英语短文改错专项训练(母语干扰)
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短文改错强化训练1.Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. I'd like very much come but I had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I can't afford to fail it. I'll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I'm really sorry that you won't be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. I'll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!2.They day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn't matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher.3 . Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters -in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.4. I used to love science class—all of them—biology, chemistry. Geography, physical. I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works. For example, when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained. I think science classes clear up mysteries. But then there is always more mysteries look into. What was my least favourite class? That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never saw how I could use it in my daily life.5. My brother Tom was very selfless when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all, by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.6. Many teachers worry about the affects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about theradio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25, 000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.7. What should you do when your parents become angrily? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change, but they will take some time because they get angry all their life, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect—like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you.8. When I first time learned to write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.9. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Clever as she is, but she words very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minut es later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.10. Though great progress has made in science these years, there are still many people living in poor conditions. They make their lives by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A president of a developing country on ce said; “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.” Although this few words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.11. I often dream of a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well. What is more, you have to be friends with your pupils andtake good care of him. Only in this way you be a good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.12. This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we has waited for several month.”13. When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead of gave me a second chance. 14. It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my first visit to a English family. At first, I was worried about my poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew that everything would be all right. There are many more happy memories of the week when I will keep with me forever. I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the fishing trip. It was such much fun.15. On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks. But I have spent most my money, so I cannot even go out town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money. All right. That’s what I' m going to do.16. I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 17. Dear Susan, I’m very glad to hear you coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to thecity center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. 18. I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet. I was then in a school for students from Tibet. As we were all left home at early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we would play basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. If some one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories are as sweet as ever before.19. Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a Hobby which is both interested and fun. And every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can even last lifetime. Starting your collection of stamps are easy became they are everywhere. Holiday and birthday postcard from relatives and letters from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the Stamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.20. During the summer of 2001, I started reading books in English, most stories. I would learn a lot of new words from these books, but I had terribly problems memorizing them. I had to look up to the same word many times, for which was quite troublesome. I realized I do need a way to remember all this vocabulary. It was a great achievement for myself. I started writing down words from books that I read. I would come back from school, and then sit for an hour and two. I wrote down new words and added it to my collection. By the end of last year, my collection has grown to 3,000 words.短文改错答案1.1. 第一行on改为for;2. much后加to;3. 第二行had改为have;4. but改为and/so;5. 第三行去掉all;6. prepare改为preparing;7. you改为I;8. 第四行去掉in;9. you后加a;10. return改为returns2.1. 第一行contest后加my;2. 第二行schoolmate改为schoolmates;3. that改为whether;4. 第三行stage后加the;5. as改为that;6. 第四行去掉a;7. but改为and;8. 第五行calm改为calmed;9. 第六行is改为are;10. 去掉often3.1. 第一行either改为neither;2. 去掉any 3. 第二行can后加to;4. 第三行did改为do;5. Family 改为home;6. 第四行subject改为subjects;7. 第五行a改为the;8. 去掉about;9. 第六行and 改为or;10. What改为How4.1. 第一行class改为classes;2. physical改为physics;3. 第二行it改为they;4. what改为how;5. 第三行去掉the;6. learned后加why;7. 第四行is改为are;8. mysteries后加to;9. 第五行;learn改为learning;10. practically改为practical5.1. 第一行selfless改为selfish;2. want后加to;3. 第二行them改为it;4. where改为which或that;5. 第三行other改为others;6. is改为was;7. 第四行making改为made;8. 第五行去掉on;9.Loudly改为loud;10. 第六行difference改为different6.1. 第一行affects改为effects;2. 第二行any改为many或some;3. Because后加of;4. 第三行去掉be;5. read改为reading;6. 第四行program改为programs;7. noise改为noisy;8. 第五行On改为In; 9. 第六行去掉to;10. 第七行real改为really7.1. 第一行angrily改为angry;2. got改为get;3. 第二行Remembering改为Remember;4. 第三行第一个they改为it;5. life改为lives;6. 第四行去掉第一个for;7. any改为some;8. 第五行clean改为cleaning;9. 第六行friend前加a;10. comfortable后加with8.1. 第一行去掉time;2. 第二行去掉in;3. anything改为everything;4. My改为A;5. 第三行去掉should;6. 第四行talk改为talking;7. me改为myself;8. 第五行showed后加it;9. Reads 改为read;10. 第六行word改为words9.1. 第一行who’s改为whose;2. student改为students;3. 第二行去掉but;4. on改为in;5. 第三行第一个was改为were;6. 第四行homeworks改为homework;7. stop后加to;8. 第五行find 改为found;9. 第六行immediate改为immediately;10. put out后加the10.1. 第一行has后加been;2. 第二行lives改为living;3. thing改为things;4. 第三行去掉第二个to; 5. 在you前加do;6. 第四行on改为in;7. 第五行us改为we;8. 第六行child改为children;9. 第七行this改为these;10. clear改为clearly11.1. 第一行第一个of后加becoming或being;2. give改为giving;3. 第二行but改为and;4. 第三行was改为am;5. there改为it;6. 第四行knowledges改为knowledge或learning;7. Learn 改为teach;8. 第五行him改为them;9. you前加can;10. 第六行去掉as12.1. 第一行was后加a;2. 去掉when;3. 第二行cooker改为cook;4. but改为and;5. 第三行about 后加to;6. 第四行Shake改为Shaking;7. 第五行apologize改为apologized;8. me改为myself;9. 第六行has改为had;10. month改为months13.1. 第一行in改为out;2. 第二行easy前加an;3. 第三行去掉for;4. from改为of;5. 第四行opening改为opened;6. 第五行answer改为answers;7. but改为so;8. 第六行don’t改为didn’t;9. 第七行punish后加me;10. 去掉of14.1. 第一行tell后加you;2. in改为with;3. 第二行a改为an;4. 第三行And改为But或Yet;5. Smile改为smiles;6. 第四行去掉more;7. 第五行去掉when或将其改为that或which;8. 第六行saw 改为seeing;9. like改为liked;10. such改为so15.1. 第一行去掉myself;2. a 改为the;3. 第二行visit改为visiting;4. most后加of;5. 第三行out后加of;6. 第四行excited改为exciting;7. So改为But;8. cost改为costs;9. 第五行giving 改为given;10. 第六行are改为is16.1. 第一行of改为from;2. quietly改为quiet;3. 第二行well 前加as;4. to改为at;5. 第三行happy改为unhappy;6. that改为why;7. 第四行talked改为talk;8. 第五行stranger改为strangers;9. since→but;10. 第六行去掉about17.1. 第一行you后加are;2. 去掉the;3. 第二行although改为since;4. find后加it;5. 第三行minute改为minutes;6. rightly改为right;7. 第四行or改为and;8. 去掉together;9. 第五行with改为about;10. Having改为Have18.1. 第一行去掉yet;2. 第二行去掉were;3. early前加an;4. 第三行us改为ourselves;5. Helplessly 改为helpless;6. 第四行swimming改为swim;7. 第五行treat改为treated;8. some改为any;9. 第六行other改为others;10. 第七行when改为since19.1. 第一行age改为ages;2. interested改为interesting;3. 第二行your改为their;4. 第三行last 后加a;5. 第一个are改为is;6. 第四行postcard改为postcards;7. 第五行for改为with;8. So 改为But;9. 第六行去掉in;10. exist改为exists20.1. 第一行most改为mostly;2. 第二行terribly改为terrible;3. 去掉第二个to;4. 第三行去掉for;5. do改为did;6. 第四行myself改为me;7. 第五行from后加the;8. 第二个and改为or;9. 第六行it改为them;10. has改为had。
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(以下为待改正的短文)My family just comeback from a two-week holiday in Thailand. It was a fantastic experiences that we will never forget. We stayed in a luxuries resort by the beach, and enjoy the beautiful view every day. However, there were some issue during our stay.Firstly, the service in the resort was terrible. The staffs were impolite and never respond to our requests. We ask for a room change due to the foul smell, but they ignores us completely. It was very disappointing.Secondly, the food was also disappointed. The breakfast buffet was very limited choose, and the food tasted plain and unappetizing. We expected to enjoy the local cuisine, but it was nothing like what we anticipated.Thirdly, the hotel organization was poorly. There were no clear instructions or indications about the facilities in the resort. We had difficulty finding where the gym and swimming pool located. It was such a hassle.visited many touristic spots and experienced the rich culture and tradition of the country. The beautiful beaches and clear blue sea made up for the disappointing resort experience.In conclusion, our holiday in Thailand had its ups and downs. While the resort had its faults, we still enjoyed the overall trip and appreciate the wonderful memories we made.(以下为已改正的短文)My family just came back from a two-week holiday in Thailand. It was a fantastic experience that we will never forget. We stayed in a luxurious resort by the beach and enjoyed the beautiful view every day. However, there were some issues during our stay.Firstly, the service in the resort was terrible. The staff were impolite and never responded to our requests. We asked for a room change due to the foul smell, but they ignored us completely. It was very disappointing.Secondly, the food was also disappointing. The breakfast buffet had very limited choices, and the food tasted plain and unappetizing. We expected to enjoy the local cuisine, but it was nothing like what we anticipated.Thirdly, the hotel organization was poor. There were no clear instructions or indications about the facilities in the resort. We had difficulty finding where the gym and swimming pool were located. It was such a hassle.visited many tourist spots and experienced the rich culture and traditions of the country. The beautiful beaches and clear blue sea made up for the disappointing resort experience.In conclusion, our holiday in Thailand had its ups and downs. While the resort had its faults, we still enjoyed the overall trip and appreciated the wonderful memories we made.。
短文改错专练(一)After school, I was about to enter my apartment while I saw a little dirty dog lie beside a dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!When my parents got to home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company.Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him.答案:After school, I was about to enter my apartment I saw a little dirty dog beside a dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked and refreshed. What a lovely dog!When my parents got to home, I asked I could keep the dog. To my and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone enjoyed his company.at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him.(二)I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend. I had been looking forward to go there for a long time. It is one of the modern city in the world. There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school. I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the Twins Towers destroyed on September 11th, 2001 and I would have the chance to see themby myself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.答案:I as well as my family going to New York City this weekend. I been looking forward to there for a long time. It is one of the modern in the world. There also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school. I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the Twins Towers destroyed on September 11th, 2001 I would have the chance to see them by myself. Now I am getting ready for the trip. I bet it will be unforgettable experience.(三)I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. It will be held in the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon.答案:I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. It will be held in the 9th of July the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 will be on show, high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very with us Chinese high school students, we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful you could join that day. Looking forward to from you soon.(四)There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. Asingle ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.答案:There are different train for people to choose from when by train. They may want to buy a single ticket a return ticket. A single ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not only is cheaper but also them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft . Young people like to have hard seats because the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they still energetic and can go on to do their jobs.(五)My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited for a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park,I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate,I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him,but I had no luck. Wandering in the park,I felt alone without any companions. Worse still,I had no money,so I had to walk home,covered as much as 5 kilometers.答案:My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors in front of the ticket window. We waited for a long time andthree tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park,I was eager to see the fierce animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. ,I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for ,but I had no luck. Wandering in the park,I felt without any companions. Worse still,I had no money,so I had to walk home, as much as 5 kilometers.(六)Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high school students and do extreme well in achievement tests. And next year, Rowena will attend Harvard University. Billy, her younger brother, hope to go to Cornell. That makes Rowena and Billy different from most students are that they don't go to school. In fact, they've never been school. Since a kindergarten, they have studied at home. Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home. As many of the more than one million people who receive home schooling in the United States, they feel that we have gotten a good education.答案:Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high school students and do well in achievement tests. And next year, Rowena will attend Harvard University. Billy, her younger brother, to go to Cornell. makes Rowena and Billy different from most students that they don't go to school . In fact, they've never been school. Since a kindergarten, they have studied at home. Neither Rowena Billy feels as if they have missed out on by being taught at home. many of the more than one million people who receive home schooling in the United States, they feel that have gotten a good education.(七)Nowadays, some students would not like to living in a dorm. Instead, they rented houses outside the school. There are advantages for all. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, but of course it is safe. A dorm is more like a society, where enables students to learn to get along with the each other, thus preparing for the sociallife later. As for renting a house to live in alone, it's better for your studies as you can feel freely in your own room without interrupted by others. As a result, you will have more time and can devote yourself to studying wholehearted. But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm. 答案:Nowadays, some students would not like to in a dorm.Instead, they houses outside the school. There are advantages for . Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates, of course it is safe. A dorm is more like a society, enables students to learn to get along with the each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting a house to live in alone, it's better for your studies as you can feel in your own room without interrupted by others. As a result, you will have more time and can devote yourself to studying . But there may appear a few safety as you live outside the school. Anyhow as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.(八)It's been a long time since I do something good for the environment. Feel responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take action again.I told my idea with my friends and we planned to plant the trees on the hill in the rural area of the city.We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place where looked suitable and settled down. We spend a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings (幼苗). Then we wrote our wishes on cards one to one and buried it deep down the roots of the trees. We also took numerous pictures. We were such busy that we didn't realize it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.答案:It's been a long time since I something good for the environment. responsible to protect the environment, I decided to take action again.I told my idea my friends and we planned to plant the trees on the hill in the rural area of the city.We came to the foot of the hill and selected a place looked suitable and settled down. We a few hours digging holes and placing the young seedlings (幼苗). Then we wrote our wishes on cards one one and buried deep down the roots of the trees. We also took numerous pictures. We were busy that we didn't realize it was time to go back. I felt really glad that we made difference to the environment.。
英语文章改错练习题原文:Last week, I went to the beach with my friends. We had a great time. The weather was wonderful and the sea was very warm. We played volleyball and swam in the sea. I also read a book. In the evening, we had a barbecue and talk about our future plans.改错后的文本:Last week, I went to the beach with my friends. We had a great time. The weather was wonderful and the sea was very warm. We played volleyball and swam in the sea. I also read a book. In the evening, we had a barbecue and talked about our future plans.错误点解析:1. "talk" 应改为 "talked",因为句子描述的是过去发生的事情,所以动词需要使用过去式。
2. 其他句子在语法上没有错误,但要注意时态的一致性。
练习题:原文:My sister and I went to the cinema last night. She likes horror movies, but I don't. We watched a new movie which was very scary. I was so scare that I couldn't sleep all night.答案:My sister and I went to the cinema last night. She likes horror movies, but I don't. We watched a new movie which was very scary. I was so scared that I couldn't sleep all night.错误点解析:1. "scary" 前缺少 "was",因为这是一个完整的句子,主语是 "I",谓语动词需要使用 "was"。
中考英语短文改错练习题40题含答案解析1. There is a book and two pens on the desk.A. is → areB. book → booksC. pens → penD. on → in答案解析:A 项错误,错误类型为主谓一致错误。
there be 句型遵循就近原则,后面紧跟的是a book,为单数,所以be 动词应该用is,不能改为are。
2. My parents and I am going to the park.A. am → areB. parents → parentC. going → goD. park → parks答案解析:A 项错误,错误类型为主谓一致错误。
主语是“My parents and I”,为复数,be 动词应该用are,不能用am。
3. The news are very important.A. are → isB. news → newsesC. very → soD. important → importance答案解析:A 项错误,错误类型为名词单复数错误与主谓一致错4. Two glass of water are on the table.A. glass → glassesB. of → forC. water → watersD. are → is答案解析:A 项错误,错误类型为名词单复数错误。
“两杯”应该是two glasses,glass 要用复数形式。
5. The teacher with his students have a picnic.A. have → hasB. with → andC. students → studentD. picnic → picnics答案解析:A 项错误,错误类型为主谓一致错误。
with 连接的主语,谓语动词与前面的主语保持一致,the teacher 是单数,谓语动词用has,不能用have。
高三英语《短文改错》专项练习题(含答案)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1.I have been playing volleyball since three years before. It started when a teacher set up volleyball club in our school, hope that students would join in the sport. The club was very popular that many students signed up for it. To be honestly, at that time I just foll owed them without thinking. We practiced together, on every Saturday morning. However, some of the students soon began to get boring and dropped out of the club. So I found I was quite enjoying it and I carry on. After training for some time, I was sel ected for the school team. What excited and proud I was!2.Dear Li Lei,I’m proud to tell you what you heard of is true.As is proved, that some UK primary schools will use 36 math textbooks, exercise books, and teachers’ guid es publishing by the Shanghai Century Publishing (SCP). The textbooks will be used in both Shanghai or the UK at a same time. It is the first time Chinese textbooks had been adopted by a devel oped country in so a systematic and large-scale way. The textbooks have listed as a sample by the National Centre for Excellence in the Teaching of Mathematics of the UK. Without SCP’s permission, British publisher Harper Collins, the UK publisher of the textbooks, will be responsibly for the promotion of the schoolbooks.Don’t we take pride in you Chinese?Yours,Li Hua 3.Dear John,Thank you very much for your recommendation. It’s great opportunity to take part in the English speech competition. Therefore, I'm afraid that I can't attend it. My mother had been ill for several days and I have to take care of her in my spare time, because I d on't have enough time to prepare for the speech competition.I strongly recommend my friend Zhang Ming, who I think he is the most suitable person to participate for this competition. He is good at English and speaks fluently English. Besides, he is a member of the wild animal protection club and devotes much time to care animals. I'm sure his rich experiences of animal protection and perfect speaking English will enable him to achieve success.Sorry again for my absence.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua4.You have offered me l ots of helps. I still remember I had difficulties learn English. It was hard for me memorize English words and understand what other were saying. However, I am luck to meet you. Firstly, you advised me to listen more but read more, which real helped me. Besides, you suggested that you shoul d watch for English movies and sing English songs. You also advised me to form the habit of reading al oud in the morning. As a result, I finally make great progress.5.Are students' grades matter of personal privacy? Shoul d test scores be made public?Opinions vary from person to person. I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers —they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the l ow performers. But competition is a life skill that need to be learned to be successful in the really world. The earlier, the best. Regardl ess of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or losing, but it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.6.My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now. He has been living the busy and active life, going online, writing articles for newspapers, but attending academic conferences all over the country. He also has many hobby, such as growing fl owers at home, collecting stamps and coins and especial drinking tea. There are many different tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home, most of that I can’t name.My g randpa is so very crazy about tea that he can’t live without enjoying tea several times a day. He once told nee he would be sleepy with tea. I often help making tea and drink together with me. I l ove my grandpa.7.Three years ago, I went to a boarding school. The reason for my attend ed such a school was that my parents was very busy. They often went abroad on business but had no time to take care of myself. Besides, they thought I ought to learn to independent. Honest speaking, the school life does benefit me a lot. I not only l earned some ways to solve problem in my own but also learned how to get along with others. But that I treasure most now is the friendship that I devel oped into at that time. How I miss that wonderful time!8.I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall last weekend. Having tol d about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at thisworld wonder. He was fascinated by the beauty of the Great Wall, so I took photos of himself, which woul d be a good memory for him. At the top, there was an activity about environmentally protection. Mr. Brown was so interested in protect the environment that he was eager to join in them. Both the Great Wall or the warm-hearted Chinese people deeply impress him. He d ecid ed to visit more place of interest when free.9.One day, I was cooking in the kitchens when the tel ephone rang. I went to answer it immediate. It was my close friend, Lisa. When they were talking on the phone, a fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I was rather worrying. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the wind ows and then went out of the house. With my surprise, two fire engines were outsid e my house. I was tol d the firemen that it was my careless cook which caused the heavy smoke.10.It is essential to take an useful summer vacation after the exam. There are many kinds of activity for us to take part. First, we can visit our relatives and friends or spend a happily time with our family. Second, seeing a film, listening to music or hang out with our friends will also be excited. Third, we shoul d take more exercise to keep healthy. What’s more, we’d better to review what we had learned at school. Finally, it is necessary of us to do some housework, that can help our parents a l ot. Above all, I hope all of us can have a pleasant vacation.11.I live in a city and frequently notice the trash throwing rand omly on the sides of the roads. Every time I take my d og for a walk and go outside for something else, I am happy that to pick up at l east one piece of trash. Although it seems that this small act won t make a differ, it trulymakes me feel good about me for helping out.If we all do this small thing just one a day,we'll be taking part helping the planet. Gradually,our worl d may become the cl eaner and better place. I hope this inspired even one person to pick up the rubbishes.12.Dear Sir, I am a stud ent from the near school. Here I want to report the environmental situation for you. There used to many green trees and all kind of fl owers in our school all the year round. The school looks like a beautiful garden and we had a clean studying environment. And everything has changed since your chemical factory was built a year before. Every day it produces lots of waste water and harm gases. The terrible pollution has been d one great harm to our health. We all expect you factory can take measures to stop the pollution soon.13.I watch TV until 12 o’clock, so I couldn’t go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late that I had to go to school without breakfast in hurry, but I was still late for the first class. When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explain an important problem, and all the eyes were fixed upon me. My face turned red. Something even worse was happened to me in English class. The teacher asked me recite the text. However, I could say nothing and sorry, for I did not spend some time preparing my lessons. The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes. I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head. How a terrible day I had! I will never d o anything like this.14.After read your advertisement, I want to offer yourself for the position. I’m twenty years old, male, 1.78 meters tall, strong and health. And I am going to graduate from Nanjing University this year. I had learned English for ten years. My speaking English is very good and I can write good article. I have won several prizes in English contests. I have been made agreat number of inventions, most of them have been put into practice. But I can use the computer skillfully. If I can get the job, I’ll do all I can do it well.Thank you for your kindness.15.My parents and I spent half a month in New York last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit America. The weather is usually cool or there aren’t too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, and my parents didn’t like travell ed by und erground. I went to look at the places that all tourists went to see. We went shopping in Times Square and spend too much money. What we like most were going to the theater. We d on’t have the chance to see so wond erful plays at home.16.I have worked from ages 17 to now(I am 60 this year), and I’ve really enjoy my career in IT. One week after l eave school, I started to work. Now I do feel that my work has shaped myself in many ways.At some point soon, I will retire— and I am terrifying! I have no idea that I will d o with all that time or why I will d o it. I am happy married and have a 21-year-old son. My wife and I can travel and I can read book. There are operas to enjoy it and restaurants to try, but this isn’t going to get me out bed at a reasonable time!17.This summer holiday, I go to a seasid e city with my family. We got there by air. It is a very beautiful and modern city, where impressed us a lot. On the first day, we took a bus to a place calling the Sea Park. There were such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn’t believe in my eyes. On the second day, we went swimming, and we all enjoyed ourselves. During the next two days, we went to some tourist spot, shopping and taking photos. Several days late,we left the city. Although we were tiring on our way home, we felt happily about the holiday. What unforgettable experience!参考答案1.1. before→ago2.up后添加a3.hope→hoping4.very→so5.honestly→honest6.去掉on7.boring→bored8.So→But9.carry→carried10.What→How2.3.1. great前加a 2. Therefore→ However 3. had→ has 4. because →so 5. 去掉he 6. participate 后的for改为in 7 . fluently→ fluent 8. care→ caring 9. experiences→ experience 10. speaking →spoken4.第一句:helps→help第二句:learn→learning第三句:在me后加to;第四句:other→others第五句:luck→lucky第六句:but→and;第七句:real→really第八句:you→I;第九句:去掉for第十句:make→made5.1. matter前加a 2. 去掉recognize后的for 3. try→trying 4. therefore→ however 5. need→ needs 6. really→ real 7. best → better 8. motivating → motivated 9. when→ how 10. them→ themselves6.7.1. attended →attending2. parents后的was →were3. b usiness后的but →and4. myself →me5. independent前加be6. Honest →Honestly7. does →did8. in my own的in →on9. I treasure 前的that →what10. 去掉developed后的into8.hewho;Having后加been;amazing →amazed;himself →him;environmentally →environmental;protect →protecting;join后去掉in;or → and;impress →impressed;place →places9.10.1. an 改为a 2. activity 改为activities 3. take part 后加in 4. happily 改为happy5. hang 改为hanging6. excited 改为exciting7.删掉we’d better 后的to8. had 改为have9. of 改为for 10. that 改为which11.th rowing→thrown and→or去掉that differ→differenceme→myself one→once part后面加上in the→ainspired→inspires rubbishes→rubbish12.1. near→nearby;2. for→to;3. 在used to ∧many 之间加be;4. kind→kinds;5. looks→looked;6. And→B ut;7. before→ago;8. harm→harmful;9. 把has been done 中的been去掉;10. you→your13.14.1. read→reading 2. Yourself----myself 3. health→healthy 4. had---have5. Speaking---spoken6. article→articles7. been→去掉been8. them→which 9. But→And 10. 第二个do前加^to15.16.1.ages→age2.enjoy→enjoyed3.leave→leaving4.myself→me5.terrifying→terrified 6.that→what7.happy→happily8.book→books9.将it去掉10.在out后面加of17.1. 第一句:go→went2. 第三句:where→which3. 第四句:calling→called4. 第五句:such→so5. 第五句:去掉in6. 第七句:spot→spots7. 第八句:late→lat er8. 第九句:tiring→tired9. 第九句:happily→happy10. 第十句:unforgettable前加an。
短文改错练习假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AThis morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldn't finish my sandwich. As I didn't know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, "No litter." And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, "What clever you are!"BMr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him."That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.COnline shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don' t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can't feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery. In word, online shopping isn't reliable at all.DMy father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.EToday we has the honor of invite Professor Smith to give us an English lesson. All of us were deeply impressing by this unforgettable English lesson. The professor began the class in an amusing English story, which attracted our attentions at once. He spoke slowly and clearly so that we could follow him well. Great inspired, most of us took an active part in classroom activities. After class, many students being interviewed spoke highly of him. They said never before have they experienced such interesting a class. From his lesson, we came to conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English whether we find a good way.FIn England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr. Thompson used to going to a bar near his house, or he never took his son, Tom, because he was too young. Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr. Thompson took him to his usual bar. After drinking at half an hour, Mr. Thompson said to his son, “Tom, I want to teach you an useful lesson. You must always be careful never drink too much.” “How do you know how you've had enough?” asked Tom. “Do you see those two lights at the end of the bar? When it seem to have become four, you've had enough and should go to home.” “But , Dad, I can see only one.” said Tom.GDear John,I'm very pleasing to know you are coming to study in Beijing. It is really good idea to improve your Chinese before the new term began. And now let me to tell you something about the school. First, it is very conveniently for you to get there by Bus No. 16. Next,the classes are very small. There are 24 teaching hour a week. After class, you can enjoy sports and activities with other students. Stay with a Chinese family will provide youwith a chance to practise your Chinese but know more about the Chinese family life. The time will suit you and only 200 yuan are paid per month. I'll get touch with them if youare interested in this school.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li HuaHLast weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. Afterthe dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.答案A1. 第二句删掉第一个the2. 第三句eat改为ate3. 第四句advices改为advice4. 第五句that改为which5. 第六句throw前加to6. 第七句slow改为slowly7. 第八句her改为my8. 第九句by改为with/on9. 第十句Seen改为Seeing10. 第十句What改为HowB11. 第二句with改为on12. 第三句删掉so13. 第四句have改为has14. 第五句healthy改为health15. 第六句which改为what16. 第七句paid后加a17. 第八句her改为his18. 第十句step改为stepped19. 第十一句picture改为pictures20. 第十二句as many as中的many改为much C21. increasing改为increasingly22. liked改为like23. And改为But24. merchant改为merchants25. 去掉to26. is改为are27. delivering改为delivered28. which改为what29. our改为their30. word前加aD31. visit改为visited32. but改为so/and33. go to anywhere... 删掉to34. comfortably改为comfortable35. I liked best were中的were改为was36. shared for中的for改为with37. taking改为taken38. dish改为dishes39. such后加a40. friend of me中的me改为mine E41. invite改为inviting42. impressing改为impressed43. class后的in改为with44. attentions改为attention45. Great改为Greatly46. being去掉47. before后的have改为had48. such改为so49. conclusion前加a50. whether改为ifF51. are改为is52. to后going改为go53. or改为and或者but54. eighteen改为eighteenth55. at改为for56. an改为a57. drink前加to58. know后how改为that或者when59. it改为they60. 去掉home前的toG61. pleasing改为pleased62. good前加a63. began改为begins64. 删掉to65. conveniently改为convenient66. hour改为hours67. Stay改为Staying68. but改为and69. are改为isH70. touch前加in71. their前加with72. search改为searched73. informations改为information74. we改为I75. had改为was76. the suitcase前加into77. what改为that/which78. show改为see79. happily改为happy80. safe前加a。
短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepareI had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythin g went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s b ooks regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案:A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → so mething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such短文改错专练(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语短文改错专项训练(含答案)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)M.uncl.i.th.owne.o..restauran.clos.t.tha..liv..Thoug.no.ver.bi.,bu.th.restauran.i. popula.i.ou.are..I.i.alway.crowde.wit.customer.a.mea.time..Som.peopl.eve.ha.t. wai.outsid.M.uncl.tell.m.tha.th.ke.t.hi.succes.i.honest.Ever.da.h.make.sur.tha.fr in.fo.cooking.M.uncl.say.tha.h.neve.dream.be comin.ric.i.th.shor.perio.o.time.Instead.h.hope.tha.ou.busines.wil.gro.steady.2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错(共10小题, 每小题1分, 满分10分)ing.M.classmate.an..ar.talkin.abou.ho.t.d.durin.th.holi forta bl.bu.ther.i.n.nee.t.spen.money.Bu.i.tha.case.w.wil.lear.littl.abou.world.I.w.g .o..tri.abroad.w.ca.broade.yo.vie.an.gai.knowledge.w.canno.ge.fro.books.S om.classmate.sugges.w.ca.g.t.place.o.interes.nearby..though.tha.i.i..goo.id ea.I.doe.no.cos.many.ye.w.ca.stil.lear..lot.3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分).Th.teenag.yea.fro.1.t.1.wer.th.mos.difficul.tim.fo.m..The.wer.als.th.bes.an.wor s.year.i.m.lif..A.th.first..though..kne.everythin.an.coul.mak.decision.b.yourself.However.m.parent.didn’.see.t.thin.such.The.alway.tel.m.wha.t.d.an.h o.t.d.it.A.on.tim...eve.fel.m.parent.couldn’.understan.m.s..hope..coul.b.fr eel.fro.them..showe.the..wa.independen.b.wea.strang.clothes.No..a.leavi st..wil.b.o.m.own.bu..stil.wan.t.hav.m.parent.t.tur.t.wh eneve.nee.help.4.【2016·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分)I.i.Mother’.Da.today.Thoug.it’..wester.festival.it’.popula.i.Chin.now. Mo.ha..full-tim.job.s.sh.ha.t.d.mos.o.th.houseworks.Sh.i..grea.mother.Bot.Da. o..planne.t.d.somethin.o.Mother’.Day.W.ge.u.earl.i.th.morning.Da.cleane.th. house.an.the.wen.o.shopping.Whe.h.cam.back..foun..bunc.o.flower.i.he.hand. .aske.Mo.t.sta.i.th.sittin.roo.an..cooke.i.kitchen.Th.dishe.wha..cooke.wer.Mom ’.favoritiest.A.dinner.w.sai.t.her.“Happ.Mother’.Day!”Mo.wa.gratefu.an.moving.5.【2016·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分).Whe..wa..ver.youn.children.m.fathe.create..regula.practic..remembe.wel.year.l ate.Ever.tim.h.arrive.hom.a.en.o.th.da.,we’.gree.he.a.th.door.H.woul.as.wh.w..The.h.an.m.mothe.woul.hav.ha..drin.whil.sh.prep are.dinne.an.the.woul.tal.abou.hi.da.an.hers.Whil.the.chat.m.fathe.woul.lif.m.s iste.an.m.u.t.si.i.th.to.o.th.fridge.I.wa.bot.excite.an.frightenin.t.b.u.there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1.【2015·陕西】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分, 满分15分)s.week..wante.t.d.anythin.specia.fo.hi.a.hi.retireme n.party.M.mu.make.th.bette.biscuit.i.th.world.s..decid.t.as.he.fo.help.Mu.taug h.m.som.basi.ste.o.baking..insiste.o.doin.mos.o.th.bakin.myself..though.th.bis cuit.wer.reall.well.M.onl.mistak.wa.tha..droppe.som.o.th.floo.afte..wa.packin.t he.up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! 2.【2015·四川】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分, 共15分)Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want sharewith you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.s.time..mad.thre.ne.frien.here.W.han.ou.togethe.durin.lunc.andafte.school.We'v.bee.spendin..lo.o.tim.sin.i.karaok.bars.It'.bee.thre.Saturdays no.an.i.reall.cost.m.many.An..starte.t.se.thi.a..time—wastin.activity.I.fac.,.don’.lik.t.g.anymore.s.I’.afrai.I’l.los.thei.friendship.Ho.d.yo.thin..shoul.do.I.yo.ar.m.,woul.yo.tal.t.him?Please help with me and give me some advice.G race3.【2015·浙江】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分)M.ol.classroo.wa.interestin.becaus.thre.sid.o.th.classroo.wer.mad.fro.glass..enjoye.si.clos.t.th.window.an.lookin.a.th.view.O.th.left-han.sid.o.th.class..coul.eas.se.th.footbal.field.I.th.mornings.i.wa.ful.o.student.exercising.Th.vie.fro.th.bac.o.th.classroo.i.als.splendid.Clos.t.th.schoo.ther.wa..beautifu.par.wit.man.tree.aroun.them.Farthe.i.th.distance..coul.no.enjo.th.vie.o.snow.mountains.O.th.ri gh.sid.o.th.clas.wa.th.road..wa.alway.intereste.t.se.th.driver.i.hurr.i.th.morning. Th.positio.o.th.classroo.wit.it.vie.mad.m.fel.lik..wa.dreaming.I..wa.onl..chil.wh e..studie.i.tha.classroom..wil.neve.forge.it.4.【2015·新课标全国II】On.da..littl.Ton.wen.t..shoppin.cente.wit.hi.parent.I.wa.ver.crowded.Ton.sa..to. o..sho.window.H.like.i.s.ver.muc.tha.h.quickl.walke.int.th.shop.Afte.look.a.th.t o.fo.som.time.h.turne.aroun.an.foun.wher.hi.parent.wer.missing.Ton.wa.scare. ter.T on.sa.parents.Mo.said,“Ho.nic.t.se.yo.again.Da.an..wer.terribl.worried..Ton.promise.he.tha.thi.woul. neve.happe.again.5.【2015·新课标全国I】Whe..wa..child..hope.t.liv.i.th.city..thin..woul.b.happ.there.No..a.livin.i..city.bu.. mis.m.hom.i.countryside.Ther.th.ai.i.clea.o.th.mountain.ar.green.Unfortunatel y.o.th.developmen.o.industrialization.th.environmen.ha.bee.polluted.Lot.o.st udie.hav.bee.show.tha.globa.warmin.ha.alread.becom..ver.seriousl.problem.T h.air.w.breath.i.i.gettin.dirtie.an.dirtier.Muc.rar.animal.ar.dyin.ou..W.mus.foun. way.t.protec.you.environment.I.w.fai.t.d.s.,we’l.liv.t.regre.i..2014年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1.Correctio.1(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearl.fiv.year.before.an.wit.th.hel.b.ou.father.m.siste.an..plante.som.cherr.tom atoes(圣女果)i.ou.bac.garden.Sinc.then—fo.al.thes.year—w.ha.bee.allowin.tomatoe.t.self-see.wher.the.please.A.result.th.plant.ar.growi n.somewhere.Th.fruit.ar.smal.i.size.bu.juic.an.taste.Ther.ar.s.muc.tha.w.ofte.sh ar.the.wit.ou.neighbors.Althoug.w.allo.tomat.plant.t.gro.i.th.sam.plac.yea.afte .year.bu.w.hav.neve.ha.an.diseas.o.insec.attac.problems.W.ar.growin.wonderf ull.tomatoe.a.n.cost!2.Correctio.2(2014课标全国Ⅱ)M.drea.schoo.start.a.8:3.a.m.an.end.a.3:3.p.m.The.ar.thre.lesson.i.th.mornin.a n.tw.i.th.afternoon.W.didn’.nee.t.d.s.man.homework.Therefore.w.hav.mor.tim.wit.after-schoo.activities.Fo.example.w.ca.d.readin.fo.on.an..hal.hou.an.pla. sport.fo.on.hou.ever.day.M.drea.schoo.loo.lik..bi.garden.Ther.ar.al.kind.o.th.flower.an.tree.aroun.th.clas k.listenin.music.Th.teacher.h er.ar.kin.an.helpfully.The.ar.no.onl.ou.teacher.bu.als.ou.friends.3.Correctio.3(2014浙江).wa.takin..trai.t.London’.Victori.Station..ha.notice.tha.th.carriag.wa.nois. an.fille.wit.people.e.t.chec.ou.tickets..passenge.realize.h.couldn’.fi n.hi.ticke.bu.becam.quit.upset.The.everyon.i.th.carriag.bega.searchin.th.ticket .whic.wa.eventuall.foun.unde..sea.severa.row.fro.hi.owner.Th.perso.wh.foun..ti cke.smile.wit.pleasur.a.hi.success.N.on.i.th.carriag.ha.previou.spoke.t.o.eve.notice.th.ticket-owne.before.Ye.the. ha.s.quickl.offere.th.stranger.thei.help.I.w.coul.sho.concer.t.other.o.need.th.w orl.woul.b..bette.plac.t.liv.in. 4.Correctio.4(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Althoug.we’v.bee.delighte.t.hav.yo.a.neighbors.we’.I..word.you.dog—Cleo.We’v.calle.severa.tim.abou.Cleo’.earl.mornin.barking.I.i.difficul.t.understandin.w h.sh.bark.ever.minut.she’.outside.Th.earl.mornin.barkin.hav.bee.disturbin.u.a.w.ar.ofte.u.al.nigh.wit.th.baby.Beside.Cle.tend.t.bar..averag.o.si.hour..day.Thi. mornin.sh.start.barkin.eve.befor..o’.considerin.ho.closel.th.house.are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5.Correctio.5(2014四川)Hello.boy.an.girls.Today..a.goin.t.tal.wit.wha.yo.shoul.d.whe..fir.alar.g.off.I.yo.h ea.th.alarm.stan.i.lin.a.th.doo.an.wai.you.teache.t.lea.yo.outside.Sta.clos.t.you. teache.an.classmate.Don’.pani.o.ge.ou.o.line.an.tryin.t.remai.quie.an.calmly. .an.pu.ou..fire.I.it’..fals.alar.an.ther.i.n.fire.you.teach e.wil.lea.u.bac.t.th.classroom.I.yo.notic.tha.whe.someon.i.missin.an.hurt.tel.yo u.teache.immediately.高考英语短文改错专项训练(答案解析)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)【答案】1.tha.→wher..2.but去.. 3.ha.→hav. 4.honest.honest. 5.or.an.in.→use..7.becoming前加o..8.th.→.9. our.hi..10.stead→steadil.【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用;连词because不和so连用;此外, return不和back连用。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of theirown. The people’s life here has become rich or colorf ul. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check itcarefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you so on.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex tounderstand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no g ood using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so getothers confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set aboutdoing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It is so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’tmind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one le g.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt somethingburning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neig hbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in pic ture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDstogether and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged bylaw.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of thatwe had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn tha t you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Thenwe began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an onlyschool in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Stud ents’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter s aying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
英语短文改错专项训练(母语干扰)
一、“缺头少腿”类
1缺少主语
误:But was already 4 o’clock.
正:But it was already 4 o’clock.
误:Yesterday planted a lot of trees.
正:Yesterday a lot of trees were planted.
点拔:除祈使句外,一般情况下,句子都要有主语。
2缺少谓语
误:The new playground in front of the school now.
正:The new playground is in front of the school now.
误:I often by bike to school.
正:I often ride a bike to school. / I often go to school by bike.
误:Mr. Li ill. Who will instead of him?
正:Mr. Li is ill. Who will be instead of him?
点拔:任何一个完整的句子必须有动词谓语。
3缺少宾语
误:He seated on the grass.
正:He seated himself on the grass.
二、“画蛇添足”类
1语义重复
误:He returned back yesterday.
正:He returned yesterday.
误:His English is very wonderful.
正:His English is wonderful.
2谓语重叠
误:There were a lot of people died in the fire. 正:There were a lot of people who died in the fire.
误:He got up, hurried to the school.
正:He got up and hurried to the school.
点拔:一个句子一般只能使用一个动词作谓语。
3多用宾语
误:He dressed his clothes quickly.
正:He dressed quickly.
4多用介词
误:We must serve for the people heart and soul.
正:We must serve the people heart and soul.
误:When we entered into the room, the meeting had already begun. 正:When we entered the room, the meeting had already begun.
误:My work is very busy.
正:I am very busy with my work.
误:Don’t worry. Your body will get well soon.
正:Don’t worry. You will get well soon.
5误用谓语
误:The time past quickly.
正:The time passed quickly.
6误用宾语
误:My parents patted Ah Fu ‘s head.
正:My parents patted AhFu on the head.
误:I was very glad to hear from her letter.
正:I was very glad to hear from her.
7误用表语
误:The price of my car is very expensive.
正:The price of my car is very high..
8误用定语
误:China has a more population than any other country in the world.
正:China has a greater population than any other country in the world.
误:He has a hot body temperature.
正:He has a high body temperature.
9误用介词
误:He works in the farm.
正:He works on the farm.
误:Don’t read under the sunlight.
正:Don’t read in the sunlight.
误:The thief fled away to the direction of the coast. 正:The chief fled away in the direction of the coast.
三、“乱点鸳鸯”类
句子成份搭配不当常见错误有:
1主谓不当
误:Hunan rained heavily yesterday.
正:It rained heavily yesterday in Hunan.
误:My hometown has taken place great changes.
正:Great changes have taken place in my hometown.
误:We want to see TV this evening.
正:We want to watch TV.
误:I’m so glad to hear from your letter.
正:I’m so glad to receive your letter. / I’m so glad to hear from you.
误:I expect that you can help my English.
正:I expect that you can help me with English.
2系表不当
误:If I have free, I will help you.
正:If I am free, I will help you.
误:My dream has become true.
正:My dream has come true.
四、“生搬硬套”类
有些同学不善于运用五种英语基本句式及英语的习惯表达方式,采取直译、死译、硬译的方式,汉语词序+英语单词,写出来的句子极不地道,读来令人啼笑皆非。
误:He has possible go abroad.
正:There is possibility that he will go abroad.
或:It is possible/ likely that he will go abroad./ He is likely to go abroad.
误:Welcome you to visit our university.
正:You are welcome to visit our university.
误:Don’t Luban’s door play axe.
正:Don’t offer to teach fish to swim.。