顾家北雅思写作范文3

0210第3次课ABC

Some people believe that public health should be improved by increasing the number of sports

facilities, while others believe that it has little effects other measures should be taken to solve

this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府&行为

A提供体育设施 B方便大家参加体育活动 （take part in sport），鼓励一种健康

的生活方式 （encourage a healthy/active lifestyle） C提高人们的健康 （create

health benefits）

A 政府可以加大宣传（launch awareness campaigns）B 说一下不运动(an inactive

lifestyle/inactivity)的坏处（health problems/adverse health consequences）C 鼓励人

们去运动

A 政府可以制定法律（enforce laws） B 强迫人们改变生活方式（adopt a healthy

lifestyle），改变一些破坏健康的行为（health-damaging habits）C 提高健康

People tend to lay emphasis on their fitness today, and I agree that the number of sports facilities should be increased to satisfy their needs. Apart from this, some other approaches should also

be taken. It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport

and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the

most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health benefits. These facilities are particularly important for those city dwellers who find it difficult to

maintain physical activity due to the lack of sports equipment.

It is argued that the access to facilities can provide people with opportunities to take part in sport

and improve health effectively. They are likely to exercise regularly in the gym and to make the

most of playgrounds and public parks for physical activity. This active lifestyle can create health

benefits. It is also worth mentioning that these facilities are available free of charge, so more people will play sport.

On the other hand, alternative approaches are proposed and governments can launch awareness

campaigns to promote a healthy lifestyle. People will realise that living an inactive lifestyle may

cause many health problems, such as obesity and heart disease. They will be encouraged to

exercise more frequently, instead of spending many hours in front of the screen every day.

In my opinion, enforcing laws to curb some unhealthy habits can also have a positive impact on

citizens’ health. Tough punishment can prompt them to adopt a healthy lifestyle and break

health-damaging habits. For example, governments can impose a heavy tax on tobacco and

alcohol, thereby discouraging smoking and drinking. It is therefore easier to help people maintain

health, especially for those who fail to discipline themselves.

To summarize, public health can be improved by increasing more sports equipment, but other

methods, such as launching awareness campaigns and enforcing laws, can also have a positive

impact on people’s well-being.

133whatever~0301(495254665) 19:15:08

A 增加运动设施 B 并非所有人适用或被错误适用 C 导致意外的发生

090太阳醒了0301(379021702) 19:16:12

A 人们惰性 没有鼓励机制 B 即使有器材也不去运动 C 运动少 身体素质差 增加器材是

白花钱

057rox0426(279708253) 19:16:19

A.体育馆或者小区的设施多了 B.设施的数量不够 C. 许多人不愿意去了

070hailey0315(843471380) 19:18:43

A公众健康是个人行为；B.教育，提高个人健康；C.拉动全体人公众健康

207小跳蛙0308(75737587) 19:23:00

A人们生存压力大,工作忙 B很少有时间专门锻炼 C可采取其他方式运动如走路上班

176項項0315(309333709) 19:25:04

A 鼓励体育锻炼 B 加强身体素质，提升自身的抵抗力 C 减少生病的可能，减轻医疗部门

的压力

Some people tend to take temporary jobs （working for a few months），for they have the time

to do other things they are interested in. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A做临时工作（move around a lot/switch jobs）B 在自己的专业（areas of

specialization）很难提高专业技能（professional skills） C不利职业生涯发展（career

progression）

A. 做临时工B.收入不固定 C.影响生活水平

Steady income, Reduce quality of life, feel economic pressures

A：人们倾向于做临时性工作B：自由支配工作C：生活更加自由、随意

Manage time freely, lead a relaxed life, cope with stress, maintain a boundary between

work and personal life

A growing number of people choose to work temporarily in order to enjoy their personal lives

better. In my opinion, this can bring about some problems.

If people choose to move around a lot, it may have an adverse impact on their career progression.

Temporary jobs are normally low-paid and do not require workers to show a variety of skills and Comment [Winnie1]: B、C跑题，是问提升公

共健康的方法，而不是增加运动设施的利弊

Comment [Winnie2]: A错，且B、C跑题，不

是讨论增加运动设施的利弊

Comment [Winnie3]: A、B什么意思？

Comment [Winnie4]: A、B、C之间没有逻辑

Comment [Winnie5]: A、B为并列关系，都是

讲背景，且题目问政府行为，而不是像C这

种个人解决方法

Comment [Winnie6]: 完全跑题，不是问体育

锻炼的好处