汉英散文翻译鉴赏

励志散文英译汉赏析I lost my sight when I was four years old by falling off a box car in a freight yard in Atlantic City and landing on my head. Now I am thirty-two. I can vaguely remember the brightness of sunshine and what colour red is. It would be wonderful to see again, but a calamity can do strange things to people. 4岁那年在大西洋城，我从货场一辆火车上摔下来，头先着地，于是双目失明。

现在我已经32岁了。

我还模糊地记得阳光是多么灿烂，红色是多么鲜艳。

能恢复视觉固然好，但灾难也能对人产生奇妙的作用。

It occurred to me the other day that I might not have come to love life as I do if I hadn' t been blind. I believe in life now. I am not so sure that I would have believed in it so deeply, otherwise.I don' t mean that I would prefer to go without my eyes. I simply mean that the loss of them made me appreciate the more what I had left.有一天我突然想到，倘若我不是盲人，我或许不会变得像现在这样热爱生活。

现在我相信生活，但我不能肯定如果自己是明眼人，会不会像现在这样深深地相信生活。

培根《论养生》散文英译汉佳作赏析培根《论养生》散文英译汉佳作赏析Of Regiment of Health论养生There is a wisdom in this, beyond the rules of physic: a man's own observation, what he finds good of, and what he finds hurt of, is the best physic to preserve health.养生有道，非医学底规律所能尽。

一个人自己的观察，他对于何者有益何者有害于自己的知识，乃是最好的保健药品。

But it is a safer conclusion to say; this agreeth not well with me, therefore I will not continue it; than this; I fmd no offence of this, therefore I may use it. For strength of nature in youth passeth over many excesses, which are owing a man till his age. Discern of the coming on of years, and think not, to do the same things still; for age will not be defied.但是在下断语的时候，如果说：“这个与我底身体不合，因此我要戒它”，比说：“这个好象于我没有什么害处，因此我要用它”较为安全得多。

因为少壮时代底天赋的强力可以忍受许多纵欲的行为，而这些行为是等于记在账上，到了老年的时候，是要还的。

留心你底年岁底增加，不要永远想做同一的事情，因为年岁是不受蔑视的。

Beware of sudden change in any great point of diet, and if necessity enforce it, fit the rest to it. For it is a secret, both in nature, and state; that it is safer to change many things, than one. Examine thy customs, of diet, sleep, exercise, apparel, and the like; and try in anything thou shall judge hurtful, to discontinue it by little and little; but so, as if thou doest fmd any inconvenience by the change, thou come back to it again: for it is hard to distinguish, that which is generally held good, and wholesome, from that, which is good particularly, and fit for thine own body.在饮食底重要部分上不可骤然变更，如果不得已而变更的话，则别的部分也须要变更，以便配合得宜。

散文汉译英佳作赏析：朱自清《荷塘月色》（范文模版）第一篇：散文汉译英佳作赏析：朱自清《荷塘月色》（范文模版）荷塘月色Moonlight over the Lotus Pond朱自清Zhu Ziqing这几天心里颇不宁睁。

今晚在院子里坐着乘凉，忽然想起日日走过的荷塘，在这满月的光里，总该另有一番样子吧。

月亮渐渐地升高了，墙外马路上孩子们的欢笑，已经听不见了；妻在屋里拍着闰儿，迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌。

我悄悄地披了大衫，带上门出去。

It has been rather disquieting these days.Tonight, when I was sitting in the yard enjoying the cool, it occurred to me that the Lotus Pond, which I pass by every day, must assume quite a different look in such moonlit night.A full moon was rising high in the sky;the laughter of children playing outside had died away;in the morn, my wife was patting the son, Run-er, sleepily humming a cradle song.Shrugging on an overcoat, quietly, 1 made my way out, closing the door behind me.沿着荷塘是一条曲折的小煤屑路。

这是一条幽僻的路；白天也少人走，夜晚更加寂寞。

荷塘四面，长着许多树，翁翁郁郁的。

路的一旁，是些杨柳，和一些不知道名字的树。

没有月光的晚上，这路上阴森森的，有些怕人。

今晚却很好，虽然月光也还是淡淡的。

Alongside the Lotus Pond runs a small cinder footpath.It is peaceful and secluded here, a place not frequented by pedestrians even in the daytime;now at night, it looks mare solitary, in a lush, shady ambience of trees all around the pond.On the side where the path is, there are willows, interlaced with some others whose names I do not know.The foliage, which, in a moonless night, would loom somewhat frighteningly dark,looks very nice tonight, although the moonlight is not more than a thin, grayish veil.路上只我一个人，背着手踱着。

散文汉译英佳作《雨前》赏析散文汉译英佳作《雨前》赏析最后的鸽群带着低弱的笛声在微风里划一个圈子后，也消失了。

也许是误认这灰暗的凄冷的天空为夜色的来袭，或是也预感到风雨的将至，遂过早地飞回它们温暖的木舍。

The last flock of pigeons have also gone out of sight after doing their final circling in the soft breeze, the sound of their whistles barely audible. They are hastening back to their warm wooden dovecote earlier than usual perhaps because they have mistaken the bleak leaden sky for nightfall or because of their presentiment of a storm.几天的阳光在柳条上撤下的一抹嫩绿，被尘土埋掩得有憔悴色了，是需要一次洗涤。

还有干裂的大地和树根也早已期待着雨。

雨却迟疑着。

The willow twigs, daubed with a light green by several days of sunshine, are now covered all over with the dust and look so sickly that they need to be washed. And the perched soil and tree roots have likewise been dying for rainfall. Yet the rain is reluctant to come down.我怀想着故乡的雷声和雨声。

那隆隆的有力的搏击，从山谷反响到山谷，仿佛春之芽就从冻土里震动，惊醒，而怒茁出来。

好的散文翻译心声谢有顺发布时间： 2007-09-14 08:20 光明日报散文现在是一种繁荣的文体。

写作者众多，发表的数量也惊人，但整体的面貌并不令人满意。

尤其在散文的话语上，讲究、节制、有个性的文字，其实不是很多。

我以为，散文的语言，在本质上应是优雅而富有美感的，粗糙和夸饰是散文的大敌。

因此，散文要写得好，不仅要面对一个有意味的实感世界，还要面对一个优雅的语言世界。

南帆的散文，就是优雅而有美感的文字。

他既重历史疑难的探询，也重现实人心的解析，正如他的笔墨，既有批评家的睿智，又有散文家的自得，这使得他的文字，在历史与现实、理性与感性之间，往往穿梭自如，有着一个学者不多见的优雅和沉实。

我喜欢读这样的文字。

清晰而准确，隐忍而节制，没有怒气，拒绝夸张，不人云亦云，也不斤斤计较。

他写作视阈的宽广，见证的正是他生命的厚度，这一点，在他的散文写作中表现尤为明显。

《辛亥年的枪声》（海峡文艺出版社）作为一本新散文集，不仅关涉他对历史、故土和先贤的追思，也书写日常生活和渺小事物背后的隐秘心事，事的大与小，情的浅与深，映照出的都是南帆那智慧的面影——他不会因为介入重大问题的思索，而忽视对细节的发现；也不会因为流露出对小事的警觉，而遗忘生活背后那条长长的历史阴影。

他也犹疑，那是因为真相的消隐，正如他的幽默，往往是为了缓解内心的迷茫。

这迷茫，常常出现在他面对历史时的那个瞬间。

“历史”二字，对多数人来说，是一个大词，是材料、事实和铁证如山的现场，因此，写作历史大散文的人，一般都会显露出一种独断的文化自信。

南帆笔下的历史，却闪烁着完全不同的面貌。

他承认历史比绯闻更伟大，但并不简单地把历史等同于客观的事实、严密的考证。

相比之下，他更关心人与历史的微妙关系，以及在历史的缝隙中依然还活跃着的个人气息。

因此，即便在诉说正大的历史，南帆也对传说保持着浓厚的热情，比如他在讲述“有些温情的林纾”时，就坦言“没有必要用呆板的考据求证传说”，“传说不是证明细节，而是证明这些先辈没有退出生活。

散文书的抒情英译赏析散文书的抒情英译赏析说到书，我很动感情。

因为它给我带来温暖，我对它满怀感激。

下面是店铺分享的英译散文《书的抒情>，欢迎大家阅读!书的抒情Eulogizing Books柯灵Ke Ling| 译文摘自张培基《英译中国散文选二》说到书，我很动感情。

因为它给我带来温暖，我对它满怀感激。

I always think of books with profound feeling, being deeply indebted to them, as I am, for the warmth they have brought me.要点：1，题目“书的抒情“在此不宜直译，通过文章内容，我们可以将其理解为”书赞“译为Eulogizing Books或A Eulogy on Books,简译为On Bookes也是可以的，但缺乏感情色彩，不及前者贴切~ 2，“说到书，我很动感情”即“我对书有很深的感情”，故译为I always think of books with profound feeling3，“因为它给我带来温暖，我对它满怀感激。

“译为being deeply indebted to them, as I am, for the warmth they have brought me。

英汉差异的原因，英语中表示原因的句子通常后置(如果不是表特殊强调的话~)，这点在英译汉时尤为凸显书是我的恩师。

贫穷剥夺了我童年的幸福，把我关在学校大门的外面，是书本敞开它宽厚的胸脯，接纳了我，给我以慷慨的哺育。

没有书，就没有我的今天。

——也许我早就委身于沟壑。

Books are my beloved teachers. In my childhood, when I was deprived of happiness and schooling by poverty, books took me to their large bosoms and nurtured me generously. It is to them that I owe what I am today. Without them, I would probably haveended up in abject misery long ago.要点：1，”贫穷剥夺了我童年的幸福，把我关在学校大门的外面，是书本敞开它宽厚的胸脯，接纳了我，给我以慷慨的哺育”注意本句在合译时，，将“贫穷剥夺了我童年的幸福，把我关在学校大门的外面”译为时间状语从句，取“书本”作主语，这种译法很巧妙地将分句意思串联在了一起，也值得我们学习和借鉴2，“剥夺了我童年的幸福，把我关在学校大门的外面”译者将其视为一个意思，即“剥夺了我童年的幸福和受教育的机会”，进行合译，译为was deprived of happiness and schooling by poverty 3，“沟壑”本指“溪谷”山沟，常引申指“野死之处”，因此本句意为“死无葬身之处”，译为would probably have ended up in abject misery，意思是“结局悲惨”书是我的良友。

散⽂佳作汉译英翻译赏析：Is the Ear Less Reliable than the Eye?⽿闻不如⼀见-顾均正（双语）Is the Ear Less Reliable than the Eye?⽿闻不如⼀见——从焦尾琴谈起——About the Story of Jiao Wei Qin顾均正Gu Jun zheng在郭⽼(1)新编的话剧“蔡⽂姬”⾥，提到了蔡⽂姬的⽗亲蔡邕（yōng）(2)所造的那张焦尾琴。

最近我看了“蔡⽂姬”的演出，⾃然⽽然想起了焦尾琴，想起了关于焦尾琴的故事： In the play Cai Wenji, newly written by venerable Guo Moruo, reference is made to jiao wen qin, a zithern partly made of scorched wood by Cai Yong, father of Cai Wenji.Recently, after I saw the play on the stage, my mind naturally went to jiao wen qin and its story.蔡邕因为不愿趋附权贵(3)，怕被⼈陷害，曾经亡命江南，往来于吴会之间（今江、浙⼀带），计⼗⼆年。

据说他在吴（今苏州）的时候，有⼀天听见邻家烧饭的柴⽕中发出⼀种爆裂的声⾳，他熟悉这种声⾳，知道这声⾳来⾃⼀种极好的桐⽊，这种桐⽊是造琴(4)的材料。

他就跟邻家主⼈商量，把这段烧焦了的桐⽊要了来，造成⼀张琴。

这张琴弹起来果然⾮常好听。

因为它的⼀端(5)是烧焦的，所以⼤家都叫它焦尾琴。

Cai Yong disliked playing up to bigwigs and, to avoid frame-ups, he went into exile in the South, wandering about for twelve years in Jiangsu and Zhejiang Provinces. It is said that one day during his stay in Suzhou when he heard the crackling of firewood from his next-door neighbour at cooking time, he knew the familiar sound came from paulownia, a kind of choice wood best for making zitherns. Now, talking it over with his neighbour, he was given the piece of scorched wood, which he subsequently made into a zithern. This musical instrument, when played, turned out to be extremely pleasant to the ear. People called it jiao wei qin because the tail of its sound-board was made of scorched wood.当我想起这个故事的时候，使我对“⽿闻不如⽬见”这句成语不能不有所怀疑。

散文英译汉佳作赏析：培根《论养生》Of Regiment of Health论养生There is a wisdom in this, beyond the rules of physic: a man's own observation, what he finds good of, and what he finds hurt of, is the best physic to preserve health.养生有道，非医学底规律所能尽。

一个人自己的观察，他对于何者有益何者有害于自己的知识，乃是最好的保健药品。

But it is a safer conclusion to say; this agreeth not well with me, therefore I will not continue it; than this; I fmd no offence of this, therefore I may use it. For strength of nature in youth passeth over many excesses, which are owing a man till his age. Discern of the coming on of years, and think not, to do the same things still; for age will not be defied.但是在下断语的时候，如果说：“这个与我底身体不合，因此我要戒它”，比说：“这个好象于我没有什么害处，因此我要用它”较为安全得多。

因为少壮时代底天赋的强力可以忍受许多纵欲的行为，而这些行为是等于记在账上，到了老年的时候，是要还的。

留心你底年岁底增加，不要永远想做同一的事情，因为年岁是不受蔑视的。

Beware of sudden change in any great point of diet, and if necessity enforce it, fit the rest to it. For it is a secret, both in nature, and state; that it is safer to change many things, than one. Examine thy customs, of diet, sleep, exercise, apparel, and the like; and try in anything thou shall judge hurtful, to discontinue it by little and little; but so, as if thou doest fmd any inconvenience by the change, thou come back to it again: for it is hard to distinguish, that which is generally held good, and wholesome, from that, which is good particularly, and fit for thine own body.在饮食底重要部分上不可骤然变更，如果不得已而变更的话，则别的部分也须要变更，以便配合得宜。

汉英散文翻译但是，朔方的雪花纷飞之后，却永远如粉，如沙，他们决不粘连，撒在屋上，地上，枯草上，就是这样。

屋上的雪是早就有消化了的，因为屋里居人的火的温热。

别的，在晴天之下，旋风忽来，便蓬勃地奋飞，在日光中灿灿地生光，如包藏火焰的大雾，旋转而且升腾，弥漫太空，使太空旋转而且升腾地闪烁。

（“雪”，摘自鲁迅《野草》）But the snowflakes that fall in the north remain to the last like powder or sand never hold together, wether scattered on roofs, the ground or the withered grass. The warmth from the stoves inside has melted some of the snow on the roofs. As for the rest, when a whirlwind springs up under a clear sky, it flies up wildly, glittering in the sunlight like thick mist around a flame, revolving and rising till fills the sky, and the whole sky glitters as it whirls and rises.几个女人羞红着脸告辞出来,摇开靠在岸边上的小船.现在已经快到晌午了,万里无云,可是因为在水上,还有些凉风.这风从南面吹过来,从稻秧上苇尖吹过来,水面没有一只船,水象无边的跳荡的水银.Shamed-faced and blushing, the women took their leave and rowed off again. It was nearly noon, without a cloud in the sky, but on the river was a breeze from the paddy fields and rushed in the south. There was the only boat afloat on the endless expanse of water like rippling quicksilver.几个女人有点失望, 也有些伤心,各人在心里骂着自己的狠心贼.可是青年人,永远朝着愉快的事情想,女人们尤其容易忘记那些不痛快.不久,她们就又说笑起来了.“你看说走就走了。

《故乡的雨》英译散文赏析《故乡的雨》英译散文赏析故乡的Rain in My Old Hom唐弢Tang Tao| 译文摘自张培基《英译中国散文选二》江南的春天素称多雨，一落就是七八天。

住在上海的人们，平日既感不到雨的需要，一旦下雨，天气是那么阴沉，谁也耐不住闷在狭小的家里；可是跑到外面，没有山，没有湖，也没有经雨的嫩绿的叶子，一切都不及晴天好；有时阔人的汽车从你的身旁驰过，还带一身泥污回来。

Spring in the south is known to be rainy. During this season, it never rains there but it remains wet for seven or eight days on end. Dwellers in Shanghai, who usually do not feel the need for rain, will be bored with having to confine themselves in their close quarters when outside it is gloomy with rain. While in the open, seeing no mountains, nor lakes, nor rain-drenched soft green l eaves, you’ll find nothing comparable to a fine day. Sometimes, worse still, a rich man’s car flashing past may splash you all over with mud.要点：1，“一落就是七八天”译为it never rains there but it remains wet for seven or eight days on end.，相当于 it never rains there without remaining wet for seven or eight days on end,其中wet 作rainy,on end 意为continuously,或at a time.常用never but +主语+动词，表达“未有…而不…”之意（双重否定表肯定~~），也可译为”总是“如He never comes but he brings something for the children.他哪次来都要给孩子们带些东西。