2015高考英语专题六 短文改错

2015高考英语：短文改错练习（2）及答案解析短文改错议论文【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试（201407）】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

【答案】71.had改为have 解析：考查动词的时态。

句意：许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。

整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实，故用一般现在时。

72. student 改为students。

解析：考查名词的单复数。

句意：虽然他们还是中学生，根据they 来判断用复数形式。

73.do 改为does 解析：考查动词的时态。

Do harm to 对。

有害。

整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。

74. realized 后的that去掉解析：考查宾语从句。

句意：越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。

Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。

75.boring 改为bored 解析：考查形容词辨析。

Be bored with 厌烦。

76. other 改为others 解析：考查代词。

与上文提到some people 相呼应。

77.himself 改为themselves 解析：考查反身代词。

句意：其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。

与others相呼应。

78. causing 改为caused 解析：考查动词的。

句意：事实上，抽烟导致了许多疾病。

这是个叙述过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。

79. the waste of money 中the 改为a 解析：考查冠词。

A waste of sth浪费某物。

1. 2015年课标全国卷IWhen I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it .【答案】【解析】试题分析：高中即将毕业了，有一些体会和同学们分享。

1.感谢老师，家长和朋友们；2.致歉于我曾经误会伤害的人；3.祝福同学们心想事成。

1．【答案】第二句：think→thought句意：我认为在那儿很快乐。

时态用法错误。

这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。

解析：考查动词时态。

前句是一般过去时，且本复合句的从句用了过去将来时，故此处应用一般过去时，以符合“时态一致”原则。

小时候，我希望在城市里居住。

我原以为在那里我会很幸福。

是过去以为，要用一般过去时态。

一、短文改错（辽宁卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona1.【解析】第一句have→had，根据下文得知整篇文章用的是过去时。

短文改错专项训练（一）：近年浙江省高考真题实战1.(2015浙江) My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field .In the morning, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.2.（2014浙江）I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.3.（2013年浙江）Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.4.（2012年浙江）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident andhit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.5.（2011年浙江）I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.6.（2010年浙江）After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (拥抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, "That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma." "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.7.（2009年浙江）One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.短文改错专项训练（二）：2015各省高考真题练手（2015陕西卷）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!（2015四川卷）Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice.Grave （2015新课标卷1）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Muchrare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we‟ll live to regret it.（2015新课标卷2）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop win dow. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying a nd telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.改错口诀：代词格，连词悟，还要注意形和副，名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少，动词时态和语态，非谓搭配细辨别，介词多半考搭配，多用漏用想周到，句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词，语法句法均未错，逻辑推理想清楚。

高考真题之改错题【2015·全国统一卷】One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worrie d.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【2015·四川】Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How d o you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.【2015·陕西】My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!【2015·新课标全国I】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protec t your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.【2016·新课标全国I、II卷】The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 【2016·新课标全国III卷】The teenage year from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2016年全国高考真题之英语作文范文(2016全国I卷假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume。

短文改错练习（6）【英语卷（解析）·2015届浙江省重点中学协作体高考摸底测试（201408）】E1第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer software. An old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.【答案】前加the 形容词最高级前应加the。

E单元短文改错目录E单元短文改错- 1 -E1 短文改错记叙文- 1 -E2 短文改错应用文- 11 -E3 短文改错议论文- 13 -E4 短文改错说明文- 16 -E1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷解析·2015届河北省唐山一中高三上学期期中考试〔201411〕】第三节短文改错〔共10小题；每一小题1分，总分为10分〕假定英语课上教师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉与一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔∧〕，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误与其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者〔从第11处起〕不计分。

Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into te ar. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文讲述作者一天的生活【答案解析】1. does改为is The sky is full of sunshine,这里用的is，所以后面也用is2. go改为went 表示过去发生的事，故用一般过去时，所以go改为went3. was改为were 根据a lot of new books，谓语动词用复数，所以was改为were4. what改为which句意：我不知道要买哪一本，所以what改为which5. cinema前加the go to the cinema是固定用法，意思是去了电影院6. but改为and 这里表示并列关系，所以but改为and7.去掉been 看电影〞和其逻辑主语“每个人〞是主动关系，所以用现在分词的主动式。

1.2015 年课标全国卷 IWhenI was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. NowI am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots ofstudies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airswe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways toprotect your environment. If we fail to do so,we'll live to regret it .【答案】【解析】试题分析：高中即将毕业了，有一些体会和同学们分享。

1.感谢老师，家长和朋友们； 2. 致歉于我曾经误会伤害的人； 3. 祝福同学们心想事成。

1.【答案】第二句： think ^thought 句意：我认为在那儿很快乐。

时态用法错误。

这里用一般过去时，表示“过去认为”。

解析：考查动词时态。

前句是一般过去时，且本复合句的从句用了过去将来时，故此处应用一般过去时，以符合“时态一致”原则。

小时候，我希望在城市里居住。

我原以为在那里我会很幸福。

是过去以为，要用一般过去时态。

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.二． Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won'tbe easy, I know， but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we cango to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times have you walked outof a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there? 三．Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving.Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without water and neither agricultureor industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water.To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go allout to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, nodrinking water should beleft running. Third, we should findways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.四．My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.五．Dear Mom, Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!六Dear Grandpa,How are you those days? I have been missing you very much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think ofthe old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I was child, you alwaysheld me in your arms and told me stories till I fall asleep. We often went to the fields to enjoy the pleasant view there. You told me the name of different plants and their characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study and the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since we’ll do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then. 七Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne'sfriend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least sixmile.Inthe end, we drove to a service station and waited here unless the road was clear. In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home. 八．Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because Iwas so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.。

1.2015·陕西My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2.2015·四川Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.2015·新课标全国IIOne day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.4.2015·新课标全国IWhen I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .5.2015·浙江My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.1.2015·陕西短文改错【答案】76.去掉in 77.anything 改为something 78.better改成best 79.decide改成decided 80.step 改为steps 81.well改成good 82.after改成when/while 83.a改为the84.just后加to 85.enjoy改为enjoying【考点定位】考查短文改错【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。