郑州外国语学校2020高三二轮复习英语作文建议信感谢信课件(共41张)【优秀课件】39页PPT

事件形容词: valuable宝贵的/ priceless 无价的/ memorable 难忘的
整体结构
二、整体结构
1.首段：提出感谢 （+ 没你我不行） 2.中间段：帮助细节+对我作用、结果 3.结尾段：感激不尽+伺机回报 (或祝愿/期待)
必备句型
写信目的
（提出感谢 + 没你我不行）
三、必备句型—写信目的
多谢你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大 的进步。
6. It was so awesome/thoughtful of you to do sth. 你做了某事真是太棒/太贴心了
7. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

soon. ❖ =It is hoped that you will find true
friendship. ❖ (变换多种句式，增加闪光点)
高考英语二轮专题复习：书面表达训 练（建 议信） （25张P PT）
高考英语二轮专题复习：书面表达训 练（建 议信） （25张P PT）
❖ Dear Li Ming, ❖ I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new
高考英语二轮专题复习：书面表达训 练（建 议信） （25张P PT）
表达建议常用句式：
1. If I were you, I would …… 2. As far as I am concerned, …… / In my
opinion …… 3. Why not ……? 4. It would be a good idea if …… 5. In the first place / Firstly / First …… Secondly
高考英语二轮专题复习：书面表达训 练（建 议信） （25张P PT）
高考英语二轮专题复习：书面表达训 练（建 议信） （25张P PT）
❖ Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips.
❖ First of all, you can make friends with others if you can share their joys and sorrows.

sentences concerning giving suggestions • write a letter of suggestion correctly and
appropriately
高考英语 二轮专 题复习 ：如何 写建议 信 课件 （18张 PPT）
高考英语 二轮专 题复习 ：如何 写建议 信 课件 （18张 PPT）
& reasons
energetic. Last but not least, you had better
not stay up late studying. It is very
important to have a good sleep at night if
you want to be energetic during the day.
2. give your advice (1) It would be a good idea to… (2) I would like to suggest that… (3) I think it would be more beneficial if you could … (4) I think it would be better if….
1. state your purpose
(1) I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
(2) I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. Here I’d like to give some suggestions.
高考英语 二轮专 题复习 ：如何 写建议 信 课件 （18张 PPT）

2.to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly
3.talk to people standing on their
3.…
own
How will you conceive a letter of advice?
• To solve the problem, you are asked to write a letter of advice to help Xiao Dong, what is your general structure of a letter of advice?
that this is right,but by doing this you are letting people know how friendly you are.
So there should be no problem. It should certainly provide you with some new
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1. give sb some advice (on) 2. have difficulty/trouble in doing sth. 3. ask sb. for advice 4.find…helpful/useful/beneficial 5.take part in/participate in 6. follow/take one’s advice
Dear Miss Wang,
I'm a student from Huzhou Senior High school. I have a problem.I'm not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates,I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation. But I don't know how.I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

However，there was a time when the pressure of examinations，too much
homework and the high expectation made me depressed. C. I was tired of the
warning that if I didn’t do my best，I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. It
made progress without you.
Para 2. The experience of being encouraged and
高考英语二轮复习感谢信 优质课件ppt
its influence on your life
高考英语二轮复习感谢信 优质课件ppt
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! D.I wish you and mom good health.
Para 1. Present situation & Purpose of the letter
I have been looking forward to your arrival at this Grown-up Ceremony for a week.
So glad that you do come and witness this moment! B. Now I’m writing to express my
例句：Now I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your devotion. 写这封信是为 了表达我对…的感谢，因为… ➢extend heartfelt thanks 表达衷心的感谢

2
Lead in
When do you need to wifts/awards/honors • Receive helpful advice/tips • Receive encouragement/praise • Receive prompt payments • Receive financial contributions • ...
Useful words and expressions
appreciate charming cherished classic delighted elegant fascinated favorite flattered grateful generosity gracious
高中英语应用文写作 ----感谢信
letters of thanks
2023/1/6
Objectives
To know about the format and contents of thank-you letters; To write appropriate thank-you letters, especially pay attention to the tone and language. To recognize what a good thank-you letter is like.
Layout
感谢信：致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信 件需写明感谢他人的理由，信文感情要真挚，措辞得体。
Structure: 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助； 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
Format
What should be included in a letter of thanks? Dear Sir, Beginning ----purpose

make some Chinese friends
take a Chinese course how to learn Chinese
learn to sing Chinese songs
read books& newspaper in chinese
watch Chinese TV programs
Dear Tom，
......
yours sincerely, xxx
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Dear Tom, I am glad to receive your letter asking me for suggetions
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Use the sentences pattern you have learned to translate the following sentences. 1.了解到你想要学中文，我想给你提供一些建议。 2.上中文课是有必要的，因为你可以在老师的帮助下去提 高中文。 3.听中文歌也不失为一个好主意。既可以激发你学习中文 的兴趣，也可以给你带来乐趣。 4.我希望你能考虑我的建议。
• write a letter of suggestion correctly and appropriately
Tom, your American friend, has a plan of learning Chinese.

2 ． If it had not been for your ( help/ guidance / assistance) , I wouldn‘t
have (won the prize) ...
3 ． My true gratitude is beyond the word' s description.
3 . Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern weekly, is the first choice, from which you can…
4 . I have the confidence that you will have a better understanding of our
Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern weekly, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. I am sure you can benefit a lot from them.

• First of all, if I were you, I would
doing
is a good way to
great importance for you to
you have a better school life.
. Besides, . Finally, It is of , which can help
读后续写出现问题
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• Paragraph 2
• After the play, I took home the flower.
读后续写出现问题
• 1. 缺乏过渡，没有在第一段提到flower和play • 2. 铺垫太长（一整段都在描述我和妈妈的对话） • 3. 人物塑造，人物性别 • 4. 跑题，价值观 • 5. 字体，拼写，语法错误 • 6. 两端字数差别过大
建议信、读后续写
建议信
（1）建议信写作注意事项 • 写作目的是提出建议或忠告。不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注
意礼貌当先 （2）结构大纲（outline） Step Ⅰ：题目背景 + 写信目的

03 3. Use advanced expressions and sentence patterns to write a letter of suggestion. 5. write an appropriate letter of suggestion, especially pay attention to the tone and
weight.The following are some tips on how to keep fit.
升级表达：I’m more than sorry to learn that you are extremely upset
about putting on weight. The following are some practical tips on how
make it easy for you to put on weight.
巧用定语从句和好的句式结构
③经常锻炼是重要的。像骑车和散步这类的运动对身体很有好处。它可以 使你保持体形
It is important to work out on a regular basis. Sports like riding and walking are of great benefit to your health，which can help keep you in shape。
建议信的常用句式
写开头： 1. Sorry to learn that you have trouble in........, I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions. 2. I have received your letter saying you find it difficult to....... The following are my personal suggestions, which I figure out are of great benefit. 3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to adapt to new campus life, and I will try to make some suggestions here. 4. I am more than glad to have received your email. Now I am writing to give you some practical advice on how to keep healthy.