arrived and stood behind the mountain with the
traming scene in our eyes, our hearts opened brightly.
As we were on the way to the top, the fresh air cleaned
1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山 (Daqing Mountain);
2. 活动的过程; 3. 你对于这次活动的评论。 注意:1. 词数120左右。 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it。
4.120词左右。
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Writing process
一,审题:新闻报道(记叙文)、时态(一般过去式)
二,扣题,拟要点,想句式和词汇。 三,开始写,注意连贯词和时态 四,检查
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记叙文的连接词一般用时间连接词,体现事情发 展的时间顺序,常用的连接词有(写作必备P10) now ,after ,afterwards ,after that ,after a while ,at first ,in the beginning ,to begin with ,later ,next ,finally ,all of a sudden/suddenly, at that moment, as soon as ,from now on ,from then on , meanwhile ,not …until , in the end /eventually, last week ,On dong…, (一。。。 就。。。)句式,having done … ,(with) everything done , when it is time to …, to one happiness /joy ,