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Descriptive EssaysDescriptive writing portrays people, places, things, moments and theories with enough vivid detail to help the reader create a mental picture of what is being written about.Things to Consider as You Write Your Descriptive EssayThink of an instance that you want to describe.Why is this particular instance important?What were you doing?What other things were happening around you? Is there anything specificthat stands out in your mind?Where were objects located in relation to where you were?How did the surroundings remind you of other places you have been?What sights, smells, sounds, and tastes were in the air?Did the sights, smells, sounds, and tastes remind you of anything?What were you feeling at that time?Has there been an instance in which you have felt this way before?What do you want the reader to feel after reading the paper?What types of words and images can convey this feeling?Can you think of another situation that was similar to the one you are writing about? How can it help explain what you are writing about?Is there enough detail in your essayto create a mental image for the reader? Conventions of Descriptive Essays Illustrated by Sample ParagraphsAppealing-to-the-Senses Description: Let the reader see, smell, hear, taste, and feel what you write in your essay.The thick, burnt scent of roasted coffee tickled the tip of my nose just seconds before the old, faithful alarm blared a distorted top-forty throughits tiny top speaker. Wiping away the grit of last night\'s sleep, the starch white sunlight blinded me momentarily as I slung my arm like an elephant trunk along the top of the alarm, searching for the snooze button. While stretching hands and feet to the four posts of my bed, my eyes opened after several watery blinks. I crawled out of the forter, edging awkwardly like a butterfly from a cocoon, swinging my legs over the side of the bed. The dusty pebbles on the chilled, wood floor sent ripples spiraling from my ankles to the nape of my neck when my feet hit the floor. Grabbing the apricot, terri-cloth robe, recently bathed in fabric softener and October wind, I knotted it tightly at my waist like a prestigious coat of armor and headed downstairs to battle the morning.Spatial-Order Description: Show the reader where things are located from your perspective.Billy Ray\'s Pawn Shop and Lawn Mower Repair looked like a burial groundfor country auction rejects. The blazing, red, diesel fuel tanks beamed in front of the station, looking like cheap lipstick against the pallid, wrinkled texture of the parking lot sand. The yard, not much larger than the end zone at General G. Patton High School on the north end of town, was framed with a rusted metallic hedge of lawn mowers, banana seat bicycles, and corroded oil drums. It wasn\'t a calico frame of rusted parts, but rather an orchestra of unwanted machinery that Billy Ray had arranged into sections. The yellow-tanked mowers rested silently at the right of the diesel fuel. Once red, now faded orange, mowers stood at attention to the left. The oil barrels, jaded and pierced with holes, bellared like chimes when the wind was right. The bikes rested sporadically throughout the lot. In the middle of it all was the office, a faded, steel roof supported by cheap two-by-fours and zebra paneling. Billy Ray was at home, usually, five blocks east of town on Kennel Road.2019年08月15日。

descriptive essay特点
嘿，咱来说说 descriptive essay 啊！这玩意儿就像是一幅生动的画，能把你看到的、听到的、感觉到的都给细细描绘出来。

比如说，你看到了一片美丽的花海，那 descriptive essay 就能把那花海的各种颜色、各种姿态，甚至是那花香都给你写得活灵活现，就好像你真的置身其中一样！
它不是干巴巴地陈述事实，而是带着感情的呀！就像你跟朋友兴奋地讲述你遇到的一件超棒的事情，眉飞色舞的，把那种兴奋劲儿都传达出来。

比如你描述一场刺激的比赛，那紧张的气氛、选手们的表情动作，都能让读者感受到你的激动。

再打个比方，它就像一部精彩的电影，有特写镜头，有全景画面。

可以聚焦在一个小细节上，把它刻画得无比细腻，也能把整个大场景都展现得淋漓尽致。

比如描述一个古老的建筑，那墙壁上的斑驳、屋顶的形状，还有周围的环境，都能一一呈现。

写 descriptive essay 就像是在创造一个小世界，你就是这个世界的主宰，你想让读者看到什么、感受到什么，全由你决定！你可以把最细微的感受都写进去，让读者跟着你的笔触去体验。

它可不像那些死板的文章，它充满了趣味和魅力！能让读者读着读着就沉浸其中，忘记了周围的一切。

这就是 descriptive essay 的独特之处啊，它能让文字变得有魔力！
我觉得 descriptive essay 就是一种超级棒的表达形式，能把我们生活中的点点滴滴都描绘得无比精彩，让那些瞬间都永远地留在文字里，让后人也能感受到我们曾经的感受。

它让我们的世界变得更加丰富多彩，不是吗？。

Descriptive EssaysDescriptive writing portrays people, places, things, moments and theories with enough vivid detail to help the reader create a mental picture of what is being written about.Things to Consider as You Write Your Descriptive EssayThink of an instance that you want to describe.Why is this particular instance important?What were you doing?What other things were happening around you? Is there anything specificthat stands out in your mind?Where were objects located in relation to where you were?How did the surroundings remind you of other places you have been?What sights, smells, sounds, and tastes were in the air?Did the sights, smells, sounds, and tastes remind you of anything?What were you feeling at that time?Has there been an instance in which you have felt this way before?What do you want the reader to feel after reading the paper?What types of words and images can convey this feeling?Can you think of another situation that was similar to the one you are writing about? How can it help explain what you are writing about?Is there enough detail in your essayto create a mental image for the reader? Conventions of Descriptive Essays Illustrated by Sample ParagraphsAppealing-to-the-Senses Description: Let the reader see, smell, hear, taste, and feel what you write in your essay.The thick, burnt scent of roasted coffee tickled the tip of my nose just seconds before the old, faithful alarm blared a distorted top-forty throughits tiny top speaker. Wiping away the grit of last night\'s sleep, the starch white sunlight blinded me momentarily as I slung my arm like an elephant trunk along the top of the alarm, searching for the snooze button. While stretching hands and feet to the four posts of my bed, my eyes opened after several watery blinks. I crawled out of the forter, edging awkwardly like a butterfly from a cocoon, swinging my legs over the side of the bed. The dusty pebbles on the chilled, wood floor sent ripples spiraling from my ankles to the nape of my neck when my feet hit the floor. Grabbing the apricot, terri-cloth robe, recently bathed in fabric softener and October wind, I knotted it tightly at my waist like a prestigious coat of armor and headed downstairs to battle the morning.Spatial-Order Description: Show the reader where things are located from your perspective.Billy Ray\'s Pawn Shop and Lawn Mower Repair looked like a burial groundfor country auction rejects. The blazing, red, diesel fuel tanks beamed in front of the station, looking like cheap lipstick against the pallid, wrinkled texture of the parking lot sand. The yard, not much larger than the end zone at General G. Patton High School on the north end of town, was framed with a rusted metallic hedge of lawn mowers, banana seat bicycles, and corroded oil drums. It wasn\'t a calico frame of rusted parts, but rather an orchestra of unwanted machinery that Billy Ray had arranged into sections. The yellow-tanked mowers rested silently at the right of the diesel fuel. Once red, now faded orange, mowers stood at attention to the left. The oil barrels, jaded and pierced with holes, bellared like chimes when the wind was right. The bikes rested sporadically throughout the lot. In the middle of it all was the office, a faded, steel roof supported by cheap two-by-fours and zebra paneling. Billy Ray was at home, usually, five blocks east of town on Kennel Road.2019年08月15日。

Descriptive EssaysDescriptive writing portrays people, places, things, moments and theories with enough vivid detail to help the reader create a mental picture of what is being written about.Things to Consider as You Write Your Descriptive EssayThink of an instance that you want to describe.Why is this particular instance important?What were you doing?What other things were happening around you? Is there anything specific that stands out in your mind?Where were objects located in relation to where you were? How did the surroundings remind you of other places you have been?What sights, smells, sounds, and tastes were in the air?Did the sights, smells, sounds, and tastes remind you of anything?What were you feeling at that time?Has there been an instance in which you have felt this way before? What do you want the reader to feel after reading the paper? What types of words and images can convey this feeling?Can you think of another situation that was similar to the oneyou are writing about? How can it help explain what you are writing about?Is there enough detail in your essayto create a mental image for the reader?Conventions of Descriptive Essays Illustrated by Sample ParagraphsAppealing-to-the-Senses Description: Let the reader see, smell, hear, taste, and feel what you write in your essay.The thick, burnt scent of roasted coffee tickled the tip of my nose just seconds before the old, faithful alarm blared a distorted top-forty through its tiny top speaker. Wiping away the grit of last night‘s sleep, the starch white sunlight blinded me momentarily as I slung my arm like an elephant trunk along the top of the alarm, searching for the snooze button. While stretching hands and feet to the four posts of my bed, my eyes opened after several watery blinks. I crawled out of the comforter, edging awkwardly like a butterfly from a cocoon, swinging my legs over the side of the bed. The dusty pebbles on the chilled, wood floor sent ripples spiraling from my ankles to the nape of my neck when my feet hit the floor. Grabbing the apricot, terri-cloth robe, recently bathed in fabric softener and October wind, I knotted it tightly at my waist like aprestigious coat of armor and headed downstairs to battle the morning.Spatial-Order Description: Show the reader where things are located from your perspective.Billy Ray‘s Pawn Shop and Lawn Mower Repair looked like a burial ground for country auction rejects. The blazing, red, diesel fuel tanks beamed in front of the station, looking like cheap lipstick against the pallid, wrinkled texture of the parking lot sand. The yard, not much larger than the end zone at General G. Patton High School on the north end of town, was framed with a rusted metallic hedge of lawn mowers, banana seat bicycles, and corroded oil drums. It wasn‘t a calico frame of rusted parts, but rather an orchestra of unwanted machinery that Billy Ray had arranged into sections. The yellow-tanked mowers rested silently at the right of the diesel fuel. Once red, now faded orange, mowers stood at attention to the left. The oil barrels, jaded and pierced with holes, bellared like chimes when the wind was right. The bikes rested sporadically throughout the lot. In the middle of it all was the office, a faded, steel roof supported by cheap two-by-fours and zebra paneling. Billy Ray was at home, usually, five blocks east of town on Kennel Road.---来源网络整理，仅供参考。

Descriptive EssaysDescriptive writing portrays people, places, things, moments and theories with enough vivid detail to help the reader create a mental picture of what is being written about.Things to Consider as You Write Your Descriptive EssayThink of an instance that you want to describe.Why is this particular instance important?What were you doing?What other things were happening around you? Is there anything specific that stands out in your mind?Where were objects located in relation to where you were?How did the surroundings remind you of other places you have been?What sights, smells, sounds, and tastes were in the air?Did the sights, smells, sounds, and tastes remind you of anything?What were you feeling at that time?Has there been an instance in which you have felt this way before?What do you want the reader to feel after reading the paper?What types of words and images can convey this feeling?Can you think of another situation that was similar to the one you are writing about? How can it help explain what you are writing about?Is there enough detail in your essayto create a mental image for the reader?Conventions of Descriptive Essays Illustrated by Sample ParagraphsAppealing-to-the-Senses Description: Let the reader see, smell, hear, taste, and feel what you write in your essay.The thick, burnt scent of roasted coffee tickled the tip of my nose just seconds before the old, faithful alarm blared a distorted top-forty through its tiny top speaker. Wiping away the grit of last night`s sleep, the starch white sunlight blinded me momentarily as I slung my arm like an elephant trunk along the top of the alarm, searching for the snooze button. While stretchi第1 2 页下一页。