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高考英语读后续写－无灵主语有灵动公开课示范课优质课教案（精品、好用）一、教学目标1. 让学生掌握无灵主语的定义和用法。
2. 培养学生运用无灵主语进行读后续写的能力。
3. 提高学生对英语文章整体结构的把握能力。
二、教学内容1. 无灵主语的概念及例子。
2. 无灵主语在句子中的功能和作用。
3. 如何运用无灵主语进行读后续写。
4. 读后续写的基本步骤和技巧。
三、教学过程1. 引入：通过一个简单的句子让学生感受无灵主语的存在，激发学生的兴趣。
2. 讲解：详细讲解无灵主语的定义、功能和作用，并通过例子进行说明。
3. 练习：让学生进行无灵主语的句子仿写，巩固所学知识。
4. 应用：引导学生运用无灵主语进行读后续写，培养学生实际运用能力。
四、教学评价1. 课堂参与度：观察学生在课堂上的积极参与情况和提问回答。
2. 练习完成情况：检查学生无灵主语句子的仿写和读后续写作品的质量。
3. 学生反馈：收集学生对课堂内容的反馈意见，以便进行教学调整。
五、教学资源1. PPT课件：展示无灵主语的定义、功能和作用，以及读后续写的步骤和技巧。
2. 练习素材：提供一些无灵主语的句子和段落，供学生仿写和读后续写。
3. 参考资料：为学生提供一些关于无灵主语和读后续写的参考资料，以便课后自主学习。
六、教学步骤1. 引入：通过一个简单的句子让学生感受无灵主语的存在，激发学生的兴趣。
2. 讲解：详细讲解无灵主语的定义、功能和作用，并通过例子进行说明。
3. 练习：让学生进行无灵主语的句子仿写，巩固所学知识。
4. 应用：引导学生运用无灵主语进行读后续写，培养学生实际运用能力。
七、教学方法1. 讲授法：讲解无灵主语的定义、功能和作用。
2. 示范法：通过例子演示如何运用无灵主语进行读后续写。
3. 练习法：让学生进行无灵主语的句子仿写和读后续写。
4. 互动法：引导学生相互交流、讨论，提高课堂参与度。
八、教学注意事项1. 针对不同学生的英语水平，适当调整教学内容和难度。
高一英语读后续写微技能公开课说课稿To Show, Not to Tell读后续写(continuation writing)是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，是模仿与创造、学习与运用相结合的写作活动。
读后续写不仅要求学生能读懂故事情节发展，更要求学生能够在理解基础上拓展内容和展开细节描写。
在实际的写作训练中, 大部分学生往往只关注情节, 不知如何拓展内容和展开细节描写，从而导致续写部分词数不足，内容单调、空洞，没有真情实感或者没有个性特征。
基于以上存在的现状，在高一英语备课组的指导下，我设计了这堂主题为“To show, not to tell”的读后续写细节微技能指导的公开课。
本节课的取材较为广泛，有人教版和外研版教材中的部分叙事性文本，有所教班级正在进行的整本书阅读书目Charlotte’ Web 以及本学期两次考试读后续写题目。
引导学生关注文本中的细节描写，使用To show, not to tell的写作微技能，基于英语学习活动观设计了不同层次的活动任务，指向学生的深度学习和核心素养。
（一）教学设计基于学生已经接触过读后续写的实际，本课创造性地使用了各种素材，在梳理文本的基础上，引导学生关注细节描写，赏析To show和To tell两种方式呈现出来的不同效果，并进一步思考哪一种方式会创造出更生动、更引人入胜的故事情境，培养学生描述与阐释、分析与判断的应用实践能力，并形成To show, not to tell的写作概念。
在对具体的三个To show 的技巧学习部分，本节课设计了三个循环: 赏析-总结-应用，从而帮助学生迅速将所学技能落实。
最后通过一个语段的改写进行知识的迁移创新。
综上，本课的设计思路是:1）What is to show? What is to tell?2）Why do we have to show, not to tell?3) How to show?4) Show it!（二）存在问题及改进措施在实际的教学过程中，由于课堂容量大，时间意识有待加强。
Extended Writing——Reading for WritingⅠ Teaching aims:1)To cultivate students to have a clear map of the structures and obtain a good understanding of the whole text.2)To lead students to analyze the plot of the story and the changing emotions of Jenny.3)To teach students how to assess a passage in terms of specific criteria including coherence, transition, content, language, etc.Ⅰ Teaching important points:Grasp the plot development and the emotional line of the text as a whole.Ⅰ Teaching difficult points:The completeness of the continuation and the harmony with the context of the original text.Ⅰ Teaching methods:student-oriented learning; cooperative learning; practiceⅠ Teaching procedures:Presentation materials：阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写的字数应在150左右。
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn't help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, She sighed and had to leave.The seller behind the stand, noticed the young girl and asked, “ Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”“oh yes... but I don't have money on me” she replied.“That's nothing. I'll treat you today,” said the man.“Come in”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is it?” asked the man kindly.“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny. “Ev en a stranger on the street will give me a bowl noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thank me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were baby. Can you remember the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”Jenny sat there speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother's familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”On the way home Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1 Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. ________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. _______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________Step 1 Warming-up: (5mins)1)Ask the students two questions：Did you ever have a quarrel with your parent?Do you know how to fix a broken relationship after a quarrel?2)Then ask the students to watch a video telling mother love.Step 2 While reading (15mins)1)Ask the students to find the six elements in the story.2)Ask the students to read the text again and draw a plot line and anemotional line.3)After drawing the plot line and emotional line, get the students to think:What questions will come into your mind seeing the given sentences?4)Ask the students to draw a mind map to make predictions about what to write in Para1. andPara 2. by using some adjectives and phrasal verbs (动词短语).Step 3 Presentation (20mins)Ask the students to show their writings in front of the whole class.Step4 Summary Summarize the steps to continue a story.Step5 Assignment Complete your writing according to the Assessment Criteria for Writing, and then share your writing with your classmates.。
