专业英语四级写作分类模拟375
WRITING
1. Most e-shops are run by young people. Some college students also try to open e-shops in order to earn some money and get some social experience. Different people have different opinions on this matter. What's your opinion? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic: Should College Students Open E-shops?
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
答案：[范文]
Should College Students Open E-shops?
Young people are no strangers to e-shops prevalent in the age of e-commerce Some of them even run e-shops to get more involved in this larger trend of cyber economy. I, however, do not think college students should open e-shops.
First of all, running an e-shop requires a lot of time and efforts, which could be better spent for learning purposes. Unlike a regularly scheduled tutoring job, operating an e-shop means hours and hours of dealing with (potential) buyers and even rounds of intense negotiation about the price and mailing arrangement. Students could not afford to lose the already precious and limited time simply for gaining some working experiences and money. Secondly, running an e-shop requires trading skills and fiscal knowledge. Some students, acting on the impulse of "being their own bosses", are ignorant of financial risks and might end up in heavy debts. A wiser choice is to take some courses about trades, finance and asset management. When they graduate with full understanding of economic basics, they are ready to face and manage risks. By then, they are able to run an e-shop based on knowledge, rather than sheer luck.
In conclusion, college students should spend their valuable time on absorbing knowledge. To lower the risk of business failure, college students should be equipped themselves before they dive into the
ever-changing ocean of e-commerce.
[解答] 本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“大学生应否开网店”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
第一段：从电子商务时代入题，指出大学生不应该开网店。
第二段：阐述原因。第一，经营网店需要大量的时间和精力，这些时间和精力最好还是花在学习上；第二，开网店需要交易技巧和财务知识。大学生凭一时冲动开网店会冒很大的风险。
第三段：重申观点——大学生应该先学习技能，然后再下海做电子商务的生意。
2. Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
How to Stop Campus Violence?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
答案：[范文]
How to Stop Campus Violence?
Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then. In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent. Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling scheme, consisting of case workers and psychological professionals.
First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Through professional sessions, these violent offenders could be contained and managed in a measured and progressive manner. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings. The magnitude of offence is thus growing without external intervention. If a counseling scheme is set up, victims can turn to it for guidance and help. They are able to get the psychological
