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优秀作文(一)假定你是李华。
你校外籍教师Peter计划在暑假期间回国，他想送给母亲可以代表中国文化的礼物。
请你给他写一封邮件，向他推荐礼物。
内容包括：1. 推荐礼物：旗袍、中国结等；2. 推荐原因；3. 表达祝福。
News reaches me that you plan to go back to your motherland during the summer vacation with the intention to present your mother a gift featuring Chinese culture，I feel honored to offer you some recommendations as follows.What comes first is Qipao, a kind of Chinese female clothes, which features both the beauty and figure of anyone who dressed herself with it. Also, the Chinese knot, a decoration you can see almost everywhere especially on festival occasions, is worthy of being regarded as an appropriate alternative, which means union. It being inviting and meaningful, I assume your mother will adore it. （独立主格结构）Last but not least, I sincerely anticipate what you choose will take her fancy. It is my sincere hope that you will adopt my recommendations. Best wishes for your family reunion!优秀作文(二)假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom给你发了封邮件,想了解茶在中国文化中的作用。
英语书面表达常用高分句式1.China is a multicultural country.As is known to all, China is a multicultural country.What is known to all is that China is a multicultural country.2.I can’t go shopping with you because something urgent has happened.The reason why I can’t go shopping with you is that something urgent has happened.3.As an old saying goes, No pains, no gains.Where there is a will, there is a way.A friend in need is a friend indeed. Practice makes perfect.4.As for learning English, he shows no interest at all.When it comes to learning English, he shows no interest at all.5.If you study hard, you will make much progress.The harder you study, the more progress you will make.Only if you study hard will you make much progress.What we should do is to study hard, which will certainly help you make much progress.6.English is of great importance.There’s no doubt that English is of great importance.Undoubtedly, nothing is more important than learning English.It’s important for all of us to learn English.Learning English is becoming more and more important.7.I sincerely/do hope that you can offer me a chance to work in your company.Hopefully, you could offer me a chance to work in your company.I would be appreciated if you could take it into consideration.I would appreciate it if you could offer me a chance to work in your company.How I wish I could get a chance to work in your company. 8.When you are in trouble, don’t hesitate to ask for your teachers’ help.Faced with difficulty, you are supposed to turn to your teachers for help.Whenever you are faced with difficulty, your teachers are willing to give you a hand.9.This activity can not only improve your ability but also broaden your view.By taking part in this activity, not only can you improve your ability but also it’s a good way to broaden your view. 10.The weather was so cold that we had to stay at home all day.So cold was the weather that we had to stay at home all day.11.The sports meeting will take place on the playground.It is on the playground that the sports meeting will take place.12.You shouldn’t give up learning English.On no account can you give up learning English.13.We should do our best to achieve our goal in life.We should spare no effort/make every effort to achieve our goal in life.We should do what/everything/all we can to achieve our goal in life.It’s high time that we did out best to achieve our goal in life.14.Owing to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.It was owing to his encouragement that I finally realized my dream.Without his encouragement, I couldn’t have realized my dream.15.She is my good friend and she likes English very much.She is my good friend who is extremely interested in English.16.She is interested in English and studies English day andnight.Interested in English, she studies English day and night.17.When I know you were injured in a car accident, I can’t wait to visit and care for you.Knowing you were inj ured in a car accident, I can’t wait to visit and take care of you.18.Hopefully, you can apply for the position successfully.I do/sincerely hope that you can apply for the position successfully.Unfortunately/Unluckily, something urgent has happened.19.I believe you can adapt to the new environment as soon as you can.I am firmly convinced that you can adapt to the new environment as soon as you can.I hold the belief that you can adapt to the new environment as soon as you can.20. In my opinion, health is the most important.As far as I am concerned, nothing is more important than being healthy.From my point of view, nothing is more important compared with health.。
高分英语书面表达七项基本原则及方法归纳
高分英语书面表达七项基本原则及方法归纳
高分书面表达七项基本原则：
1、长短句原则：句子表达灵活多样，长短不一，不要千篇一律。
2、主题句原则：力求通过主题句点明本段表达主旨，然后分项叙述，结构严谨，逻辑分明。
3、行文连贯原则：连词和过渡句以及不同句子机构的`搭配使用都是必不可少的。
4、多实少虚原则：多实际少空话，多实词少虚词。
5、短语优先原则：精彩击中主题的短语往往有画龙点睛之神效。
6、多变句式原则：简单句为主，并列句、复合句穿插使用，倒装感叹穿插其间
7、挑战完美元则：高级词汇，非谓语动词灵活使用，段落自然完美划分。
英语书面表达方法归纳：无论何种文体、何种出题方式，要写好英语短文，都要经历以下四部曲
1、确定文章框架，包含时态、语态、句型结构，开头和结尾格式等；
2、确定内容要点，包含人物、时间、地点以及重要细节等；
3、充分准备词汇、短语和句型结构，整理思路成文，注意段落及过渡，行文连贯；
4、检查全文，主要检查词汇拼写、语法时态及粗心大意所犯错误。
【高分英语书面表达七项基本原则及方法归纳】。
初三英语书面表达高分策略单选题30题1.In a composition about my school life, I want to describe a happy event. Which word is more appropriate? “exciting” or “interesting”?答案：“exciting”和“interesting”在书面表达中都可以用来描述事件，但“exciting”更强调令人兴奋激动，“interesting”更侧重有趣。
在描述学校生活中的快乐事件时，如果这个事件让人很兴奋，用“exciting”更合适；如果只是单纯觉得有趣，用“interesting”。
本题中如果这个快乐事件比较刺激、令人兴奋，就选“exciting”。
2.When writing about a trip, I need a word to describe the scenery. Which one should I choose? “beautiful” or “pretty”?答案：“beautiful”和“pretty”都有美丽的意思，但“beautiful”更正式、程度更深，可以用来形容壮观的美景；“pretty”更口语化，常用来形容小巧可爱的美丽。
在书面表达中描写旅行中的景色，如果景色很壮观就用“beautiful”，如果是比较小巧可爱的景色可以用“pretty”。
3.For an essay about my hobby, which word is better to use to express strong love? “like” or “love” or “be fond of”?答案：“like”表示喜欢，程度较轻；“love”表示爱，程度比较深；“be fond of”也表示喜欢，但比“like”更正式一些。
在书面表达中表达对爱好的强烈喜爱，如果想强烈表达就用“love”，如果比较委婉可以用“be fond of”，“like”程度最弱不太适合表达强烈的爱。
高三英语书面表达高分技巧单选题30题1. In a letter of apology, you should use _____ words to express your sincerity.A.politeB.rudeC.casualD.impolite答案：A。
在道歉信中应该使用礼貌的词汇来表达真诚，B 选项“rude”粗鲁的、C 选项“casual”随意的、D 选项“impolite”不礼貌的都不符合道歉信的语境。
2. When describing a beautiful scenery, we can use _____ adjectives.A.dullB.colorfulC.boringD.plain答案：B。
描述美丽的风景可以用丰富多彩的形容词，A 选项“dull”单调的、C 选项“boring”无聊的、D 选项“plain”普通的都不能很好地描述美丽风景。
3. In a narrative essay, we often use _____ verbs to make the story vivid.A.weakB.powerfulC.slowzy答案：B。
在记叙文里我们经常用有力的动词使故事生动，A 选项“weak”虚弱的、C 选项“slow”缓慢的、D 选项“lazy”懒惰的都不能使故事生动。
4. To express your opinion strongly, you can use _____ adverbs.A.hesitantB.weakC.strongD.doubtful答案：C。
要强烈地表达自己的观点，可以用强烈的副词，A 选项“hesitant”犹豫的、B 选项“weak”弱的、D 选项“doubtful”怀疑的都不能强烈表达观点。
5. When writing an argumentative essay, we should use _____ language to make our points clear.A.vagueB.clearC.confusingD.obscure答案：B。
高考英语书面表达高分词块1. be worth doing sth. 值得做……What is worth mentioning is its excellent design with various colors. 值得一提的是它的和各种配色在一起的完美设计。
2. be+adj.+of sb. to do 某人做……怎样It is immoral of you to mock other people’s defects.你嘲笑别人的缺陷是很不道德的。
3. There is no better way to do than to do 做……最好办法就是……There is no better way to get higher scores than to study harder.想要取得好成绩的最好方法就是更刻苦地学习。
4. Only... 在句首用倒装（部分倒装）Only when you practice and speak more can you have a better command of oral English.只有当你训练得更多说得更多你才能对英语口语有一个更好地掌握。
5. not only...but also...（倒装）不仅……而且Not only am I outgoing and energetic, but I am able to get on well with others.我不仅外向和富有活力，并且我还能够和他人相处得很好。
6. be of + 形容词的名词significant = be of significancebeneficial = be of benefitIn the contemporary world, it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well.在当今这个世界，对于年轻人来说学好英语是非常重要的。
英语书面表达高分秘诀杨苏贞论文摘要：本文首先根据新课程标准对“写”的要求，简要归纳了高考英语书面表达题的命题特点、高分要求，然后从学会使用较高级的词汇，学会使用较丰富的句式，学会使用恰当的关联词三方面浅谈了书面表达得高分的秘诀，最后强调了提高书面表达能力的训练应渗透到英语教学的各个环节中。
关键词：高考英语书面表达高分秘诀1.“写作”要求《普通高中英语课程标准(实验)》(教育部，2003，4)对语言技能目标(八级) “写”的要求包括: “能根据文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告；能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度；能在写作中做到文体规范、语句通顺。
”这一课程标准突出强调了用英语进行思维和表达的能力的重要性。
英语高考(湖北卷)，书面表达这一部分的分值增加为50分占了整张试卷三分之一的比重，完成句子部分增加了5分，分值为20；短文写作部分由25分增加到30分。
完成句子实际上是写作的前奏和热身。
考生英语运用能力的强弱往往直接从书面表达这部分清楚地区分开来，极大地影响着考生试卷的整体得分情况。
2.书面表达的命题特点高中英语教科书非常重视和加强写的训练。
写作按句子、段落和篇章三个层次来练习，遵循语言的运用规律。
高考书面表达部分分两节:第一节为完成句子，第二节为短文写作。
同样是由句子过渡到语篇，循序渐进。
高考书面表达命题呈现出由情景写作向开放性写作过渡的趋势。
除了对运用所学词汇、语法、语篇的能力要求高之外，还对学生审题能力有了更高的要求。
要求考生根据一段英文提示，结合生活中的具体事例写一篇话题作文，充分体现了“突出能力立意，着力内容创新”的高考命题指导思想。
3. 书面表达高分要求老师必须告诉学生高考的高分要求是什么。
高考评分分5个档次，其中25—30分为第5档，即高分档。
要求如下：----------完全完成了试题规定的任务。
--------- 所有内容与提示吻合；--------- 应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；----------语法结构与词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力；---------恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。
-----------完全达到了预期的写作目的。
既然书面表达这么重要，要求又这么高，那么怎样才能在此部分得高分呢？下面我从三方面来浅谈书面表达的高分秘诀。
秘诀一：学会使用较高级的词汇词汇是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
从评分标准可知，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。
若能适当运用高级词汇，会给评分者留下更深刻的印象。
(1)用较高难度的同义词取代常见的“高频词”如attractive, clever 等词使用频率十分高，这些词容易使文章平淡。
但如果我们使用它们相应的同义词，派生词等。
如: attractive可替换为appealing/inviting/fascinating; He is a clever boy可表达为:He is a bright/a smart/an intelligent boy；又如动词disappoint一词有多种词性变化:disappointed, disapponting形容词,disappointment名词和disappointingly副词，如果用一句话来表达I failed in the exam和disappoint的意思，我们可以用disappoint的不同词性来表达: To my disappointment, I failed in the exam.(名词)Disappointed, I failed in the exam.(形容词)What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam.(动词)Disappointingly, I failed in the exam.(副词)以上这些都是表达形式不同，含义相同。
多样的表达会给文章带来清新的感觉，自然就会给评卷教师留下良好印象。
我们来体会一下下面三个句子的改写:Eg.1)She likes working with children.若划线部分用单词adores代替就使得句子增色不少。
2) He bought a new car.若将此句改写为He purchased a new car.试比较这两个句子，大家一定会更喜欢第二个句子，因为它表达更新颖。
3)The pet dog is so lovely that almost everybody likes it.若将lovely 改写为cute，表达就更生动形象。
(2)用完整的短语或习语取代独立的单词。
恰当运用短语的难度比单词要大一些，更能显出学生灵活运用所学知识的水平。
试着比较一下下面句子中的变化:Eg.1)Suddenly I had a good idea.其中had可改写为came up with2)What you do will be important.试将划线部分替换为make a difference3)He is a famous dancer.此句可改写为He is well-known as a dancer.上面所提到的come up with, make a difference, be well-known as等都是“亮点词汇”。
我们常常提到的“亮点词汇”，不等于使用频率较低的偏词、怪词或大词；而是要使用生动具体形象的词汇，关键是要准确得体。
词汇彰显深厚的语言功底，要注意在阅读中留心积累富有表达力的词汇。
秘诀二：学会使用较丰富的句式一篇好的文章，要尽可能使用较多的句式结构，如感叹句，倒装句，强调句，省略结构，被动结构，非谓语动词及各种从句。
正确使用这些结构，可以使文章充满层次感。
(1)使用固定句式1)使用how/what引导感叹句The story is very interesting.改写为How interesting the story is!或What an interesting story it is!将一个陈述句用感叹句式来表达，更生动形象地描写出了事物的特征。
2) 使用倒装句如学生习作中的表达：Our library lies in the centre of our school. It is between the garden and the teaching building. 若使用倒装可表达为：In the centre of our school lies our library, which is between the garden and the teaching building. 句子使用倒装之后的好处，除了倒装本身就是高级结构外，倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，将两个简单句表达为一个复合句，使得句子呈现更多的亮点。
在高考中可根据情境的需要，尽量使用一两个倒装，会使文章陡然增色。
3) 使用强调句It was his carelessness that led to nothing on the way to success.这句使用了It is/was + 所强调的部分+that +其它这一强调句型加重了语气，能够增加文章的色彩，起到了润色文章的作用。
4) 使用省略结构Unless I am invited, I won’t go to the party.这个句子若省去unless之后的I am，语言简洁明了，而且不需考虑从句的时态，更能确保句子表达的准确性。
英语中经常用物称或形式主语it开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。
所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。
例如：Some people believe that it will be impossible for man to live on another planet in the future.→It is believed by some people that it will be impossible for man to live on此外，在书面表达中使用并列句、比较句和it句型等简单易行的固定句式往往能使句子呈现亮点。
(2)使用独立主格和分词结构在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构。
但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。
其实，时间状语、原因状语、条件状语等几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构。
例如:After Mary came back, they discussed it together.改为Mary coming back, they discussed it together.Since it is written in simple English, the passage is easy to understand.改为Written in simple English, the passage is easy to understand.独立主格和分词结构的使用使得句子的表达更简洁，生动，而且使前后文的动作更衔接。
如定语从句的使用，不仅使上下文更流畅，也充分展示作者运用较复杂的语法结构的能力。
如: Li Hua is a student. He comes from Jingzhou. He speaks Jingzhou dialect. We find it hard to understand. 这段话看似简洁，其实很呆板。
可以修改如下：Li Hua , a student from Jingzhou, speaks Jingzhou dialect, which we find hard to understand. 修改后的句子，除了简洁流畅，更加地道精练，句中既有同位语，又有非限定性定语从句，表达灵活，富有变化，体现了良好的语言表达技巧。
又如状语从句表时间、地点、原因、条件、让步等用途，此从句的使用，使得表述具体，说理严密。
如学生习作中的表达：He had just fallen asleep when the phone rang.(时间)Mother always reminds us to put things where we can find them easily.(地点)Because I can’t see very clearly, I have to sit near the front.(原因)My parents don’t mind what job I do as long as I am happy.(条件)Keep calm, whatever happens.(让步)再如名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句。
