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雅思写作Task 1图表小作文第一节简介一．图表简介：图表通常分为两大类。

一类是数据图，包括曲线图（graph/ line chart），柱状图（bar chart/ column chart），饼状图（pie chart）和表格（table）。

另一类是示意图/流程图（diagram/flow chart）。

目前在雅思考试中主要出现的是数据图。

最多柱状图，其次曲线图，再者饼状图，表格。

词汇语法：词汇准确多样，不能重复those who work in = people working in = the employee in句子：结构不能太简单，一句话要同时写两个对象的特征。

逻辑：句子里，句子与句子之间，段与段之间都要使用表示对比，转折，相似的连词或副词。

时态：第一句使用一般现在时，主体部分大多用一般过去式。

二．图表作文审题审题包括审读题目要求或说明以及查看图表及其注解。

题目的文字部分一般提供了有关这个图表的最基本信息，如所涉及的背景、研究的对象、时间和地点。

对于图表部分，我们需要仔细考察，查看纵横轴等，找出值得描述的主要规律和特征、关键点( 最高，最低值，中间值、相似类的)、总体趋势（overall trends）和不规则变化（irregularities 上升，下降，持平的）。

第二节常用基本句式开头段主体段一．描述信息出处二．动态变化描写1）上升/ 下降（用变化动词）2）上升/ 下降（用变化名词）3）上升/ 下降（五个变通句型）1．The percentage of …increases sharply between …and…, going up from...to…. 2．There is a gradual increase in the number of ….over the period of one month. 3．The number/percentage shows an upward / downward trend f rom ….to….. 4．A sharp increase can be found in the number/percentage of , from …to…5．The year of 1999 witnesses a steady fall in the amount of ….4）无变化二．静态数据描写1）最高和最低A was the most popular/dominant/main + n , with + 数据+时间..= A + 动词/被动语态/serves as (is used as) the main n (+ 数据) +时间.= The largest quantity of n + 动词/被动语态from A + 数据+时间.= The proportion of n in A, the highest of all, + 动词+ 数据+时间.=A+ 动词/被动语态in the largest quantity, +数据+时间.2）A比B 多/少3）A和B相等2）A是B的几分之几或几倍3）A比B多几倍三．导入数据★介词短语1.The consumption of fish also decline but slightly to just below 50 grams.mb and chicken were eaten in the quantities of 5 grams.3.The consumption of fish decline by50 grams.4.The units of electricity doubled, rising from100to 170 i n USA and from 90 to 180 in France.5.Hydro continued to be another significant source, supplying/producing approximately 20%, at 25 units.6.In 1979，beef was by far the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week.7.The reminding units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power( 20 units and 25 units respectively),with hydro contributing 5 units.★括号8.The remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power(each producing 25 units) and oil (which produceonly 10 units).mb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities, while much less fish was consumed(just over 50grams.)★分词作状语10.The units of electricity doubled, rising from 100to 170 i n USA and from 90 to 180 in France.11.The greatest amount of water was consumed in the industrial sector, accounting for 70%.12.The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purpose,whereas hydro continued to be anothersignificant source,supplying approximately 20%.★非限制性定语从句13.The units of electricity doubled, which rose from 100to170 i n USA and from 90 to 180 in France.四．对象描述变换方法1.Beef was the most popular of these food s.Beef was consumed as the most popular food.Beef were eaten in similar quantities of 5 grams.The consumption of beef fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. 2.American used coal as the main electricity source for 25%.Coal was used as the most popular source.3.The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purpose.Water used in the industrial sector also increased, but the consumption was minimal until 1999.4.Nearly 80% students under 26 years old study for their career reason.There are only 10% of students studying out of interest.Those who study for career purpose is 4%.5.90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men.Men holding postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered than females.Men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered than females.6.Britain has spent most heavily on the ranged of goods.Britain’s spending is considerable higher than that of other country.Germany is the lowest spender.五．开头段改写1.(7.1) The table below gives/shows information on consumer spending on different items in five differentcountries in 2002.= The table shows the expenditure on the consumption of three items in 5 nations in 2002, namely, Turkey, Italy, London, New York and Tokyo.2.(7.2) The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meet in a European countrybetween 1997 and 2004.= The line chart illustrates the changes in the amount of fish, beef, lamb and chicken consumed in a particular Europe country over the 15-year period from 1997 to 2004.= The graph illustrates how the consumption of fish, beef, lamb and chicken changed in a particular Europe country over the 15-year period from 1997 to 2004.3.(7.3) The chart shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.= The charts shows how the average prices in five different cities changed during the period between 1990 and 2002 in comparison to the average house prices in 1989.4.(6.1) The graph and table gives information about water use worldwide and water consumption tin two differentcountries.= The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1990 and 2000 and the table compares the differences in agricultural consumption in two countries.5.(3.3) The chart below shows the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialcountries in 1980 and 1990.= The data compares the differences between developing and industrial countries participation in education and science.第三节高分句式一．同时写两个对象的特征或变化1）平铺直叙法:简单句（respectively, compared with）；并列句（however, on the contrary, on the other hand）; 复合句（while, whereas）15.The units of electricity doubled, rising from 100 to 170 in USA and from 90 to 180 in France.16.The units of electricity in USA and in Franc rose double from 100 to 170 and from 90 to 180 respectively.17.A double rise could be seen/found in the units of electricity in USA and in Franc from 100 to 170 and from 90 to180 respectively.18.There was a double rise in the units of electricity in USA and in Franc from 100 to 170 and from 90 to 180respectively.19.The consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 gramsrespectively.= There was a dramatic fall in the consumption of beef and lamb to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively.= A dramatic fall can be found/seen/noticed in the consumption of beef and lamb to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively.20.The proportion of people aged stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in USA.21.The length of time people spend at school in industrialized countries was much greater at 8.5 years in 1980,compared to 2.5 years in developing countries.22.10% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with 80% of women.23.Men who held a skilled vocational diploma was 10%,compared with80% of women.24.There are 80% of men holding a skilled vocational diploma in comparison with 80% of women.25.70% of over 49 years old study for interes t in comparison to 18% studying for career reasons.26.Male with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered/overtook female (70% and 30% respectively).1.There was a sharp increase in the consumption of beef. On the other hand，the consumption of chicken,,showed an upward trend.2. A remarkable drop can be found in the price in New York.In/By contrast, the price increased in the rest ofcities.3.Water used in the industrial sector also increased, however/but the consumption was minimal until 1999.4.However, the figures grew to about 15% in around 1990, before rising to almost 5% again in 2000.5.The largest quantity fuel was generated from hydro. On the contrary, coal and oil together produced only 50units.1.In Italy, they got 90%, while/whereas in Japan, they are below 50%.2.Italy spends more on personal stereo than France, while spending the same on toys between the two.3.The quantities of lamb and chicken were similar, while much less fish was consumed (just over 50grams).4.Industrial use grew steadily to just over 5%, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 2%, both far below thelevels of consumption by agriculture.5.The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purpose,whereas hydro continued to be anothersignificant source, supplying approximately 20%.2) 加减法比较级、平级1．France spends much more on CDs and film but less on tennis than Italy does.=France’s spending is slightly more on CDs and film but less on tennis than that of Italy.2．Italy’s spending on personal stereo is only marginally greater than that of France,while spending on toys is equal between the two.3．Far More males hold postgraduate diplomas than females (70% and 30% respectively).=Males who hold postgraduate diplomas are far more than females do (70% and 30% respectively).=There are more males holding postgraduate diplomas than females (70% and 30% respectively).4．More men than woman hold qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education, while more women reach undergraduate diploma level than men.=Men holding qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education are marginally more than women, while women reaching undergraduate diploma level are more than men.5．France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980,which was matched by natural gas.= France used the same amount of coal and natural gas in 1980, with 25 units of electricity.= In 1980, Coal and natural gas are used in the same quantities o f 25 units of electricity in France，= The quantities of c oal and natural gas consumed in France are equal to e ach other, with 25 units of electricity.6．Lamb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities( about 60 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50grams).7．= The quantities of lamb and chicken were similar,while much less fish was consumed (just over 50grams).8．Italy’s spending on personal stereo is only marginally greater than that of France, while spending on toys is equal between the two.9．The price increased in the rest of cities.10．T he remainder/the reminding sources was produced from nature gas, hydro water and oil.11．N early the same number of over 49 years old study for career and interest reasons.12．T he percentage are nearly similar, which are all approximately 60%.13．L amb and chicken were eaten in similar quantities,while much less fish was consumed (just over 50grams.)14．F rance used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. 15．T he proportion i s similar in 3 countries.3) 倍数法倍数+平级1.The units of electricity doubled, rising from 100 to 170 in USA and from 90 to 180 in France.mb was consumed twice as much as beef.3.The number of women who hold the undergraduate diploma is three times as much as that of man.4.There are twice as many women who hold the undergraduate diploma as men.二．同时写一个对象的两种变化before / after / followed by1.The number of cases of the X disease remained steady, followed by a slight decrease before the number rosedramatically between 1990 and 1995.2.The number of cases of the X disease remained steady, followed by a slight decrease before rising dramaticallybetween 1990 and 1995.3.The number of cases of the disease reached a peak in 1993, fluctuating slightly until the 1996before it fellsharply over the following years.4.There was a slight increase up to 30 dollars in the price after a fall to 10 dollars.5.There was a slight increase up to 30 dollars in the price after it fell to 10 dollars.。

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雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练

雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练

雅思图表作文TASK1精讲精练A理论部分：雅思小作文概论1、文章结构：主要分三部分：i。

introductory sentence；ii。

body paragraph;iii.Concluding sentence具体讲：第一段introductory sentence只要写一句话，交待图形（如the line graph， pie chart等等），描述对象(如图表描述的是the number of tourists visiting England），地点(如the US, the UK等）以及时间（如between 1988 and 1997等等）；另外要注意的就是第一段不能和图表上方已给的句子太过相似！否则，会失分的！第二部分一般写1~3段，这要视情况而定。

这部分主要就是对比不同的数据，如相似或相同的数据；某个数据是另一个数据的2倍;某个数据所占比例最大或最小等等。

最后一段concluding sentence也只要写一句话,主要是总结图表的整个趋势。

2。

文章的效果。

很多学生会发现小作文的例文特别简单（尤其是剑桥书里提供的）。

原因很简单，这个report 的目的就是要让university lecturer了解某个事物的发展趋势,所以写出来的文章必须结构清晰、易懂，绝对不能太复杂,也不要把每个数据都描写出来,只要描写有代表性的，重要的数据即可.以下为雅思小作文的四个基本步骤第一步：改写题目通过同义词转换在短短的1分钟内就写好作文的第一段。

举例:The graph below shows the percentage of people unable to find work in three major countries from 1983 to 1992.题目中划线的单词都可以进行同义转换:graph—figure， show—illustrate， percentage-proportion， major-key, from…to…—between…and…,第二步：分析时态1. 图表小作文大部分时候使用过去时态,因为出现的数据一般都是以往的统计数据，过去的情形和现在的情形很有可能完全不一样,因此用过去时态比较恰当。

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文

剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文剑桥雅思写作13test1task1真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目：TASK 1You should spend abo20 minutes on this task.The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2022 and in 2022.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.解题思路：1. 图表类型：地图题2. 主体段时态：一般过去时3. 题目要求：两幅地图分别展示了2022年和2022年去城市医院的通行道路。

选择一些主要的特点来描述并作出一些相关的比照。

4. 描述重点：1)2022年地图中的city hospital的东南风是staff and public car park，而在2022年这个地方变为了staff car park。

2)2022年Hospital Rd 两边的六个bus stops 没有了，在道路西边建造了较大的bus station，并有道路通往北边和南边两个环岛，分别与围绕医院的ring road 和city road相连。

范文：SAMPLE ANSWERThis is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.5 score. Here is the e某aminer’s comment:The candidate has identified all the key features (hospital, ringroad, new public car park, staff car park and bus station in 2022) but the descriptions are not always accurate e.g. [two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff carpark] whereas the staff car park was formerly a car park for both staff and public, while the mention of the bus station is not developed. Organisation is clear, however, with some good use of cohesive devices [According to | Apart from | The further additional features], although there is an error in the use of reference pronouns [This/These two features]. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task [two different years | features | remained | additional], though [features] is over-used. A spelling error is noted in the second line [sourrounded] but this does not cause any difficulty for the reader; similarly, the use of [around-turn] can be easily understood as ‘roundabout’. There is a mi某 of simple and comple某 sentences, mainly used accurately.Two maps illustrate, the way to get to a city hospital of two different years (2022 and 2022).According to both maps, the main features which is city hospital is sourrounded by Ring Road. In these two maps, there have been two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff car park. Apart from these two features there are some features that shows on 2022 map but haven’t shown on 2022 map. The additional features that appear on the map of 2022 are public car parte which located on the east-side of the city hospital. The further additional features are two around-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station.Overall, there are two major features that never change on both 2022 and 2022 map. These features are city hospital and staff carpark. However, there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2022 but not on 2022. These features are public car park, bus station and two around-turns.剑桥雅思写作13test1task2真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】题目：TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what e某tent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant e某amples from your own knowledge or e某perience.Write at least 250 words.解题思路：1. 话题和题型分类社会文化类单边讨论题型2. 题目分析居住在一个你不得不说外语的国家可能会导致严重的社交问题以及实际问题。

雅思写作task1

雅思写作task1


3. 写作 写好引言段（introduction） 引言段开头必须是主题句。包括图表的类型， 内容指的是什么等。命题中已有主题句的情况， 转写题目。 描写图表(body) 注意使用衔接词和转承短语，使文章紧凑，逻 辑性强。 结尾段(ending) 不需要加一段“单独”的结论，不需要发表个 人观点。

波动 Fluctuate There were strong/slight fluctuations… 峰值 …reached its peak/ plateau/ bottom/ lowest point …peaked at 1000 比例 A constitute/ accounts for/ makes up/ takes up nearly 10% of B B is composed of 50%..,40%.., and 10%..
雅思图表作文
考察学生观察图表，解释，说明信息的能 力。 无需阐述自己的意见，做出假设或对所给 的信息做出结论性评价。 字数不少于150字，最好在180字左右。

写作内容
既有宏观overview又有微观details 语言简练明确，逻辑性强 相关处进行关系描述和对比

写作时态
一般用过去时描述已经发生的客观信息。 没有时间信息的客观描述用一般现在时。 预测数据使用表将来的结构。 Be projected/ expected/ predicted/ forecasted to
如何写overview (线、柱、饼、表) As an overall trend,… (流程) This process diagram covers/includes … stages/phrases.

如何表方向 1. 上升 Increase/rise/grow/boom/top/climb/go up/an upward trend …in 2003 were 23% up of those of 2001 Roughly doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled 2. 下降 decrease/ descend/ dive/ plunge/ decline/ drop/ reduction …experienced/saw/witnessed a 7% drop…
剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作task1雅思写作名师点题：地图题以及一些工程图表题是雅思考试中比较“另类”的话题。

考生接触较少，因此会产生一定的恐惧心理。

在总结这类地图和表格题的信息时，考生可遵循以下两个步骤:首先要弄清楚地图的方位顺序，其次要对比必要的信息，此外，考生还需要持别注意时态的应用。

雅思写作高分范文：The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction ofsome transport and service buildings.It is clear that before development, the horizontal island which is about 260 meters long has a Few trees on both east and west sides. Furthermore, on the west edge, a small beach is located for tourism in the future.The layout changes tremendously after buildings are constructed in almost the whole island. The trees on the east side are kept for the natural view.However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected, Next to the western accommodation, there is a reception building around which a vehicle track road heading to the south pier for tourist sailing is just paved. Onthe opposite side of the pier, a restaurant stands at the north side near the seashore. The center of, the island is also designed to supply housing for tourists. In sum, comparing the two drawings,tremendous developments have been evident.These developments make the whole island crowded with modern facilities, which may cause damages to the environment.作文结构分析：范文由四段组成:第一段为引言段，主要介绍该图表展示的是什么方面的信息;第二段对改建之前的岛屿进行描述;第三段对改建之后岛屿的设施和交通进行描述:最后一段对两个图表体现出来的总体特点(overview)进行归纳，同时也表达了对岛屿环境的担忧。