高中英语写作(经典中的经典)(精品课件)

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公开课_高中英语写作PPT教学课件

a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that
递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
flowers are many buildings of different
styles. A stream runs through our
school and you always see everything
reflected in the water. Our school is
just like a garden.
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph
2020/12/12
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Topic paragraph (Introduction paragraph) General statement
2020/12/12
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正确使用有关连接词
时间先后：first, then, later, in the end, eventually,
since then, after a while 转折关系：but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless

高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)

Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua

高中英语应用文写作PPT课件_1

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因为失约，向对方道歉
Dear Peter, I feel terribly sorry to have broken my
promise that I would see a film with you on this coming Sunday afternoon. Please accept my sincere apology!
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正确使用有关连接词
让步关系：though, although, even if, even though, as
递进关系：what’s more/worse, to make matters worse in addition, furthermore on the one hand …on the other hand
I’m looking forward to …
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结尾段 I’m looking forward to your early reply.
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Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇
1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
PIWet’osepaklelnlhkoonwlodnwt/shaeiiddetahathtat Tomb-sweeping Day is
10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)
We all think highly of him .
11.As a result the plan was a failure. (turn out)

高中英语写作公开课ppt课件

PPT内容要精炼简洁，避免冗长繁琐。
文字要简短明了，避免使用大段文字。
字体大小要适中，避免过小或过大。
添加标题
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使用关键词或短语，突出重点信息。
字体颜色要与背景色形成对比，避免看不清。
感谢您的耐心观看
汇报人：
针对不同文体进行写作技巧讲解
记叙文：注意叙事顺序，情节曲折，人物塑造议论文：论点明确，论据充分，论证严密说明文：抓住事物特征，条理清晰，语言准确应用文：格式规范，语言得体，内容符合要求
分析经典英文写作范文，提炼写作技巧
逐句分析，提炼句式、词汇和表达方式
总结范文写作技巧，引导学生掌握写作要领
字体大小适中，颜色搭配合理
字体大小：根据幻灯片布局和观众距离调整，确保清晰易读字体颜色：与背景色形成对比，突出重点内容，避免使用刺眼颜色文字排版：遵循简洁明了原则，避免文字堆积和混乱布局文字数量：精简文字内容，突出重点，避免过多文字干扰观众理解
图文并茂，增强视觉效果
文字与图片结合，增加视觉冲击力图片选择要符合主题，清晰度高图片与文字排版要简洁明了，易于理解色彩搭配要合理，避免过于花哨或单调
课堂总结与作业布置
总结本节课所学内容及重点难点
回顾本节课所学的单词和短语。
复习本节课所学的语法和句型。
强调本节课的重点和难点。
总结本节课所学的写作技巧和方法。
布置课后作业及要求
作业内容：根据本节课所学内容，写一篇80-100词的英语作文。作业要求：认真审题，结合本节课所学知识，注意语法和单词的拼写，书写工整。上交时间：下节课上课前提交，逾期不候。奖励机制：对完成出色的同学进行表扬和奖励。

【课件】高中英语写作公开课(共30张PPT)

Tag to tell you that … • I’d like you to … • Would you please …? • I wonder if you can …? •…
必要的连接词
表示递进：besides, as well, in addition 表示比较：just like, in the same way,
Yours, Li Hua
Ⅳ. post-writing
Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.
写作过程评价标准表
注意：达到8至10项标准为优秀，6至8项为良好；4 至6项为合格；4以下为需努力。
Task 1: person(人称) tense （时态）
Person: The first person Tense: The present and the future tense
Task 2: Decide the structure
Beginning
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.
Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that________________ ___________, and__________________________.
welcome
Writing
Ⅰ. Discussion

高中英语写作 ppt课件

Basic writing
基础写作的写作步骤： I 审题抓要点 II 要点句子化 III 句子简单化 IV 连词成句 V 合并句子并润色
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• 你怎么称呼老师？
• 如果老师最后没有总结一节课的重点的难点，你是否会认为老师的教学方法需要改进？
• 你所经历的课堂，是讲座式还是讨论式？ • 教师的教鞭
8. It is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.
Advertisements, which are very common in modern society, are now playing an important role in our life. They can tell people a lot of information about new products – quality, prices and so on. What’s more, not only can they attract potential customers’ interest but also help increase the selling quantity. However, sometimes advertisements are not true, so we shouldn’t trust them too much. Therefore, it is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.
2.恰当使用有把握的复杂句式
A、从句（定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句） B、倒装句/强调句 C、非谓语动词
1. Nowadays, advertisements are very common. 2. Advertisements are now playing an important role in our life. which 3. Advertisements can tell people a lot of information about new products – quality, prices and so on . What’more,in addition,besides 4. Advertisements can attract potential customers’ interest. not only…but also… 5. They can increase the selling quantHityo.wever 6. Sometimes the advertisemenstos，artehneroetftorruee. 7. We shouldn’t trust advertisements too much.

高中英语写作专题课件 (共17张PPT)

which is close to your university. I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English Speech Contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation. Please call me at 3299517759 if you have any question.
Six steps to write a composition
Analyse the task
Finding out the main points
Forming sentences
Thinking of key points/phrases
Combining the sentences into a
12、要记住，你不仅是教课的教师，也是学生的教育者，生活的导师和道德的引路人。07:29:1707:29:1707:29Monday, September 06, 2021
13、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.谁把握机遇，谁就心想事成。21.9.621.9.607:29:1707:29:17September 6, 2021
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.

高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件(共12张)【优秀课件】

3. It’s my honor to stand here and say something about…
4. Ladies and gentlemen/ Boys and girls, I’m…I’m greatly honored to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about…
1，不怕困难，分析问题，相信自己能过解决问题；
2，与父母、老师、同学交流，探讨解决方法；
3，做好学习或生活计划，及时巩固、总结。
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件（共12 张）【优秀课件】
高中英语书面表达专题：演讲稿课件（共12 张）【优秀课件】
Dear fellow students, It’s my great honor to give a speech here about
Speech
----演讲稿
➢Step Ⅰ：明确演讲主题
写作步骤：
➢Step Ⅱ：分析问题，展开论述
➢Step Ⅲ：提出解决方法或期待
Words and phrases：
➢significant/ significance ➢vital/ vitally ➢ count ➢attach importance/ significance to sth ➢stress/ emphasize ➢make a difference ➢lay/place emphasis on ➢last but not the least
As we all know, summer is the time when we students can relax and enjoy the family time. First of all, outdoor activities are clearly needed because, as we all know, spending too much time at home in front of our computer or TV is not the best way to spend the vacation.

高中英语写作公开课课件(共61张PPT)

表示转折关系的并列句这类并列句常用but （但是；可是），yet（可是；然而），while （而）等来连接，后面分句与前面分句之间有意义上的转折关系。
She said she would be late, yet she arrived on time. Certainly he apologized, however, I won't forgive him. I like tea while she likes coffee.
状语从句（Adverbial cause):从句用作状语
When you cross a main road, you must be careful. Sit down wherever you like. As I didn’t know the way, I asked a policeman. You’ll be late, unless you hurry.
Tom and Mike are American boys.
She likes drawing and often draws pictures for the wall newspapers.
简单句的五种基本句型
不及物动词
宾语
主语
及物动词
间宾+直宾宾语
宾语+宾补
系
动词
表语
第一种句型：S+V
Guide in Writing
丰城二中
Teaching Objectives(教学目标）
By the end of this lesson you’ll be able to ■ find out the mistakes of the compositions given. ■ find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. ■know some practical ways to improve a composition. ■feel less scared in writing.

高中英语-演讲稿写作PPT课件

• Last but not least, Chemistry 结ind尾ust：ry iins cariwticoarldfor
building an better China. If nobody choose it as a career, the whole country will be harmed.
in general
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Words you may need
• 提高歌唱能力 improve the ability of singing • 表达express • 语法grammar • 能门 open the door to a new word • 使与……交流变得可能 make it possible to communicate with ……
yangjunlu假设你是李华你们学校即将举行whyshouldwelearnenglish的演讲比赛请你根据所给要点写一篇演讲稿analysis审题speech演讲稿主题
Lecture: Yangjun Lu
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Topic
• 假设你是李华，你们学校即将举行”why should we learn English”的演讲比赛,请你根据所给要点写一篇演讲稿
First of all, Chemistry help us understand this world better. By learning chemistry hard, we can know that air is consist of oxygen and nitrogen.
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Body: 层次清楚
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Words you may need
• 在网上on the internet • 交朋友make friends • 聊天室chat room • 不管你是从哪个省来的 no matter what province you come from

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• what a clever girl she is!
四、将陈述句改为倒装句。
操作难度★★★★ 写作效果★★★★
• 1. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.
• Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.
• 2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.
• Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.
3.Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般)
4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
原词
替换词
hard
diligently
very
rather extremely
pay attention to attach importance to
happy
delighted enjoyable
more and more the increasing number of
Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.
2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech.
is true the president will give our school a speech.
2、地道原则
［原文］Through traveling, I
learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of
knowledge.
3、避免重复原则
［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
Go through the gate, and you’ll find…. (高级)
When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (一般)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt. (高级)
I got up late this morning. I didn’t catch the early bus. (一般)
1. 词数都符合试题要求。
2. 都覆盖了所有要点，并进行了分段表达，基本上是3段；
3.所用句型以简单句为主，但是使用了一定量的高级词汇，大量的短语和句型，丰富的句式结构增强了表达的效果。
4.都有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
高考评分标准
第五档（21-25）：完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点，用了丰富
一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。
操作难度★★ 写作效果★★
• 1. You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it.
• Either you or I must do it.
If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. (一般)
I got up late this morning, otherwise I could have caught the early bus. (高级)
二、主动句与被动句的互换。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果★★★
• The government should take immediate measures to deal with the present financial crisis.
She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music. (高级)
Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
(一般)
A good idea occurred to me.
/ A good idea suddenly struck me
第二档（6-10）：未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。
第一档（1-5）：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。
0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。
高考阅卷特点：
1. 阅卷时间短； 2.阅卷的速度快； 3.阅卷老师的心理状态：给分中庸平均分 15 4. 高考卷其余部分是标准化计分 ——书面表达是提高分数最大的潜力股
英语书面表达指导
为理想，早起三更，读迎晨曦，磨枪挫剑，不惧兵临城下!
为目标，晚卧夜半，梦别星辰，敛神养气，以备全力以赴!
在迎战高考的日子里，我们同舟共济，脚踏实地,全力以赴，持之以恒，勇攀高峰。
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Beautify your Composition
高考作文评分原则
１．形式上胜人一筹，也就是文章结构，谴词造句
２．内容要点，发挥想象，适当拓展
书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则
语言第一位（语言高级）内容第二位（要点齐全）结构第三位（文章分段）
漂亮、地道
语言第一位（语言高级）
一、高级词汇和句式
二、修辞手法三、有效的连词
四、名人名言或谚语
1.高级词汇短语
思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点（审题） • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词
• 句式多样
• 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？
advanced sentences
定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词
with复合结构常用谚语倒装句
强调句被动句 …
化腐朽为神奇十式
• 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装
四
1、词组优先原则
项
2、地道原则。
原
3、避免重复原则
则4、后、高、长原则— Nhomakorabea后学到、较高级、较长词汇。
1、词组优先原则
［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown. ［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
She has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高级)
2，句式多样，文章增“靓
• 使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉
• 他昨天下午来的。
• 1.He came here yesterday afternoon.
• puters are of great importance in our life.
EX、运用高级词汇：
As a result, the plan failed. (一般)
The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级)
She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般)
•Immediate measures should be taken to deal with the present financial crisis.
People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般)
It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)
• Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever • →smart • →wise • →bright • →intelligent
• 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。
• puters are very important in our life.
• puters play a very important role in our life.
• It was smoking that did great harm to his health.
• It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.
六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。
操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★ 1. 同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段）
Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级)
五、将简单句改为强调句。
操作难度★★★ 写作效果
•
★★★★
1. Smoking did great harm to his health.
• 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.
的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有少些错误，全篇流畅，
连词使用较好。
第四档（16-20）：完全完成试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基本正确，有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。
第三档（11-15）：大错（时态、句子结构等）超过五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。