英语写作---遣词造句
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学会遣词造句,丰富英语写作作者:吴晓飞来源:《作文成功之路·教育教学研究》2014年第03期【摘要】高中学生之所以写作水平不高,或者认为英语写作贫乏无味,大多是因为词汇不足,句式单调,缺乏词汇和漂亮句子的点缀。
本文旨在探讨如何使学生在写作训练中学会使用恰当、“高级”的词汇并灵活运用句式,从而提高他们英语写作水平。
【关键词】遣词造句英语写作“千里之行,始于足下”。
高中英语写作基础在于遣词造句。
高中生的思维已足够丰富成熟,但是面对一篇有具体写作要求的英语作文时,却在书面表达上显得捉襟见肘。
究其原因,就是平时缺乏基本的遣词造句能力的训练和积累。
虽然曾从事了大量的词汇和短语的记忆,却只是散乱的词、短语和句型,没有使之内化成自己的语言,结果没办法自然准确地表达自己独特的思想。
一、遣词1.积累新词,避免重复使用简单词汇英语词汇极多:《牛津英语词典》收了40多万个词。
当然我们日常生活中使用的单词就几千而已。
但是,从高中学生普遍的英语写作看,使用的词汇笼统、简单、重复。
比如,描述“好”必用very good、very nice、be good at、do well in等。
然而,在高中阶段表示“好”的词,就形容词而言,就有许多高级的词汇,如excellent、wonderful、terrific、fabulous、splendid、extraordinary、incredible、outstanding、amazing等等。
常用的词按文体来分有正式的(formal),一般的(general),口语的(colloquial)。
高中写作中,应当尽量“去口语化”,尽量使用正式用语,就是我们所谓的“高级词汇”。
如下列单词,前一个是一般词汇,后者是正式词汇。
serious(严重的)——severepoor(贫穷的)——needyrich(富裕的)——wealthygood(有益的)——beneficialbad(不好的,不受欢迎的)——undesirablehowever(然而,不过)——neverthelessimprove(提高,加强)——promote/strengthensurprising(惊人的,非凡的)——extraordinaryif(如果……)——provided/providing2.根据语境,使用恰当的词汇学习用英语写作的中国学生应先学会使用最有用也最常用的词来表达自己的思想。
1、不要再用more and more了;该词组被评为中国恶俗词组榜第一!!老师说。
可以用a growing number of..2、inevitable。
不可避免。
3、should/would/could/may/might;为什么要用这个5个词?首先,语气比较委婉,不会很肯定,显的谦虚;其次,可以不考虑动词的形式;所以这五个词被称为最贱的词。
4、physically beneficial身体健康;副词+形容词的表达方式,比较好看,接下来也会有举例;5、worldwide/globly/internationally famous 举世闻名6、科技类作文;科技发展。
outlineFOR:Convenient&efficient 方便、高效Enrich lifestyle 丰富生活Environmentlly friendly(副词修饰形容词)绿色环保AGAINST:Physically harmful/detrimental 危害健康Negative impact on the youth 危害青少年Insecurity of information 信息不安全7、开头方法一:BackgroundCon troversy (2 different/opposite ideas)As/Being a controversial issue,。
作为有争议的问题。
Now days,the issue on。
is highly debatable,and ideas vary from person to person。
不同的人有不同的观点。
(不要用different people 。
)Some would claim 。
,while some others may suggest。
一些人认为。
另一些人认为。
Some would claim。
,while the idea。
is still held by some others。
读后续写素材积累:跟名著学遣词造句读后续写基本以记叙文为主,记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容,以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。
环境描写是记叙文的要素之一,指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。
其中,社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。
自然环境是指自然界的景物,如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。
我们今天来看看英语名著是怎么描写动作、情绪和环境。
动作描写He looked at me very gravely, and put his arms around my neck.他非常严肃地看着我,用胳膊搂住我的脖子。
——《小王子》I didn’t know how long I sat there helplessly waiting, but eventually I heard the door flung open as he rushed into the hut.我不知道自己无助地坐在那里等了多久,但最终我听到他冲进小屋时,门猛地打开了。
——《弗兰肯斯坦》This idea was so upsetting to Tom that he jumped out of bed and ran to the window.这个主意让汤姆很不高兴,他从床上跳起来,跑到窗边。
——《圣诞颂歌》The car has gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.车子几秒钟就开走了,爱丽丝难以置信地摇摇头。
——《爱丽丝梦游仙境》I ran back home, smiling and skipping along.我蹦蹦跳跳地笑着跑回家。
Her pulses beat fast, and the blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.她的心跳加快,热血温暖了身体的每个部位,使她感觉到身心完全地放松了。
话题四业余爱好写作前奏曲【话题分析】中学生的业余爱好的话题主要有以下几个方面:读书、运动、音乐、舞蹈、收集、网络、电视、摄影等。
【词汇集锦】【句型展示】1.He does some reading after school every afternoon .2.He plays basketball with his friends when they have time .3.She likes listening to pop music when she is free.4.He likes collecting stamps .5.On weekends he chat online with his net friends on QQ.6.He likes watching street dances on TV .7.She likes taking photos of lovely animals .8.He goes fishing or boating on vacation .【遣词造句】I.根据汉语提示完成句子:1.He ______ _______ _______(对---感兴趣)modern dance .2.He often ______ _______ (看电视)with his family in the evening .3.She _______ _______ (打网球)______ _______(在周末).4.Lily sometimes _______ ________ ________(听歌曲)______ ______ ______(在网上).5._______ interesting _______ _______ ________(去远足).6.He wants ______ _______ _______ _______(成为一名歌手).1.is interested in2.watches TV 3,plays tennis; on weekends4.listens to music ; on the Internet5.It’s; to go hikingII.根据图片和提示语,写出一句话。
如何遣词造句英语四级写作“折戟沉沙铁为消,自将磨洗认前朝。
”每次大学英语四级,许多考生总会在这场“无硝烟的战斗”中饱受煎熬。
他们总会存在这样一个问题,四级考试为什么这么难,什么原因导致自己总是通不过四级考试,又该如何提高英语成绩,如何通过大学英语四级考试(CET-4)。
特别是对于很多学艺术的同学而言,能否顺利通过四级考试将直接关系到他们的保研资格与前途。
针对以上问题,我特意写了这篇文章,通过教学与,对考生存在的问题以及解决方法作全面地解剖,希望对各位考生能够有所帮助。
四级考试从1987年以来已经走过了21个年头。
xx年6月实行新四级考试,12月份开始全国将全面推行新四级考试。
对于新四级考试,我们可以清楚地看到,虽然考试难度较之以前有所偏易,但是考试本身对于英语的全面考察却是加强了。
新四级考试,题型分为写作、快速阅读、听力、根本阅读、选词填空、完型填空和汉译英。
就我个人而言,写作、听力和阅读(快速阅读和根底阅读)是重点,因此考生对于这三局部的得分多少,将直接决定着其考试分数的上下。
下面就让我们依次来解析一下。
1.不会写所谓不会写指的是,当考试拿过一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提笔进展写作。
笔者认为主要是存在以下两个原因:一是考生确实无话可说;二是心里虽然有话,但是拿捏不准该写哪句为妙。
于是思前想后、犹豫不决,始终不敢提笔进展写作。
2.写不好所谓写不好就是,拿过作文题,没有明确的写作思路,不按套路出牌;或是简单汉语逻辑思维写作,不符合英语写作标准,近而没有文采。
原因在于:第一是平时没有养成良好的写作习惯;第二对于英语写作的句式特点以及整体文章构造框架不了解。
第一,首先必须熟悉英语四级写作详细要求。
英语四级考试要求考生在30分钟内写出120字的文章。
体材主要有议论文(分为“Topic题型”和A&B又称“正反观点题”)应用文(主要是书信)、图表文等。
针对不同的体裁,写作思路是不同的。
比方,以议论文举例来说:1.议论文写作思路2.议论文分类:阐述主题型作文(Topic);正反观点型作文(A&B)3.阐述主题型作文写作:(这类题型作文要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进展论述)4. 正反观点型作文(A&B)(这类题型作文通常从正反两方面来分别论述,最后得出你自己的结论。
遣词造句提咼英语写作能力的有效方法遣词造句——提高 英语写作能力的有效方法广东省佛山市华材职业技术学校 黄光辉【摘要】 写作能力的培养和提高是英语教学的重要任务之一, 而遣词造句是写作的 。
目前学生英语作文的错误是非常普遍且相当严重。
造成这种现状的原因有两个 一是教师在教学中未能充分的重视; 二是教师缺乏必要的科学指导和有针对性的训关键词】遣词造句 典型错误 原因分析 对策研究遣词造句是写作的基础。
在学生的英语作文中, 有关遣词造句方面的错误是非常普 遍且相当严重的。
因此,在英语教学中依据学生的典型错误, 加强这方面的指导与训练 分必要的。
本文就这一问题加以探讨,提出一些具有针对性和可操作性的建议。
一、遣词遣词亦作“遣辞”,就是运用词语。
(一)选词要贴切准确。
用词准确不仅指拼写正确,还指选用的词要搭配得当,并 与句意相吻合。
在学生的习作中,用词错误主要体现在以下几方面:1.同义词误用。
例如:你更应注意你的发音。
【错误】 You should notice your pronunciation more.【正确】 You should pay more attention to your pronunciation.【分析】此处的“注意” (看到或发觉到等)。
2.名词与动词误用。
例如:最后,工人们成功地解决了这个问题。
【错误】 At last, the workers successed in dealing with the problem.【正确】 At last, the workers succeeded in dealing with the problem. 【分析】succes (s 成功)是名词,而“成功”在句中作谓语应该用动词, 故用 succee 3.形容词与副词误用。
例如:这音乐好听,因此这张唱片就好卖。
【错误】 The music sounds well, so the record sells good.【正确】 The music sounds good, so the record sells well.【分析】句中 sound 是连系动词,需与形容词搭配;而 sell 是实义动词,需用副词 修饰 4.不及物动词与及物动词误用。
遣词造句v极为华丽1、我小心翼翼地遣词造句,以免走火入魔。
2、可是,就在两家结成了儿女亲家之后,熊汝霖依然我行我素,继续在诏书和公文的遣词造句上打压贬低郑彩一党。
3、至于遣词造句和意境,可能达不到尽善尽美的程度,我可以接受大家的批评和建议。
4、考查的词项间关系不是非常明确,需要仔细分析其内在的隐含关系,运用遣词造句法等分析方法进行深层次挖掘,这样才能区分迷惑性选项,选出正确答案。
5、他在形式上讲究绝对的简洁利落,只要短句,不要长句;他在遣词造句上习惯于以大量的“如果”。
6、而新概念属于经典的英文教材,虽然内容算不上多跟得上潮流,但是里面的遣词造句都很有讲究,自己对它的掌握也就从背诵开始吧。
7、字如春蚓秋蛇,文似地卦天书,别说遣词造句修辞,就是常用的标点符号都常有错,写个请假条也歪歪斜斜。
8、戈圣洁思考了很久,组织自己的遣词造句,然后才把让其他的特种兵把博士们都召集起来开会。
9、我可以负责任地告诉大家,还真是有一些孩子,他们的文字太有天赋了,无论遣词造句,运思谋篇,都才华横溢,议论风发,触处皆春。
10、这时要适当转变答题思路,在不能确定题干词项之间关系的时候,综合运用代入法、排除法、遣词造句法,比较词项间的细微差异,选出共同属性最多的选项。
11、要想写好文章,就必须过好遣词造句这一关。
12、写文章要有内涵有深度,尽量避免那些可有可无的遣词造句和无关痛痒的苍白叙述。
13、这个海龙王读过不少书嘛,这遣词造句倒是颇为可圈可点。
14、各种文体除了表达的内容要好,要准确,要合乎道理,还要在篇章结构、遣词造句、对仗排偶、典故象征等方面遵循许多约定俗成的规范。
15、遣词造句,舞文弄墨,自古百花齐放,百家争鸣,有糟粕方能出精华。
16、所谓知彼知己,百战不殆。
了解了考研英语的试题特点,考试要求以及基本的应对方法,从而提高写作的遣词造句水平。
17、如何遣词造句从而让受众禁不住去阅读,并太过于迫切以至于迫不及待的去回复.18、不应该啊,发稿前我反反复复的看了三遍,没有发现错别字,遣词造句也没问题,难道看漏了?19、据罗新老师说,先生在公开场合发言,一定都是精心准备,遣词造句常常反复思量数日之久。
如何有效提高英文写作遣词造句能力-英语写作技巧如何有效提升英文写作遣词造句水平学生在使用英语实行表达时的现状.主要表现为表达过于简单。
过于简单的表达往往不是精炼,而是不到位,说不到重点而流于表面,这样就不能给读者留下深刻的印象,因为让人有深刻印象的东西往往都是具体的而非空可的。
比虫口:If they have the excessive assignment.they willhave pressure.这是学生作文当中出现的一句话,其位置是在具体的论据之中。
显然这样一句话如果以一种分论点的形式出现的话,是勉强能够接受的.但是放在论据当中就不合适了,因为论据要求非常具体,作者应尽量用详细的论据说明具体问题。
否则,文章就会显得很空洞。
现在我们回过头来再看这句话,该句仅仅传达了这样一层意思:有过多的课业负担学生就会有很多压力。
很明显,这层意思是很表面化而且空洞的。
那么,如何将这种句子变得更加具体呢?我们能够从以下两个角度来分析此问题。
首先,能够从单词本身来考虑。
比~have这个词就显得不够具体,单纯地“有”压力有点普通,因为该词出现的频率实在太高,频繁使用此类词的话会给人一种词穷的感觉,所以更谈不上留下什么深刻印象了;另外,该词也不具体形象——写作中选词是需要讲究的.如果通过一个词能够使得读者在头脑当中形成一定的影像,那么这个词在该句中的作用就很明显了。
也就是说,读者面对的不但仅仅仅一堆单纯的文字.而是一个生动的画面,这样,写作的目的就会以一种生动的形式达到了。
基于以上分析,have excessive assignment这个词能够以另外的形式体现出来,比如能够将其转化为be occupied withexcessive assignment,因为从词义上来讲,后者比前者更具体:整个人被压力所“占据”,相比“有压力”来讲更容易让读者感受到“压力”的存有.因为“占据”一词的影像作用要远大于“有”这个词。
问题1. 词汇词汇是英语写作必不可少的基本要素,要写好一篇作文表达自己的思想必须以足够的词汇量为基础。
国家教育部颁布的《英语课程标准》要求初中毕业生的认知词汇量应达到1600个,习惯用语及固定搭配应达到300个。
但实际上大多数学生掌握的词汇量都达不到规定的要求,因此,他们在写作时就不能随心所欲地表达自己的思想。
常常出现以下问题:⑴拼写错误,影响理解;⑵词语误用,表达不准确;⑶某一词语反复使用,语言表达缺乏变式,文章显得单调乏味;⑷文章中出现大量“造词”,让人看了啼笑皆非。
显然,词汇量不足已成为中学生英语写作中最主要的问题。
2.语法和句法混乱语法规则和句型句式是英语写作涉及的另一基本要素。
学生英语作文中出现的“大错”多半都是由语法错误引起的。
学生在写作中的语法不规范、句子结构混乱、含义不清楚等情况屡见不鲜,Chinese English现象更是不乏其中。
所以,语法问题是中学生英语写作中所面临的又一个主要问题。
3.缺乏高效的写作技巧写作技巧这里是指语篇布局、句式变换和前后衔接的方法。
中学生在写作技巧上常常表现为语篇布局能力较弱,句式缺乏变换,前后衔接手段单调等。
一篇文章语意连贯、符合逻辑,离不开一定的语篇衔接手段。
英语中的语篇衔接方法相当丰富,有的用于句子层次,有的用于语篇层次,有的用于不同层次。
语篇衔接主要是通过语法手段、词汇手段和逻辑联系语来完成的。
其中语法手段包括时间关联、地点关联、照应、代替、省略、词汇粘合和时体配合等;词汇衔接包括复现关系和同现关系;逻辑关系可分为增补、转折、原因和时间四类。
学生在写作中较少使用这些方法,使得文章跳跃性很大,句与句之间、段与段之间、主题与各段落之间缺乏有机的联系、照应和连贯性。
要求:一、针对词汇问题,唯一的解决办法就是寻找适合自己的单词记忆方法。
A等和B等学生必须要过单词这一关,才能去谈写作。
1、要大声朗读,反复朗读直至背诵。
2、关于如何背单词,我记得有一句话大致意思是:在你背完第一遍的8小时后复习一遍,24小时后再复习一遍,48小时后再复习一遍,你可以前后衔接地类似滚雪球那样去复习。
英语写作:遣词·造句·组段写作是一门艺术,有着自己的技巧和窍门,它需要大量的训练,才能将整个想法和理念表达的清楚明确,能够勾勒出深刻而贴切的文字。
作也有不同的形式,其中最常见的就是文学写作,而掌握其中的词汇、句法与段落衔接是掌握英语写作的基础要素。
首先,要掌握好遣词造句,比如能把一句话写得清晰明了,只用几个简单短小的词汇就可以将整句话表达出来。
例如:It a wonderful day.可以简短明了的表达出来。
而且,在写作过程中,能有效使用单词,能增加文章的效果,像比喻、拟人、对比等都可以增加文章表达的生动性和文字的丰富性。
另外,遣词有时也可以强调语气,如口气严厉时使用“must”,而口气柔和时使用“should”,等等。
其次是造句的能力,英语句子需要有完整的结构,即含有主语、谓语、宾语等,同时还要注意语序、语气和时态的变换。
造句功力比较强的人,可以很容易写出有文字气质的句子,句子也能体现出一种特色,吸引读者前来欣赏。
最后,还需要掌握组段的技巧。
文章的段落衔接是比较重要的,段落的首尾句要合乎逻辑,避免出现明显的语句不连贯和思路断裂。
组段的过程中如果能运用一定的修辞技巧,如对比、拟人、比喻等有助于增强文章的魅力,能更好的吸引读者的兴趣。
英语写作是一门艺术,要掌握好遣词造句组段,不同的练习和训练都有助于掌握和提升写作能力,例如,语言的拓展是一种加强写作思维的方式,日积月累的有效练习对于强化词汇也非常有用,而实践与思考的结合,不仅能够让文字更加有灵性,而且还可以创作出深刻有说服力的文章。
总而言之,写作是一个熟练技能,遣词造句组段是写作的基本技巧,而要掌握这些技能,需要刻苦练习、勤加研究,在不断的实践中提升自己,才能最终拥有一种深厚的文学素养,写出清晰、流畅,充满灵性的文章来。
造句的解释及造句导读:造句拼音【注音】:zaoju造句解释【意思】:把词组织成句子。
造句造句:1、你能像威廉华兹华斯那样遣词造句吗?2、你的第二个任务是,回想当初学习造句的过程。
3、而且,更值得注意的是,一旦你造句后,你是否知道:为何这句话即便不符合规则但你仍然能读出它?4、然后用这些单词造句。
5、该研究表明人类造句的能力可能基于过程性记忆,这个记忆系统与让狗记住“坐”这个命令的过程一样简单。
6、多数派,包括从一般百姓到专业作家的所有人,都理所当然地认为有一种正确的遣词造句的方式,也存在很多错误的方式。
7、没有任何一位英国小说家在句式,选词和造句上能够达到向奥斯汀那样字斟句酌,巧妙地使用标点。
8、我可以用它来给你造句。
9、这一新语言的发音完全不同于这一地区的其他语言,它有自己独特的遣词造句体系。
10、后来你学会了一些造句的语法。
11、然后用这些词造句。
12、一个写作的人也许会因为造句太紧凑或太富有规律而犯错误。
13、比如,我想造句,然后又意识到,这个句子肯定会被删掉的。
14、在最近的一次单词用法的课上,二年级的TonyCeja和三年级的ChristopherPacheco面对面,一个在那画出单词所表达的意思,一个用单词造句。
15、用下面的词语造句。
16、我不知道怎样用这个词造句,你可不可以教我怎样造?17、孙院长用字造句也很正确,他说过分迷信武力的是他们党内的“若干人士”。
18、除了分析语言造句的处理过程,他们也分析不同年龄的双语大脑在音韵学、词汇学以及语法的不同领域中所产生的现象。
19、用英语写作遣词造句的空间其实比许多人感觉的要大得多。
20、我们利用语言能够表达抽象概念,比如幸福和爱情,过去和未来,通过组词造句能够表达无穷无尽的思想。
21、每个字都要死记硬背,每个句子都要符合造句规则。
22、对于那些表达能力遣词造句水平欠佳的毕业生们,经常练习是一个提高写作水平的最佳方法。
23、然后把正确词语填空造句。
英语写作策略——遣词造句比较下面用英语写出的句子。
(1)越来越多的学生发现学英语变得越来越重要了。
✧More and more students find learning English has become increasingly important.✧Students in growing numbers find learning English has become increasinglyimportant.(2)如今人们消耗的蔬菜越来越多了。
✧More and more people are eating vegetables nowadays.✧Vegetable consumption is on the rise nowadays.(3)经济的发展需要越来越多的服务人员。
✧We need more and more service people with the development of economy.✧There is an increasing demand for service people with the development ofeconomy.(4)越来越多的证据显示第二种管理风格比第一种更有效。
✧More and more evidence is showing that the second style of management is moreproductive than the first one.✧The evidence is mounting that the second style of management is more productivethan the first one.措词攻略(一)(1)使用书面语词汇(2)善用具体词汇形体化A. The injured footballer limped(跛行)slowly off the field.B. The victorious army marched(迈进)into the conquered city.C. The pedestrians rushed(快步走)here and there in the rain.D. The man, whose wife was expecting the first baby, was pacing(踱步)nervously up and down the hospital corridor.E. The manager strode(大步走)into the office and asked who was late for work.F. We wandered(瞎转)around for hours looking for the house.G. She just drags(步履拖沓)along after us wherever we go.感官化A. Rain came down and broke the silence.B. After a long hush, big raindrops came pitter-pattering down, shattering the eerie silence.细节化speak讲话 talk交谈tell讲述 explain解释mention提及 narrate讲述lie撒谎 whisper耳语discuss讨论 utter出声persuade劝说 quote引述libel诋毁 murmur低语comment、observe、remark评价declare、announce宣称(3)同义替换A. We loved the food so much, especially the fish dishes.B. I prefer walking alone.C. I really admire people who can work in such difficult conditions.D. I want to travel because I enjoy meeting people and seeing new places.E. She is fond of playing the piano.F. Babies are attracted to bright colours.G. I don’t care for coffee.H. Many soccer fans are crazy about David Beckham.I. He’s the first real boyfriend she’s had and she’s mad about him.J. Many Westerners are keen on Jackie Chan’s kungfu films.K. He has been addicted to the drug.L. Some adults are hooked on computer games as well.(4)注意搭配搭配松散:A. My teacher helped me very much. (a lot)B. Chinese economy has developed very much. (rapidly)C. A friend must know you very much. (well)搭配错误A. quick foodB. My father is an excessive smoker. (应该说a chain/ heavy smoker)C. They did a lot of effort to finish the job on time. (应该说made great efforts)D. I proposed to take a final party with other classmates. (应该说organize/ throw a farewell party)措词攻略(二)(1)长短句更替A. The animal trainer dove into the pool. The trainer was skilled and athletic. She was excited when she dove into the pool. She swam with two dolphins. The dolphins were babies. The dolphins were playful. The trainer swam with the dolphins for over an hour. When the trainer swam with the dolphins, she was happy.B. The skilled, athletic animal trainer excitedly dove into the pool, where she happily swam for over an hour with two playful baby dolphins.C. The animal trainer was skilled and athletic. She excitedly dove into the pool, where there were two playful baby dolphins. She swam with them happily for over an hour.下面是五种将短句变长的方法,请注意划线部分的改动。
高考英语的书面表达如何遣词造句一.造句的基本方法首先,我祝愿大家更快乐、更健康。
Above of all , I congradulate all the students to happirer ,body is more healthier.(这样的句子里有语法错误和短语错误,如果作文是这样的句子,就是胡说=想到哪里写到哪里=逐字翻译,最多得7--8分)心花怒放:heart flower angry open(错误)1.造句五步法中文---完整的中文----简单的中文-----英文-----升级英文今天来了很多人。
(逻辑是错的)----今天,很多人来了。
--- Today so many people have come.你妈妈对你好。
(心法口诀:当你发现一句话不好翻译的时候,想一想这句话到底是什么意思呢?)----你妈妈关心你。
----Your mom cares about you.-----(如果不会说care about)你妈妈爱你。
-----Your mom loves you.----(升级英文)There is no doubt that your mom loves you.写作文真正的难点:1.想到简单的内容2.造出完整的句子3.合情合理的逻辑你得知某报社“Global Mirror”创刊周年,征集读者意见,请根据以下提示给编辑写封信。
提示一:说明你是该报的忠实读者。
提示二:赞扬该报的优点:1.兼顾国内外新闻;2.介绍名人成功故事。
提示三:提出建议,刊登英语学习的文章(1)我是贵报的忠实读者。
----我非常喜欢你们的报纸。
----I like your newspaper very much.----I am crazy about your newspaper.------Iam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper.-----Iam undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper which is not only meaningful but also entertaining.(题外话:高考作文中的关于校园活动的作文肯定是既有意义,又有娱乐性)(2)兼顾国内外新闻。
高考英语作文遣词造句与谋篇布局一.英语作文常用的高级写作词汇1.sad(depressed; upset)2.happy(cheerful; delighted; thrilled)eg. I’m absolutely delighted to hear from you.3.bad(annoying; awful; unpleasant)eg. Smoking in public is an annoying habit.4.important(vital;; essential; significant; be of great importance )eg. Education is of much importance.A balanced diet is absolutely essential for\to everyone.Parents play an important role in children’s learning.Chinese parents attach much importance to children’s education.5.surprising(astonishing; amazing; extraordinary)6.necessary(a must; essential)eg. A raincoat is a must in the rainy season.7.good(amazing; fantastic; impressive; splendid)eg. The view from my bedroom window was absolutely fantastic.This is a unique opportunity to learn about American culture.8.can(be capable of; have the ability to do sth)eg. I am perfectly capable of looking after myself.He has the ability to finish the task on time.e(take advantage of; make good\full of)eg. You are supposed to make good use of your time to improve yourself.10.do one’s best(spare no effort to do)eg. We should spare no effort to make our city more and more beautiful.11.influence(have /make a +adj+effect/influence on)eg. The mother’s behavior has a profound effect on the developing child.12.be good for(do sb good; be beneficial to)eg. A bit more exercise can do you good.We will benefit a lot from the activity.13.remember(keep sth in mind)Eg. You must always keep the rule in mind.You must keep it in mind that you should study hard.14.in order to do(with the intention of; with the aim of;)eg. He wrote the letter with the intention of asking for some advice.We started a campaign with the aim of helping those homeless children.15.I firmly believe that(I was convinced that; I have the firm/strong belief that)Eg. I firmly believe that you will be admitted into a key university.16.be bad for(be harmful to; do harm/damage to.)17.attract(appeal to; fascinate;)Eg. The idea of working abroad really appeals to me.The children were attracted by the toys in the shop.What fascinated/attracted me most was the beautiful scenery.18.cause(lead to; result in; account for; contribute to)Eg. His actions could lead to his failure.Several reasons may account for the strange phenomenon.His carelessness contributed to the accident.19.want to do(intend to; would like to do; feel like doing; have a strong desire to do)Eg. I intend to study abroad next month.The boy has a strong desire to win the match.20.decide(make up one’s mind to do; make a decision to do)Eg. He made up his mind to study harder than before.21.pay attention to(attach much/great importance to; lay/put great stress on) 重视,关注……Eg. Everyone should pay more attention to his own behavior in public places.The whole society should attach importance to protecting the environment.22.pay no attention to(overlook; neglect; turn a blind eye to)Eg. People always overlook/turn a blind eye to the problem.23.about(concerning; regarding; with regard to)Eg. I wrote a letter to him about/concerning/regarding/with regard to the problem.24.because of(thanks to/owing to/as a result of/as a consequence of+n/doing)Eg. Thanks to your help, we’ve reached our goal.The fishes in the river have died as a result/consequence of water pollution.25.Many(many a+单数名词;a large number of+复数名词; a great/good many +复数名词)Eg. Many a student is addicted to playing computer games.A good many students are crazy about playing computer games.26.In this way(by doing so; by this means; with this method)Eg. By doing so, we can face challenges from all aspects.Only in this way/by this means/with this method can we improve our ability.27.If(as long as/ provided/providing that/ on condition that/supposing that+句子) Eg. I will help you with your English as long as/provided that I have enough time.We shall go on condition that the weather is fine.28.not(by no means; in no way; under no circumstances; on no account)Eg. By no means/on no account should we lose heart when we face failures.29.many kinds of(various; a variety of; a wide range of)Eg. There are various/a wide range of after-class activities in our school.30.support(be for; be in favor/support of; subscribe to )31.oppose(be against; be opposed to; object to)32.very+(extremely; absolutely; considerably;more than; nothing but; anything but) Eg. Self-confidence is extremely vital to our success.Earthquakes are absolutely/considerably difficult to predict.The film we saw last night was nothing but/anything but interesting.33.thing(matter; affair)34.more and more+adj(increasingly+adj)Eg. Nowadays, studying abroad is becoming increasingly popular in China.35.should(be supposed to; be expected to)Eg. We are supposed to study hard in order to be admitted to a key university.重要句式1. 表示“重要性”1)It is important for sb to do 2)It is important/essential that sb should do sth.Eg. It is important for you to learn some knowledge about first aid in your daily life.It is essential that we should learn a foreign language.3)Sth/Doing sth is essential to sth/doing sth.Eg. Memorizing words is essential to i mproving our reading ability.4)Sth undoubtedly plays an important/essential role/part inEg. Computers undoubtedly play an essential part in our daily life.5)Sth +be of great/much importance.6)Nothing is more important than +n/to doEg .Nothing is more important than to receive education.2. 表示“益处”1)Sth is beneficial to sb/sth 2) Sth does good to sb/sth3) Sth +contribute to sth eg. Honesty and hard work contribute to success and happiness.4)Sb benefit a lot/a great deal from sth eg. We benefited a lot from the activity.5)As we know, cellphones bring many benefits and convenience to us.3. 表示“危害”1) Sth is harmful to sb eg. It is generally accepted that smoking is harmful to our health.2) Sth dose harm/damage to eg. Reading in bed will do harm to your eyes.4. 表示“原因”Eg. There are many reasons why teenagers are addicted to playing computers games.Eg. The reasons why teenagers are addicted to playing computers games are as follows.Eg. The reason why we have to grow trees is that t hey can supply fresh air for us.5) 句子(结果);that is because+句子(表示原因)Eg.Tom was late for work this morning. That is because he overslept.6)Because/As/Since+句子,主句5. 表示“结果”1)句子(表示原因);as a result/consequence,句子(结果)Eg. He didn't work hard; as a result,he failed in his exam.2)句子(表示原因);that is why + 句子(表示结果)Eg. Tom overslept ; that is why he was late for work this morning3)句子(表示结果)+ because of/ as a result of/ on account of +n/doing6. 表示“目的”1)In order to do sth, sb should do sth/ sb did sthEg.In order to do great things, we have to perfect the small things.2) Sb should do sth/ sb did sth in order that/ so that……Eg. My son saved his money in order that he might buy a new car.3) The aim of sth is to do sthEg. The aim of the activity is to encourage students to read more books.4)Sb do sth/did sth with the aim/intention of doing sthEg. We started it mainly with the aim of helping lonely people.5) Sth is intended to do sth7. 表示“号召”“希望”1)I sincerely hope that +句子 eg.I sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful time tonight.2) It is advocated that +句子Eg. It is advocated in China that a couple has two childen.3) I would like to appeal to sb to do sthEg. I would like to appeal to everyone to save electricity and water.8. 表示“建议”1) You had better/ should/be supposed to/be expected toEg. You are supposed to be responsible for them.2) I think it is a good idea to do sthEg. I think it would be a good idea to ask your mother for advice.3) Why not do sth? / Why don’t you do sth?4) If I were you, I would do sth.Eg. If I were you, I should tell him the truth.5) I hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.9. 表示“感谢”1)Thank you for doing sth.Eg. Thank you for doing so much to make my trip to New York interesting2) I would like to express my thanks/gratitude to you.3) I would appreciate it if you could do sth.10. 表示“歉意”1)I am sorry to do/ that + 句子Eg. I am sorry to say I cannot come to the party.I am sorry that you failed in the examination.2)I would like to apologize to you for doing sthEg. I would like to apologize to you for the inconvenience that I have caused you11. 表示“真实条件”1)If +条件句,主句(主将从现)2)主句+on condition that/ providing that/ supposing that/as long as+句子12. 表示“尽管”“虽然”1)Although/Though+句子,主句Eg. Although he failed, he has done his best.2)Despite/ In spite of+名词,句子或句子+despite/ in spite of+名词Eg. Despite/ In spite of the bad weather, we enjoyed ourselves.I went shopping in spite of the rain.3) 形容词/名词+as+sb/sth is/was, 主句Eg. Young as he is, he knows a lot.13. 表示“时间”1)This is/was the first/last time that sb have done/had done sth’Eg. This is the first time that our whole class have gone out together for a picnic.2) It is high time that sb should do/did sthEg. It is time that the government took/should take measures to protect the rare birds and animals.3) There was a time when+句子Eg. There was a time when this song was very popular.4)It is/has been+时间段+since sb did sthEg. It’s / has been three months since we met last time.5) It was not until+n/句子+that+sb did sthEg. It was not until he got seriously ill that he knew the importance of health.6) It will(not)be +时间段+before+句子(现在时)Eg. It will not be long before we meet again.14. 表示“比较”1)Compared to/with+ sb/sth, 句子Eg. Compared to/with his classmates, he studies much harder.2)句子+while/whereas+句子Eg. Some students are in favor of it, whereas others are against it.3)In contrast to/with+ sb/sth, 句子Eg. In contrast to his brother, he looks healthier.4) On one hand,句子. On the other hand, 句子(矛盾的两方面)Eg. On the one hand, they’d love to have kids, but on the other hand, they don’t want to give up theirfreedom.15. 表示“列举”“举例”1)for example/for instance,句子(可换成插入语) 一般只以“一个”为例,可置于句首、句中和句末Eg. Noise, for example,is a kind of pollution.There are many kinds of pollution ,air pollution, for example.2)句子(最后一个单词是名词复数)+such as/like+(两个或三个)名词、动名词Eg. There are many kinds of pollution, such as air pollution, water pollution and light pollution.16. 表示“要求”“请求”1)Sb are requested/asked to do sthEg. You are requested to come on time.2)I wonder if/whether you would like to do/can doEg. I wonder if you would like to give a performance to us.17. 表示“遗憾”“懊悔”1)To one’s regret, 句子eg. To my regret, I can’t attend your birthday.2)I regret to tell you that+句子Eg. I regret to tell you that I can’t attend your birthday.3)It is a pity/shame that+句子Eg.It is a pity/shame that I can’t attend your birthday.4)I feel ashamed of myself/that.Eg. I feel ashamed of myself that I made such a foolish mistake.18. 表示“最……”1)Nothing is +比较级+than+n/doing sth.Eg. Nothing is more interesting than reading books.2)What impressed/ attracted/disappointed me most is/was +n/that+句子Eg. What impressed me most is the beautiful scenery .3)Sth is the+最高级+n+that sb have ever doneParis is the most romantic/beautiful city that I have ever visited.19. 表示“兴趣爱好”1)I like/enjoy/am fond of /am interested in/am addicted to/am crazy about doing2) I have/great interest in sth/doing3) I have a preference for sth eg. I have a preference for playing football.20.表示“花费时间、金钱”1)Sth cost sb some money.2) Sb spend/spent some time/money on sth/in doing sth3) It takes/took sb some time to do21. 表示“变化、发生、出现”1)A problem came up.2) Sth occur/happen/break out +(地点+时间)3)Great changes have taken place in my hometown/city/school in the past 10 years. 22. 表示“影响”1)Sth/Sb +have a +adj+ effect/influence on sthEg. Your words had a deep effect on me./Your words made a big difference to me.2)It doesn’t matter/ makes no difference to me (+whether+句子)Eg. It makes on difference to me whether you will come or not.3)Sth makes/made a big difference to sb/sthEg. Changing schools made a big difference to my study and life.23. 表示“责任”1)It is one’s duty to do sth.Eg. It is our duty to make our school clean and beautiful.2)The most important duty for sb is to do sthEg. The most important duty for us is to make our school clean and beautiful.3)Sb feel it his duty to do sth\Eg. We feel it our duty to make our school clean and beautiful.4) Sb should be responsible for sth/ to do sth24. 表示“代表、欢迎”1)You are welcome to China!2) On behalf of sb, I would like to express our warm welcome to you.25. There be句型1) There +be/will be/used to be+n+地点状语/时间状语Eg. There will be an important speech in our school next week.2)There be+n(doing/done后置定语/定从)+地点状语/时间状语Eg. There are a large number of students addicted to playing games in our school.There are a large number of students who are addicted to playing games in our school.A large number of students are addicted to playing games in our school.There are a large quantity of foreigners visiting The Great Wall every year.There are a large quantity of foreigners who visit The Great Wall every year.A large quantity of foreigners visit The Great Wall every year.3)There is no need to do 没有必要做什么Eg. There is no need for you to worry about this.4)There is a rise/an increase in……在……方面有增长Eg. There is a rise/an increase in the number of the students who are addicted to playing games.5)There is no point doing……做……没有意义6)There is no doubt/ There is no denying that……毫无疑问……句型篇(几种重要句式)1. 强调句:可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。
(一):遣词造句【芝麻开门】句子是文章的基本单位。
成功的作品是由清晰而合乎语法规则的句子组成的。
然而一个好的句子除了能够准确表达作者的意思,还需要简洁生动,这是在考试中获得高分的法宝。
一、句子要简洁A hero is nothing but a product of his time. 时势造英雄。
写作要求精练,因为,简洁的表达能起到更加强调的作用。
我们要写出效果好、影响大的文章,就要想方设法1)避免使用空洞、多余的短语;2)避免过多地使用较长的句子结构,如并列句和从属句等;3)避免不必要的重复。
改写下面的句子1)Owing to the fact that I had a lot of work to do, it wasn’t possible for me to accept their invitation._____________________________________________________________________________2) He is a man who is honest, who always pays his just debts, and who observes the golden rules in his dealings with others._____________________________________________________________________________3) My hometown is a quiet, peaceful place. It is quiet and peaceful because of the small number of people living there.______________________________________________________________________________二、语言要生动写作时要吸引读者的兴趣,句子就需生动、充满活力。
平淡无味的句子会使人生厌,注意力分散。
但要写出生动的句子就必须注意做到:1.交错使用长短句长句和短句各有各的特点,各有各的用场。
长句结构复杂、容量大,能表达比较复杂的内容,叙事具体、说理严密。
短句结构简单、短小精悍、明白易懂。
在写作中应当交错使用长句和短句,使句子的长短多样化,增加语言的表现力。
请看下面的一段话:It is better to trust to valour than to luck. 靠运气不如靠勇气。
改写I ret urned to my room. There was a note under my door. It was from Bob. He said he was in the town looking for a job. He hadn't found anything yet. He added that he was sorry to have missed me._________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.灵活使用多样句式要达到语言的生动性,写作时就要经常地变换句型和句子结构及表达思想的方式。
切忌所有的句子都用相同的句型或句子结构,使文章读起来单调乏味。
在考虑英语句式的变化时, 我们一般从以下几个方面入手:(1) 既可以用主动式也可以用被动式,改为被动语态1:Today, we use machines not only in industry but in other sectors of national economy as well._______________________________________________________________________2:Some people believe that it will be possible for automatic machines to replace completely in the future._______________________________________________________________________(2) 既可以用肯定式也可以用否定式,1:I shall go there unless it rains. I shall go there if it __________ rain.2:Their daily lives don’t provide them with the exercise needed to keep them healthy.Their daily lives_____ _____ provide them wi th the exercise needed to keep them healthy.(3) 某些修饰成分既可以用在句子前面也可以用在后面, 还可以用在中间,1:With a car, people can get around freely. =People can get around freely with a car.2:In fact, speaking is one of the most important means of communication.Speaking is in fact one of the most important means of communication.(4) 既可以是正常语序也可以是倒装语序.改为倒装语序1:A new type of TV set s was among the products on display.____________________________________________________________2:We did not realize the problem of energy crisis until the end of last century.____________________________________________________________(5) 既可以用简单句也可以用并列句或者主从复合句,1:Nowadays a lot of people work in office and they spend most of their time indoors.Nowadays a lot of people work in office, ___________ (spend )most of their time indoors.2:There are many means of getting information and they enable us to keep up with what is going on in the world.There are many means of getting information ______ enable us to keep up with what is going on in the world.3:Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics. The victims of political corruption pay no attention. They prefer to demand that newspapers not carry the strip.Doon esbury cartoons laugh at contemporary politics, _____ the victims of political corruption pay no attention _____ prefer to demand that newspapers not carry the strip.4:T he campus parking problem is getting worse. The university is not building any new garages.The campus parking problem is getting worse __________ the university is not building any new garages.3.善用形象化语言适当地使用一些修辞手法如比喻、夸张、排比、拟人等能更形象、更深刻地说明事理,增加文章的活力。
In the morning the dust hung like fog, and the sun was as red as ripe new blood. (明喻)His daughter is the apple of his eyes. (暗喻)An idea spoke within him, racing through his mind. (拟人)His voice was loud enough to wake the dead. (夸张)Many of us allow our children to eat junk, watch junk, listen to junk, talk junk, play with junk, and then we are surprised when they turn out to be social junkies. (排比)4.恰当使用英语习语写作时适当地使用习语、成语等也是使语言生动活泼的好办法。
对比下列句子1. Once a man is dead, there is no helping; you can’t rekindle the spark of life in him.Once a man is dead, he can‘t be brought back to life.2. The committee refused to listen to our request.The committee turned a deaf ear to our request.请修改下面的短文增加句式的多样化以便使其生动、流畅。