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丁往道英语写作手册part3第三题答案英语写作手册part3 第三题答案Ш.Rewrite the following by putting the short sentences into complex sentences, or sentences with participial (分词) , prepositional, or other phrases:1. Xu comes from a working-class family and he enrolledin college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin that the library wouldremain open on weekends.3. Last night was a wild night that the thunder roaring,the wind blowing a gale and the rain falling in torrent.4. The temperature must have fallen considerably duringthe night that there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown where he had been away fortwelve years and he looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress, but we still have a longwe to go.7. The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board theplane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. As the girl’s mother was a famous pianist, she beganto learn to play the piano when she was a child. 10. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just beenacquired by France.11. A stormy applause broke forth as soon as she appearedon the stage .12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from Indiawho were once thought to be Egyptians, migrated into Europe.13. Because of the new workers are young and inexperienced,they are eager to learn from the veteran worker. 14. It was a poor quarter where there were lot of smallhuts which doted a hillside with mud walls and straw roofs.15. Hearing that his father was ill, he was anxious togo home to see him, so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.。
Part 11. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, who had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I had not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I did not hear him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than others.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, which was why he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.5. Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related.Lin looks like Li, but they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looks very sleepy.7. The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, thus, they over fulfilled their quota.The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, so they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Mark Twain is a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Part21. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.The dean issued a bulletinwhich said the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a windy night. The thunder roared. The wind blew a gale. The rain fell in torrents.Last night was a windy night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale. the rain falling in torrents.4. There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night for there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain forthe familiar landmarks.After he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown, looking in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist.The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.The gypsies once who were thought to be Egyptians are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. .13. The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.The new workers are young and inexperienced so they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts which had mud walls and straw roofs, dotting a hillside.15. He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.Part31. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.She spoke very fast at the 10 o’clock meeting.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.… of Britain in the 19-20th centuries.3. The houses were mere shanties, and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.… were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. I read the novel on the train, which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel which did not interest me at all.5. A Well-dressed man admitted us to the house, and we later learned that he was a thief.We were admitted to the house by a well-dressed man, who was a thief as we learned later.6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later. The police had helped me.… and/but found them three days later with the help of the police.7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the shop. On the shelves were all kinds of shoes at quite reasonable prices, attracting a lot of customers/buyers.8. Tell Helen, if she is at home, I will come to see her.Tell Helen I will come to see her when she is in.9. Listening attentively, a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, no one was seen.On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is energetic, capable, and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic, capable, and reliable.12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.…promised they would be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he ex poses in them.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices in his novels.14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, a beautiful view attracted my attention.…, I was attr acted by a beautiful view.16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading nearly 10 books in the vacation.17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.…, you can take…18. She said that she would come if she could, but not to wait for her.…, but we need not wait for her.19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.… the good news I posted the letter at once.20. I will go to the lecture, for I like his poems.…, for I like the poems by the speaker.Part41. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.In 1840 the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in our library.Their library has moor books than ours.3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.He returned home after graduation from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in later spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.… that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.… are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.He did not tell the truth.11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.He was so kind as to let me share his umbrella.13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class. Zhao was elected the representative of the class.14. At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and then disappeared and could no longer be seen.After circling the airport for about 10 minutes, the plane disappeared.16. What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work well.17. I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.I would like you to consider whether our journal could publish you article on women scientists in China.18. Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures, he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.Sin ce he had …, he was ware of the possibility of his failing the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough materials to support your point.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing, a thing that occurs every day. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer as well.He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials repeatedly.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23. As a rule, students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading room.Students are usually not allowed to take the books out of this reading room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is because of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.One of the reasons why people in this county are well informed is that there are many newspapers easily available.26. Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled: in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.So many workers are unskilled that the production has been affected.28. There are about 50 patients or so in this ward, among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.Many of the 50 patients in this ward are treated by acupuncture / are taking acupuncture treatment.29. His name is called James Williams.His name is … / He is … / This is …30. Whatever he does, he works seriously with great care, and does his best so as to do it well. Whatever he does, he does his best.。
Part 11. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, who had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I had not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I did not hear him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than others.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, which was why he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.5. Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related.Lin looks like Li, but they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looks very sleepy.7. The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, thus, they over fulfilled their quota.The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, so they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Mark Twain is a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Part21. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.The dean issued a bulletinwhich said the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a windy night. The thunder roared. The wind blew a gale. The rain fell in torrents.Last night was a windy night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale. the rain falling in torrents.4. There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night for there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain for thefamiliar landmarks.After he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown, looking in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist.The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.The gypsies once who were thought to be Egyptians are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. .13. The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.The new workers are young and inexperienced so they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts which had mud walls and straw roofs, dotting a hillside.15. He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.Part31. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.She spoke very fast at the 10 o’clock meeting.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.… of Britain in the 19-20th centuries.3. The houses were mere shanties, and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.… were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. I read the novel on the train, which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel which did not interest me at all.5. A Well-dressed man admitted us to the house, and we later learned that he was a thief.We were admitted to the house by a well-dressed man, who was a thief as we learned later.6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later. The police had helped me. … and/but found them three days later with the help of the police.7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the shop. On the shelves were all kinds of shoes at quite reasonable prices, attracting a lot of customers/buyers.8. Tell Helen, if she is at home, I will come to see her.Tell Helen I will come to see her when she is in.9. Listening attentively, a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, no one was seen.On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is energetic, capable, and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic, capable, and reliable.12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.…promised they would be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he ex poses in them.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices in his novels.14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, a beautiful view attracted my attention.…, I was attr acted by a beautiful view.16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading nearly 10 books in the vacation.17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.…, you can take…18. She said that she would come if she could, but not to wait for her.…, but we need not wait for her.19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.… the good news I posted the letter at once.20. I will go to the lecture, for I like his poems.…, for I like the poems by the speaker.Part41. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.In 1840 the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in our library.Their library has moor books than ours.3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.He returned home after graduation from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in later spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.… that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.… are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.He did not tell the truth.11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.He was so kind as to let me share his umbrella.13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.Zhao was elected the representative of the class.14. At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and then disappeared and could no longer be seen.After circling the airport for about 10 minutes, the plane disappeared.16. What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work well.17. I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.I would like you to consider whether our journal could publish you article on women scientists in China.18. Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures, he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.Sin ce he had …, he was ware of the possibility of his failing the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough materials to support your point.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing, a thing that occurs every day. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer as well.He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials repeatedly.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23. As a rule, students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading room.Students are usually not allowed to take the books out of this reading room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is because of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.One of the reasons why people in this county are well informed is that there are many newspapers easily available.26. Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled: in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.So many workers are unskilled that the production has been affected.28. There are about 50 patients or so in this ward, among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.Many of the 50 patients in this ward are treated by acupuncture / are taking acupuncture treatment.29. His name is called James Williams.His name is … / He is … / This is …30. Whatever he does, he works seriously with great care, and does his best so as to do it well. Whatever he does, he does his best.第一题改错五个句子（发给你的文档里的句子挑五个，你到时候用WORD文档查找功能帮我找下，文档里每个题号上下俩句子，上边是错的我的题，下边是改了的答案，你给我念答案就行）第二题同义词选择填空十个词给一个词然后出俩选项看哪个意思和它一样到时候题干里的生词我觉得可能得联系上下文理解，应该不单单只是词义，不过不管了，到时候我把题干和AB俩选项的词告诉你，你查完告诉我A还是B就行第三题第四题第五题我自己搞定但是有可能会有不会的词，发下卷来我先把不会的词都标出来，你帮我查一下，拜托啦魁姐第六题是写作两个段落给俩时事热点围绕热点写一段话，不用写作文，一段话就行。
第三章造句Ⅰ. 完整句和不完整句1. 完整句（1）完整句的语法结构必须完整，即一个完整句必修至少有一个主语和一个谓语动词；如果该谓语动词是及物动词，还得有一个宾语；若是个系动词，则必须有一个表语或补语：He came.She wrote a letter.Dr. Smith is a professor.（2）一个完整的句子以大写字母开始，以句号结束。
2. 不完整句有时为取得特殊效果可用到不完整的句子。
如：It is hard to hear a new voice, as hard as it is to listen to an unknown language...Why? Out of fear. The world fears a new experience more than it fears anything. Because a new experience displaces so many old experiences. And it is like trying to use muscles stiff for ages. It hurts horribly.—D. H. Lawrence He was, I think, very handsome. I gather this from photographs and from my own memories of him, dressed in his Sunday best and on his way to preach a sermon somewhere, when I was little. Handsome, proud, and ingrown, “like atoe-nail,” somebody said.—James Baldwin 在上面第一篇中有三个不完整的句子(“why?”“Out of fear.”以及“Because a new experience...”)，在第二篇中有一个(“Handsome，proud”)。
P 14A.1. Whenever I go out these days I always take my raincoat.2. When they were on holiday, someone broke out into their house and stole some valuable paintings.3. Having fought for three hours, the firemen finally managed to put out the fire.4. We all have some faults, since nobody in this world is quite perfect.5. The train to Shanghai leaves at 21:35.6. Though it began to rain, the children went on playing outdoors.7. He was able to finish all his exercises before the class was over in spit or the interruption.8. Strangely, he avoided mentioning her name.B.1. One of her greatest joys in life is eating desserts, such as pudding, cake and ice cream.2. Because he had drunk too much, he had to leave the party early. His stomach was like a volcano that was ready to erupt.3. While sitting in the office, she realized she had lost her valuable ring. But she happily found it in the women’s room after work.4. My favorite teacher, our volleyball coach, who is a native of Indian, is moving to another city next year.5. After sitting for a long time in his office, I was asked by the doctor finally into the examining room.6. Wedging his way out of the dining hall, he discovered a terrible hall beyond imagination.7. The spreading of educational and cultural norm may affect the attitudes and sense of a nation.8. Nearly everyone knows the truth after our leader mentioned it at the conference.C.1. In 1934, an eight-minute Mickey Mouse movie was produced, so Walt Disney became a star.2. The worst time to be in the street in Cairo was after the midnight when the night-clubs were closing and everybody went home.3. When there was a power cut in the hospital, the surgeon had to cancel the operation because it was very dangerous to operate in dim light.4. George is an amicable person, who gets on well with everyone in the company.5. When Tom wanted to come back home, the telephone in the office began to ring.6. The energy radiated by sun goes into every direction, but only a small part of falls on the earth.7. When I slid my aching bones into the hot tub water, I realized that there was no soap, but I did not want to get out again.8. Because Bob’s furniture store, where I worked as a shop assistant, just went out of business, I have to look for another job.9. Since you are sent damaged goods, the store must replace the items and issue a full refund.10. I’m not going to eat in the school cafeteria any more because of the unbearable service, high price and monotonous food.。
第二章措辞Ⅰ. 词的类型据语体风格，常用的词（规范英语词汇）可分为三类：正式的、一般的、非正式的。
1. 正式词汇（又称作学术性的词、文雅的词或“大”词）（1）适用文体正式文体，如学术性或理论性著作、政治和法律文件，以及正式的演讲或报告。
（2）特点多有三个以上的音节，多数源于希腊或拉丁文。
下面这段文章中包含一些体现正式文体的词汇：There is nothing new in the recognition, within a given language, of a distinction between common usage and uses of the language for more restricted purposes and often enough, perhaps characteristically, more elevated purposes. The monolithic nature of English is not questioned when literary essayists like Emerson contrast poetry and common speech. The latter is recognized in America to be the proper subject for the investigation of linguists who, however, now show some incipient inclination to investigate poetry, too, and other noncasual utterances in a given language.—C. F. Voegelin 正式的或学术性的词汇有：recognition, characteristically, elevated, monolithic,investigation, incipient, inclination, noncasual, utterances等。
英语论文写作课后答案修辞1、Her rich relatives rained birthday presents on her only son.2、Wrong ideas may hurm a man just like deseaes.3、Some words may be defaced by careless usage.4、The leaves are trembling in the cold wind.5、The storm was so angry that it wanted to destroy everything in its way.6、Many people bowed before Force,but eventually Force would surrender to Reason.7、Selfless people are like cows, which eat straw but produce milk.8、“What do you think of the roast duck?” “Not bad.”9、His friends praised his daughter’s performances to the skies.10、His writing is clear and clean.11、His unfriendly tongue surprised her.12、There is fertile soil for popular music in China today.答案：隐喻，明喻隐喻隐喻隐喻拟人明喻缩小夸大头韵换喻隐喻Simile metaphor synecdoche metonymy personification overstatement understatement改错1、Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of anexploration team working in the Arctic.Our host,who had been a member of an exploration team working in Arctic,entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure.2、When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed,I had not heardhim when he came back.Because I hadbeen sleeping soundly.When I woke up, I saw him asleep in bed,I had not heard him when he came back,because I had been sleeping soundly.3、Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay thanother.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers ,and that was why he got higher pay than other.4、No student could answer the question ,even Yao, who was usually quick in answeringquestions ,was silent.No student could answer that question. Even yao,who was usually quick in answering questions,was silent.5、Lin looks like Li,however,they are not related.Lin looks like li;however,they are not related.6、The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle.His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy. The old man hunched forward,his head tilted at an angle,his eyes half closed,looking very sleepy.7、Their work was well planned ,everybody worked with great enthusiasm,thus, they overfulfilledtheir quota.Their work was well planned,and everybody worked with great enthusiasm. As a result,they over fulfilled their quota.8、Mark Twain, a well-known American writer,whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was nodoubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.The experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt animportant factor that helped to make Mark Twain,the American writer,to become so famous.改进1.She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.The meeting started at ten o’clock,and she began to speak,she spoke very fast.2.Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known English playwrights of the 20th century.3.The houses were mere shanties,and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.The houses were shanties,with rags stuffed in the cracks and boles.4.I read the novel on the train,which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel,which did not interest me at all.5. A well-dressed man admitted us to the house,and we later learned that he was a thief.We later learned that the well-dressed man who admitted us to the house was a thief.6.I lost some important documents and found them three days later.the police had helped me.The police helped me to find some important documents which I had lost three days before.7.We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us,and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves ,and theprices were quite reasonable ,and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us when we entered the shop. We saw all kinds of shoes on the shelves,and the prices were quitereasonable. A lot of customerswere buying them.8.Tell helen, if she is at home ,I wil come to see her.Tell Helen,if she is at home,that I will come to see her.9.Listening attentively ,a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively,he/she/I heard a faulty sound.10.On entering the room,no one was seen.L entered the room and saw no one.11.Fred is energetic,capable ,and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic and capable. You can rely on him.12.The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.The children promised to be careful and return home early.13.Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he exposes in them.Dickens’novels offer no solution to the social injunstices exposed to them.14.My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast,or your watch is slow.15.Glancing out of the window,a beautiful view attracted my attention.A beautiful view out of the window attracted my attention.16.He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading almost ten books during the vacation.17.If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.If you are interested in paiting,you can take a course at the evening school.18.She said that she would come if she could,but not to wait for her.She said that she would come if she could,but we needn’twait for her.19.To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.To tell my friends the good news,I posted the letter at once.20.I will go to the lecture,for I like his poems.I will go to the lecture,because I like the speaker’poems.改写句子1、Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.2、The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.3、Last night was a wild night.the thunder roared. The wind blew a gale.the rain fell in torrents.4、There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night.5、He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain for the familiarlandmarks.6、We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.7、The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.8、There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them wereforeigners.9、The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a fomous pianist.10、Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France.11、She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.12、The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they werethought to be Egyptians.13、The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14、It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. Theydotted a hillside.15、He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the stationearly in the morning to buy a ticket.1.Xu ,who comes from a working-class family,enrolled in college last fall.2.The dean issued a bulletin,saying/which said the library would remain open on weekends./doc/841218438.html,st night was a wild night,with the thunder roaring , the wind blowing a gale and the rain falling intorrents.4.The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night,for there are icicles on the trees.5.Twelve years later he returned to his hometown,and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.6.Although we have made some progress,we still have a long way to go.7.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8.On board the plane there were over two hundred passengers,about one third of whom wereforeigners.9.The girl,whose mother was a fomous pianist,began to learnto play the piano when she was a child.10.In 1769,when Napoleon was born in Cousica,the island had just been acquired by France.11.A stormy applause broke forth the moment ,she appeared on the stage.12.Once thought to be Egytians,the gypsies are really a nomadic people from India,who migrated intoEurope.13.Young and inexperienced,the new workers are eagere to learn from the veteran workers.14.There was a poor quarter on the hillside with a lot of small huts withmud walls and staw roofs.15.On hearing that his father was illl,be was anxious to go home to see him,so he went to the stationearly in the morning to buy a ticket.1.The oplum war broke out in 1840.2.Their library has more books than ours.3.He returned home after graduating from college.4.We planned to meet before sunrise in the morning.5.The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.6.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7.I play badminton as well as my brother.8.To his friends his attitude was a puzzle.9.These watermelons are large and sweet.10.He did not tell the truth.11.A number of students want to join the drama club.12.He was kind enough to let me share his umbrella.13.The whole class elected zhao their representative.14.I am taking two courses: world history and geography.15.The plane cireled the airport for about ten minutes andthen disappeared.16.I mean that he has not done his work well enough.17.I would like you to consider whether you would like to publish your recent article on womenscientists in china in our journal.18.As he had missed many lectures,he knew that he might fail the exam,19.You must work out an outline for your paper,and then you need to collect all kinds of material tosupport your point of view.20.In that country,violent deaths occur every day.21.He is not only a good pianist,but also a good singer.22.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23.Students are not allowed to take books out of this reading room.24.According to the speaker,the respongsibility system has helped to increase production.25.One reason why people are well informed in this city is that there are many newspapers easilybought or subscribed to.26.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27.There are so many workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory hasbeen affected.28.There are about 50 patients in this ward,and many are being given acupuncture treatment.29.He is called james williams.30.Whatever he does,he works seriously and does his best.1.Huang ,the tallest man of the team,is over two meters tall.2.After going bankrupt,social position,reputation and friends,even life itself,were no longer interestingto him.3.Unexpectedly,he decided to take the job .4.Under no circumstances will china be the first to use nuclear weapons.5.Of the twenty students in the class,yang alone can do the work.6.As a result of reform and opening-up policy during the past 30 years,china has changed a great deal.7.According to newspaper reports,she was the first chinese woman who had won a gold medal forfigure skating in an international contest.8.While serving as a cabin boy on the ship,robert made an attempt to do all the things that the sailormembers of the crew usually did.9.Among his neighbors was the famous writer,mrs.jones.10.The patient help of the teachers enabled the students to make good progress.11.She often helps to improve her comrades’pronunciation.12.Although there are few mistakes in the language,the composition is not very good,because thecontent is not interesting.1.i got up a little later than usual on Sunday morning. After washing and a quick breakfast. I started going to town to buy the dictionary recommended by the teacher. At the school gate I saw li ping and ask him if he was going to town too. He said he was ,so we decided to go together. All the buses were crowded, and we had to wait for a long time at the bus stop before we could get on one. An hour later,we got off at a busy street where there werethree bookstores. We went to the first one and didn’t find the dictionary. In the second one we were told the dictionary had been sold out. It was in the third that we finally bought the dictionary. After that li ping and I went to other stores where we bought various things. We returned to school just in time for lunch.2. ludwig van beethovenm,the major composer of th 19th century, overcame many personal miseries to achieve artistic greatness. He was born in bonn,Gemany in 1770,and first shudied music with a court organist. His father,who was given to heavy drinking,was excessively strict. After his mother died,when he was appointed deputy court organist at a surprisingly early age, and he played the harpsichord and the viola at the same time . in the 1792 he went to vicnna to study music under haydn. While remaining unmarried all his life,he was frequently troubled by financial worries. He was continually plagued by ill health. The worst happened in 1818 when an ear intechon led to his deamess. However,his writing of music continued in spite of his handicap. Goethe said that beetboven had an”untamed personality”. This may have been true,but his music shows great discinline and control.。
英语写作手册第三版课后答案part two1、Since we have _____ money left,we can't afford the expensive computer. [单选题] *A. a littleB. a fewC. little(正确答案)D. few2、I have a _____ every day to keep fit. [单选题] *A. three thousand meter walkB. three-thousands-meters walkC.three-thousand-meters walkD. three-thousand-meter walk(正确答案)3、( )He killed the enemy guard and made away _________the villagers. [单选题] *A. with the helpB. with helpC. with help ofD. with the help of(正确答案)4、I walked too much yesterday and （）are still aching now. [单选题] *A. my leg's musclesB. my leg muscles(正确答案)C. my muscles' of legD. my legs' muscles5、_____, Martin can reach the branch of that tall tree at the gate. [单选题] *A. As a short manB. Being shortC. As he is shortD. Short as he is(正确答案)6、Obviously they didn’t see the significance of the plan. That is（）the problem lies. [单选题] *A. where(正确答案)B. whyC. /D. how7、——Can you come on Monday or Tuesday? ——Im afraid（）of them is possible. [单选题] *A.neither(正确答案)B. eitherC. noneD.both8、7．—________ is the Shanghai Wild Animal Park?—It’s 15km east of the Bund. [单选题] * A．WhoB．WhatC．WhenD．Where (正确答案)9、—Would you like some milk?—Yes, just _____, please. [单选题] *A. a little(正确答案)B. littleC. a fewD. few10、Many young people like to _______ at weekends. [单选题] *A. eat out(正确答案)B. eat upC. eat onD. eat with11、We should _______ a hotel before we travel. [单选题] *A. book(正确答案)B. liveC. stayD. have12、The traffic jams often happen in _______ hours. [单选题] *A. lunchB. workC. leisureD. rush(正确答案)13、Almost every one of us could see her anxiety from the（）on her face. [单选题] *A. appearanceB. feelingC. movementD. expression(正确答案)14、We can see ______ stars at night if it doesn’t rain. [单选题] *A. a thousand ofB. thousandsC. thousand ofD. thousands of(正确答案)15、If you get _______, you can have some bread on the table. [单选题] *A. happyB. hungry(正确答案)C. worriedD. sad16、Though my best friend Jack doesn’t get（）education, he is knowledgeable. [单选题] *A. ManyB. littleC. fewD. much(正确答案)17、—______some nice crayons. I think they are ______.（）[单选题] *A. Here is; Betty’sB. Here are; BettyC. Here is; BettyD. Here are; Betty’s(正确答案)18、Mike and his friend are going to the _______ to see the new action movie tonight. [单选题] *A. book shopB. restaurantC. concertD. cinema(正确答案)19、He doesn’t smoke and hates women _______. [单选题] *A. smokesB. smokeC. smokedD. smoking(正确答案)20、______ pocket money did you get when you were a child? （）[单选题] *A. WhatB. HowC. How manyD. How much(正确答案)21、____ father is a worker. [单选题] *A.Mike's and Mary'sB. Mike and Mary's(正确答案)C. Mike's and MaryD. Mike and Marys'22、You can't rely on Jane as she is _____ changing her mind and you will never know what she is going to do next. [单选题] *A. occasionallyB. rarelyC. scarcelyD. constantly(正确答案)23、23．Hurry up! The train ________ in two minutes. [单选题] *A．will go(正确答案)B．goC．goesD．went24、My brother often does ______ homework first after school.（）[单选题] *A. heB. his(正确答案)C. sheD. her25、It’s one of _______ means of transportation. [单选题] *A. cheapB. convenientC. second-handD. the most convenient(正确答案)26、There are trees on both sides of the broad street. [单选题] *A. 干净的B. 狭窄的C. 宽阔的(正确答案)D. 宁静的27、I_____you that I had made the right decision. [单选题] *A.ensuredB.insuredC.assured(正确答案)D.for sure28、—Why do you call him Mr. Know?—______ he knows almost everything that we want to know.（）[单选题] *A. SoB. OrC. ButD. Because(正确答案)29、I saw the boy _______?the classroom. [单选题] *A. enter intoB. enter(正确答案)C. to enter intoD. to enter30、We can _______ some information about this city on the Internet. [单选题] *A. look up(正确答案)B. look likeC. look afterD. look forward to。
《英语写作手册》 PART THREE 参考答案I. Read the following and say what kind of sentence each is (loose, periodic, balanced):1. P2. P3. P4. L5. B6. P7. P8. P9. B 10. BII. Read the following, point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections:1. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventures, for he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up, I saw him asleep in bed. But I had not heard him when he came back because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, so he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, including Yao. Though he was usually quick in answering questions, he was silent.5. Lin looks like Li; however, they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward, with his head tilting at an angle, eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.7. Because their work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, and they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain’s experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Ш. Rewrite the following by putting the short sentences into complex sentences, or sentences with participial, prepositional, or other phrases:1. Xu comes from a working-class family, and he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who enrolled in college last fall comes from a working-class family.Xu, who enrolled in college last fall, comes from a working-class family.Though Xu comes from a working-class family, he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.Xu, who comes from a working-class family, enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin that the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a wild night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale, and the rain falling in torrents.4. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night because there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown that he had been away from for twelve years and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.Because he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress, but we still have a long we to go.Though we have made some progress, we still have a long we to go.7. The sky was cloudless, the sun shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child as her mother was a famous pianist.10. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. A stormy applause broke forth as soon as / when she appeared on the stage.12. The gypsies, who were once thought to be Egyptians migrating into Europe,are really a nomadic people from India.13. Because the new workers are young and inexperienced, they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter with a lot of small huts, dotting a hillside with mud walls and straw roofs.15. Hearing that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to see him, so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.2.To omit unnecessary elements3.To connect related words/ parts properly1. She began to speak at the meeting at ten o’clock.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights in the world.3. The houses were mere shanties with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. The novel I read on the train didn’t interest me at all.5. The well-dressed man who admitted us to the house was later learned to bea thief.6. I lost some important documents. With the help of the police, I found them three days later.7. When we entered the shop, a saleswoman greeted us. We saw all kinds of shores on the shelves. Because the prices were quite reasonable, a lot of customers were buying them.8. Tell Helen I will come to see her if she is at home.9. Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is so energetic and capable that you can rely on him.12. The children promised to be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices that he exposes.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices that he exposes in novels.14. Either my watch is fast, or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, I was attracted by a beautiful view.16. He finished reading ten books during the vacation.17. If interested in painting, you can take a course at the evening school.18. She said that she would come if she could. She also told us not to wait for her if she didn’t come.19. I told my friend the good news at once after I posted the letter.I told my friend the good news that the letter was posted at once.20. I like his poems, so I will go to his lecture.I will go to the lecture because/if I like his poems.V. Revise the following sentences. Try to make them concise.Ways to achieve conciseness1.Avoiding repetition2.Deleting unrelated / unnecessary words or phrases3.Changing the sentence structure1. In 1840, the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in ours.3. He returned home after he graduated from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth.11. A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the umbrella.13. Zhao was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.14. At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled the airport for about ten minutes and then disappeared.16. In my opinion, he has not done his work very well.17. I would like you to consider whether or not you will publish your recent article on women scientists in China.18. Because he had missed many lectures, he was aware that he would fail the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then collect all kinds of materials to support your point of view.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.This pretty actress appears in TV serials repeatedly.23. As a rule, students are not allowed to take books out of this reading-room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is that many newspapers can easily be bought or subscribed to.26. Statistics show that from 1980-1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced workers that production of the factory has been affected.28. About 50 patients in this ward are being given acupuncture treatment.29. His name is James Williams.30. Whatever he does, he works with great care.VI. Rewrite the following sentences, emphasizing the man idea in each.Ways to achieve emphasis:1.Inversion2.Negative-positive statements3.Placing: beginning/ end4.Repetition5.Subordination6.Emphatic words / phrases / sentences7.Alliteration1. Huang is over two meters tall, and he is the tallest man of the team.2. After he went bankrupt, he lost interest in social position, reputation, life itself, and even friends.3. He decided to take the job, which was something unexpected.4. Under no circumstances will China be the first to use nuclear weapons.5. Yang alone can do the work, though there are twenty students in the class.6. As a result of reform and the open policy, China has changed a great deal during the past 14 years.7. According to newspaper reports, she was the first Chinese woman who had wona gold medal for figure skating in an international contest.8. Robert attempted to do all the things that the sailor member of the crew usually did while serving as a cabin boy on the ship.9. Among his neighbors was Mrs. Jones, the famous writer.10. With the teacher’s patient help, the students mad good progress.11. She often helps her class to improve their pronunciation.12. Though there are few mistakes in the language of the composition, it is not very good because the content is not interesting.VII. Rewrite the following passage, giving the sentences some variety in length and structure.Ways to achieve variety1.To use short sentences between long ones2.To use simple sentences between compound and complex ones3.To use periodic sentences between loose ones4.To use occasional question, command, or exclamation among statements(Omitted.)。
