2019届高考英语短文改错考前提分课下练习2含解析

2019届高考英语二轮复习必刷题型：16短文改错二含答案解析短文改错（二）1、假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文,请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。

增添 :在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下边写出该加的词。

删除 :把剩余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

改正 :在错词下划一横线,并在该词下边写出改正后的词。

注意 :1.每处错误及其改正均仅限一词;2.只同意改正10 处 ,多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。

Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talkwith others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.2、假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文,请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。

2019高考英语《短文改错》专题提分练Correction 1(2018东北三省三校一模)A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear! 解析：①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。

句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。

②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。

三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but 为and。

③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。

ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。

④句意:我妹妹太小,不能独自前往,因此我主动提出陪她乘坐。

训练2 短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!【答案】Nearly five years beforeago，and with the helpbyof our father，my sister and I planted some cherrytomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these yearyears—wehadhave been allowingtomatoes to self－seed where they please.As ∧a result，the plants are growingsomewhereeverywhere.Thefruits are small in size，but juicy and tastetasty.There are somuchmany that we often share them with ourneighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but或yetwehave never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfullywonderful tomatoes at nocost!B(2019·南昌一模)A woman was taken to the hospital.While having an operation, she had a nearly death experience.Seeing God, she asked how this was it.God said，“No, you had another 40 years.”On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery.She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it.Finally she got out of the hospital.While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by.Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had another 40 years！” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”【答案】A woman was taken to the hospital.While having an operation, she had a nearlynear deathexperience.Seeing God, she askedhowif/whether this was it.God said, “No, youhadhave another 40years.” On recovery the women womandecided to have a plastic surgery.She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had somany much time to live, she'd better make full use from ofit.Finally she got outof the hospital.While crossing the street, she ∧was killed by an ambulance speeded speedingby.Arriving in ﹨the front of God, she demanded, “They Yousaid I had another 40 years ！” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”C(2019·福州质检)Everyone of us are thinking about the future.I have decided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprised?I have had this dream when I was a child.I love children.I don't think to deal with them all years round is just wasting time.On the contrary, to me it means happiness.Like we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, and not many of us want to become teachers.One of the main reasons of this is teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite of that, I'm determining to devote all my life into the cause of education.【答案】Everyone of usare is thinking about the future.I have decided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprised surprising? I ﹨have had this dream when I was a child. I love children.I don't think to deal with them all years year round is just wasting time.On the contrary, to me itmeans happiness. Like Aswe all can see, teachers are badly needed in ourcountry,and butnot many of us want to become teachers.One of the main reasons of forthis is ∧that teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite of that, I'm determining determined to devote all my life into tothe cause of education. D(2019·全国乙卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothatwhere I live.Though not very big, ﹨but therestaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some peopleeven hadhave to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success ishonesthonesty.Every day hemakes sure that fresh vegetablesorand high quality oil areusingused for cooking.My uncle says that henever dreams∧of becoming rich inthea short period of time.Instead, he hopes thatourhis businesswill grow steadysteadily.E(2019·长沙一模)In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain－climbing on April 10.Hundreds us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8：00 a．m., we gathered at the feet of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All a way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.While some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later, we both reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped or cheered with joy.The activity benefited to us a lot.Not only did it get us closely to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but it also promoted the friendship among us. How a wonderful time!【答案】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain－climbing on April 10.Hundreds∧of us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8：00 a．m., we gathered at the feetfoot of Daqing Mountain and set out for thetop in high spirits.All athe way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoyedenjoying the fresh air andthe beautiful scenery.WhileWhen some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we bothall reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, we jumpedorand cheered with joy.The activity benefited ﹨to us a lot.Not only did it get uscloselyclose to nature and give usrelaxation from heavy school work, but it also promoted the friendship among us. How What awonderful time!F(2019·西安质检)People living in the country enjoy several advantages that people lived in a city cannot enjoy.They stay close to the nature.They make friend with trees and stones, and cows and dogs.They breath fresh air.They listen the songs of birds.This contact with nature is beneficial to our health.There are many diseases that is common in the city, but are not to be find in the country.For example, near－sightedness is almost unknown to country people.People living in the country can easy get fresh vegetables, fresh fruit and fresh milk.And they get them at low prices than in the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say that they mean.They make and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.【答案】People living in the country enjoy several advantages that people livedliving in a city cannotenjoy.They stay close to ﹨t he nature.They make friendfriends with trees and stones, and cows anddogs.Theybreathbreathe fresh air.They listen∧to the songs of birds.This contact with nature isbeneficial to our health.There are many diseases thatisare common in the city, but are not to befindfound in the country.For example, near－sightedness is almost unknown to country people.Peopleliving in the country can easyeasily get fresh vegetables, fresh fruit and fresh milk.And they get them atlowlower prices than in the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say thatwhat they mean.Theymake and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.。

I was often troubled by lack of confidences。

So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term。

The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education。

At that time， I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools。

While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people。

From this experience， I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving。

【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences。

So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidence aThe exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education。

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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是校排球队队长李华。

2019年⾼考英语短⽂改错真题汇编（附答案）2019年⾼考英语短⽂改错真题汇编(名师剖析解题技巧+真题实战练习，建议下载练习)专题⼀：短⽂改错满分六步法第⼀步必须熟悉设错⽅式1. 必须熟悉设错⽅式：多词、少词、错词。

⑴多词现象⼤多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及⾏⽂逻辑等⽅⾯。

⑵少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。

⑶错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、⾮谓语动词、主谓⼀致、代词、连词、词形。

2. 平时应加强基本功训练，⽤⼀个“错题集”本把⾃⼰或同学在书⾯表达中出现的错误归纳⼀下，以便考前复习。

短⽂改错与书⾯表达⼀样，最能反映⼀个⼈的语⾔功底。

⼤家在该题上失分最厉害，因为此题⽽影响英语总成绩的占⼤多数。

第⼆步对全⽂宏观把握⼤家应把改错内容当作⼀篇⼩短⽂来理解，这样能对短⽂有个宏观把握，对上下⽂有全⾯的了解。

在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩⼩包围圈，也有助于对全⽂的进⼀步理解。

第三步从语法⾓度审查1. 查看时态是否⼀致。

My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team.全⽂都是⽤的⼀般现在时，此句中的was显然与上下⽂语境不符，应改为am。

2. 查看主谓是否⼀致。

Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost应改为costs，因其主语是it(为形式主语)，且上下⽂均为⼀般现在时。

3. 查指代是否⼀致。

The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的是Smith⼀家⼈，因此指⽰代词his应改为their。

4. 查平⾏结构是否平⾏⼀致。

由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平⾏结构。

I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.【答案】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term.confidence a The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, Iannuallywas responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found itinterviewing them was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized thethought andexperience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.of excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs删除thatimproving.How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health. Here are some advice on how to do it.Firstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead of setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health. Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort and support which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your efforts bring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.In a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!【答案】How to keep mental healthAs we know, mental health links to our happiness index. However, it’s vital to keep our mental health.Therefore/ThusHere are some advice on how to do it.isFirstly, accept yourself true. Knowing your own potentials and making practical goal instead oftruly goals setting high expectations can keep yourself away from heavy burden, thus enjoy good mental health.enjoying Secondly, be friendly and sociable. Life with friends is miserable. So make friends. It’s their comfort andwithoutsupport which help you go through hardship in life. Lastly, commit yourself to your career. Your effortsthatbring you a sense of achievement, which will in turn ensure your happiness.willIn a brief, it pays to focus our attention on our mental health. The more, the best!betterDear Mr. Li,I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.They are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher, who makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, the foreigner’s ability to speak Chinese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicate with each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by the foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with the teacher and improve his oral English.【答案】Dear Mr. Li,I’m Wang Tao. I’m written to tell you my opinion about employing a foreign language teacher.writing opinionsThey are two factors to take into consider. For a thing, the sense of humor is necessary for a teacher,There consideration onewho makes his class interesting and lively. For another, ensure efficiency in teaching and learning, thewhich toforeigner’s ability to speak Ch inese matters much, so only with the help of Chinese can they communicatebecause/aswith each other smoothly.Various of activities out of class, such as English Evening and English Corner, should be organized by或Various改为V arietiesthe foreign language teacher, which brings the students more chances to communicate with theteacher andimprove his oral English.theirDear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I had already filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.I would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.Yours,Li Hua Dear Ms Jenkins,I'm Li Hua. I plan to take ∧part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday.I hadahavealready filled in the application form and have my resume ready for it. But I am not sure about the words and format. However, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advices. Would you please spare someTherefore advicetime to read through the materials attaching? Would you mind find out the mistakes in terms for words andattached finding of format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes what are found in the materials and format.that或whichI would appreciate it that if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to you reply.yourYours,Li Hua The sun was just slowly come up over the mountains today as I took my dogs for its morning walk. I smiled as I watched the clouds gradually turn to white and gold. The air was cool and I wore a big smile in my face. Even though there weren’t leaf on the trees, b ut I could still hear birds singing songs of spring. Even my dogs seemed to notice the different in the air. They were playing instead of just do their morning business in the grass. The particular golden sun seemed to make it a beautiful day. As I headed back, I realize something. The beauty of day didn’t come from the warmth of the sun. It came from the warmth within my own heart and soul.71. come改为coming72. its改为their73. in改为on74. leaf改为leaves75.去掉but 或but改为yet76. different改为difference(s)77. do改为doing78. particular改为particularly79. realize改为realized80. 在day前加theFor 65 years, Mr Li has been walk around our neighborhood twice the day. It’s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a retiring biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to rest several time along his route. Therefore, he still gets up early and sticks his routine. The neighbors have noticed his stops. We place different chairs along our route and invite him to sit and took a rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize we should also get out but have a walk.For 65 years, Mr Li has been around our neighborhood twice day. It s a part of his daily exercise routine. He is a biology teacher. As Mr Li gets older and older, he has to restseveral along his route. , he still gets up early and sticks his routine. Theneighbors have noticed his stops.We place different chairs along route and invite him to sit anda rest. Now, the mile-long route is spotted with chairs. When we see Mr Li to go by, we realize weshould also get out have a walk.Alibaba founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at morethan $ 221 billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position amongChina’s wealthi est. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 richpeople.Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well enough to gain a degree and became a teacher. Afterwards hestarted a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introducedto the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in atour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point forall of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and later cooperation with JerryYang.71..his→whose；owned→owns；rich→richest；fought→fighting；去掉in；he和introduced 之间加上was；before→when/after；in→ on；obviously→obvious；all→ bothLast week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. There the doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. When Jack tasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recovered three days later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.Last week I noticed Jack coughing on our math class. See this, I offered to take him to a clinic. Therein Seeingthe doctor asked Jack how he had coughed sometimes for long time. Jack nodded his head immediate.if/whether aimmediatelyThe doctor then wrote a prescription with instruction on how to take the Chinese medicine. WhenJackinstructionstasted the medicine, he almost brings it up. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine forhealth broughttastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow them unwillingly. But when he had recoveredthreeitdays later, he felt amazing at the effect of the Chinese medicine.amazedIn order to promote participation in outdoors exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Tianlong Mountain on April 10. The majority of my class joined the activity.Early in the morning, having assembled outside the school gate, we head straight to the thickly-forested Tianlong Mountain. We set out for the top in high spirits the moment when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other to pass the rocky or steep areas. Laughing and cheering, we eventually reached the summit, which we were greeted by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. Bathing in the warm sunshine, we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game.This event was extremely beneficial and we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!短文改错：第一段：第一行：outdoors --- outdoor 第二行：joined后面加in 第二段第一行：head---headed 第三行：去掉when 第三行:In a course of ---In the course of 第五行：which --- where 第六行：Viewing---Viewed第七行：us---ourselves 第七行：game---games第三段第二行are held --- be heldDear Peter,How time flies! It had been almost a year since you left China to Sweden. During your home stay at my home, we had such wonderful time that it seemed as if everything was happened yesterday. I have been long to hear all about you and missing you so much. Fortunate, I wasselected as one of the student representative to pay a visit to your school. The visit will last on July 7th to 20th. And as a super soccer fan, I’d really love to visit our local soccer club.I can’t wait for the day to come where I can see you.1.had--has2. to ----for3. 在such后加a4. 去掉was5. long—longing6. Fortunate---Fortunately7. representative---representatives8. on---from9. our--your 10. where---whenLast week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.去掉visit后to； living 改为live； which改为that； were改为was；they改为 we； big 改为bigger； took改为takes；Therefore改为However； new前加 a； year改为years。

第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)71.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.【答案】job→jobscoolly→coolfive→fifthtoo→very/sochemistry后面加上in/ator→andThey→Thereamazing→amazed去掉moreis→was【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。

(最新)2019高考英语：短文改错练习题（2）及解析【西南师大附中】第一节：短文改错〔共10小题；每题1分，总分值10分〕此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按以下情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号〔 〕，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：请在答题卡上作答。

WhenIwasasmallchildmyparentsdidn’thavemanymoney 76、_______________ andIhadaveryfewChristmasgifts.Mycousinwas10andhe 77、_______________ hadgoneoutsingingChristmascarolsandmadequiteabit 78、_______________ money.Withtellinganyonehewenttotheshopandspentalmost 79、_______________ everypennyofhismoneyonateddybear;thenheusingthe 80、_______________ changetobuyalittlenecklacewithaglasscharmingonthem.He 81、_______________ cametomyhouseandtoldmyparentswhathehadboughtthese 82、_______________ thingsformeasChristmasgifts.Twenty-fiveyearslatethe 83、_______________moth-eatenteddybearhaslongsincebeenthrownaway,butIeven 84、_______________ havethelittlerustynecklaceinmyjewelryboxtoremindofmycousin’skindness.85、_________短文改错：76.many→much 77.去掉a 78.bit后加of 79.with→withouting→used 81.them→it 82.what→that te→later84.even→still 85.remind后加me*****************************************************结束3.〔辽宁卷〕**************************************************************结束【重庆八中】第一节短文改错〔共10小题；每题1分，总分值10分〕此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

高考英语短文改错专题训练下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

一One late spring day, I saw the wild turkey and several of her chicks along the road near my home. I slow to look at the lovely babies as they gathered around their mother’s legs, but they rapid moved into the long grass. It may be a lot easy to see sights like this in the country, but even city people can find plenty nature to watch. I have a friend who keep a list of all the different birds she sees in her urban neighborhood. I once was stopped to watch ants hard at work near an anthill on the sidewalk. It was fascinated! In my opinion, share the world with other living creature is one of the things that make life interesting. Do you agree?二My favorite book is Black Beauty. It’s a story that take place in nineteenth-century England. It’s a kind of autobiography writing from the horse’s points of view. The book describes its experiences with a variety owners. As a young horse Black Beauty lives a carefree life in a place when everyone is kind to him. Unfortunate, when the owner has to go abroad, he sells him to a family who are not so kind. He goes on to have a lot of pleasant experiences, which is a saddest part of the story. However, the story did all end happily. Although people think of it as a children’s book, but this is a novel which forces us to think about the way we treat animals.三I have a gold-coloured dog named Bobby who loves to be on photos. One day last summer, while live in a seaside house, I was trying to photograph sun setting on the sea over the edge of a wall of my place. Upon it seeing me hold my camera, my Bobby, which was two years old, climbed up the rocky rock and over towards me. She gets as close to the edge as quickly as she possible could. She stood tall, glancing back with her intelligence but innocent eyes in the direction of her camera. Then she smiled to show her tooth and wouldn’t move unti l I took her photo!四My mother is always ready for rain days. On the night before my sister’s ten birthday, she realized we didn’t have the ‘1’ and ‘0’ candles need to top the cake. My 78-year-old grandfather was visiting, so we jumped in the car and head to the supermarket. Since it was not very much far, we arrived at our destination after we realized. While sorting through the numbered candles, my mother deciding to grab an extra ‘1’ to be ready for next year. At checkout, the teenage cashier glance d at the candle, and then looked at my grandfather. “Is she 101 years old?” she asked confusedly.五This summer, my grandmother accompanies my family to Lijiang, Yunnan Province for a vacation. On the second day of our holiday, she complained of feel unwell, suspecting a bad case of indigestion. Luckily, my mother, the doctor, recognized the symptoms of a heart attack, and an ambulance called. Without my mother’s assistant, my grandmother would likely have died that day. The experience touched me a lot of. I used to think that it would be tired to be a medical worker like my mother and I would rather do something in the future than become a doctor. So when I saw with my own eye how my mother saved my grandma’s life, I made up my mind to be a doctor.六Last summer, my father and I hiked Wutai Mountain, that is located in the northeast of our province. Actually, hike would be an understatement. The mountain is more than 3,000 meter tall, and it took all we had make it. Sure, the journey was a lot of fun, with green shades, cool breezes, and singing birds, but that’s not that made it so much memorable. Climbing with my dad was the experience of the lifetime. It was an opportunity to deep our bond, learn how to better communicate and really worked together a s a team. It was true an experience I’ll never forget.七When I was a kid, I enjoyed make sun catchers. Sometimes I’d used a kit with colorful plastic piece, but it was even more fun to make them with melted crayons or colored tissue paper. They all looked cheery when they lit by the sun. Last year, I saw some of the most prettiest “sun catchers” ever made. I visited the Reims Cathedral in France, which contain stained-glass windows created by artist Marc Chagall. The blue glass, in particular, took my bre ath out. Seeing some of Chagall’s work made me interested again at creating sun catchers. I know the ones I make will never come close to be as lovely as the windows made by the famous artist. And it’s fun to try.八I get the same present from my grandmother every Christmas — a box of handkerchief. I have no intention of opening it, so it always go straight into the charity shop. Last Christmas, my grandmother was staying with us over the holiday, but I had to open present in front of her. I tried to look cheerful, because she was watching me. I open the box unwillingly. To my surprise, I saw a ￥100 note placing in there. I can’t help think about all the cash I’ve given it away to charity over the years. I really don’t like to think about how rudely I must have appeared by not thanking her sincerely about the gift!九Last summer vacation, my friend and I visited Potatso National Park, located about 22 km east of Shangri-La. After walk for several hours, their legs failed themselves and they chose to take a ship. However, I insisted walking. As I headed forward, something white on a tree that caught my eye. I approached the tree and take a closer look at it. Just then, a small group of locals walked up but told me it was a precious eatable mushroom! I collected it careful and bagged it. After we finally returned to a hotel, I asked the owner to cook the mushroom for us. It couldn’t have tasted good. It was such a great reward.十I’d love to be a writer someday. I do a lot of writing, but no one ever read it. I felt a bit of disappointed and wondered what wide the gap between dream and reality was. Then my big break came when I was 13. I went to our city’s local newspapers and asked if I could get my writing publish. To my surprise, they said yes. And, just like that, I got my first writing out into the public. So I hope those who share the same dream with mine can stick with it. Even if it doesn’t become full-time job for you, writing is a significantly skill. Being good at string sentences together will serve you well no matter where life take you.十一Once a month, I, together with ten students from three another high schools, visit a training center for kids with special need. We also bring some snacks for the kids. When we arrive at there, we play games with them. Seeing the happy smiles on their faces make all our efforts worthwhile. The kids enjoy our stay or company. Every time we have to say goodbye, all of us are unwilling part from each other. Perhaps in some people’s eyes, what we do seems of little important. They may think we high school students should devote all of our time for study. And I know it does make the difference, not only to the little kids, but to ourselves.十二With summer approach, Mother set about arranging those heavy winter shoe. In one shoe box, she found two pairs of yellowish sneakers, which was white originally. She felt it a pity throw them away, or had no way to whiten them. Suddenly a good idea struck at me. I took out my oil paints and drew some brightly-colored plants and flowers on them. When I finish my work, the sneakers turned from a ugly duck to a swan. The experience forced me to think what we can do for the environment. With a little imagine, we can turn trash into treasure and thus helping our mother planet.十三Recently, while surfing the Internet, I find an English website: . The website combines vocabulary learning to donation. You are expecting to choose the word with the same meaning like the given word. If you get it rightly, you get a harder question. If you get it wrong, you get an easier question. For each of correct answer, the website donates 10 grain of rice through the World Food Programme to help end hunger. I like the idea. On the one hand, play the vocabulary game helps enlarge my vocabulary, which in turn allow me to better organize my ideas. On other hand, I can make a contribution to the world food problem.十四A snowstorm hit our city last night. The thick snow forced a lot of people to abandon their cars and chose public transportation this morning. Since buses were unavailable near my home, so my father had to drive me school. On our way, there was a slope, that became slippery due to the snow. Our car failed to climb up it and thus caused a traffic jam. Just at this moment, the traffic policeman arrived. Getting off his motorcycle, he began to push the car. See this, other drivers got out of their cars and joined them. With the efforts of these warm-heart people, our car finally made it. I was deeply moved by their kind. It was frozen cold outside but my heart was filled with warmth.十五Last month, my sister and I signed it up for a second-hand sale in our neighborhood. In that day, we placed some old magazines or stuffed toys on our stand. Then a father and daughter came up, that were clearly troubled. The father told us his daughter is suffering from a serious illness. A little girl asked my sister the price of a stuffed bear. My sister looked right her and said, “Give me the bigger smile you’ve got.” The little girl smiled b road. My sister then handed her the bear and said, “That smile is worth a million dollar.” I’ve never been so proud.。