英国商学院PS写作全解析 附2015华威拒信分析

英国大学经济与金融专业申请文书范文展示：PS篇Personal Statement xxx My aspiration for finance can be traced back to my teenage years, when my father was fascinated with stock market and I bought stocks together with him for fun. When he purchased a new one, I would ask him the bid price and expected ask price, and then brainstormed how much we may possibly get. Earning money by investment after ups and downs was a fantastic experience for me, and I came to realize that there exist rules and principles deeply rooted in finance theories and statistics, which drove me to further explore the field. Now, through three-year systematic studies in economics and finance, my interest and passion have been fully exploited and I made up my mind to pursue a career in the field of finance. The more I know, the more I want to know. In order to do further study and build a successful future career, I plan to go for advanced study in the United Kingdom, where the most cutting-edged researches and practices of financial analysis are being carried out. Luckily, I believe that I am in possession of essential qualities for undertaking both advanced training and career development in finance and economics, such as the good control of English and an always-stay-discrete attitude. I believewith those characteristics, I will surely survive through twists and turns in the world of finance. My undergraduate studies in economics have provided me with good academic foundations. Through studying fundamental theories in economics including Advanced Mathematics 95, Intermediate Microeconomics 87, Macroeconomics 80, Monetary Banking 83, Development Economics 89 and Econometrics 87 with the using of Eviews software, which enables me to establish basic mathematical models to solve problems, I have mastered a basic understanding and a clear picture of Western Economics, Risk Management Insurance, Finance, Financial Engineering, etc. Benefiting from my strength in mathematics and effective learning, I enjoyed an upward trend in the academic performance, preparing myself to be a capable student with diligent studying style. Since junior year, I began to focus on securities and futures. Supervised by my financial professor named Qingyuan Zhang who taught me Monetary Banking, I researched the stock index futures in western financial markets and its performance. Based on the research, I completed an essay to be published in National Financial Journal in Nov. 2012 where I listed the operations of stock index futures investment in western capital markets and put forward my ideas about stockindex futures investment in Chinese mainland markets. Thanks to the research, I have mastered the methodology on how to approach a problem in a logical and analytical manner. In January 2013, I have participated in Hongkong Management Trainee Plan. I had been engaged in communication and arrangement works with Harry Ho-Director of Aviva and Andy Mak-Chief Investment Strategist of Aviva, analyzing the result of GSEC Marketing Competition Simulation Contest of each group by using relative software, participating in the discussion on fund mix choice, supervising the implementation of public projects and assisting in auditing the project last-term report and grade. Besides academic excellence, I also tried to enhance my social communicative skills and leadership. For three years, I worked at student union of my university, in charge of organizing various campus activities such as music festival, arts gala, and cultural salon. I nurtured interpersonal communication skills, leading my team to complete the activity-launching tasks within limited time. I believe these skills are necessary for supporting my success in both the academic and social life in a new environment. However, it is far from enough to arrive at my destination-the field of business and management. In order to gain more improvement，I looked for a precious opportunity towork as a Futures Manager Assistant in GF Securities Zhangjiakou Branch of Hebei Province. In this company, I have learnt the relative knowledge on stock markets analysis and futures business, maintaining the existing customers by collecting the feedback from the customers and reflecting to the manager and looking for the new customers by introducing the profit and risk of the futures to the potential customers. To seek for more improvement, I work as a HR Director Assistant in Beijing Branch of Budweiser China Sales Co., LTD. I was then responsible for making the statistics of the employees’attendance rate and drawing the weekly report. New employees’recruitment and training, assisting HR director in arranging the meeting decoration, receiving the customers and helping the HR director coordinate the relations with other departments, are also what my responsibilities lie in. With my ambition grows greater, I found it a mix of challenge and fun to be my own boss. Driven by the common idea, I, together with four partners, create an offline program. I was in charge of the marketing part. My work was talking over the cooperation with catering, entertainment, hotel and training institutions besides Nankai University and Tianjin University. We designed the entity coupon for the stores and gave out them to the college student by taking advantage ofsocieties and student union. The discount activities submitted to the final discussion result with merchants. From the activity, we achieved the situation of “Win-win-win”. On one hand, the merchants could get more customers and popularities through our promotion. On the other hand, the customers got cheaper goods. In addition, our team gained certain monthly commission from the merchants. My interest and abilities indicates that a lifelong career in finance will be very appropriate for me because that is where my potential lies. In order to seek new heights academically, I would like to apply for admission into your prestigious program. I participated in the “Entrepreneurship and Leadership Seminar” held by School of Business, University of Cambridge, and four-week economics courses in Oxford University during 2012 summer vacation. I really enjoyed the open communication with professors and lecturers. With this wonderful journey where I adapted quickly to the English-based academic environment, I feel confident for mastering overseas study. Your university, with its topmost academic atmosphere, attracts me as an ideal place to pursue my master degree. The financial program has a tradition of excellence in research, education and service to the profession, which will help me to understand global capital marketing andfinancial investment internationally. With all the passion and belief to challenge myself, I am sure that I will be the best I can be if I am lucky enough to have the chance to study in your University.。

个人陈述（PS）写作要点第一篇：个人陈述(PS)写作要点英国留学申请之个人陈述写作最全教程一、英国留学个人陈述(PS)的主旨个人陈述PS在英国留学申请中之所以重要是因为很多英国大学无需面试申请人，所以他们唯一认识你的地方就是网上申请表格。

大部分表格涵盖了你的个人信息，包括大学感兴趣的你的学术/语言成绩、推荐信以及PS(留学个人陈述)。

PS(留学个人陈述)是这些材料当中唯一一个由你来控制的，所以这个是你给大学招生办留下一个良好印象的机会，这个印象是用分数无法反映出来的。

尤其是当你申请的学校竞争特别激烈，所有的申请者都有很好的成绩的时候，PS就是唯一一种能凸显你的与众不同的材料，所以同志们，一定要尽可能地把PS做到尽善尽美。

大学招生办和课程老师在看你的PS的时候，他们通常会问以下两个问题：1、我们是否想要这个学生来学习这门课程?2、我们是否想要这个学生来我们的学校学习?这两个问题可以分解为以下几个小问题来解答：1)这个学生是否适合他/她所申请的课程?2)这个学生是否具备他/她所申请的课程需要的素质?3)这个学生是否有足够的毅力、勤奋的品格以及不会轻易辍学?4)这个学生是否会全力以赴地达到这门课程所要求的各项能力?5)这个学生是否能在高压底下工作?6)这个学生是否能很快得调整好自己融入到大学的新环境?7)他们的交际能力如何?8)他们是否热爱这个课程并且做了仔细的研究9)他们对课程是否有真正的兴趣并且渴望去做更深入的学习?这些问题就是需要你在PS当中去表述和解答，只不过你不能只是说YES和NO，你需要有足够的事实依据去证明你的说法，让你的观点言之有物。

不过，招生办的老师们毕竟也是平凡人，他们有可能需要阅读成百上千的PS，所以即便你觉得已经对上述问题回答的很好了你还有可能被不幸地拒绝。

还有其他的一些技巧可以让你的PS脱颖而出给老师们留下深刻印象，但要记住老师们也都因人而异他们对于申请者的期望也都不完全相同，怎么把握当中玄机就看童鞋们自己拿捏了。

英国留学个人陈述PS十大忌讳
在英国留学个人陈述PS的写作过程中，有很多需要做到的细节要点，当然也有很多千万不能提到的忌讳，下面就是就是根据往年申请者的经验总结出来的英国留学个人陈述PS十大忌讳。

和店铺小编一起来看看。

英国留学个人陈述PS十大忌讳：
1、一定不要表现得自命不凡
2、尽量不要以“I”开头展开句子描述
3、尽量不要用无趣的词组和句子做开头和结尾
4、尽量不要引用报纸杂志书籍上的名言警句，感觉像是表示你多么地饱读经书然后故意秀出来一样。

5、一定不要撒谎，要真实诚恳。

6、不要尝试在PS里面故作滑稽开玩笑
7、不要谈与你的申请无关的兴趣爱好
8、不要用生僻词汇
9、不要重复那些在大学申请表格上就有的内容
10、不要提及任何政治立场
英国留学个人陈述PS十大忌讳的目的就是让大家把内容写让英国考生老师看了觉得舒服，不会反感，俗话说的好“一粒老鼠屎坏了一锅粥”，千万不要因为触碰了这些忌讳而让自己英国留学个人陈述PS 失败。

英国留学信常见的典型错误分析英国留学推荐信常见的典型错误分析PS、推荐信在申请留学的过程中至关重要，有时候甚至直接决定了我们能否敲开国外大学的大门。

申请人在准备PS、推荐信的过程中常常会犯一些错误，这里将总结一些比较常见的典型错误，提醒申请人注意。

PS典型错误之一：我们在服务中发现大量申请人在PS中讲故事，最为典型的第一段是：我小时候受了什么启发或者指导，或者来自父亲母亲或者来自老师朋友，于是开始对某某学科感兴趣。

这让我们哭笑不得。

我们在美国所见到的大量PS，不管是美国学生写的还是中国学生为转学写的，95%不超过一页。

美国教授是没有耐心看几十份甚至上百份两页或者三页的故事的，而且一页纸的PS是没地方讲故事的，只能把自己最突出的两点或者三点用数据、事实和细节表达出来。

推荐信典型错误之一：很多人的推荐信都是满满一页纸，更有一些文采飞扬，认为只要多写就能把优点写全的人把推荐信写了两页。

可是，老美的Reference，都是一页，抬头以上部分和署名以下部分已经占到了整个信纸的三分之二，只有剩下的三分之一是文字，三段或者四段而已，短小精悍。

关于写作能力。

我们相信，国内确有极少数高人的写作水平无可挑剔(TWE6.0或者IELTS9.0)，但绝大多数人写出来的东西都有这样那样的错误，比如用词，语法等等，有时甚至是极为严重的错误。

我们认为，单就语言能力谈，如果没有在英语国家刻苦磨练几年语言的经历，很难达到地道流畅地表达思想的写作水平。

当年我们的申请文件，曾经请数位国内英语专业硕士为我们把关，现在看看这些文件，仍有相当多的地方不尽人意，既有词汇使用的错误，也有使用了不少连美国人都认为“之乎者也”的使用频率极低的词，看起来很别扭，甚至发生误解，这就是语言应用能力的差距。

写作典型错误这里举两个单词的例子证明准确用词的重要性。

当时我们在申请时，在PS中将未来的职业目标定位为“行业专家”，当时用的是specialist，几位英语硕士并没有提出异议。

To whom it may concern:Why am I applying for this program?During my study in Accounting and Finance, I’ve became increasingly interested in how a company can be managed and financed properly. The stunning emergence of high profile companies featuring creativity and well-organized structures never fails to attract me. Then I came into realize that I’m feeling especially comfortable about the aspects of strategy and financing in corporate governance. So I’ve decided to take the strategic manager as my destination in career. To fulfil this goal, first I want to gain experiences about the industries and the financial world, and to start off by working in the field of Corporate Finance (Investment Banking/ Management Consulting). However, through my past experiences (3 internships related to corporate finance and participation in CIMA Global Business Challenge) I realized that my knowledge relating to these areas is far away from enough. I also need further years’ of studying and living in the UK to help strengthen my language skills so that I can compete smoothly in a global market. For these reasons, I seek to gain a further academic grounding in Accounting and Finance; further, a m aster’s degree in these areas will grant me a more profound and strengthened academic background than I had before, and will polish up my quantitative skills and ability of turning theory into action.Why am I applying forthe London School of Economics and Political Science?I’ve put my entire focus on LSE and found some factors that push me to apply for a master’s degree from it.1. LSE can give me an access to high-standard education and rigorous academic atmosphere. Its programs will offer me diversified optional courses to choose from. For example, the course “accounting in the global economy” will offer me a point of view about the role of accounting in global financial market, a field in which I want to gain more insights.2. LSE has a world-wide reputation for excellence, and employers value its alumni highly positively. It is one of the G5 institutions and is in the top five social science institutions in the world, according to the QS Global Rankings. Besides, it is located in the heart of London. So it will be more beneficial for me to get in contact with job market and to experience the commercialand cultural surroundings of a world’s leading metropolitan city.3. LSE is made up of a full variety of disciplines around social science; it is attracting think tanks from different areas. LSE will offer me a marvellous chance to hear from well-diversified voices. So I think, through my hard work, the study experience in LSE will allow me to see the business world more comprehensively and grant me strategic agility and great competence in job market.Why you should choose me?My previous performanceI am a primarily numerate reasoner with enhanced verbal ability (In my joint degree of Accounting and Finance in University of Exeter/ Nanjing University of Finance and Economics, I have a mark average of 68.13% (Exeter) and 86.15% (China, GPA: 3.6/5.0)). I’ve chosen to take this program because I want to comprehend the business routines and accounting policies not only in the UK but also in China; therefore, I can take advantages of affluent know-hows and know-whys about the industries in the world’s two leading economies. In 2012, in order to broaden my horizon and to see what Economics is like, I attended the LSE-PKU Summer School in which I studied Global Economy and got a mark of A (70~79%).In 2010, I managed to obtain the “First Prize Scholarship”, which was to honour the student who had scored the best in his or her class, and a Third Prize in the “National English Contest for College Students”, a competition authorized by Chinese Ministry of Education to test students’English ability to the nation’s scale. I also obtained the “Science and Technology Innovation Scholarship”and “Elite Quality Development Scholarship”, which were given to students who had distinguished themselves in university’s society and community life. Besides, I was also selected as “Outstanding University Student”and “Student Cadre”for my outstanding performance during my tenure as the Class Study Secretary.I always pursue the ways by which I can study efficiently and effectively. Although the teaching and evaluation methods of the University of Exeter are hugely different from those of the Nanjing University of Finance and Economics, I still managed to achieve an upper 2:1 degree as a 2nd year student in Exeter last year. Because I’m getting used to study in an English-spoken country and have kept improving my English skills since I came to the University of Exeter (I got anoverall band score of 7.5 with no elements less than 6.5 in my latest IELTS test in 5th of January, 2013), I am expected to get a first honour after my final year’s study.InternshipsI pursued my interest in Corporate Finance with internships from three situations and employers.1. Position: Assistant of Manager of Credit DepartmentDate: 15th July ~ 15th August, 2010Company: Industrial and Commercial Bank of China (ranked as 87th on Fortune Global 500 in 2010)Task: specialising in Financing and Accounting-- c ollecting the companies’ monthly reports, keeping records, and doing ratio calculations and analysis of corporate performance.2. Position: Lobby Assistant ManagerDate: 12th July ~ 30th August, 2011Company: Bank of China (ranked as 132rd on Fortune Global 500 in 2011)Task: specialising in Management and Administration-- maintaining the lobby’s order and giving advice to customers about the financial services we can offer.3. Position: Assistant Accountant in Finance DepartmentDate: 21st August ~ 15th September, 2012Company: China Life Insurance Company Limited (ranked as 129th on Fortune Global 500 in 2012)Task: specialising in Accounting-- bookkeeping, tracing the recordings and type the data into the central database (using SAP).My potential contributions to LSE1. I am primarily a team-worker and am comfortable in motivating others: I jointly founded the Model United Nations society in the Nanjing University of Finance and Economics in 2010, which later on achieved the “University’s Best Society”award in 2011. During my first internship, I worked as an assistant of manager of Credit Department and I had to work with senior colleagues and clients. I found that, in order to show that I was an active but not so aggressive participant, it’s quite important to keep a balance between obeying the rules and being initiative. So I tried to keep an intimate relationship with my superintendent and later, I managed to do so and could give him my opinions and proposals with ease. I am also a moderatelyexpressed extrovert: I joined wind orchestra in high school as the chief oboe player and gave several charity shows with the orchestra in Suzhou, China.2. I can listen to other people in a way that they feel understood, and can accept critical feedback without getting defensive: during my internship as a lobby assistant manager, I was responsible for welcoming and guiding guests, for talking with them about their requests and our services, and for maintaining the lobby’s order. My favourite part was to persuade the clients to use our financial services and I managed to complete the missions allocated to me.3. I can contribute to the class discussion, and provide my fellow classmates with a different perspective of ideas, because I have a bilingual background and abundant Asian Market knowledge. My parents both work for the government, and in the spare time we usually discuss the political and economic issues of China. This tremendously motivated me to get to think about what China was and would be like. Possessing a good presentation skill, I can make myself easily understood. I love to manage things and time properly-- I’m participating in the CIMA Global Business Challenge, for which our team work as management consultants, analyse a business case that simulates the reality, and tackle the problems given.4. I am motivated by helping others-- I joined the Crisis Christmas Volunteering 2012, to help homeless people. This experience really enhanced my development, and I felt extremely good to help the people in need.Studying in LSE is indeed ideal for me and my future. Given the reasons above, I’m here to apply for your master’s degree. I hope that you can offer me a place, and trust that you will see the bigger picture of me.Yours faithfully,Zhiyao, Bian。

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英国留学ps范文英国留学PS范文留学英国一直是许多学子的梦想，而个人陈述（Personal Statement，简称PS）作为留学申请的重要部分，对于申请者来说至关重要。

今天我们就来看一篇优秀的英国留学PS范文，希望能够给正在准备留学申请的同学们一些启发和帮助。

首先，这篇PS范文以自我介绍开篇，作者简要介绍了自己的基本情况，包括姓名、年龄、学历背景等。

接下来，作者着重介绍了自己的学术背景和成就。

他提到自己在学校担任过学生会主席，并且在数学竞赛中取得了优异的成绩。

这些都展现了作者的领导能力和学术能力，为他申请英国名校留学提供了有力的支撑。

其次，作者在PS中提到了自己的个人兴趣爱好和特长。

他表示自己热爱音乐，并且在校期间参加了学校乐队的演出。

此外，他还提到了自己对社会公益事业的关注，并且参与了一些志愿者活动。

这些个人兴趣爱好和社会实践经验，不仅展现了作者的多元化发展，也显示了他的社会责任感和团队合作精神。

最后，作者在PS中表达了自己对留学的期望和目标。

他表示希望能够在英国深造，拓宽自己的学术视野，同时也希望能够结识更多的国际友人，了解不同文化背景下的人们。

此外，他还提到了自己未来的职业规划，希望能够成为一名优秀的数学教师，为社会培养更多的人才。

总的来说，这篇PS范文内容丰富，结构清晰，语言流畅。

作者通过介绍自己的学术背景、个人兴趣爱好和留学目标，展现了自己的优势和特点，同时也表达了自己对留学的热情和期望。

这样的PS范文无疑会给招生官留下深刻的印象，为自己的留学申请增添不少分数。

当然，每个人的情况和背景都不同，PS范文也需要因人而异。

但是，通过阅读优秀的PS范文，我们可以了解到留学申请中需要突出的重点，以及如何用恰当的语言和结构来展现自己的优势。

希望这篇PS范文能够给正在准备留学申请的同学们一些启发和帮助，祝愿大家都能顺利实现自己的留学梦想！。

英国ps范文As an international student applying to study in the UK, writing a compelling personal statement (PS) is a crucial part of the application process. Your PS is an opportunity to showcase your strengths, experiences, and motivations to the admissions committee, and it can greatly influence the outcome of your application. In this sample PS, we will explore the key elements that make a strong PS and provide you with a guide to crafting your own impactful statement.I am passionate about pursuing a degree in Business Management ata prestigious UK university. My interest in this field stems from my early exposure to my family's business, where I witnessed the challenges and rewards of entrepreneurship. This experience ignited my desire to understand the intricacies of business operations and inspired me to pursue a career in business management.During my high school years, I actively participated in various extracurricular activities that honed my leadership and communication skills. As the president of the student council, I organized successful events and initiatives that fostered a sense ofcommunity within the school. These experiences equipped me with the ability to effectively collaborate with diverse groups of people and to lead with empathy and resilience.Furthermore, my academic journey has been marked by a strong dedication to excellence. I consistently achieved top grades in subjects such as Economics, Mathematics, and Business Studies, demonstrating my aptitude for analytical thinking and problem-solving. Additionally, I sought out opportunities to gain practical experience through internships and part-time jobs, where I developed a deep understanding of the real-world application of business concepts.In addition to my academic and extracurricular pursuits, I am committed to making a positive impact in my community. I volunteered at a local charity organization, where I led fundraising campaigns and contributed to the implementation of sustainable development projects. These experiences allowed me to witness the transformative power of effective management and inspired me to pursue a career that creates meaningful change.Moreover, my international background has instilled in me a globalperspective and an appreciation for cultural diversity. Growing up in a multicultural environment has broadened my worldview and equipped me with the skills to thrive in diverse settings. I am eagerto bring this perspective to the classroom and contribute to the rich cultural tapestry of the university community.In conclusion, my passion for business management, combined with my leadership abilities, academic achievements, community engagement, and global outlook, makes me a strong candidate for the Business Management program at your esteemed university. Iam confident that my diverse experiences and unwavering commitment to excellence will enable me to thrive in the dynamic and challenging academic environment of the UK. Thank you for considering my application, and I am eager to contribute to the vibrant academic community at your university.In this sample PS, we have demonstrated the essential componentsof a strong personal statement for a UK university application. By highlighting the applicant's passion, experiences, and skills, the PS effectively communicates the candidate's suitability for the program. We hope that this example serves as a helpful guide for crafting your own compelling personal statement. Good luck with your application!。

商科专业申请ps范文及说明编者按：As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I som... As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).通过一个故事开头，讲述自己为何对business感兴趣。

In addi tion to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili’s restaurants, and India na University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public effectively. Further, as an assistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.讲述自己的相关经历。

PS在英国留学申请中扮演着重要的角色，如何写出与众不同的PS呢?哪些表达是英国留学申请PS中常见到已经被用烂的表达，以下鑫泉留学为您总结英国留学申请PS中的不良表达希望能够对您提供一定的帮助。

英国大学学院招生服务中心(UCAS)负责人表示：学生在个人陈述中所用的“陈词滥调”会损害其未来的职业发展。

Ucas数据显示：“从小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been、、、)是去年申请者最常用的开头。

70万学生中有超过1,779名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)结尾。

我们梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子，各位准备写申请文书的同学可要留心哟!1、“自打记事起，我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have、、、)2、“我申请这个课程是因为……”(I am applying for this course because、、、)3、“我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in、、、)4、“在我一生当中，我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed、、、)5、“回顾我的教育经历，我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences、、、)6、“护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)7、“在学术上，我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been、、、)8、“我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in、、、)9、“我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about、、、)。