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刘娟利:mother---(M)张媛:daughter---(D)王禹:husband---(H)王雨琼:wife(W)郭运芳:ticket booking clerk-----(C)1. C:(边唱歌边看手机天气预报)Yes, tomorrow will be a fine day. And I've got 2 freetickets of the expo(小声说because I work there. No! They are the rewards of the volunteer job).Mum and Dad can go for a visit. They must be very excited about this.This is the first gift after I graduated. Another a busy day, another happy day! (音乐响起,开始工作)2. 母女二人走向售票口买票D::wow, wonderful! many beautiful flowers there ! mum, quickly ,seems late….(向售票员)excuse me,C:Yes, good morning!M:Morning! Two tickets , please (掏钱,递进去)C:Let me see.(after check)You are so lucky!two left for today!D:Great!!M:Honey, today is your birthday, it’s also our lucky day. Let’s check all the things we have . (把找回的零钱装回口袋,整理自己和孩子的背包,准备进园)3. 夫妻二人在售票员check的时候就上场,妻子表现的很疲惫,然后看到一把椅子,等母女二人高兴完了以后对话H:be careful honey!W:Oh,darling,I need some rest, (坐好以后),I’m ok ,leave me here,and you buy the ticket,ok?H: ok , I will be back soon4. 丈夫去售票窗口,这时,妈妈注意到了孕妇,放慢脚步C: Good morning!H:I need two adult tickets, please!C: Sorry. All the tickets today are sold out. How about the tickets tomorrow?H: no,today,Our plane will back tomorrow (We’ll fly back tomorrow)C: I’m sorry, there's nothing I can do.H:(声音很夸张)What? Nothing you can do? I came all the way here, ther e’s nothing you can do?妻子闻声走过来W:What’s up honey?H: damn it,no tickets(跺脚,很懊恼的样子)C: I’m terribly sorry! 稍微鞠躬表示歉意5. 夫妻二人慢慢走回椅子,夫妻子坐下边走边说W:What a shame!(摸着肚子),well ,baby, seems we have to go home, and next time for china? would be after you born,hehe.H: I'm sorry,honey,It's my fault ,I should (have)finish my work earlier.(丈夫给妻子拿出来了水和少许吃的,关心备至)C: (心理活动)Should I do something? No. They are for my parents. Silence! Keep silence!6. 女儿收拾好了包,(检查了照相机,装了水,扇子,一些吃的,还有纸巾。

)发现妈妈在发愣,催促D:Hi,Mum. Hurry up,The expo will close at 10 .(扯妈妈的胳膊)M:Wait ,honey,Look there,(指了指夫妻两个)D:Oh ,Bad luck,They ve traveled so far,. But。

(晃了晃手上的票,笑道),We are the lucky ones. Ok Mum, Let’s go.M:But dear,when mom was pregnant,I always got others’ help. Honey,,That lady…she must feel very disappointed.I think the visit must be very important and meaningful for her and the baby. You will also be a mother in the future.D:(不解得看着妈妈)Mom? You…M:Yes,Can we give the last two tickets to them?D: No, Mum. I don’t agree! Today is my birthday!(做委屈要哭的样子)M:Honey, Honey ,listen to me .We can visit next time.7. 夫妻二人休息好了,站起来准备下场,妈妈打住话头上前一步拦住M:Hi …(H & W): yes?M: I know what happened to you. Here are two tickets we just bought. We are local people and we can come another day. So you can have them.C: (想拿票但又舍不得)(看见母女相助,长出一口气)心理活动:That's perfect. Good for me.(H & W): really?Oh, thank god!M:Sure! Welcome to Xi’an,and please enjoy your trip.H:really? great,you're a good person,god will bless you(做拥抱中国妈妈状,激动万分)8. 后面,女儿拉扯妈妈的衣袖,妻子看到了,也拽了拽丈夫的胳膊D:Mum, We don’t have many chances. Tomorrow I will return to school , and I have to stay there until July. Today is my birthday!It s my birthday .you promised .(开始很委屈的小声哭)那边,妻子和丈夫的争论W:well darling.(然后指了指女儿),look, her daughter seems not so pleased. And did you hear that, it’s her birthday today! It is so selfish to take other’s birthday gift to content ourseves! Isn’t?H:But this is their voluntary,Chinese people so enthusiastic why should we refuse it,It's a good chance for us, dear! Give them more money,that's will be ok?然后二人不语,用动作表示矛盾冲突C: 看到双方推让心想:None of my business!那边,妈妈抱了抱女儿的肩膀,等这边对话完毕M:honey ,Listen?Honey, this Expo is in Xi’an, This is our city and we are the hosts. Don’t you think we should help our guests? Dear, Helping them is the bestl birthday gift for you. Don’t you think so?D:But..mumM:Ok, It 's up to you to decide .D:(自言自语)Yes? NO?(站定,迟疑两秒钟,揉揉眼睛),Ok mum, you are right.(然后把票有看了看)转身走到那夫妻二人旁边9. D:well,you need the tickets more.(还是有点不舍,但是却坚定得把票递给了他们)H:oh,you're lovely,(转身对妻子说)Look,I said chinese people must be warm-hearted!and I am correct!!然后接过票来亲了一口W:(很感动,拉着女儿的手)Really? Are you sure enough? But ,today is special for you! Oh my girl!! How can we…M:Yes, it’s my daughter’s decision.此时,四人动作定格,售票员从窗口后面走了出来从口袋摸出了两张票自言自语:They come from abroad. It’s her birthday today. Mum and Dad are retired, they can come another day. What am I thinking about?然后上前:Excuse me…四人动作恢复正常:yes?H:Are there some formal steps for transferring the ticket?C:(笑), It’s OK, fine,I mean, I have 2 tickets, and I saw everything. I'm so moved andI feel ashamed actually. I should have taken out them earlier. Here you are, go ahead!come on in.M:But is it ok for you to give us your tickets??C:They were for my parents, but I think you need them more than we do.D:For your parents? Oh! No,no no no…C:They are retired,they come any time. And they are also very warm-hearted. They will understand this. I’ll rearrange this for them.所有人:真的吗?太好了!谢谢你!太谢谢你了!(这里最好乱着说)H:西安有哪些好吃的呢?夫妻二人很开心,嘴里不停的说,感谢上帝!!然后售票员请他们进园。