(完整版)高一英语短文改错专项练习(一)

短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme w ell on 76．achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy d ifferent from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In f act , 80．they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels a s if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people w ho receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education .短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, 78．since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. B ut, you 81．may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．So I ran three miles to school only to discover t hat nobody 84．was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习（3）Get a good education is more important today than 76．ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．schools. Public schools are mainly found b y governments 78．through tax income. Students in Canada t aught in 79．English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．the school from age 5 to 16. There are s everal different 83．levels in the Canadian education system .The f irst was 84．called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习（4）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill n ear to 76. our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77. girls were told to plant the young trees into t he pits. 78. All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were a ll wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the f oot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83. We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习（5）A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76.part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. interested to begin studying another language. At t he first 79. class, the teacher asked us to do a p ronunciation exercise, 80.in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. kept having me to say more words, and I finally a sked him 83. why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an 84. American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85.短文改错练习（6）It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many 76．friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77．I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center o f lake. 78．A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79．were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80．paddles（桨）and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81．over me or green water around me I w as extremely 82．relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83．knew them. I came back home very late. I didn’t feel 84．tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85．短文改错练习（7）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77 everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78 Things here are same now as they were b efore. The 79 final examination will take place in next week. So 80I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81to think that the summer vacation is coming 82 near. I can’t say much I want to see you a ll again. 83I am looking forward to spend summer days w ith you. 84 Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85短文改错练习（8）One afternoon , when I was on my way home , t he sky 76．changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77．to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78．or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79．Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80．me from behind . I turned to have a look and f ind that 81．he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82．offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83．the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I w ould have 84．got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85．短文改错练习（9）I worried about the missed bag all t he evening. 76．I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77．time I left the store until at the time I got h ome. I 78．remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79．was having lunch. So I must have it when I l eft the 80．store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81．But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82．to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83．was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84．lying on the floor. I should be much careful n ext time. 85．短文改错练习（10）A kind of little car may someday take place of t oday’s big 76．ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．less pollution in there air . There will be more s paces for 78．parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习（11）Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though y ou find 76．something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you.If you 77．can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78．it. I’m sure you would want someone to do s ame for 79．you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80．it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81．I went to the office and found the person to who it 82．belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83．gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84．rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85．my heart.Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习（12）Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76. chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77. taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78. Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79. to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80. he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81. poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82. very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83. caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84.As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85. the students.短文改错练习（13）I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76.that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77.reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78.when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79.fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80.water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81. became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82. glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83. increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84.is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85.then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习（14）Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t81．make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．短文改错练习（15）Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．talks about work and study . 81．Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．短文改错练习（16）Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84．them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ?85．Best WishesJane短文改错练习（17）I used to love science class—all of them—76．biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．understand what the world works. For example, 79．when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. I n one 80．class, I learned why it rained. I think s cience classes 81．clear up mysteries. But then there is a lways more 82．mysteries look into. What was my least f avorite class? 83．That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习（18）Some Americans judge success on t he length 76．of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s77．vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．teachers who teach the three c lasses consider 82．themselves less successful than that w ho teach 83．only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．work Americans do , the less s uccessful they 85．consider themselves .短文改错练习（19）As is known, that is interesting to teach c hildren to 76．swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．Florida and California have already run particularly l essons for 78．babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe f rom where, 79．in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the c hild can 84．master the technique and push him forward through t he water. 85．短文改错练习（20）Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76.where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77.if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78.the mistake about the price. You looked at t wo different 79.price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80.21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81.yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82.your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83.get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84.yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85.I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习（21）In many western countries heavy industry is high developed76．The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77．the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78．machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79．smaller objects required for various purpose in our home80．and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the81．general level of economic or industrial development. 82．In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83．decrease （减少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84．Local supplies of the coal or electric power for t heir operation 85．短文改错练习（22）It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .76．I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road .77．Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to78．see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell79．down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes .80．She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel81．and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went t o82．apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me .83．The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action .84．And now ,after I do everything , I’ll think carefully whether85．it’s right or wrong . I’ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习（23）Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters 76．in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So 77．he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua 78．University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle 79．school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. 80．He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a 81．lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in 82．physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83．In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps 84．and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85．短文改错练习（24）Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job 76.interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to 77.get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking78.for several week now and haven’t found anything.79.The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I80.am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you81.could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, 82.but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you 83.decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you 84.can think about get a bike later. 85.Love短文改错练习（25）Dear Abby：How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77．further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam78．for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore,79．my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my80．going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. T hey82．can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83．in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them.84．How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?85．Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习（26）I went to see film after supper. On my way to the 76.cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her 77.way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards 78.her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her 79.great change had taken place in the past few years and she 80.told me something about Britain and her family. 81.Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, 82.for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also 83.practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at 84.English, I would have been able to help her. 85.短文改错练习（27）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that 77.everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78.Things here are the same now as we were before. 79.The final examination will take place of next week. 80.But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to81.think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t82.say much I want to see you all again. 83.Looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84.Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 85.短文改错练习（28）Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76．us English when I attended training course two77．years before. Helen always made good preparations78．for the lessons, she tried her best to make her79．classes lively. I used to being poor in English,80．especially in written English. But now I’m able81．to write English letters and reports correct.82．I still remember how she helped me for my83．English patiently. Teachers’ Day’s come. I’m going to84．send to her a card and give her best wishes.85．短文改错练习（29）ow I'd like to tell you why I learnEnglish．76．I often read English aloud and try learn something 77．important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and78．form the good habit of thinking inEnglish．79．I listen to a lot and talk with others inEnglish．80．In this way, I was improved both my hearing 81．and my spoken English．I keep a diary in English every day but my 82．spoken English is becoming better and better．83．I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge．By this means, I can express itself 84．in English correct．That's the way I have been learning 85．English．I hope it will be useful toyou．That's all．Thank you．短文改错练习（30）I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could 76.never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend 77.several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant 78.cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to 79.make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then80.he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still 81.couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82.microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something 83.and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked.“That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted,84.and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your85.eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习（31）One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he c ame, 76．she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. 77．The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. 78．She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never b efore 79．suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful e xamination, 80．the doctor said, “You are in a very bad state of health for a woman 81．of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just m atter of 82．old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble w ill mostly 83．clean up in spring!”“Nonsese,doctor!” she said, “My left knee is 84．perfect, and it is exactly same age as m y right.”85．短文改错练习（32）May I have you attention please? I have a few 76. things to tell you. When you have a class here i n the 77. language lab, please be here a little e arly. Change 78. your shoes before enter the lab. Don't b ring anything 79. here except your text books. When you are into, 80. please don't touch these machine without permission. 81. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In c lass you 82. should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders 83. can be used make a copy of the listening materials. 84.When class over, turn off your machines a nd leave 85. the lab one by one.短文改错练习（33）Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested 76. activity, in which children and their parents play the rich 77. and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious 78. food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). 79. Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the 80.81. children. They hoped that their children could be taught thelesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习（34）We'll never forget the day which my classmates and 76.I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. 77. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It 78. looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, 79. grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some 80. workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We 81. talked to them and learned a lot. We understood 82. them further. On the way home we felt tiring. 83. We all thought that we had a very good day. We 84.85. really hoped that we could get more chances ofleave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习（35）One morning Mrs Jenkins went to d epartment store 76. to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store 77. before she got there. She had to wait. Then a f at lady. 78. came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve 79. for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy 80.a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she c ouldn't do. 81. The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let M rs Jenkins 82. explain anything but insisted that M rs Jenkins 83. would do that right away because it was her job. 84. At last Mrs Jankins has to tell her that s he was 85.a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, too.短文改错练习（36）If there are much more people in the world, t here must 76. have more food to feed the people. But food is already a 77. problem in today's world. One-third of the w orld's population 78. is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand 79. people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world 80. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or die 81. because they eat too much food, and they are very f at. Some 82. countries have no food, but the others have too much, and 83. they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed 84. its people? The world needs produce more food than 85. it does now.短文改错练习（37）There are strange similarities in t he life 76. of John F. Kennedy and the life of Abraham Lincoln. For 77. example, Kennedy became a president in 1960,while Lincoln 78. elected in 1860.This was exactly one hundred years 79. apart. Then both men were shot after, on a Friday and in 80. the presence of their wife. There is a nother very 81. strangely similarity. Kennedy's secretary, named Lincoln, 82. told him to go to Dallas. Lincoln's secretary, named Kennedy, 83. told him not to go to the Ford Theatre. But all of them went 84. and both were shot to die. 85.短文改错练习（38）A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 76.without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two 77. hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his 78. country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies 79. around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries. 80. includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American 81. soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq 82. But they met stronger resistance than they expected. 83. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult84. times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said85. British Prime Minister Blair.短文改错练习（39）My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live 76. with us for many years of independence. We did 77. all the things we could make her feel comfortable, 78. in our home, including giving her the private line for 79. their bedroom. One evening we were having a party 80. while the phone rang. It was telephone operator, 81. who asked, “Do you have a grandmother on upstairs? 82. “Yes,what’s happened?” my husband replied.“Well,”the 83. operator again continued,“She can't remember. 84. your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.. ”85.短文改错练习（40）I'd like to tell you something more about the problem of 76. pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory 77. besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day 78. long. Very loud voices hurt our ears. Rubbish and 79. waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out 80. polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has 81. made a great harm to the health and study of the 82. teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little 83. has done to change the situation. I don't think we can 84. study well until the problem is solved. We do hope85. you'll help and support us.短文改错练习（41）Helen is one of my best friends. She has taught 76. us English when I attended training c lass two 77. years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. to write English letters and r eports correct. 82.I still remember how she helped me for my 83. English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm g oing to 84. send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85.短文改错练习（42）The early morning fire damaged the historic Gallad H ouse today. 76 It destroyed the third floor of the building so fire fighters saved 77 the first and the second floors. There were only a few elderly people 78 living in the building at the time and they carried out to safety. 79 The Gallad House was built in 1718 and was used for a hotel f or over 80 150 years. George Washington stayed in here in 1782. The Gallad family 81 owned the building for the elderly. Several fire department were c alled 82 to the scene. When Fire Chief Andrew Bond asked when the fire 83 started, he answered that perhaps a burning cigarette caused it. 84 Chief Bond had promised to further examine the cause. 85短文改错练习（43）When passing the bus station on my way home，I found out alittle girl alone crying. Obviously,she was losing，looking for her mother. I came up and asked her why. When asked where her mother was,she just shook head and kept crying. Then I took her to the station broadcasting room for a help. "Anyone who lost a child please come to our broadcasting room..." which was soon heard again and a gain. Minutes later,a worrying mother came. The girl ran to her mother happily，tears still in eyes. The mother was very thankful and askedfor my name. With smile，I answered，" I'm only a League member.I have just done that a League member should do. It's my duty." 76777879808182838485短文改错练习（44）I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking for rabbits to draw. 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（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

高一英语短文改错1.Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.【小题1】通篇都在讲我的梦想，因此代词Your-- My。

【小题2】will加动词原形，“被录取" be admitted into ,will后面加be.［小题三】主将从现m五上工从句用一般现在时，去掉,二-E小题4］全文是一般现在时，hop?d一hop?Q工小题定语一句中缺少主语，因此宾格v. honL-v. ha或that D工小题5】快乐地生活，副词修饰动词，happ^.--happilj. o工小题 r 参加腰炼，.腰炼z是不可敬名词/"心八一『-二北.［小题S］"关注" foru^ on ,是固定语，介词to —orin【小题办努力学习和准备考试，前后是并列关系，or- -ando［小题13］做好充分准？S"' b? for ?因此pit pai■.口g—pit pain，2.One night, I was on my way home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I,d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn,t have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn,t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】1. complete 改为completely 2. in 改为on 3.after 改为before4.can 改为could5.the 改为 a6. shone 改为shining7.knocked 后力口at/ on8.was 前力口and 9.it 改为there 10. who 删掉3.My name is Li Hua. I was born in Qingdao, Shandong province on February 1995. I started the school in 2001 when I was six. I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007. After that I went to No. 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer. The main subjects I study at schoo1 included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best and I am very good at it .Last year I winned first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter . 【答案】【小题1】on-in【小题2】去掉the【小题3】happy- happily 【小题4】graduate- graduated 【小题5】study- studied 【小题6】it-them 【小题7】winned-won【小题8】listening- listening to 【小题9】stamp- stamps【小题10] is-are【解析】4.Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn't work effectively. Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.【答案】【小题1】devoted改为devotes【小题2】class改为classes【小题3】deeply改为deep【小题4】too改为so【小题5】去掉the 【小题6】while改为when 【小题7】加上with【小题8】We改为They 【小题9】relaxing改为relaxed 【小题10】but改为and5.Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off earlyand went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.【答案】【小题1】can改为could【小题2】extreme改为extremely【小题3] spirit改为spirits【小题4】was改为were【小题5】mixing改为mixed 【小题6】去掉top【小题7J theres改为where【小题8】加上a【小题9】more改为much【小题10】and改为but6.Even today, a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady, help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date. When a man takes a woman out for a dinner, it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down. On a crowding train or bus, it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat, particular if she is old or carries a baby. Even when it comes to shake hands, ladies come first. It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting. Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first, the man shouldn't offer theirs.7.Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing. It,s really nice to visit Sydney, which beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. I,ll act like a guide to show you around the places of interests in my hometown.Yours, Li Hua 【答案】【小题1】was去掉【小题2】kindly-kind【小题3】us-me【小题4】which-whose【小题5】better-good【小题6】have-had【小题7】here-there【小题8】A to visit【小题9] like-as【小题10] interests-interest8.When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldn't understand “real music”I^grAdtaed from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He becamemy first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.试题分析：题目主要考查学生对名词、形容词、副词、介词、人称代词、时态、定语从句等知识的掌握情况口【小题1】考查时态和语态.二和4注是主谓关系，即我待在……，不应该用被动语态，故把,委去掉。

新短文改错练习题8篇1 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.2 Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day!3 Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the dance group. During the summer vacation, I practiced hard with others regardless of the cold weather. After the new school term began, when I carried on with the practice while I was working hard at my studies. And finally, the great day came. In the evening, thousands people gathered in the splendid Tiananmen Square. By the bright lights shining around, we were dancing to the pleasant music happily and joyful. Beautiful fireworks in the clear night sky added to my excited. It was realty an unforgettable experience.4 Most families in China hoped their single children will have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. So do teachers in school! Many children are given so much homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No wonder such many children are tired of lessons. Some even attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our government is making out a plan to solve the education problems.5 When Jack bowed to someone, he always did it much too quickly. You needn’t wait any longer after he finished nod his head. So he was blamed for no manner. But some warmhearted men taught him, "When you bow to somebody next time, you can count 'January, February, March, until December. Then you could lift your body up. Thus, the ceremony will be very perfect.”The next day, he met his uncle. He did as the men told. The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape away soon with a surprising look . When Jack looked down, he found his uncle gone . So he asked the passer, "In what month did he go away?"6 Our government is trying hard to build an energy-saving society. It is somebody’s duty to work hard and reach this goal. However, not everybody has realized the important of it. Take our school for example. Sometime we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn on the tap after using it and have water running all the time. Our papers are printed on only one side, causing much waste. It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the light and other electric facilities turned off when we leave the rooms. Try to forming the habit of turning off the tap immediately after using it. What’s more, papers should not be printed on both sides and reused if possible.[来源: In a word, if everybody has the aware of reducing the waste and takes action, we can contribute toour society7 The main purpose of newspapers are to provide news. If you examine newspapers closely, you would find there are all sort of news: accidents, floods, fires, wars, sports, books, etc. The news cover everything happens to people and their surroundings. Sometimes there is some news which is very interested. A news report is usual short, except when it is very important, but has a plenty of information. It is also writing in short paragraphs. The first paragraph is in the fact a summary of the news. It gives all the necessary information, what, when, where, how, and why.8 First, I’d like to thank you for your reminding, although I don’t agree with your view which students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels．Indeed, reading novels takes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it’ll make us know what hard life is．Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can’t learn from our textbook．Of course, reading novels has it’s shortcomings．Novels that have wrong ideas will make us to do something wrong．Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels outweighs the advantages．And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon答案1 1. friend改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。

短文改错增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

1A shopkeeper once found that a bag money had been stolen from his shop．He went to the judge（法官）and tell him about his loss（损失）The judge ordered all people of the shop to come before him．He took a number of the sticks of equal length（长度）or gave one stick to each person．Then he said，“Come after me again tomorrow．I’ll then know which of you are the thief because the stick given to a thief will be one inch longer than the other．”2Miss Evans taught physics in school in London．Last month she was explaining to one of her class about sound ，and she decide to test them to see how successful shehad been in her work．She said to them，“Now I ha s a sister in Washington．If I was calling her by the phone，and you were on the other side of the street．Who would hear me first，my sister and you？And why？” A clever boy at once answered，“You sister，Miss Evans，because the electricity travels much faster than sound waves．” “Very well，” Miss Evans praised．3It is interested to visit another country，but sometimes there are some questions when we don’t know the language very well．It may be difficult to talk about the people there．We may not know how to use the telephone in the country whichare visiting．We may not know what to buy the things we need．In a strange country we may not know where to eat and whatto order in a restaurant．It is not easy to decide how manymoney to tip（付小费）waiters or taxi drivers．When we arehelpless，we may not know how to ask help． After a short time later，however，we learn what to do and what to say．We learn to enjoy life in another country，and then we may be sorry to leave both the place and the people．4Long long ago，people had gather leaves and fruit of plants to eat with．They didn’t know how to plant crops or how to keep animals for their food．We call them Stone Age people．Thing for them were terrible and hard．Now there have still some people living liked those Stone Age people． They live in places that are hard reach．They do not know of our invention，for they keep themselves away our civilized world．For many years a group of people call Aruntas have lived alonein the center of Australia．5How robins（知更鸟）know when it is time to go back north？They seem to tell by how soon daylight lasts．In late winter，daylight begins to last longest each day．When the daylight lasts long enough，robins start north．They fly by day．Each year they follow a same fly－way．At first，they fly only few milesa day．They stop often in the field to eat bugs （小虫子）．Late，they seem in a hurry．They fly over 100 miles a day．Some are going so far as 180 miles．When they get to home，they always stay together high in a tree．6The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life．On the net，we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well．We can also make phone calls，send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping， make a chat with others and make friends with them．In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．7People have different tastes in food．Somefeel they haven't a meal unless they have had pork or other meat；some prefer chickens or fish，and eats one or the other at every meal．Others prefer vegetables and fruits or grains but would enjoy a meal of potatoes， noodles and carrots and some another fruits．Others could live on the foods are called fast foods，for example，ahamburger or hot dog，French fries and a soft drinks．Food can be prepared by so many ways．Every is satisfactory to different person．8In the morning of November 18th，1755，an earthquake 56．＿＿＿shook Boston．John，a professor at Harvard College felt a quake 57．＿＿＿＿and woke up．“I rose and found to be fifteen minutes past 58．＿＿＿＿four．” He hurried to downstairs to the clock．It had stopped 59．＿＿three minutes ago．Except for stopping the clock，the quake 60．＿＿＿had only thrown a key from the mantel（壁炉架）to the floor．61．＿The clock had stopped because John put some long 62．＿＿＿＿glass tube he was using for an experiment into the case 63．＿＿＿＿for safekeeping．The quake had been knocked the tubes over and 64．＿＿blocked the pendulum（钟摆）．So John had the exactlytime of the earthquake． 65．＿＿＿＿9Life in the twenty－one century will be very 56．＿＿＿different with life today．There will be many 57．＿＿＿changes．What can the changes be？The population 58．＿＿＿is growing fast．That will be many more people in 59．＿＿＿the world and most of them will live in longer 60．＿＿＿than people live now．Computers will be much 61．＿＿＿more smaller and more useful，and there will 62．＿＿＿be one in every home．People will work few 63．＿＿＿hours than they now and they will have more 64．＿＿＿free time for reading books，watch TV and traveling．65．＿＿＿10Once one year a race is held． A lot 56．＿＿＿＿＿of cars took part this race last year and there 57．＿＿＿＿＿had a lot of experiments just before it began．One 58．＿＿＿＿＿of the most beautiful car was a Rolls－Royce 59．＿＿＿＿＿Silver Ghost．The most usual car was a Benz 60．＿＿＿＿＿which had only three wheels．Built in 1885，it is the 61．＿＿＿＿＿oldest car taking part．After a great many loud 62．＿＿＿＿＿noises，the race began．Many of cars broke down on 63．＿＿＿＿＿the way and some drivers spent much time under 64．＿＿＿＿＿their cars than in them．The win car reached at 65．＿＿＿＿＿a speed of forty miles an hour．11In recently years，dust storms take place more 76．＿＿＿＿＿and more often in the north of Chinese．They have 77．＿＿＿＿＿brought a great deal of trouble to people’s lives．78．＿＿＿＿＿The strong wind blows up the dust，made the air 79．＿＿＿＿＿very dirty．It also stops many of people from going 80．＿＿＿＿＿out．In past，people raised a large number of sheep．81．＿＿＿＿＿The sheep eat up a great deal of grass and the land 82．＿＿＿＿＿became sandy．Now the government have begun to 83．＿＿＿＿＿pay attention to the problem．Each year，a lot of 84．＿＿＿＿＿money spent on the improvement of the environment．85．＿＿＿＿12Sleep，as we know，is important to us．And 56．＿＿＿＿how many sleep do we actually need？For most 57．＿＿＿＿of us，eight hours seem to be about the right 58．＿＿＿＿amount．Yet we know that there are a 59．＿＿＿＿great many people who get along well less 60．＿＿＿＿sleep ，and some whom may even need more．A 61．＿＿＿＿great deal depends by the way we live．But 62．＿＿＿＿a good common rule to follow to is to 63．＿＿＿＿sleep long as we have to．So we’ll feel64．＿＿＿＿happy and be ableto work with our best when we wake．65．＿＿＿＿13My friend Henry has a most unusually hobby 56．＿＿＿＿＿（爱好）．He likes plant flowers in strange places．57．＿＿＿＿＿When the spring comes round，you can always tell 58．＿＿＿＿＿Henry had been busy working because the dirty sides of 59．＿＿＿＿canals（沟渠）and railway banks suddenly 60．＿＿＿＿＿became filled of flowers．In his spare time，with 61．＿＿＿＿＿pockets full of seeds，Henry goes round by his bike．62．＿＿＿＿＿He has a long pipe with him blow seeds into places 63．＿＿＿＿＿that is hard to reach．When his flowers fade（凋谢）， 64．＿＿＿＿he goes round again to collect its seeds．In this way 65．＿＿＿＿＿he always has a big supply．14Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination (拖延症) is now my goal of life. My firststep was to set small targets what can be reached realistically. For example, I plan to set a timetable for my study. So after school, I will put finishing homework in the last place. Additionally, I will make a list of my important task including their due dates but followmy schedule strictly. I will avoid find excuses for putting them off. At same time, I willask for my friends and parents to help me. By achieving this small targets, I haveconfident that I will overcome procrastination.参考答案一56．bag后加of 57．√ 58．tell→told 59．all后加the 60．去掉the 61．or→and 62．after→before63．are→is64．a→the 65．other→others二56．第一个in后加a 57．class→classes 58．decide→decided 59．has→have 60．by→on 61 √62and→or63You→Your64去掉the 65well→good三56．interested→interesting57questions→problems58．about→with／to 59．which 后加we 60．what→how 61．and→or 62．many→much 63．√四64．ask后加for 65．去掉later 56．had→had to 57．去掉with 58．√59．Thing→Things60．have→are 61．liked→like 62．reach→to reach 63．invention→inventions64．away后加from 65．call→called五56．How后加do 57．soon→long58．longest→longer 59．√ 60．a→the 61．few 前加a 62．field→fields63．Late→Later 64．so→as 65去掉to六56．a→an 57．√ 58．home前加at59．informations→information 60．e-ma ils→e-mail61．Beside→Besides62．去掉the 63．help→helps64．第一个make→have65．more→much七56．haven’t后加had 57．chickens→chicken58．eats→eat59．but→and60．another→other61．foods后加that或去掉are62．√ 63．去掉a 64．by→in65．Every→Each八56．In→On57．第二个a→the58．found后加it59．去掉第一个to 60．ago→before 61．√ 62．put前加had63．tube→tubes64．去掉been 65．exactly→exact九56．twenty-one→twenty-first 57．with→from58．can→will 59．That→There60．去掉in 61．√ 62．去掉第一个more 63．few→fewer64．now前加do 65．watch→watching十56．one→every57．part后加in 58．had→were59．car→cars 60．usual→unusual61．i s→was 62．√ 63．cars前加the 64．much→more或much后加more 65．win→winning十一76．recently→recent77．Chinese→China78．lives→life79．made→making80．去掉of 81．past前加the 82．eat→ate 83．have→has84．√ 85．spent前加is十二56．And→But57．many→much 58．seem→seems59．√ 60．well后加with 61．whom→who62．by→on63．去掉第二个to 64．long前加as 65．with→at十三56．unusually→unusual57．plant→planting或to plant58．去掉the 59．had→has60．√61．filled→full或of→with62．by→on 或去掉his63．在him十四71. was—is 72. what—which/that 73. last—first 74. task—tasks 75. but—and 76. find—finding 77. At ∧same time—the 78.去掉for 79. this—these 80.have—ara/confident-confidence。

高一英语短文改错试题答案及解析1. My name is Wang Kun. Ever since middle school, my sister and I (dream) about (take)a great bike trip. When we graduated from college, we finally got the chance to do it. It （be）my sister first had the idea to cycle along Mekong River from it begins to where it ends. The Dai live near the Lancang River, the Chinese part of the river that (call) the Mekong River in other countries. Wang Wei soon got them interested in cycling too. She insisted that we (find)the source of the river. She gave me a (determine) look. Once she has made up her mind, nothing can change it. Finally, I had to give【解析】2.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday afternoon Frank Hawkins was telling me about his experience as a young man. Before he retired,Frank was a head of a very large business company,but as a boy he used to working in a small shop. It was his job to repair bicycles and at this time he used to work fourteen hours a day. He saved money for years but in 1958 he bought a small workshop of his own. In his twenties Frank used to make spare parts for aeroplanes. At that time he had two helpers. In few years the small workshop had become a large factory which had employed seven hundred and twenty-eight people. Frank smiled when he remembered his hardly early years and the long road to success. He was still smiling when the door open and his wife came in. She wanted him to repair her grandson's bicycle！【解析】3.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高一短文改错练习及答案下面各短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

每句最多两处错误。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者( 从第11处起)不计分。

1. 短文改错It seems that there are a larger number of beggar in the streets than there used to be. I don’t know how we should help them or not. Once I gave some money to a beggar who looks poor. However, minutes late, I saw him bought some cigarettes. It really shocked at me. In my opinion, anyone who work hard can make a living. I’m afraid that giving them money isn’t best way to help them. Maybe the government can take some action to helping them. Anyway, if they want to live a better life, they should learn to depend on ourselves.2.短文改错Dear sir,I'm glad to recommend (推荐) my friend Li Ming to you. Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing. He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986 .When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating from No. 4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics. After four year of hard work there, he wentto the United States for further study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in last year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．Looking forward to receive your early reply!Yours truly,Wang Lin3. 短文改错While studying in Britain, I stayed with a British family. I got to learn about the life of common people here. I took lots of courses, included English literature, and the history of Britain. During my stay, I had visited many libraries and museums and I traveled to several British cities as well. With this way, I experienced part of British culture. This was really enjoyable and unforgettable experience, that helped me in many ways. Firstly, I learned to make some decision by myself. Secondly, I got to know many about the differences between Britain and China. Final,I made many friends there and had my English improve.4.短文改错My father go fishing alone every Sunday. This morning when we were got up , it was fine. Father decided to go fishing, so mother stopped him,said that it was going to rain according to the weather forecast. She asked him to put off his raincoat, but he did not take her advices. When he got to the river, it was cloud. Soon the rain began to fall heavily and he was caught in it. After she got home , he was wet through. “Did you catch some fish?” asked my mother. “No, but I caught bad cold,” he answered.5. 短文改错Once upon a time there was a boy who fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buy any books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who had a lot of books. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed and return it to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy, read few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lot but finally became a famous writer in his time. Though the rich man had such many books, he remained a man with little knowledge because of he seldom read his books.6. 短文改错Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy. She was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria’s mother had said Maria might be allowed bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Since then, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they would do together. By the time August had arrived, Maria’s mother had total forgotten her promise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it w ouldn’t be enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousin, Theresa, would be going to the shore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.7. 短文改错When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American．I became their guide．First, we went to the Shouxi River．They wanted to look around the river by theboat．After buy the tickets, we got into a boat．We went around seeing the beautiful sight．After that, we went shopping．The sellers couldn’t spoke English．Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences．They bought some little things with their help．Next, we went to a small zoo but took somepictures．When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch．After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history．8.短文改错Yang Li, a five-year-old girl living next door to me, very clever. Because she is not old enough to go to the school, she often asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she learns a lot. One evening last month I was doing my English homeworks when she came to my house. She asked me how I learned English. “You would find English a bridge for so much knowledge,” I said. She then wanted to learn English, either. She has learned many English words so far but her parents are very grateful to me.9. 单句改错In recent years, dust storms take place more and more often in the north of Chinese.Here are some good way to have a good talk with your parents.During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life.I was really exciting when I was offered the opportunity to go to Guangzhou for my work.The experience has shown that traveling by air is actually the safest way of make journeys.I wish to know anything more about the Chinese way of living.The boy thought of a wonderfully idea.Please give me some advices.I wonder at if you can tell me about it in your letter .Life in the twenty-first century will be very different with life today.10. 短文改错（满分10分）One night, Mrs Riley, an elderly woman, was walking along a dark, London street. She was carrying her handbag in one hand and a plastic shopping bag in other. There was somebody else in the street except two youths. They were standing in a dark shop doorway. One of them was very tall in golden hair. And the other was short and fat. The youths waited for a few moments, and then run quickly and quietly towards Mrs Riley. The tall youth held him from behind until the other youth tried to grasp her handbag. Suddenly, Mrs Riley threw the tall youth over her shoulder. He crashed into the other youth and they all landed on the ground. Without speaking, Mrs Riley struck them on the head with her handbag, and walked calm away. The two surprising youths were still on the ground when Mrs Riley walked across the street towards a door with a lighted sign above it. Mrs Riley paused, turned, smiled and entered into the South London Judo Club.11.短文改错（10分）Dear Mr. Green,I’m Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school asks me invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summer holiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July, 20 and August 10, 2011. In the morning, you’ll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. In the afternoon, there’re main outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks and museums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.12.短文改错There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.13.短文改错My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our class decided send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard time get them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to found the flower shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this morning. But the line was always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was a new hand and could not tell me the prices. Luckily, I have classes this afternoon, but I am about to go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today.14.单句改错1. She got quite angry, think that she had to do this job every day.2. At the end of the third period, the Australians were winning to eight points.3. There are a lot of factors that makes innovation possible.4. We’re practising even much more regularly and we’re training harder than ever.5. The biggest secret about inventing is anybody can do it!15.短文改错Last year my school planned to set up the football team. I was exiciting about the news though I was a football fan. I entered for it, only to be told that I was too fat. However, they said there will be a test three months later. If I could lose weight successful, I would be admitted. So I decided get up early every morning to do exercise. It was difficulty for me to get up early, especially in winter. I made a great effort to get up on the first few day, but I did not get up the follow days. At last I failed in. How I regret now! If I had continued with my exercise, I would have achieved my goal and become a member of our school team now.参考答案2.1.in----on 2.good---well3.fond 前加was1.4.3.While studying in Britain, I stayed with a British family. I got to learn about the life of common people here. there I took lots of courses, included including English literature, and the history of Britain. During my stay, I had删除visited many libraries and museums and I traveled to several British cities as well. With In this way, I experienced part of British culture. This was really ∧an enjoyable and unforgettable experience, that helped me in many ways. Which Firstly, I learned to make some decision by myself. Secondly, I got to know many more / much about the decisions differences between Britain and China. Final Finally, I made many friends there and had my English improve. improved6.Maria was afraid that she was going to have to deliver a bad news to her friend Freddy.theShe was upsetting about the news herself. In the spring, Maria’s mother had said Mariaupsetmight be allowed∧bring a friend along on the family two-week vacation at the beach. Sinceto family’sthen, Maria and Freddy had been doing nothing and planning all the thing they wouldbut thingsdo together. By the time August had arrived, Maria’s mother had total forgotten her删除 totallypromise. When Maria reminded her, she said that she was sorry but that it wouldn’ttherebe enough room for Freddy because Maria’s cousin, Theresa, would be going to theshore with them. Now Freddy was in his way to Maria’s house.on5.Once upon a time there was a boy who∧fond of reading. However, he was very poor to buywastooany books. That was the reason that he had to borrow books from a rich man who had a lot ofwhybooks. The boy knew clearly that he has to finish reading the books he had borrowed and returnhadit to the owner as soon as possible. A rich man, who was ready to lend any of his book to the boy,them Thebooksread few of his own books. With time going on, the boy read a lot but finally became a famousandwriter in his time. Though the rich man had such many books, he remained a man with littlesoknowledge because of he seldom read his books.去掉of8.71.very前加is 72.去掉the 73.herself → her74.hardly → hard75.homeworks → homework76.how → why77.would → will78.for → to79.either → too 80.but →and7.10.One night, Mrs Riley, an elderly woman, was walking along a dark, London street. She was carrying her handbag in one hand and a plastic shopping bag in ∧other. There wasthesomebody else in the street except two youths. They were standing in a dark shopnobodydoorway. One of them was very tall in golden hair. And the other was short and fat.withThe youths waited for a few moments, and then run quickly and quietly towards MrsranRiley. The tall youth held him from behind until the other youth tried to grasp herher whilehandbag. Suddenly, Mrs Riley threw the tall youth over her shoulder. He crashed into the other youth and they all landed on the ground. Without speaking, Mrs Riley struck thembothon the head with her handbag, and walked calm away. The two surprising youths werecalmly surprisedstill on the ground when Mrs Riley walked across the street towards a door with a lighted sign above it. Mrs Riley paused, turned, smiled and entered into the South London Judo Club.略9.61. Chinese-China 62. way-ways 63. air 后加 for 64. exciting-excited 65. of-to/ make-making66. anything-something 67. wonderfully-wonderful 68. advices-advice 69. 去掉at 70. with-from12.There are different train ticket for people to choose from when traveled by train. They maywant to buy a single ticket and a return ticket. A single ticket allows them∧enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Businessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to do their jobs.1.tickets2. traveling3. or4. to5. saves6. ones7. enjoying8. not去掉 9. are 10. rapidly11.Dear Mr. Green,I’m Li Hua, a student whom you once teach spoken English. Now our school askstaughtme∧invite you to be a spoken English teacher on the English Summer Camp during the summerto forholiday. Here is anything about the activity. The camp lasts from July 20 and August 10, 2011. In the tomorning, you’ll give three spoken English classes so you are expecting to prepare different topic to communicate with students. expected topicsIn the afternoon, there’re main outside activities such as having some picnics and visit parks andmainly visitingmuseums, etc. I hope you will accept the invitation even if you have free time.Yours, Li Hua14.单句改错1. think – thinking2. to – by3. makes – make4 去掉even 或much 5. is后加that13.My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our classhasdecided ∧send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard timeto 删掉aget them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to found the getting immediately findflower shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this删掉atmorning. But the line was always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was aWhennew hand and could not tell me the prices. Luckily, I have ∧classes this afternoon, but I amno and/soabout to go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today.略st year my school planned to set up the football team. I was exiciting about the news though I was a football fan. I entered for it, only to be told that I was too fat. However, they said there will be a test three months later. If Icould lose weight successful, I would be admitted. So I decided get up early every morning to do exercise. It was difficulty for me to get up early, especially in winter. I made a great effort to get up on the first few day, but I did not get up the follow days. At last I failed in. How I regret now! If I had continued with my exercises, I would have achieved my goal and become a member of our school team now.1.the-a2. exciting- excited3. though- because4. will-would5.successful- successfully6.decided后加to7.difficulty-difficult8. day-days 9.follow- following 10. in 去掉 .。

高一英语短文改错专题练习（12 篇）答题要求：本题要求更正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右侧横线上画一个勾 ( √ ) ；若有错误 ( 每行只有一个错误 ) ，则按以下状况更正：此行多一个词：把剩余的词用斜线( ＼ ) 划掉，在该行右侧横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ) ，在该行右侧横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右侧横线上写出更正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

AWhile traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick.81. _______________A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He 82. _______________took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office.83. _______________and took me to there himself. The next day, he came84. _______________to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with85. _______________ him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but86. _______________we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks87. _______________to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern88. _______________for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned89. _______________that communication can take place without much actual90. ______________ language at all.BDear Kate,I am very excited learn that you`re coming to81_____________my city for your summer vacation. Both of my parent82_____________miss you a lot. So did my sister ,Cathy. June is the best83_____________time of the year to visit the city, because of there is only84______________a few rain and it is not hot at that time. There are85______________many attractions that is well worth visiting. You`ll be86______________deep impressed by them. I bet. We hope that you can stay87_____________with ourselves .While you are here, my house is in the88______________center of the city, from that you can easily go everywhere89_____________by bus. I `m sure you`ll enjoy your vacation here.90_______________CA few months after returning the US from Germany, I took81.part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to82.speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be83.interested to begin studying another language. At the first84.class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise,85.in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 86.student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he87.kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 88.why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an89.American speak French with a German accent.” he explained it.90.DI received your letter was dated April l6 the day81．before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to82．learn how you are getting along very well with your83．lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, you’ll84．finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you85．do very well to make up your mind to enter for the college86．entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is !87．Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished88．you to make better use of your time. The full preparations89．you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be.90．EDuring the weekend I traveled by air the first time81. ________________in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is82. ________________both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey.83. ________________In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this84. ________________feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. 85. ________________I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views86. ________________of mountains, fields and rivers were interested.87. ________________I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much.88. ________________This experience has shown that traveling in air is89. ________________actually the safest way of make journeys.90. ________________FDear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school81、_________________ sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was a82、_________________ fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers83、_________________ attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the84、_________________ 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds85、_________________ and broke in the school record. The sports meet86、_________________ was really success. That was because we were87、_________________all trying to do my best.88、_________________ Althought I was not one of the winner, I89、_________________ was proud of that we had done.90、 _________________Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li PingGA group of scientists were planning to goto countryside to do a scientific research in order to81． ________________ find out that whether the environment of the country82．________________had polluted ．On arrival ， they started to check the83．_________________air and water ．To our surprise， they found84． _________________how terribly the situation was． They could see85．________________the serious pollution． Look into the cause，86．________________ they persuade the government to pass the law87．________________to protect environment and kept the balance of88．________________ nature ． Now everything has changed． Birds are89． ________________singing while tree and grass are waving．90．________________HOne day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the81. _________________ telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately.82. _________________She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking83. _________________on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the84. _________________kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly 85. _________________burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the86. _________________ windows, and then went out of the house. In my87. _________________ surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I88. _________________was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it89. _________________was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 90. _________________II went to see the film after supper.On my way to the cinema.I met an English woman,who lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel.While go there,I told her about great changesthat had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film,but I still felt very happy,forI had not only helped her out of trouble but practicedmy spoken English.If I had not worked hard on English,I would not have been able to help him.81._______________82._______________83._______________84._______________85._______________86._______________87._______________88._______________89._______________90._______________JI live in a small town in the south.This is typical81.________________Chinese town.There are not only two main streets82.________________ which across in the middle of the town.Around the83.________________ town stand a high wall,which was built long ago,84.________________ and it is still possibly to walk along it.No motorcars85.________________ allowed in the business streets,which makes shopping86.________________ very easier and safer.On warm days some small87.________________ restaurants put table and chairs outside the houses to88.________________ let people to take a rest and have some tea or ice-cream.89.________________ There are no tall buildings but some beautiful parks.90.________________KFang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher ofBeijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of81. _____________China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen82. _____________or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students83. _______________that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to84. _______________ study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when85. _____________performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he86. ______________never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing.87. _______________For his opinion, actors should go on even when they88. _______________feel they have made a mistake in their performances89. ______________because the moment is already gone but people can never90. ______________be back to it. . . So art is always changing and developing.LToday is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the81. ___________morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because82. ___________the water supply had cut off. 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完整)高一英语短文改错题及答案When I was in high school。

many of my friends had bicycles and I longed to have one too。

One day。

I stumbled upon a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan。

I asked my father for the money。

but he said he could only give me half and that I would have to find the other half myself。

Determined to make it happen。

XXX later。

XXX with the money I had XXX。

2I am a teacher。

who teaches math。

Once。

I asked my students a n。

but no one could answer it。

I was a little disappointed。

Suddenly。

a boy raised his hand and gave the correct answer。

I was surprised and asked him how he figured it out。

He said he learned it in his spare time。

I was XXX to learning。

From then on。

I paid more n to him and helped him to improve his math skills。

As a math teacher。

XXX to my students but was met with silence。

Just as I was starting to feel disappointed。

高一英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning, when she entered the classroom, we found that she was a young or beautiful lady. Then she introduced herself and said they shouldn’t call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. La ter, she asked us to go tothe blackboard and said something about ourselves with English in turn. When it was my turn, I felt so shyly that I didn’t dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kindly, “Don’t afraid I believe you can do them well” At the last, 1 went to the blackboard. She praised me for which I had done.【解析】在文中作者回忆了英语刘老师上的第一堂课。

刘老师年轻漂亮，她在第一堂课上要求学生去讲台上用英语进行自我介绍。

外研版高中英语必修一《短文改错》专项练习题（含答案）1.（1-10 小题）Mr. Smith, our English teacher, works hard. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Smith. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.11.短文改错When I was young, I lived in the countryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impression on me. The waters there was so clear that I even could see the fish swam. When it got dark, the air was cooler than it in the daytime. People liked to walk out of their houses to chat together. I liked to play games with my friends but run along the village happily. As the moon rose highly in the sky , the village was lighting. When I looked up, I could see moon and a few stars. They were so close to me. It seemed that I could touch on them. The life in the countryside were so wonderful.12.Last summer vacation, I worked as a volunteer in the Wolong China Giant Panda Garden in Sichuan, where I stay for two weeks. That I needed to do was to clean the pandas, houses, feed the pandas or make food for them. One male panda I took care was named Jingjing. She was one of the most interested pandas in the Garden. Normally, the panda is a shy creature, not used to be in contact with other animals, particularly humans, but Jingjing seemed very differently. He often reached out one of his foot to greet me and smiled at me. Sometimes he tried to make me to laugh.13.Dear Jack,I,m sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I,d like to offer you any advice.Firstly, it,s normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly,you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you,re friendly to th e others.I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.Yours,Li Hua14.This term I joined in the Chinese painting club in our school. The members of our club met once a week. We have difference activities and I enjoy all of it. We,ve invited some wel-l known painters to a club to talk about the history of Chinese painting but teach us the basic techniques of drawing. At the weekend, we usually go to visit art galleries, where we study the masterpieces of famous artist and discuss what we understand the works. I am very glad that our club getting more and more attractive. An d I'm sure that our schoolmates will get to love our great traditionally culture and art.15.When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we,d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.16.I took part in a international English speech contest and win a prize. As a result, I offered a chance to visit Paris. Paris is one of my most favorite cities and I had dreamed of go there for a long time.Firstly, I visited the magnificent Eiffel Tower. Then I went to the Louvre, that I enjoyed a lot of world-famous work, such as Leonardo da Vinci,s masterpiece Mona Lisa. I also enjoyed the sights of the Arch of Triumph, which is regarded for the symbol of France.I also spent some time look around and experiencing the unique culture in Paris, which great enriched my life.17.Hi, Sharon,This is Li Xia. I,m writing to tell you that I am willing to do how I can to help you learn Mandarin （普通话）.I win the first prize in a nationwide Chinese Speech Contest last term. However, you can depend on it that I will be up to this job.Besides, it is necessary for you to practice it as much as possibly. Here are two tips for you. Firstly, you, d better to buy or download some listening materials. Secondly, we can make friends with classmates from China and frequent communication is of great important. Though having learned English for many years, I have difficulty in American cultures.I would appreciate if you could give me some advice on how to understand them better. I expect there to being a chance to learn from you.It was raining hardly outside, which made it difficult for me to go home for lunch. Just as I was wondering what I should eat at noon, I saw a familiar figure passed by our classroom. I rushed out and found it was my mother, already in fifties, which brought me lunch in spite of the heavy rain. In China, many parents make great sacrifices for our children. But what had the children done in return? All too often, most children just take it for granted that their parent should serve for them unconditionally. My dear mum or dad, thank you very much for bringing me up. How shall I do for you?18. ___________19. ___________20. _________21._________22._________23._________24._________25._________26._________27.High school is considered the most important stage. As senior three student, it will not be long before I graduated. Now I have many things to share in my fellows. First of all, I,d like to express my thank to those who lent me a hand when I was disappoint. It was their kindness which helped me regain my self-confidence when I lost my heart. Besides, I anxious want to clear up some misunderstanding with my friends in order to keep our friendships forever. With the National College Entrance Examination approached, I strongly recommend that we could value time and redouble efforts to study so that we can get into a key university.28.Last week,I attended a lecture by a teacher in his thirty. He was energetic and confidence. He spoke very fast and I could understand that he said. He mainly focused at how to learn the English well. In addition,he showed us how to write neatly, letter by letter. He kept telling us, “Slow down!” “Trusting yourself!” “Write carefully!”. To be honest, I never thoug ht much of writing until today, when my heart touched. At the end of the lecture, all the people present break into cheers. The lecture was so interesting that I benefited a lot from them.29.Dear Mr. Zhang,Known that our school is going to set up elective （选修的）English courses, I'd like to give some advices. English Visual-Audio-Oral Course is a good choice. Most of us are interested at English videos and songs, that provide us with great images and beautiful music to listen to. As result, we can enjoy some local customs and singing English songs with joy. In addition, we need to improve our oral English. When we are always learning English, we may not be able to make a fluent speech. We can't easy communicate with others like native speakers. That is why I suggested taking a Speech Course. I'll be glad that if you can consider my suggestions.YoursLi Hua 30.Last Friday, we went to Beijing Survival Island to go on an outing, that left us with a deep impression.Early in the morning, we gathered the school gate and the school bus takes us there. In the way, we talked and laughed, full of excitement. Upon arrive, we were attracted by various activities and got involved immediate. The monkeybars were really challenging. One of the boys managed to make it with the encouragement of her classmates. I was interested in making cakes. I was being taught to make my first cake on my own! At lunchtime, we sat around, enjoying the delicious food. Everyone had the good time.We really enjoyed our stay there. Before we left, we had a photo taken to record the unforgettable days.参考答案withM L Smith：our Englisii tea?her n works hard. 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高一英语必修二短文改错练习一Today I visited the Smiths--my first time visit to a American family. They live in a small town. It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. They offered me coffee and another drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.一1.去掉time2. a --- an3. for -- of 4 drove ----drive 5. his -- their 6. other 7. have -- had 8. eager前加were 9. question -- questions 10. in 去掉二The snake is a very surprised animal. It sleeps with its eyes open. It feel with its tongue. The snake can move very quick. A snake exuviates(蜕皮)many times each year. It slides(滑动)out its old skin as if it were a worn coat. Here is the more surprising thing of all. A snake swallows(吞)things all at one piece. It can swallow anim als big than itself. Small snakes can swallow birds’ eggs without breaking it. Snakes eat mouse. They can be a big help around farm. Farmers like the kinds of snakes that eat mice.二1. surprised ---- surprising2. feel – feels3. quick --- quickly4. its 前加of5. more –most6. at---in7. big - bigger8. it- them9. mouse –mice 10.farm – farms三Good evening! Today I brought together music from different part of the world. The records I have chosen for you are from classical Western music, Negro music or Indian music. I think you will like them. But at this time we shall first study language of music. We shall try to find out how music says that people feel. You will hear afamous Beethoven’s piano piece and some song sung by some black Americans. Itwill natural if you like one better than the other. I shall try to explain why they are all good music. And I hope you will enjoy it.三brought --- bring 2. part ---parts 3. or – and 4. at 去掉5. study 后加the 6. that --- what 7. song—songs 8. will 后加be 9. other –-- others 10. it –- them四Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much money and her parents were not rich, but she had an uncle who had been luck enough to collect great wealth. He always gave her valuable Christmas and birthday present .When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary want to buy him something real special , but because he was so rich, she did not know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her town and explained that what her problem was to one of the helpfulsh op assistant. Finally she asked, “What do you have for someone has already got everything he wants or needs?” The girl sighed deep and answered, “Envy(忌妒), only envy.”四1. an – a2. luck – lucky3. present –presents4. want – wanted5. real – really6. how – what7. 去掉that8. assistant – assistants9. has 前加who 10. deep--deeply五When I talked to Frank, and I found that from childhood, he have developed the habit of carrying a little book into his pocket. He used to read whenever he was not doing something else. He found a book is especially useful during the periods of waiting: waiting meals, buses, doctors, haircuts, telephone calls and for something to happening. That was why he found fifteen minutes a day in reading. That was how he read his twenty books a year－one thousand book in a life time!五1. and 去掉 2 have – had 3. into – in 4. something – anything 5. is – was 6. meals 前加for 7. happening – happen 8. why – how 9 in-for 10. book –books六Now I have taken over ten years at school. As a child, I regarded the school a beautiful garden. I went to school happily and excited with a small bag. Time flew fast. Now I’m studying at a senior middle school. Every day morning, on my way to school, the rising sun greets me with a smile. At class I enjoy putting my heart into listeningto the teachers. In evening, I do exercises, like a farmer working hardly, expecting a good harvest. During breaks between class, I often go out for rest. How happy the life is！I’m sure I will never forget the wonderful t ime at school.六1.taken - spent2. a 前加as3. excited – excitedly4. flew – flies5. day 去掉6. At – In7. In the evening8. hardly – hard9. class – classes 10. for 后加a七Radio and television are much useful in the world. They may be seen nowhere. Thousands and thousands people watch TV. Perhaps even more people listen to radio. Television, of course, is more useful than radio. On TV we can see that is happening around us. But, radio has not disappeared. It is still with us. It can be done very small. It is easy to take. You can put one in your pocket and listen to it in the bus or in your bike when you go to work. And radio is much more cheaper than television.七1. much – very2.nowhere-everywhere3. people 前加of4. to 后加the5. that – what6. but – however7. done – made8. one – it9. in – on 10. more 去掉八That Saturday when I entered in an underpass, I heard a beautiful sound. It makes me very happy. It was darkness there so I could not see where the sound came from. I walked towards the corner. An old man was sitting there, wearing shabby cloth. He was playing erhu. Oh, “It is a beggar. ” I thought. At this moment a man came by, and dropped one yuan in the beggar box. The old man stopped to saying, “Thank you.” He then groped (暗中摸)on the ground. While he found the box, he picked up the money, felt it and smiled. What beautiful the music was ! It was played by a blind man.八1. in 去掉2. makes – made3. darkness – dark4. the – a5. cloth--clothes6. this – that7. beggar –beggar’s 8. sayi ng – say 9. While – When 10. What – How九九1. listening 后加to2. the 去掉3.through – around\over4. in – up5. that 后加are\that6. another – other7. listen- listening8. with--by9. well – better 10. programme- programmes十The best jobs used to be offered for men. Even when woman did the same work, they were often paid fewer than men. Women wanted to have that change . The women’s liberation movement was started by women didn’t want to stand behind men but want to stand beside men. The movement was quite new, and many American women didn’t agree with its purpose. But it has already been caused changes in women’s life and in men’s life, either. Today, women are equal to the men in many ways.十1. for – to2. woman – women3. fewer – less4. change – changed5. women 后加who6.want –wanted7. doesn’t --didn’t8. been去掉9. either – too 10. the 去掉十一I went to England for a trip. I arrived London on the 9th , December. But I didn’t know a way to my hotel. So I asked for a man. I talked in English very carefully and clearly. But the man couldn’t understand. I repeated my question several time and at last he understood. He answered me but he spoke either slowly nor clearly. I could not understand her words. My teacher never spoke English like it. The man and I looked at each other and smiled. Then he said anything. I understood by the end. How happy I was!十一1. arrived 后加in2. a – the3. for 去掉4. understand 后加me5. time –times6. either – neither7.her--his8. it – that9. anything – something 10. by – in十二Most children don’t get fat easily though they eat a lot, because they play alot---- they sing, dance and running around all day. They don’t have a moment of rest until they go to asleep. In this way the body will burn up as many energy as possible. But to those boys and girls who takes in much fat and sugar with the form of cakes, potato chips and so on but don’t take enough exercise, things are differently. They meet with serious weight problems. Some are too fat not to feel happy. Many have bad teeth. We can sometime see them on TV—who may gather together to discuss with others the question how to lose weight. The answer that they need a diet of healthy food which should be rich in fiber and low in sugar and fat.十二1. running–run2. asleep–sleep3. many–much4. take-takes5. with--in6. differently – different7. not 去掉8. sometime – sometimes9. how 前加of / about 10. that 前加is三、Would you like to spending your holidays traveling by balloon? The first balloon trip took place in France in 1783. It was lasted for only 8 minutes. About a year late, an American and a Frenchman decided to cross the English Channel by a balloon. High over the Channel, they discovered a hole on the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The gas keeping the balloon up was escaped. The men threw all their belongings into the water make the balloon lighter. It started to rise higher again, but it was still too close to water. Finally the men threw away most of their clothing to save themselves. The people waiting for them in England were surprising to see this.十三1. spending- spend2. was 去掉te – later4. by – in 或a 去掉5. on – in6. was 去掉7. water 后加to8. to 后加the9. clothing – clothes 10. surprising –surprised十四That evening I was doing my lesson. It was about nine o’clock. I heard a strange noise which sounded as the flowing of water. Suddenly I find the walls shaking as if someone was pushing it. Thinking perhaps I was such tired, I stood up and was going to bed. Just then I heard someone shouted “Earthquake!” The word put fear into everyone heart. I rushed out the house as quickly as possible. The whole street was already full with people. I felt everything was trembling. The earthquake was lasted a few seconds. Then everything was quiet again.十四1. lesson – lessons2. as – like3. find – found4. it – them5. such – too (改so不对)6.shouted – shout7.everyone--everyone’s8. the 前加of9. with – of 或full – filled 10. was十五Dear Li Ming,Yours, Liu Dong十五1. have 去掉 2 works – work 3. learn – learning4. because – that 5. interesting – interest 6. and – but 7. will 后加be 8. Beside – Besides9. and 去掉10. there 前加where十六十六1. a 去掉2. made 后加to3. tell – tells4. And – But5. found – find6. one 后加that7. certain – certainly8. whether – if9. gentle – gentler 10. will-won’t十七十七1. expected – expecting2. to 去掉3. usually – usual4. are 后加the5. But –So6. lesson – lessons7. nearly- near8. say 后加how9. spend – spending 10. at前加else十八十八connect—connected 2. what—that/which或去掉what 3. some – any 4. 第二个have – has 5. 去掉the 6. city – cities 7. sent 后加to 8. 第二个and – or 9. was – is 10. we – they十九I went shopping with my wife. We have a lot of things to buy them. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in front of the shop. An hour late, we came back the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked policeman for help. He was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. “How are you doing with my car?” We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.十九have – had 2. them 去掉 3. late – later 4. to the car 5. asked 后加a 6. minute – minutes 7. How – What 8. surprising – surprised 9. what 后加do 10. speak – say二十二十1. quickly – quick2. see 后加as3. is – are4. an 去掉5. that – which6. read--reading7. on 去掉8. or – and9. making – made 10. day – days。

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Having drank too much, Alfred was driving along the country road at top speed while his car ran into an old man who was walking across the road. After looking around and thinking there was not a single person see the accident, he drives off without taking the old man to the hospital. The old man was frightening but kept the car number on his mind. About one month late, they went to court. Alfred’s lawyer said:” Alfred is experienced driver of more than 20 years.” “ If experience can prove that, here, you se e, the old man had walked safe for over 60 years,” the old man’s lawyer replied.【解析】文章讲述Alfred撞了一个老人，驾车逃逸，在法庭上双方展开辩论。

英语短文改错专题综合练习题答案（一）Last summer, I got a young pet dog. I named him with Max after my favorite toy robot. The next day, I called her like this: “Come here, Max!”Then he comes up to me. I told him to get on the bed. Strange, he went to the bathroom. Although it was very hot, I thought that Max wanted to go for swim, so I put him into a pool. To my surprises, he enjoyed himself very much in the water. Now Max has grown more bigger and follow me no matter where I go. He has brought me a lot of happy. 1. 去掉with 2. her改为him 3. comes改为came 4. Strange改为Strangely 5. Although改为Because/As 6. swim前加a 7. surprises改为surprise 8. more改为much或去掉more 9. follow改为follows 10. happy改为happiness（二）I was walking along the street when the stranger stopped me and asked me the way to a newer restaurant. I started to tell him how to get here. As soon as I finish, the stranger thanked me and started off. However, to his surprise, he went to the wrong direction. So I stopped him at once and told him that he was wrong. Unexpectedly, he was smiled and told me that he didn’t really want ask the way. Instead he was just trying to find out that people knew where the new restaurant was, for he was the new owner of the restaurants. 1. the改为a 2. newer改为new 3. here改为there 4. finish改为finished 5. his改为my 6. in the wrong direction 7. 去掉smiled前面was 8. want to ask 9. that改为if/whether 10. restaurants改为restaurant（三）Dear Yang Hui, I heard you’ll have a two-weeks summer holiday and have decided to visit as much new places as possible. I don’t think it’s a good idea. My friend Li Hua goes to Europe last July. He visited four countries, and stayed for only three days in each of the country. He was always in hurry. Li Hua was neither on a train or a bus almost every day. When he returned back from Europe, he was very tiring. So I suggest that he travel to one country and visit only one city. Choose a city on the coast, or you’ll be able to have a good rest at the seaside. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Feng 1. weeks改为week 2. much改为many 3. goes改为went 4. country改为countries 5. in a hurry 6. neither改为either 7. 去掉back 8. tiring改为tired 9. you travel 10. or改为and（四）Dear Sir, Last night I get caught in the heavy rain on the way home. As the result, I got a bad cold with a headache. I felt very tiring. My mother took me see the doctor. After the examination, the doctor told me to taking it easy. He said it was nothing seriously. He also told me to have a good rest for a couple of day, take the medicine on time and drink more water. But I have to ask you for a three-day leave. After I recover, I will try to make it up for the missing lessons. If there are anything I do not understand, could I turn to you for help Yours, Mike 1. get改为got 2. As a result 3. tiring改为tired 4. to see 5. to take 6. seriously改为serious 7. day 改为days 8. But改为So 9. 去掉it 10. is anything （五）Dear friends, It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we had been members for a short period of times, but we have made great progress. That was because we are all very active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachershere work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to saying that all of us have greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to seeing all of you again in near future! Yours sincerely, Susan Miller 1. real改为really 2. weekends 3. have been 4. 去掉but 5. That is 6. but also 7. his改为their 8. interested改为interesting 9. to say 10. in the near future（六）Dear Mary, I am a Senior Three student. I’m going to take part in this summer’s college entrance examination. In preparation for it, I am studying real hard. As a result, I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally. Therefore, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. I know they have great expectations for me, but I feel the pressure is too heavy for me not to deal with. I attempted to communicating with them, but failed. Now I quite upset about it. How can my parents understand us I really don’t know how to do. could you please give me some advices Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Tom 1. really 2. exhausted 3. Therefore改为However 4. on me 5. 去掉not 6. communicate 7. I后面加am 8. understand me 9. what to do 10. advice（七）Tom had a interesting dream last night. In the dream he took part in a race. At first, he could not run very fast and fell behind. So he didn’t lose heart and keep run ning. All the students on the playground began to cheer him on, “Come on! Come on!” He was so great encouraged that he ran faster and fast till he caught up with all the other runners. Finally, he got the finishing line first and won the race. Many of his classmate gathered around and congratulated him to his success. They even threw her up into the air …Just at that time he woke up and found himself was still in bed!1. a改为an2. So改为But3. kept running4. great改为greatly5. faster and faster6. got to7. classmates8. to改为on9. her改为him 10. 去掉was （八）Several days ago, I went to have dinner with my father. We came to the restaurant and order two bowls of noodles. We waited and watched the people around us all served their meals, though they came late than us. We were very puzzled and a little bit angrily. Finally, my father asked for the waitress passing by our table. “I know you’re all busy,” she said calmly, “so you won’t mind that we send out for a pizza, will you” Say nothing, the waitress smi led and went away. Our meals were in front of us five minute later. 1. a restaurant 2. order改为ordered 3. were all served 4. later than 5. angry 6. asked for中去掉for 7. she改为he said calmly 8. that改为if 9. Saying 10. minutes（九）One quiet weekend some men broke into a shop next a bank. Then they made the hole in the wall and got into the bank. One of their friends were watching the bank from a flat on the another side of the road. He had the duty of tell the men inside if there was any dangerous. The men talked to each other by the radio, but someone else hearing their conversation. The police were told, and they couldn’t find the right bank. Finally the robbers run away with a lot of money. 1. next to 2. 第一个the改为a 3. was watching 4. another改为other 5. of telling 6. danger或any改为anything 7. by radio 8. heard 9. and改为but 10. ran away （十）I have a little brother who is 11 years old since this year. We get on well with each other and have had a good times together. Several days ago, I bought a book tohim. The book is written by a person which has won the Nobel Prize and it aim to help children learn about the unknown world. Before I buy the book, I had read it. I felt that it is a good book for him, because he is interesting in new things and has so much questions. I hope that through reading book, my brother can learn more about the world and knowing how to become a good person. 1. 去掉since 2. times改为time 3. for him 4. which改为who/that 5. aim改为aims 6. buy改为bought 7. interested 8. much改many 9. book前加the 10. knowing改know（十一）Dear Editor, I was a senior high school student in a key school of Banding city. I’m fond of play basketball. It is known for us that the college entrance examination is approaching and we should get good prepared for it. Thus I have no choice but play basketball just on holidays. However, I really hope to do it every day, and my parent insist that I give it up. They think learning is their first task and I should throw the whole of myself into study. How do you think of it Could you give me some suggestion on how to deal with the problem I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 1. was改为am 2. of playing 3. known to us 4. good改为well 5. but to play 6. and改为but 7. my parents 8. my first 9. How改为What 10. suggestions（十二）One Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from the “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for it fly back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we get along good with it. 1. was改为were 2. catch改为caught 3. picked it up 4. home前to 去掉 5. but改为and 6. birds改为bird 7. to fly 8. delighted 9. him改为them 10. good改为well。

高一英语短文改错（一）Dear Elli,I’m a senior student. I like make friends with people but I do my best to get on well everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she disliked me and that he didn’t want to be my friend any more. Now she has started to make fun of me because of I’m fat. I’m kind to her, but why can’t she be friend of mine? Other problem is about my weight. Should I do less exercise or use pills? And do you know any other way? Please give me some advices. Yours,Mary（二）Dear Sir,I am now a college student at Peking University. I’m quite interested in the position offering by your website for part-time English reporters. I think I’m fit the job.As a student, I’ve read a lot and have many knowledge in different field. I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I’m easily to get along with and I enjoy working together with another. Above all, I once work as a reporter for my college bro adcast station. So I’m sure I can do the job well if I willget the chance work for a website. I’m looking forward to your reply.（三）Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no play make Jack a dull boy? What this means is that if you study all the times you will become a boring person. You must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do not have to compete your classmates. No one can be happier in studying seven day and seven nights a week.（四）Dear Tracy，Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.He is very strict with me and often punishes me about leaving things lying around in the house while he did this all time. I think he fails to set an example me to follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t bear what he does. I have been tried many times to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me.（五）Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted to see the report about an important football match the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless he saw the sea. He got on at the next station, and had to wait a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”, he shouted.（六）When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened in the world on the internet. In past, people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend.（七）In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. When the lift got to the four floor, itstopped and a middle-aged man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the woman’s handbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker at once and they both followed thief to a restaurant nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all about the case and the thief has finally caught.（八）One day last week I went a walk in the country. In the morning the weather was well and the sun was shining; the sky was blue and there were no could. Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds were covered the sun and then it started to rain. There were no houses in sight, but I got very wet. After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus which took me home. But when I arrived I has shivering and I knew I had caught a bad cold. I must have taken my coat. I had nothing to do but to stay at home and wait for a doctor.（九）I visited my aunt in the countryside near the city in last week. I was surprised to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for example. We supply precious trees and flowers to the stores in the city and have over ten workers working for themselves. Their family’s income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Nor only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can alsoafford a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.（十）Thank you for your e-mail ! You asked me about my friends and how we like to do . Well , I guess I do what most people to do . I like reading books, watching films and listen to music . My favorite sport is volley-ball. Most of my friend play volleyball together with me . My best friend is two years elder than me .She goes to a different school , but we always get together after school to talk and have funs . We sometimes do homework together .What about yourself ? Tell me something about yourself , your friends and what you like to do . I had also like to know something about China . We have read China in school and I am very interesting in learning more about it . Please e-mail me soon ! Lisa（十一）Here is a photo which I’ve kept for many years. Look, the child in it is me . Do you think it that I was very lovely? Yes .You see , I was making face . There was a hat on my head while there were no shoes on my foot .I asked my mother how old I was them . Mother said that I was three years old in that time . Can you see the house all making of wood ? The house which was new then , but it is very old now . I was born in this oldhouse and lived here for eighteen years . I like living here , because there were many friendly neighbors we get along very good with each other , but it’s a great pity that We will move away soon . To tell a truth , I really can’t bear to part from them .（十二）Good morning, everyone. Yesterday I received a letter from a elderly gentleman. He told me the other day he saw that some student in our school uniform crowded onto a bus without waiting their turns. On the bus they refuse to offer their seats for old people. What was worse, they even said dirty words to each other. I am very much sorry for this. Today’s youth are tomorrow’s old peop le. Respect the old and caring for the young is a fine tradition of our Chinese. Every one of us have the responsibility to keep it up. I hope that you can learn something this incident and you will have good manners whether you are inside or outside the school. Thank you.（十三）Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke up. So he decided to make better car himself, but in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, a car maker, was very interesting in Royce’s car, and soon Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down once. After the drive,it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car back into perfect condition.This is not surprising that the Silver Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”.（十四）How much times do you spend with your parents? When did you last tell them what is on your mind? You parents are your dearest people in the world when you are young. And they always care of you deep. But even though many children still love their mum and dad, families may become more close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to get together. Have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love them? Find chance and do something for them or to have a sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents will be very happy.十五）“Practice makes perfect”was an old saying . It tells us that it does not any matter if we are slow at doing something . As long as we keep on trying and practice , we’ll do a good job in the end . The saying is especial useful in English study .Since a student is poor at speaking, he should grasp every chance to open mouth and speak English . His oral English may be excellent one day due to his hard works . Not only is the saying useful in English study , it is also helpful in our day life . To an extent , it is no short cut in doing everything since key to successlies in“Practice makes perfect”.（十六）At a Friday night, a poor young artist stood at the gate of the subway station and played his violin with large piece of paper on the ground．Before long , he was surrounding with people, who were all attracted by the word on that pap er. It said,“ last night, a gentleman put an important thing into my hat by mistaken. Please come to claim it soon.” Seeing this, people wondered why it could be. After about half an hour, a man came and brought back his lottery which won a prize of ＄500,000. Late someone asked the violinist: “ Why don’t you take the lottery ticket for yourself? ”He said,“While I don’t have much money, I live happily. However , I lose honesty, I won’t be happy forever.”(十七)A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. "I find it great funs. It's the first time I've heard an American speak French with a German accent." he explained it.(十八)One day I happen to find a chatting room on my QQ, there people were chatting in English . I tried to chat with some of them . To my surprised .I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me . I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions . With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely .（十九）While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me great. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office. and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actual language at all.（二十）The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the net, we can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as well．We can also make phone calls, send messages by e-mail，go tonet schools，learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，make a chat with others and make friends with them. In word，the Internet has made our life more easier．（二十一）During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon high up in the sky among the cloud. The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoyed my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience have shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys.（二十二）I went to see the film after supper. On my way to the cinema. I met an English woman, whom had lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place here in the past few years and she had told me something about her country. Although I missed the film, but I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practiced my speaking English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would not have been able to help him.(二十三)One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was badly burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I am rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.(二十四)I received your letter was dated April l6 the day before yesterday. All of our family greatly delighted to learn how you are getting along very well with your lessons. Time passes quickly. After dozens of days, you’ll finish the middle school. What pleases us most is that you do very good to make up your mind to enter for the college entrance examination this summer. What wonderful it is ! Dad, as well as Mom and I, is with you. We wished you to make better use of your time. The full preparations you make, the surer of success you’ll certain be.(二十五)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.6, which was a fine day. There was over 1,000 studentsand teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping(二十六)A group of scientists were planning to go to countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had polluted．On arrival，they started to check the air and water．To our surprise，they found how terribly the situation was．They could see the serious pollution．Look into the cause，they persuade the government to pass the law to protect environment and kept the balance of nature．Now everything has changed．Birds are singing while tree and grass waving．。