen, from 1940 to the early 1950s, the number of entries to the UK of both countries increased slightly to 40,000 per year and then it reached a plateau ( 高原,稳定水平).3. As can be seen, from 1940 to the early 1950s, the number of entries to the UK of both countries remained stable/steady at 35,000 per year.4. As can be seen, from 1940 to the early 1950s, the number of entries to the UK of both countries experienced a upward trend.5. The number of overseas students at Nankai University decreased _______1000 _____ 1990 _______ 200 ________2000.6. The number of overseas hamburgers sold at KFC started ________ million in 1995, then it peaked ________ 10 million in 1996 and it finished ______ 2 million.曲线图作文范例: 图。