2011年成人高考专升本-英语作文写作要点分析
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2011成考英文作文I love to travel. It's so exciting to explore new places and experience different cultures. I always feel so alive when I'm on the road, discovering new things and meeting new people.One of my favorite things to do when I travel is to try the local cuisine. Food is such an important part of a culture, and I believe that you can learn a lot about a place by tasting its traditional dishes. Whether it'sstreet food or a fancy restaurant, I'm always eager to try something new and delicious.I also enjoy immersing myself in nature when I travel. There's something so peaceful and rejuvenating about being surrounded by beautiful landscapes. Whether it's a beach, a mountain, or a forest, I love to take in the natural beauty and take a moment to appreciate the world we live in.Meeting new people is another highlight of travelingfor me. I love striking up conversations with locals and other travelers, hearing their stories and learning from their experiences. It's amazing how much you can learn from people from different backgrounds and walks of life.Exploring historical sites and landmarks is something I always make time for when I travel. I find it fascinating to learn about the history of a place and to see the remnants of the past. It's a great way to gain a deeper understanding of the culture and traditions that have shaped a destination.Finally, I always make sure to take plenty of photos when I travel. Capturing memories and moments is so important to me, and looking back at those photos always brings back the feelings and emotions of the trip. Plus,it's a great way to share my experiences with friends and family back home.Overall, traveling is a wonderful and enriching experience for me. It allows me to step out of my comfortzone, learn new things, and create lasting memories. I can't wait for my next adventure!。
成人高考专升本英语写作七大技巧成人高考专升本英语写作七大技巧写作绝招一(如何写好开头和结尾)写作绝招一(如何写好开头和结尾)一开头万能公式:1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?经典句型:A proverb says,“ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…2.开头万能公式二:数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。
所以不妨试用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:Honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better thanSix-day Work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
2003年假定你是John,将去上海旅游。
写一封信给你在上海的朋友张强,告诉他你将乘火车于10月21日上午8点到达上海,请他接站,并请他帮你安排21至24日的住宿(旅馆最好靠近市中心,房间可以小一些,但不要太贵).此外,你还要他帮你订24日返回北京的火车票。
注意:词数应为100左右。
参考文本One possible version:Oct. 15Dear Zhang Qiang,How are you doing recently?I’m planning to go to Shanghai and look around in the city for a few days。
I’ll take the train and arrive at 8 o‘clock a。
m. on October 21st。
Will you please come and meet me at the station?I'm going to stay in Shanghai till October 24th。
Please help me book a hotel room。
I hope to stay in a hotel around the downtown area but the price shouldn’t be very high. I don't mind if the room is small. Another thing,can you book a ticket for me back to Beijing on 24th?All the best,John2004年假定你是李华,打算出国学习计算机科学。
现在给在美国工作的表哥David Zhang 写信,了解以下情况:1. 需参加的英语考试;2. 每学期需修的课程数和费用;3。
食宿费用;4. 合适的学校。
注意:1。
词数应为100左右。
【范文】Salary or InterestUpon graduation,virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice. It is truly a tough choice. Students’ opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to their interest in jobs,but others take the attitude that salary is the most critical factor influencing their career choices.As to myself,I prefer the latter view. A well paid job exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people,with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to measure the value of one’s job in terms of money,salary counts most when I choose my future career. In my view,our career choices largely depend on how and where we have been brought up. I come from a poor urban family and my parents were both laid off workers. In order to finance my tuition,they have been working hard over the past four years. As the only son in my family,I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In short,salary is the first and only consideration in my choice of career.Certificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.Smoking in publicNot allowing smoking in public places and office buildings is a very good rule. I believe this for several reasons. Not only will banning smoking improve people's health, it will also increase worker productivity and reduce conflicts.We all know smoking is not healthy. Unfortunately, when smokers are able to smoke in public buildings, they can make other people sick. They may work with people who are allergic to smoking, for example. In that case, the non-smokers have no choice unless they want to quit their jobs. They can only get sicker, which is unfair. Of course, banning smoking in public buildings and offices will please non-smokers. It will also improve the smokers' health. They will have fewer opportunities to smoke, so they will smoke fewer cigarettes.Banning smoking in office buildings can also increase worker productivity. Smokers won't interrupt their work all the time to smoke. There will also be fewer worker absences. When smokers cut down the number of cigarettes, they will get fewer smoking-related illnesses.Finally, it is a good idea to ban smoking in public places and office buildings because a ban can reduce conflicts. Non-smokers tend to get annoyed and jealous because smokers have an excuse to take frequent breaks. The most significant conflict, however, is over whether smokers have a right to smoke in public. As we have already seen,non-smokers feel they are not always given a choice. If smoking in public is allowed, they will be forced to breathe harmful air. This may violate their rights, and nonsmokers are angry with smokers because of it.Travelling and WastesNowadays, though the awareness of protecting environment is being accepted by more and more people, we can still see many unpleasant scenes especially in scenic spots. Why does this phenomenon arise? Many factors are accounting for it. First and foremost, to some people, the consciousness of protecting environment is still not so strong. They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so satisfying. For example, in some places there’re few regulations or the implementation is seldom performed actually.From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some effective and relative measures. In the first place, we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protecting environment. In the second, more rules should be made and carried out by the government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment. People should work together to create clean and beautiful surroundings.Turning off TVThere is an interesting and instructive saying which goes like this: turning off TV. different people have different views on it .Some people tend to take the attitude that it is undesirable to turn off TV .They point out that TV is the important way for us to get the information in present society. Through the TV ,we can not only know the things abroad and at home but also acquire all kinds of knowledge. In additon, we are able to relax ourselves after working for the whole day .In conclusion ,we should not turn off TV.At the same time , we also can not ignore the bad influence on us .First and foremost ,some people are addicted to TV. Once they watch a movie or teleplay ,they will not do any other things. Though they do other things , they are likely to make a lot of mistakes. Accordingly, some people hold the view that turning off TV is a correct way .To some up the above arguments, we can come to the conclusion that we can watch TV but we must have a right attitude toward it.Private Cars and Traffic AccidentsTraffic accidents are known as one of the most serious problems in today'ssociety .We can see it almost everywhere. A mojority of them are caused by private cars.Indeed, the phenomenon of private cars has many advantages. First of alll,the increasing number of private cars stands for the growth of economy. Further more, the private cars growing ,it is convenient for us to go outside and we cango anywhere anytime. In the meantime, we must realize the disadventage of the issue of traffic accidents. Most traffic accidents result from private cars .The increasing number of private cars may give rise to a host of problems. For instance, the traffic accidents, traffic jam and so on, especially the traffic accidents, they may make a lot of people injured and also die.As far as I am concernend, the proper attitude towards private cars and traffic accidents is that we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. On the one hand ,the drivers should follow the traffic rules. On the other hand, If it is not necessary , we can go outside by bus.My view on honestyHonesty is long-lasting virtue of people all over the world. Likewise, it is also one of the deeply-held values of the Chinese people. Some people believe that in the market economy, honesty tends to be obsolete. In my opinion, honesty will never be out of date no matter what the situation might be.Firstly, honesty has been treasured and honest people have been respected through history in all parts of the world. People everywhere would regarded honesty as a virtue and hate a dishonesty person. Secondly, honesty is the basis of interactions among people. People should treat each other sincerely and open their hearts to each other. Only in this way can the relationship among the people be natural. Thirdly, in the market economy, some people try to get more money at the cost of honesty. To them, a best businessman is one who can cheat most tactfully. Even in this kind of society, honesty is deeply valued by most people.We can see that not only in history, but also at the present day, honesty was and is valued by the majority of the people and the virtue will not perish so easily.框架结构“三段论”:引言段、发展段和结尾段Competition and cooperationCompetition is a common phenomenon in our society . We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study, and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. Therefore, we can say that, in a certain sense, competition is one of the motive forces of the development of our modern society.It is often believed, that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. Some people stress competition, without which, in their eyes, there is no responsibility, no drive and ultimately, no progress. Others advocate cooperation whatever they do. They are of the opinion that the dependence of people on one another has increased, without which the society we live in can not keep going smoothly. In reality, we find that in many cases competition goes hand in hand with cooperation. Lets take a football game for example. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, they would lose the game no matter how skillful each individual player might be. It is clear that competition has much to do with cooperation.As far as I'm concerned, I do not agree with the view that competition and cooperation are always in conflict with each other. In my opinion, while advocating competition. We should never forget cooperation. In our social life, cooperation is especially necessary because most work is fulfilled with or through other people. So I’ve come to the conclusion that competition are equally important.Note-taking /letter marking Scheme●格式●日期、称呼和结尾三部分●内容与语言●注意:首句需用自己正确的语言表达,不要抄提示。
三表格处理1.下列2行4列表格的行高是15磅、列宽是3厘米,将表格的第四列删除,在增加第3行,是表格变成同样格式的3行3列的表格,并添入相同字体的相应数据。
不得做其他修改。
2.将下列2行4列表格的四周边线宽度设定3磅;其余的表格线宽度设定为1.5磅,并将表格中的数字设定为小四号字。
不得做其他修改。
3.将下列表格设置为:(1)在文档的开始处建立的一个3行4列的表格中,设置为第1列中单元格的宽度为2厘米,设置第2列中的单元格的宽度为2.5厘米,设置第3列中的单元格的宽度为3厘米,设置第4列中的单元格的宽度为3.5厘米。
不得做其他修改。
(2)将表格的外框线宽度设置为2.25磅、线形为双实线,内框线宽度为1.5磅、线形为单实线。
不得做其他修改。
4.将下列表格的表格线全部去掉,变成5行4列的数字。
不得做其他修改。
5.将下列表格中的文字删除,使该表变成一个空表,不得将表格及表格线做其他修改。
6.使用“表格”菜单中的命令,将表格中的第3行和第3列删除,不得做其他改动。
7.下列2行4列表格的行高是15磅,列宽是3厘米,将表格修改成同样格式的4行4列的表格,并填入相同字体的相同数字,不得做其他修改。
8.修改表格,将各单元格的高度设为28磅,宽度为2.5厘米。
不得做其他修改。
9.将表格中的各行高度设定为28.35磅,宽度为3厘米。
不得做其他修改。
10.按下列表格中的数据求出每个人的总分,并按总分升序排列。
不得做其他修改。
11.将表格线去掉,变成没有框线的4行4列。
不得做其他修改。
12.将下列表格四周的边框线宽度设置为3磅,其余各线为隐藏虚线。
不得做其他修改。
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇短文:1.简要描述下图内容,并点名主题;2.联系实际,表达该图带给你的启示注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称写作指导:2011年作为湖南省新课改之后的第二次高考年,在传统的基础上有所突破和创新,也彰显出新课改的方向和目标。
湖南省高考英语自2004年自主命题以来多以文字形的出题方式为主导,今年却采用了图画式作文。
就出题形式而言,有所突破和创新。
但是,从作文本质和实体而言,依旧延续了湖南省偏爱的问题解决型文章的风格,而且在写作词汇的应用上不太难。
因此,相信对大多数的考生来说,不会“无从下手”。
若想得高分,更加重要的是理清思路、列好提纲。
在作文地带之前文章中就有提到过“图画型”文章的“三段式”写法----描写图画、分析图画和个人总结。
在题目的要求中也不难察觉到,第一点要求“简要描述下图内容并点明主题”就应是开头第一段写到的“提出话题”,第二点要求“联系实际表达该图带给你的启示”可以归结到到主体段“分析图画”,最后写一段个人总结来结束全文。
开头段描写图画,就图写图,无需发挥任何的主观意见和言论。
第一部分描写:海洋由水滴组成、森林由树木组成、社会有个人组成三幅图画;最后一句点明主题“积少成多”,第一段就轻松拿下。
“组成”这一短语高一下学期的模块三就有出现:be made up of = be composed of = consist of,在应用的时候注意主被动就可以了。
最后的点明主题“积少成多”的翻译也不难:A great number results from accumulation. Accumulation 这个单词其实模块六的第三单元就有学到,具体可见模块六的第34页。
文章主体段:分析图画的深层含义,在提纲中也已经有规定“联系实际”。
找准文章的主题“积少成多”,联系同学们的校园生活就不会“无言以对”。
Great successor progress is due to the accumulation of persistent efforts. 大的成功或进步都是由坚持努力积累而成。
议论文重点诠释:1.议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体,它通过摆事实,讲道理的方式来辩明是非曲折,从而表达出作者的观点。
它常由论点,论据和论证三部分构成。
2.在近几年的高考书面表达中,其主要命题形式是以表格式和提纲式来呈现写作材料的。
3.它要求语言必须简练,准确,要尽可能避免使用口语,多用书面语,可适当使用名言警句;以议论为主,辅之以叙述,说明和描写等手法。
4.写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论,即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。
根据题目要求,有时需要从正反两面来论述,可增强论证的力度。
最后,可得出结论,照应开头,形成一个有机的整体。
5.写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。
写作典例:暑假即将来临,你班同学就假期计划进行讨论,提出了不同看法,请根据提示写一篇英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
优点缺点呆在家中花费少,舒适方便不能亲自了解外界外出旅游增长知识,开阔眼界。
花费多,旅途不便注意:1。
词数120左右(不含已写好部分)2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述;3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;4.参考词汇:眼界horizon(view)案例分析这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作,它以表格的形式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点以及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据,还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法),自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种,并就此发表个人的见解。
本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优,缺点,根据题目的特点,以三段式的形式来写作比较好。
根据内容,尽管讨论已经发生,但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论,没有特定的时间界定,因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述,这会失掉较多的分数。
从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。
范文:The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛,请按如下要求完成一篇短文:1.简要描述下图内容,并点名主题;2.联系实际,表达该图带给你的启示注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称写作指导:2011年作为湖南省新课改之后的第二次高考年,在传统的基础上有所突破和创新,也彰显出新课改的方向和目标。
成人高考英语作文部分(专升本)第一部分成考专升本英语真题作文2010年10月成考真题作文(Writing 25points)你( Li Yuan)刚收到订购的一件商品,但是发现质量有问题,请你写一封投诉信,内容包括:(1)商品名称、订购时间、地点和价格;(2)何时发现质量问题、何种质量问题;(3)你所希望的解决方式。
ManagerCustomer Service DepartmentDear Sir or Madam,Sincerely yours,Li Yuan参考答案:I am a customer who bought a Nokia 2600 type mobile phone for 2600 Yuan from your company on 2010-9-1. I am afraid I really must complain about the quality of this product.After using the mobile phone for two days several problems have been found. First, the mobile phone could not send text massages any more. If I sent massages, it would suggest that there were some problems with the phone, which have made a lot of trouble to me. Second, the camera couldn’t work as well as before. As soon as I took pictures, there were no pictures kept in the picture files. This kind of problem caused me a lot of troubles. I have gone to your company to explain the problem twice. But because of some reason, the problem has still not been solved.I prefer to tell you directly in the hope that you will do something to solve my problem. I will be appreciative if you either make a refund or sent me a replacement.Thank you for your attention to this matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the very near future.Sincerely Yours,Li Yuan 2011年10月成考真题作文(Writing 25points)请以低碳生活(a low carbon life)为主题,写一篇100-120词的短文,内容包括:(1)流行低碳生活的背景(如极端气候、各种灾害、环境污染等)(2)实施低碳生活的若干方式(如家庭生活、工作学习、外出旅游中的节约行为(3)低碳生活带来的积极影响参考答案:A Low-carbon LifeWith the rapid development of the economy ,the issue of environment pollution is more and more serious,notably global warming.So the extreme weather events and natural disasters were inevitable. Man is making the earth sicker and sicker.Therefore,we should live a low carbon life.First of all,when we go out,we should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving a car.Cars not only let out carbon dioxide but also waste energy.Second,we had best not use plastic bags which can bring about the white pollution.We should use the environmentally friendly bags.Third,it's of great use to plant trees.Trees can absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen.Finally,we should start with small things,Therefore,as students,we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave,turn off the tap in time,and reuse our textbooks and so on.A low carbon life can be of great use for us.It can help save energy and cut down the pullution.It can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide that is the main cause of greenhouse effect,and can help keep our environment beautiful and clean.Let’s do together,make our life better.2012年10月成考真题作文(Writing 25points)你是(Li Yuan)负责组织一次班级郊游活动,请根据一下提示写一份通知:(1)郊游活动的具体内容(2)要求各自准备一道菜或者点心跟大家分享(3)列出必要物品,如:相机,雨衣/雨伞、遮阳帽、手电筒等(4)感谢大家合作参考答案:NoticeHi,Everyone,here a good news.We will hold a class outing this Sunday at 7:00 a.m.in the BeiHai Park.We will go to the park by bus at 6:00 a.m.,so don't be late.We will enjoysome shows provided by our students in the morning.And in the afternoon,we will do some games to enjoy us.Everyone is asked for a dish or a dessert to share with other people.At the sametime ,don't forget to bring your camera,raincoat,sunbonnet,flashlight and so on.Thank you for cooperation!Li Yuan 2013年10月成考真题作文(Writing 25points)你(Li Yuan)收到朋友Xiao Ming的Email,他在邮件中谈及买车计划。
2011专升本英语作文范文寻物招领LostI was careless and lost a bag in the dinning-hall on the afternoon of this month. Inside were two textbooks, a dictionary and a key to my bike. Will the finder please send it to the students of Class 1, Senior Two ?/Anyone who/whoever found it , please let me know. Many thanks.Wang LeiFoundA handbag was found, inside which are a camera, a pair of glasses, some money and other things. The loser is expected to c ome identify it. Please telephone ….or get in touch with …. Please bring your identification card with you when you come.Will the founder please come to Class 7 Grade III?口头通知An AnnouncementBoys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you. (I have got an announcement to make.) I am told that a speech will be held at the “English Corner ”this summer vacation. (I’m glad to have the honor to tell you some activities you’re going to have today.) This is a good chance for us to practice our English. Everyone is welcome to attend it. Please bring along your pens and notebooks. Don’t miss the chance. Please get there on time. (Please get everything ready. Don’t be late.)That’s all. Thank you.书面通知NoticeThose who have signed up for “World History”please come to the Department Office to get their handouts on Monday, May 5 between 3:00 and 5:00 p.m.History Teaching & Research Section海报A lectureSubject: American English & British EnglishAbout the lecturer: Dr. John Smith, from New Y ork University Time: 2:00─4:00pm Sat. Oct. 20th, 2007Place: Reading-room Ⅱ, libraryFollowing film: the Sound Of MusicThe Student UnionMay.18th, 2010POSTERFriendly Basketball MatchUnder the auspices of the Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' Union of our school, a friendly basketball watch will be held betweenthe visiting U.S. Northfield Team and ours on the cement basketball count(水泥球场) on Sunday, November20th 2005 at 4:00 p.m.The Recreational and Physical Culture Department of the Students' UnionMay.18th, 2010欢迎词I’m greatly honored to extend, on behalf of all the teachers and students , our warm welcome to Professor David. I’m sure Professor David’s visit will promote the friendly relationship between our two departments. All of us will benefit a lot from their visit. I’m sure he’ll give us much valuable advice in ourresearch. Finally I hope Professor David will enjoy his stay in China.欢送词I have the honor to speak on behalf of my classmates at this farewell party for Mrs. Smith. Mrs. Smith came to our school from America in September, 2006. In the past four years, she’s always been kind to us, patient with us and strict in her work. She gave such interesting and lively classes that every one of us enjoyed them very much. Mrs. Smith. is leaving us for her hometown soon. Now please allow me to express our hearty thanks to her successful work and wish her good health and a pleasant journey.告别词First of all, allow me to thank all of you for your kind invi tation. I’m greatly honored to have such a chance to visit your university. My visit is both interesting and memorable. I’m glad to say I gained a lot from my visit. I’ll treasure your friendship. I’d like to take advantage of this opportunity to express my pleasure and my greatest gratitude to you again.May our friendship last forever !Thank you !招聘Friendship Travel Service looking for travel guides, aged between 20~35, height 165mm (female), 175mm (male); good at spoken English and Putonghua, with a good knowledge of Chinese history, geography and culture.求职I have just read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company. I’d like to get the job.(I want to offer myself for the position.)I feel I am fit for the job. If I am accepted, I will do my best to do the job well. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.书信Dear Editor,I’d like to tell you something about the trouble I was facing in buying furniture. The other day I ordered a set of furniture at a furniture exhibition. They sent me the furniture after four weeks. But I found the color and the size of some pieces were not what I had ordered. What’s more, one leg of the desk was broken. So I asked them to take back the furniture and give me back the money, but they refused. I wrote to the director of the factory but there was no answer.I hope you will publish my letter in the newspaper and help me solve the problem.Y ours sincerely,Li Gang产品广告说明The Red Star Camera is a new kind of camera produced by Beijing Camera Factory, which has modern equipment and lots of senior experts. The Red Star Camera containing much top and new technique is famous for its excellent quality and reasonable price. All the common families can afford to buy one. It controls mostly by itself, so it is very easy to operate. It is convenient to carry, for it is small and light. Once you have one of this kind, you‘ll enjoy it very much. Now Red Star Camera sell well in our shop and we have a plenty of them.Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to our shop to buy the cameras !方位指路图表说明The flat is made up of six rooms. When you go in , you’ll first see a large hall with a kitchen and a bathroom. The door on your left leads you to our living-room. Next to the door againstthe wall there is a sofa, in which we sit to watch TV every evening. On the opposite side stands a color TV set. On your left lies a set of bookcases, with all kinds of books in it.e-mailDear Liu Ming,I have a piece of good news to tell you.A lecture on American English and British English will be held in Reading-room Ⅱof our library at 2:00 pm, Saturday, Oct. 20th. The lecturer is by Dr. John Smith from New Y ork University. After the lecture the film the Sound of Music will be shown. I know you like English and do we ll in it. Will you join me? I’ll meet you at the school gate at 1:45 pm that day.Y ours,Wang Lin公证书Certificate(90)Lu Zi, No. 1130This is to certificate that Mr. Zhao Qiangwen holds a diploma issued to him in July, 1980 by Shandong University (Diploma No. 064)and that we have carefully checked the seal of the University and the signature by President Zhou Y ong sen.Jinan Notary Public OfficeShangdong ProvinceThe People‘s Republic of ChinaNotary: Wang FangMay 2, 2010、On the Low Employment Rate Of College Graduates大学生就业难We have to admit that it is quite difficult for collegegraduates in China in recent years to find suitable job. Graduates from various levels of college and universities find it not easy to get jobs after their graduation. Application forms and application letters are sent to all the organizations and companies but there are still many graduates who are not successful in hunting their jobs.There are various reasons for the low employment rate of college graduates. One reason is that college students pay enough attention to knowledge and theories in their majors and courses but they lack social practice and on-side work experiences. Another reason lies in the layout of job training in colleges. College training in China is still knowledge centered education and few practical courses are taught.As college students, we should learn all the courses well on the one hand, and on the other hand, we also have to go into the society and social experiences. Colleges should open new practical courses for the students so that they can put their knowledge into practice.。
短文写作总分25分。
短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇100-120字左右的短文。
题材以记叙文为主,试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。
短文写作的要求为:能够正确表达思想,意义连贯,无重大语言错误。
写作内容涉及生活,一般常识和私人信件。
短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。
情景写作也就是便条写作。
段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。
一、英语写作训练的要点英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。
通病:习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语,然后逐字翻译成英语。
在理解和使用英语词汇时,要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。
所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候:1.要明确英语写作的意义。
2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。
3.要通过大量的阅读,新概念第二册比较适合。
写提纲的好处:1.可以扩大思路2.可以按次序排好素材3.将文章分成段4.明确写作的中心思想“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。
)”根据这一题目,在构思时可能会想到以下内容:1.seeing strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西)2.meeting people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)3.keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康)4.enjoying beautiful scenery (欣赏各地美景)5.understanding how people live (了解人们怎样生活)6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜)7.tasting different foods and local flavors (品尝各地风味)8. getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people(了解各地风土人情)9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱)10.gaing knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识)11.making one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔)12.gaing other knowledge (获得其他方面知识)13.seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)The Advantages of TravelTravel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.First,by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many placesread of in books,and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.Second,we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can getideas of the conditions and customs of other people,taste different foods and local flavors if we like. In this way,wecan understand how differently other people live.Third,travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge,which arouses thefervent love for our motherland,but will also help us keep healthy and make us less narrow-minded. Travel does benefitus both mentally and physically.在写100字左右的作文,我们也强调三段论。
第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容,第二段找一些例子阐述一下。
第三段再次把我们强调的内容引申的说一下。
二.文章的三个部分引言introduction正文body结束语conclusion专升本英语作文考试中,语法一定要简明扼要,而且要正确。
写好主题句的三条原则1.要能说明段落中心思想的内容。
2.要有能体现中心思想的关键词。
3.尽量使用简洁明了的句子。
以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式,每组句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。
1.表示原因1)There are three reasons for this.2)The reasons for this are as follows.3)The reason for this is obvious.4)The reason for this is not far to seek.5)The reason for this is that...6)We have good reason to believe that...例如:There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has beengreatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.如写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。
如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons forthis.这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。
2.表示好处1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good.3)It benefits us quite a lot.4)It is beneficial to us.5)It is of great benefit to us.例如:Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.3.表示坏处1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.2)It does us much harm.3)It is harmful to us.例如:However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazyif we spend too much time watching television.4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.2)We think it necessary to do sth.3)It plays an important role in our life.例如:and we have stepped into the Computer Age.5.表示措施1)We should take some effective measures.3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.例如:measures to solve it.6.表示变化1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.例如:Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far toseek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milkfor vitamins.7.表示事实、现状1)We cannot ignore the fact that...2)No one can deny the fact that...3)There is no denying the fact that...4)This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.5)However,that’s not the case.例如:We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,wecan start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricterlaws to promote a cleaner environment.8.表示比较1)Compared with A,B...2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV.3)There is a striking contrast between them.例如:Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume naturalresources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.9.表示数量1)It has increased(decreased)from...to...2)The population in this city has now increased (decreased)to 800,000.spent on education has increased.再如:hours per week in 2008 to 20 hours in 2009.================================================================= ========================================================Practical Writing Samples 英语应用文写作范文1. A Letter of Apology道歉信由于未能及时赴约,给老师写一封道歉信,解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。