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新高考英语读后续写素材一、修辞手法(1) 明喻(simile)like1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.（情感描写）我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
3.The scenery along the journey is just like a breath-taking landscape painting.(景物描写) 沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。
4.The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描写) 寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。
5.Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描写) 繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
as...as1.The smile on her face was as vibrant as the sun on a summer day.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。
2.I reached out to touch her face, which was as cold as the ice.(人物描写) 我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。
更多搭配 as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌 as hungry as a wolf 饥肠辘辘as proud as a peacock 傲如孔雀 as easy as ABC极其容易as brave as a lion 勇猛如狮 as pretty as a picture 美如画as if1.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self locked away inside.Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
2019年高考英语续写范文English:As I stood at the threshold of my future, the words of encouragement echoed in my mind, igniting a fire of determination within me. The continuation of the story before me was not merely a task; it was a reflection of my journey, my aspirations, and my perseverance. With each stroke of my pen, I delved deeper into the narrative, weaving together the threads of imagination and reality. The characters danced across the page, each representing a fragment of my own identity, a mirror to my dreams and fears. In this moment of creation, I found solace in the chaos, clarity in the ambiguity, and strength in vulnerability. As the plot unfolded, I embraced the challenges with an unwavering resolve, for I knew that every twist and turn was a testament to my resilience. And as I penned the final words, I realized that the story was not just mine alone; it belonged to every soul who dared to dream, who dared to defy the odds, and who dared to write their own destiny.中文翻译：站在未来的门槛上，鼓舞人心的话语在我的脑海中回荡，点燃了我内心的决心之火。
可编辑修改精选全文完整版高考英语读后续写升华类素材一、主题升华（一）助人为乐1.Roses given, fragrance in hand.(赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
)2.You reap what you sow.(种瓜得瓜；善有善报。
)3.Small kindness can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.(小小的善意可以产生大的影响。
)（二）积极向上，坚持不懈1.Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成。
)2.Actually, each individual possesses talent.Be brave, rise to setbacks/obstacles, and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles.(实际上，个人都有天赋。
直面困难/努力/终将制造奇迹。
)3.Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing.(没有梦想的人生就像折翼的小鸟。
)4.Even you are suffering from the darkest moment, you should focus to seek the light.(当你遭遇最艰难的时刻也应该去寻找光明。
)（三）亲情主题1.Family and friends are hidden treasures.(家庭和朋友是隐藏的财富。
)2.Family love is the greatest gift in life.(家人的爱是生命中最大的礼物。
)3.Family is to us what harbor is to ships.(家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只。
)二、句式升华（一）非谓语（ing\ed作状语）1.Breathing fire and fury, he gave me a look of burning anger.他充满着怒火，用灼热的目光怒视着我。
读后续写必背万能句型一、动作描写:构造“动作链”和编织”动作面”句式1：A, B and C她上了出租车。
她喊了一辆出租车，跳进去然后告诉司机目的地。
She hailed a taxi, jumped into it and told the driver the destination.她发表获奖感言。
她瞥了一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道“谢谢图图”。
She glanced at the trophy, took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TuTu！句式2：After doing A, B and C.After glancing at the trophy, she took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TunTun！句式2：Having done（强调该动作先于谓语动作发生）“拿肉扔狼” 他先拿出肉，瞄准狼，径直扔向这只凶狠的动物。
Having pulled up the meat, he aimed at the wolf and threw it straight at the fierce animal.句式3：Doing..., 主句，doing...围在营火旁，他们吃着烧烤，享受这一令人难忘的时光。
Gathering around the campfire, they feasted on BBQ (吃着烧烤), enjoying the unforgettable moment.句式4：Done...,主语, doing...被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了手，小声说，“我来。
”Encouraged by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I’ll do it.”被眼前的这一幕吓坏了，他一动不动，不知道该说什么。
Terrified/Frightened by the scene in front of him, he was rooted to the spot, being at a loss (茫然不知所措)what to say.句式5：主句，doing...and doing...他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。
英语新高考读后续写Sarah, a high school student, had just finished her final exams for the semester. She was relieved that the stressful period was over, and she could finally relax. However, as she walked out of the examination hall, she noticed a notice board with a poster for an English contest called "English New College Entrance Examination (ECEE) Read and Continue Writing."Intrigued, Sarah stopped to read the details. The contest aimed to promote students' reading and writing abilities. Participants were required to read a given passage and then continue the story using their imagination and creative writing skills. The winner would receive a scholarship for a summer creative writing course.Sarah had always loved reading and writing, and she knew that participating in this contest would be a great opportunity for her to showcase her talent. She decided to do some research on the ECEE contest and found the passage for the read and continue writing section online.The passage was about a young girl named Lily who found a mysterious key in her grandmother's attic. Intrigued by the key, she embarked on an adventure to unravel the secret behind it. The passage ended with Lily standing in front of an old and locked door in an abandoned mansion, wondering what lay behind. Sarah's mind raced with ideas on how to continue this thrilling story.Excitedly, Sarah began writing her continuation. She imagined Lily summoning the courage to insert the key into the rusty lock.With a loud creak, the door swung open, revealing a hidden room filled with ancient artifacts and dusty books. As Lily stepped inside, she discovered a diary belonging to her great-grandfather, who had disappeared mysteriously many years ago.The diary entries documented the great-grandfather's explorationof an enchanted forest and his encounter with magical creatures. Sarah skillfully described Lily's determination to follow in her great-grandfather's footsteps and find the forest he had written about. She had a vision of grand adventures, where Lily encountered talking animals, dashing through the dense foliage, and on a quest to unlock the forest's secrets.As Sarah continued writing, she poured her heart into the story. She painted vivid pictures of the enchanting forest, using rich imagery and engaging dialogue. Bit by bit, the story unfolded, capturing the reader's attention and imagination.Days turned into nights as Sarah tirelessly worked on perfecting her story, pouring her passion for writing onto the pages. Finally, she completed her continuation, a tale of mystery, magic, and discovery. She submitted her entry, hoping that her creativity and dedication would impress the judges.A few weeks later, Sarah received an email notifying her that she had won the English New College Entrance Examination (ECEE) Read and Continue Writing contest. She couldn't believe her eyes and jumped with joy. The scholarship for the summer creative writing course was a dream come true for her.Sarah's success in the ECEE contest not only validated her writing skills but also boosted her confidence. She realized that reading and writing weren't just hobbies; they were her passions, and she couldn't wait to pursue them further.The ECEE contest opened up a world of opportunities for Sarah. Inspired by her win, she decided to study English literature in college, with dreams of becoming a published author one day. Sarah knew that with hard work and dedication, she could make her dreams a reality.。
英语读后续写素材【名著优美句段】1.But if a man would be alone,let him look at the stars.The rays that come from those heavenly (adj.天堂的）worlds will separate between him and what he touch.但是如果一个人想要独处，就让他看看星星吧。
那些来自天堂的光线会把他和他所触摸的东西分开。
——《Nature》2.But every night come out these envoys（n.使者）of beauty,and light the universe with their astonishing smile.但是每天晚上，这些美丽的使者都会出现，用他们惊人的微笑照亮宇宙。
——《Nature》3.The stars awaken a certain reverence（n.敬畏）,because though always present,they are inaccessible.星星唤醒了某种敬畏，因为尽管它们总是存在，却难以企及。
——《Nature》4.In a calm sea every man is a pilot.在平静的海面上，每个人都是领航员。
——《The true nobility》5.But all sunshine without shade,all pleasure without pain,is not life at all.Take the lot of the happiness-it is a tangled yarn.Losses and blessings,one after another,make us sad and blessed by turns.Even death itself makes life more loving.Men come closest to their true selves in the sober moments of life,under the shadows of sorrow and loss.但是所有的阳光都没有阴影，所有的快乐都没有痛苦，这根本就不是生活。
2019山东卷英语读后续写范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: My Adventure in the Magic KingdomHey guys! Today I want to tell you about my super cool adventure in the Magic Kingdom! So, it all started when I found a mysterious map in my grandma's attic. The map had magical symbols and glittery writings on it. I knew I had to follow it!I followed the map through the forest, over the mountains, and across the river. Finally, I reached a hidden cave covered in vines. I bravely entered the cave and discovered a secret tunnel that led me to the Magic Kingdom!The kingdom was full of amazing creatures like talking animals, flying unicorns, and friendly dragons. I made friends with a unicorn named Sparkle and together, we went on a quest to find the lost treasure of the kingdom. We faced many challenges and obstacles, but we worked together and never gave up.After many adventures, we finally found the treasure hidden in a magical enchanted garden. The treasure was a beautiful crystal that glowed with all the colors of the rainbow. It was the most amazing thing I had ever seen!I returned home with the treasure and the memories of my incredible journey in the Magic Kingdom. It was a day I would never forget and I couldn't wait for my next magical adventure. The end.Wow, wasn't that a super awesome story? I wish I could go on a real adventure like that one day. Have you ever gone on a magical adventure? Let me know in the comments! See you next time! Bye!篇2Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestHey there guys! Today I want to tell you all about this super cool adventure I had in the enchanted forest. It all started on a sunny Saturday morning when my best friend Lily and I decided to explore the mysterious forest near our neighborhood.As soon as we entered the forest, the air felt different and we could hear the chirping of birds and the rustling of leaves. Wewalked deeper into the forest, following a narrow path until we stumbled upon a clearing with a shimmering pond in the center. The water was so clear that we could see fish swimming in it!Just as we were marveling at the beauty of the pond, we heard a soft voice calling out to us. We turned around and saw a magical creature standing there – it had the body of a deer and the wings of a butterfly! It introduced itself as Sparkle and told us that it was the guardian of the enchanted forest.Sparkle took us on a tour of the forest, showing us all the hidden wonders and secret places that only magical creatures knew about. We saw trees that lit up with fairy lights at night, flowers that sang when you touched them, and even a treehouse where a family of fairies lived!After a whole day of exploring, Sparkle led us back to the clearing with the pond. Before we left, Sparkle gave us each a magical charm to remember our adventure by. As we walked back home, we couldn't stop talking about everything we had seen and experienced.That day in the enchanted forest was truly the most magical adventure of my life. I can't wait to go back and explore even more with Sparkle and Lily by my side. Who knows what otherwonders we'll discover next time? Until then, keep believing in magic, my friends!篇3Oh my gosh! I just finished reading the passage in the 2019 Shandong English exam and it was super exciting! It was about a girl named Lily who found a magical key that could open any door. How cool is that?So, after finding the key, Lily went on all sorts of adventures. She went to a candy land where everything was made of sweets, she visited a magical forest where animals could talk, and she even went to a space station where she got to see the stars up close. I wish I had a key like that!But, as I was reading, I started thinking about what I would do if I had a magical key. I think I would use it to travel to different countries and learn about their cultures. I would visit famous landmarks like the Eiffel Tower in Paris, the Great Wall of China, and the pyramids in Egypt. It would be so much fun!In the end, Lily realized that the real magic was not in the key, but in the adventures she had and the memories she made along the way. And I totally agree! It's not about having a magical key,it's about the experiences and the people you meet. I hope one day I can have my own amazing adventures just like Lily.Reading this passage made me feel so inspired and excited about the possibilities that are out there. Who knows, maybe one day I'll find my own magical key and go on my own incredible journey. I can't wait to see what the future holds!So, if you ever come across a mysterious key, don't be afraid to see where it takes you. You never know what amazing things you might discover. Just remember to enjoy the journey and cherish every moment. Happy adventuring!篇4OH MY GOODNESS! Let me tell you about this crazy adventure I had after reading the passage in the 2019 Shandong English exam! It was soooo exciting!So, in the passage, it talked about a group of students who went hiking in the mountains and got lost. Can you believe it? I mean, who gets lost in the mountains? Anyways, they met this old man who helped them find their way back. How cool is that?Now, here comes the fun part. So, after reading this passage, I was like, "I want to go hiking too!" So, I begged my parents to take me to the mountains. And guess what? They said yes! Yay!We packed our bags with snacks, water, and a map (just in case we get lost, haha). We started hiking and it was so much fun! We saw birds, flowers, and even a deer! It was like we were in a nature documentary or something.But then, oh no, we took a wrong turn. We were lost! Just like in the passage! I was like, "Oh boy, where's our old man to help us now?" But then I remembered we had a map! So, we looked at it, figured out where we were, and found our way back.Phew, what an adventure! I'm so glad we didn't have to call for help like in the passage. But hey, at least now I have my own hiking story to tell. Hiking is the best!篇5Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Lily. She loved to read books, especially adventure stories. One day, she found a mysterious book in the library called "The Secret of the Lost Castle". Curious and excited, she started reading it right away.The book was about a brave princess named Isabella who went on a quest to find the lost castle of her ancestors. Along the way, she faced many challenges and obstacles, but she never gave up. Lily was inspired by Isabella's courage and determination.As Lily read on, she became more and more immersed in the story. She felt like she was right there with Isabella, fighting dragons and solving puzzles. Suddenly, she heard a faint whisper coming from the book. It was Isabella asking for her help.Without hesitation, Lily closed the book and jumped into the pages. She found herself in a magical forest, surrounded by talking animals and fairies. Isabella appeared before her, thanking her for coming to her aid.Together, Lily and Isabella embarked on a thrilling adventure to find the lost castle. They climbed mountains, crossed rivers, and outsmarted the evil sorcerer who tried to stop them. In the end, they reached the castle and unlocked its secrets, bringing peace and prosperity to the kingdom.As Lily closed the book and returned to the library, she knew that she had experienced something truly amazing. The magic of storytelling had brought her on an unforgettable journey, and she couldn't wait to share her adventure with her friends.From that day on, Lily cherished every book she read, knowing that each one held the potential for a new and exciting adventure. And whenever she felt bored or lonely, she would simply open a book and let the words carry her away to far-off lands and incredible possibilities. The end.篇6Oh my goodness! I can't believe I have to write such a long essay, but here it goes!So, the story I read for the 2019 Shandong English exam was about a little girl named Lily who found a magical key that could open any door. She went on all sorts of adventures and even helped a princess in a faraway kingdom.After reading the story, I started thinking about what I would do if I had a magical key like Lily. I would probably use it to explore all the hidden places in my school, like the old library or the secret tunnel that no one knows about. I would also use it to visit my favorite cartoon world and meet all the characters in person.But then I thought, maybe having a magical key isn't all fun and games. What if someone evil got their hands on it and usedit for bad things? That's when I realized that having a magical key comes with a big responsibility, just like Spiderman always says.In the end, I decided that even though having a magical key would be super cool, I would rather stick to my normal life and just enjoy reading about Lily's adventures. Who knows, maybe one day I'll have my own magical key and go on my own amazing journey!And that's my story about the magical key. I hope you liked it!篇7Title: My Summer AdventureHey guys, I'm excited to tell you about my summer adventure. It all started when my family and I went on a road trip to visit my grandparents in the countryside. We drove for hours, singing songs and playing games in the car.When we finally arrived, I was thrilled to see my grandparents. They live in a big house with a huge garden that's perfect for playing hide and seek. We spent the afternoons picking fruits and vegetables from the garden, and my grandma even taught me how to bake a delicious apple pie.One day, my grandpa took me fishing at the nearby lake. It was my first time fishing, and I was so excited to catch my first fish. We sat by the lake for hours, chatting and enjoying the peaceful nature around us. I felt so relaxed and happy.As the sun began to set, we made our way back to the house. We roasted marshmallows over a bonfire and told stories under the starry sky. It was a magical moment that I will never forget.After a week of fun and adventures, it was time to say goodbye. I hugged my grandparents tightly, promising to visit them again soon. As we drove back home, I couldn't help but smile as I thought about all the wonderful memories I had made during my summer adventure.I can't wait for next year's summer vacation, and I'm already dreaming of all the new adventures that await me. Summer truly is the best time of the year!篇8Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestOnce upon a time, I went on a magical adventure in the Enchanted Forest. It all started when I found a secret entrance hidden behind a big old oak tree in my backyard. I hesitated atfirst, but my curiosity got the best of me and I decided to go inside.As soon as I stepped into the forest, I was greeted by a chorus of chirping birds and rustling leaves. The air was filled with the sweet scent of wildflowers and I felt like I had entered a whole new world.I walked deeper into the forest, following the winding path that led me through the dense trees. Suddenly, I heard a soft voice calling my name. I turned around and saw a group of friendly woodland creatures gathered around a cozy campfire. They welcomed me with open arms and invited me to join them for a feast.We ate delicious berries and honey from the forest, and I listened to their stories about the magic of the Enchanted Forest. They told me about the mystical creatures that lived there and the secrets that it held.After the feast, they led me to a clearing where a sparkling waterfall stood. They told me that the waterfall possessed special powers and asked me to make a wish. I closed my eyes and wished for peace and happiness for everyone in the world.As I opened my eyes, I felt a warm glow surround me and knew that my wish had been granted. The woodland creatures smiled and bid me farewell, promising to always be my friends.I left the Enchanted Forest feeling grateful for the magical adventure I had experienced. It was a day I would never forget, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories of my time in the Enchanted Forest.篇9Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestOnce upon a time, I went on an exciting adventure in the enchanted forest. It all started when I was reading a book about magical creatures and fairy tales. Suddenly, a gust of wind blew through my window and a small fairy appeared right before my eyes.She told me about a secret portal hidden deep in the forest that led to a magical world filled with wonders and surprises. Without hesitation, I grabbed my backpack and followed the fairy into the forest.As we walked deeper into the forest, we encountered all sorts of creatures like talking animals, friendly elves, and even aunicorn. The colors of the flowers were so vibrant and the trees were so tall that I felt like I was in a dream.Suddenly, we heard a loud roar coming from a cave nearby. It was a dragon, and it looked angry. The fairy told me that the dragon was guarding a precious treasure that could only be retrieved by someone pure of heart.I knew that I had to try and calm the dragon down, so I approached it slowly and offered it a shiny gem I had found on the forest floor. The dragon sniffed the gem and suddenly, its eyes softened. It nuzzled me gently and allowed me to take the treasure.Inside the cave, I found a chest filled with golden coins and precious jewels. The fairy told me that I had passed the test and that I was now a true hero of the enchanted forest.As we made our way back to the portal, I couldn't believe all the amazing things I had seen and done. It was truly an adventure I would never forget.And so, with a heart full of gratitude and joy, I bid farewell to the enchanted forest and returned home, eager to tell everyone about my magical adventure.篇10I got a super fun English reading test last year! The story was about a girl named Lily who found a magical book that could transport her to different worlds. After reading the story, I had to come up with my own adventure for Lily. Here's what I wrote:After Lily opened the magical book, she found herself in a land full of talking animals. The animals told Lily that an evil wizard had cast a spell on their king, turning him into a mouse. They needed Lily's help to find the wizard's hidden lair and break the curse.Excited to help her new friends, Lily set off on a journey through the enchanted forest. Along the way, she met a wise owl who told her that the wizard's lair was guarded by a ferocious dragon. Lily knew she had to be brave and clever to outsmart the dragon and save the king.As she approached the lair, Lily saw the dragon sleeping soundly in front of the cave entrance. Remembering a story she had read about dragons being fond of music, Lily took out her flute and played a sweet melody. The dragon stirred, its eyes closing in contentment as Lily slipped past and into the lair.Inside, she found the wizard chanting a spell over a cage containing the king-mouse. Without hesitation, Lily grabbed a wand and shouted a counter-spell, breaking the curse andrestoring the king to his rightful form. The animals cheered and thanked Lily for her bravery.With the king back on his throne, the animals held a grand feast in Lily's honor. As she flipped through the magical book to return home, she knew that she would always be ready for the next adventure that awaited her in its pages.It was so much fun to write my own ending to Lily's story! I can't wait to see what other adventures she'll go on next in the magical book.。
新高考英语读后续写素材一、情感描写1.喜乐② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety（快乐）took hold of her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑪ Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑫ She shed tears of joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
⑬ Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
⑭ She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
⑮ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
⑯ Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
⑰ I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
高考英语读后续写素材一、升华句式（一）助人救人类01 From then on, I would make every effort to help people in need.Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.自那时起，我会尽我最大努力去帮助需要帮助的人，只有这样，将来才有越来越多的人互相帮助。
02 From that day on, whenever I meet someone needing help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness the stranger offered me.从那天起，每每遇见需要帮助的人，我总会伸出援手，希望将这份陌生人提供我的善意传递下去。
03 A minor act of kindness is powerful enough to make a world of difference.小小的善行会让世界变得不一样。
04 Never underestimate the power of your action.With one small act, you can not only extend love, but also positively influenced others' lives.决不要低估行动的力量。
小小的善行不但能传递爱，而且能对别人的生活产生积极影响。
（二）亲情类01 It was at that moment that I had a thorough understanding of the significance of family.直到那时，我在彻底明白家的意义。
02 Family is a warm life jacket in the stormy sea of life.在充满暴风雨的人生海洋中，家是温暖的救生衣。
What is a climax of a story?（什么是故事高潮?）More tension=satisfying climax文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。
高潮有时候是剧情中的"危机" 点。
有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。
我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。
常见故事高潮示例：1. A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . .2. Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . .3. Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . .4. Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ."文学名著中的一些故事高潮1. The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （罗密欧和朱丽叶，莎士比亚）2. When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Be lle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （美女与野兽，迪士尼）3. In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪）How to create a climax of a story? (如何营造故事的高潮？)方法1.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。
冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。
1）角色之间的冲突 (人物观点差异, 竞争需要等)如：2017年11月浙江英语高考：On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a housewith a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不一）2) 角色与环境之间的冲突如：2017年6月浙江英语高考：Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. ……he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart j umped. ……, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell b ack ……Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。
（人（角色）----狼（环境）大战）3) 时间依赖的发展：决策变得紧急如： 2017年6月浙江英语高考：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓）4) 增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服挑战, 以达到他们的目标例如：2018年6月高考But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路（障碍1）----天色渐黑（障碍2）----又累又饿（障碍3）----心理恐慌（障碍4）方法2. 放大内心冲突放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。
现在我们在来看高考读后续写中的内心冲突是如何体现的：2016年10月浙江高考： Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白（往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一）方法3. 使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。
当故事角色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。
强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。
我们感受到了紧张的倍增。
例1：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷）例2：It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed （寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.如何通过场景营造（mood）Technique 1: Personification (拟人)Description/purpose:Gives an object the characteristics of a living thing, bringing it to lifeExamples：The flowers nodded.G o o d s e t t i n g d e s c r i p t i o n f o r a p p r e c i a t i o n(佳“景”赏析)1. The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies.2. The sun kept dipping down into the ocean and the lights came on at the harbor, casting sudden shadows on the ground, illuminating the faces that were just a second ago silhouettes. The sky was golden and purple, the ocean a darker shade of violet.3. The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky.4. They rolled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens.5. Outside, the air filled with cricket noise, as the sun reddened in its descent.6. A restaurant overlooking a starlit night sprang to my imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the late Middle Ages.7. The moon went slowly down in loveliness; she departed into the depth of the horizon, and long veil-like shadows crept up the sky through which the stars appeared.8. All brightness was gone, leaving nothing. We stepped out of the tent onto nothing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven stood beside me, but neither he nor I cast any shadow. There was dull light all around, everywhere. When we walked on the crisp snow no shadow showed the footprint. We left no track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nothing else at all. No sun, no sky, no horizon, no world.9. Night had fallen fast upon the land. No more than an hour ago the sky was painted with hues of red, orange and pink, but all colour had faded leaving only a matt black canvas with no stars to be looked upon.10．It would be a cold moonless night. The sky was dark and low, the air so chilled it hurt to breathe. Already the ground was laid white with frost and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had become ice.(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. （现在分词+情绪形容词）(201610浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）4. A conjunctionAs he walked, he whistledAlthough he was afraid, he jumped right in.5. A prepositional phraseAt the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.6. A dialogue or a monologue“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.“Hold on tight!” My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride.9.A settingI closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even see m y hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）10.An actionFurry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.(201711浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接）11.Sound effectsBOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared.12. A questionHave you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer. Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or something?其他神态动作描写:David excitedly narrated our experience, eyes blazing with enthusiasm. Worries came to his forehead when he explained the trouble. A smile lifted the corner of his mouth when it came to camping.。
