遣词造句布局谋篇（下）昆明新东方国内考试部：戴弘梧创意的简单布局谋篇之起承转合首句―启―春之生次句―承―夏之住三句―转―秋之异四句―合―冬之灭宏观起When asked about, some people claim that …, but others think (differently)承Those who hold ….It is true that …First/Firstly …转It sounds like a good(attractive) idea (suggestion), but they fail to understand 。
合Taking into accou nt all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that…微观句子之间的关系靠连词起承转合I started to play table-tennis in middle school, still play it now.I started to play table-tennis in middle school, and I still play it now.TV becomes an important part in our daily life. we cannot live without it.TV becomes an important part in out daily life, because we cannot live without it.微观重点：巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词(conjunctions)，语意关系词请参考400词。
表示时间once, before, after, afterward, always, when, at once, as soon as, to begin with, first (second, third), in the meantime, in the past (future), later, then, next, until, at last, finally, eventually, from then on, since then完美段落示例One day this spring, one of my classmates suddenly got a fever and coughed. One of his roommates phoned 120, and before long an ambulance rushed him to the hospital. During his stay in the hospital, we sent him short messages through mobile phones every day to comfort and encourage him.表示因果The same television commercials repeat again and again in one evening. Perhaps the following two factors can account for this. The first reason is simply a matter of economics. It must makesure that as many people as possible will see it. Thus, more consumers will be attracted and a bigger profit may be gained. Another reason for repeating the commercials so often is the belief that repetition helps to imprint the message on the mind.举例+因果Movies often distort the image of real life. To illustrate this, let’s look at crime drama as an example. Such film is about finding the criminal; as soon as he is arrested the story is over. In real life, however, little of a policeman’s time is spent on dramatic confrontations with desperate criminals. Love story is another typical example. Lovers can never get together easily. There must be someone coming out to stop them, and they, without exception, will never give up. And the end is always a wedding ceremony. This is too far from realistic比较+转折Computer and human brain are both similar and different. First, both computer and human brain can read and follow instructions; both of them can perform complex mathematical computations; and even, both can translate languages. On the other hand, computer and human brain differ in several ways: The brain can make value judgments; but the computer can’t. While the brain can respond to emotions; the computer has no emotion at all. The brain can function independently; but the computer can not work without human beings’program and instruction.表示概括归纳in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion.In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce the learning load运用连接词时注意标点可以创造亮点分号后面可以接有连接意义的副词：The news may be surprising; nevertheless, it is true.Nobody expected him to succeed in the examination; however, he came out first.It’s too late to go for a walk; besides, it’s beginning to rain.亮点连接词模仿应用Place a bid only if you're serious about buying the item. Thanks !Words on a bagIf only… 要是…就好了If Only I Had WingsIf Only I Had WingsIf only I had wingsI'd let the air release my mindAnd leave my worries far behindAnd let the silent oceans of the sky'sWash every grain of sorrow from my eyesIf only I had wingsI’d fly beyond the rainbows doorIn search of heavens stardust shoreWhere long forgotten dreamswill all come trueBeyond the mellow oceans tender blueI’m flying,up where the eagle reignsI’m flying,leaving behind my chainsIf only I had wingsupon the breeze I’d lay my soulAnd let god’s hand take full controlAnd sing my hearts surrender to his loveForever to the moon and stars aboveI’m flying,up where the eagle reignsI’m flying,leaving behind my chainAnd let the silent oceans of the sky’sWash every grain of sorrow from my eyesIf only I had wings…….If only I had wings…….Even if 即使纵然Only if you have a woman who just loves receiving gifts even if they can’t be used!As if 仿佛。
