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高考语文复习读写训练:f以动物视角写作j夏目漱石《我是猫》阅读指导+课后练习+写作任务作家小传夏目漱石(1867-191酌,日本近代文学作家的代表.生于江户(今东京)。
他的作品充满幽默,畅游于美的I在界中,被称为“余裕派飞主要作品有《我是猫》《萃枕》《明暗》《心》《三四郎》等。
被喻为”国民作家”的夏目漱石也是批评家、{非人、画家、学者。
日元的千元钞票上印有他的头像。
夏目漱石作为日本近代文学巨匠,对其后兴起的自将派一一型想主义文学运动影响很大。
他晚期抵达的文学境界乃是一种幻境。
因为他无法从文学、艺术中真正地排除人类的主观与客观。
漱石文学始终流i在于某种近代式的伦理背景中。
他的文学目的是彻底剖筋、克服自我深层的种种丑恶,i岛求更高的人类现想。
实际上却多少辛苦有某种乌托邦的性质或倾向。
去世前半年,夏目漱石自己也有过如下的文学定义:”先有伦丑H生而后有艺术性。
真正的艺术必然具有伦理性'批文入情《我是猫》是日本近代文坛巨骂声爱因漱石的处女作。
小说从猫的视角观察各种人物和事件,以一只猫的身份,俯视着日本当时的社会,俯视着二十时纪所谓现代文明的大潮.猫眼看世界,认清所谓x入学士不过是势利小人,表面的斯文儒雅背后其实是儒弱和迂腐,世界充满了腐朽与铜臭......作品语言诙谐、笔调细腻又不失深刻i犀利。
换个视角看也界,或许能看消-直没有发现的真相。
文本研读我是猫》〉以一只猫的身份讲述,新颖,吸引读窑.夏自漱石主人很少相咱家见上一面.职业嘛,据说是教师.他一从学校回来,就一头钻进书房里.家人都认为他是个了不起的读书郎,他自己也装得很像刻苦读书的样儿.然而实际上,咱家常常跟手摄脚溜进他的书房偷偷瞧,才知道他很贫睡午觉,不时地往刚刚翻过的书面上流口水。
他蓄胃病,偏偏又是个餐餐窑,撑饱肚子就吃胃肠消化窍,吃完药就翻书,读两三页就打盹儿,口水流到书本上,这便是他夜夜雷罔的课程表.》〉以猫的视角君世界,自然和人的视角不同.他看到的是人的通常看不到的,也许是更真实的世界.猫主人,-个斯文的做师.家人腹中的读书郎.如果不是搞雹见,谁知道他竟是如此懒惰又贫Dz呢?咱家虽说是猫,却也经常思考问题.当教师的真够逍遥自在.咱家着生而为人,非当教师不可.如此昏题便是工作,猫也干得来的.尽管如此,若让主人说,似乎再也没鲁比教师更辛苦的了.每当朋友来访,他总要怨天尤人地牢骚-通.》〉猫眼雹主人,馅霉主人冠冕望皇背后的真实,讽刺草草懒惰又自我标榕的真面目.。
非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板【对比观点题型】(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
(写作步骤:1.有一些人认为……;2.另一些人认为……;3.我的看法……。
)The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一). What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。
浅谈高中生读写任务型写作能力现状及提升对策(下)(3)背诵模仿写作。
背诵是提高学生读写任务型写作的最有效的方法之一。
学生读多了、背多了,培养了良好的语感,写出来的句子就不会出现太多的错误。
教师每周要求学生背一篇短文,这些文章都是通过精心挑选的并且是热门话题的文章,因此,学生比较愿意背,每节英语课上课铃一响,全班学生就开始齐读这篇文章,一周下来学生也读了七八遍,学习基础好的学生基本能背下来,基础差点的学生课后学生再花点时间就能背诵下来了。
在背作文前,教师应讲解这篇文作的写作方法以及文中所出现的重点句型和重要短语,学生每周利用一次晚修的十五分钟进行默写。
有时下周的作文课模仿写类似的作文,这样学生往往不易写错格式,并且还可以用上背下来的一些重点句子,写出来的文章水平明显会提高,因而学生的自我效能感就会增强,对英语学习就会产生浓厚的兴趣。
2.鼓励学生广泛阅读,培养语言表达意识“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”生动地说明了书面表达和广泛阅读的关系。
正确指导学生阅读是解决词汇问题和迅速提高读写任务型写作能力的必经之路。
语言知识是进行英语写作的基础,充足的词汇量、正确的语法知识、广阔的视野和文化背景是“写得好”的前提,但这些往往要通过阅读来实现。
阅读可使学生不断积累词汇、优美语句和英语习惯用语,更好地体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想感情的方式。
需要注意的是,英语阅读内容必须难易适中,时间量适中,否则会打消学生英语学习的积极性。
阅读与写作相辅相成,这样才能在高考读写任务型写作中起到良好的促进作用。
3.加强多样化训练,提升写作能力读写任务型写作能力说到底就是一项语言技能,而技能的形成往往离不开具体的训练。
笔者认为,可以采取以下训练方式来提升高中生的写作能力。
(1)加强词汇积累训练。
要想在较短时间内对读写任务型写作中的材料大意进行归纳,其前提是要完全读懂材料,这离不开充足的词汇量来作保障。
为了让学生多积累词汇,教师可让学生每天听写课本内所教单元的十个单词,并让科代表每天都在黑板最顶端写上五个课外的单词,学生下课或课后无形当中就可以记住了,并且第二天上课前几分钟进行听写巩固。
高考书面表达新题型训练(整合)解读:《2014年江苏高考考试说明》中书面表达示例部分多了读写任务型作文,这一作文类型在往年的考试说明上是没有的,将阅读与写作有机地结合,通过阅读所给材料的有关信息,进而对比信息进行加工,并结合平时积累的相关信息知识,按照任务要求谋篇布局,完成指定的写作任务。
(《2014年江苏高考考试说明》在考试形式、试卷难易比例以及试卷整体结构、题型、分值、时间分布等方面没有变化。
建议考生好好研究考试说明和往年真题,细细品味。
)【复习建议】对《2014年江苏省高考说明》中的词汇进行梳理,找出高考英语中常考的词,比较异同,创设情境等,在真实语言环境下训练词汇的使用。
以阅读为中心,不仅要好好阅读课文教材,而且要保持一定量的课外阅读,注意阅读速度和理解的准确率,同时训练对阅读文章的概括及缩写。
注意对《2014年江苏省高考说明》中提到的例题加以学习和研究,特别是读写任务型的作文,更应该引起重视。
“读写任务”议论文写作导练阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increase correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?为什么? b)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?c)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?[写作指导](1)拟定标题:根据议论的主题及写作内容确定标题:Study hard and enjoy yourselves。
四步骤训练提高读写任务写作水平摘要:读写任务题型侧重考查学生归纳概括和用英语进行思维表达的能力,是训练学生提高写作水平的一种良好题型,很多学生把它当作英语学习的最大障碍,影响学生学习英语的积极性,我把它总结为四步骤教学模式,提供给学生作为训练之用,对提高学生、特别是中下层次学生的写作水平是大有裨益的。
关键词:读写任务、四步骤、训练、模式【中图分类号】g633.3读写任务题型侧重于考查学生的归纳概括和用英语进行思维表达的能力,是有效训练和提高学生综合语言运用能力的良好题型,经过几年高考的检验,这一题型已经逐渐成熟和稳定。
而从平时的练习及考查来看,大多数学生视此题型为英语学习的最大障碍,练习或考查时显得茫然、无话可说、无从下笔而最终导致空白作文的出现,极大地影响了学生英语学习的积极性。
本人从事多年高中英语写作教学工作,期间历经困难和挫折,但经过多年的学习和教学总结,认为从以下模式来给学生进行训练,提高学生、特别是中下层次学生的写作水平是大有好处的。
第一,先行阅读“写作内容”,降低“阅读材料”的理解难度。
每篇读写任务题型的安排,都是按照“阅读材料——写作内容——写作要求—一评分标准”的顺序来编排的。
在“写作内容”环节中,它是以中文形式出现的,里面隐含着许多对写作极为有用的信息。
本族语为中文的我们,在进行英文写作时,不妨从“写作内容”入手。
“写作内容”往往会设置就“’某某主题’发表看法”的要求。
先行阅读“写作内容”,研究“写作内容”所隐含的要点,获取主题信息的基础之上,再回头去阅读前面的英文阅读材料,则无形中降低了英文原材料的理解难度,从而能够大大提高写好后面作文的信心。
例如(节选)1、以约30个词概括这段短文的内容2、然后以约120词就“注重自身素质,提高国人形象”进行议论,内容包括:(1)为什么中国游客在国外留下了不好印象;(2)除了文中提到的游客必须知道的可做和不可做的事情,还有哪些需要注意的;(3)在国外旅游时我们应该如何有效维护我们中国人的形象。
读写任务型作文复习资料模板一[写作内容]以约30词概括短文的要点。
然后,以约120词就“感恩”主题发表你的看法,并包括以下的内容:1. 根据你的学习、生活经历,简述你的感受,表达你对朋友或父母的感恩和祝福。
2. 你认为中学生应学会感恩。
3. 你的同学对这观点有何看法和建议。
Be Grateful For Our ParentsThe writer tells us a story that (上文作者告诉我们)he had an experience of recalling his old friends Michael suddenly(他突然回忆起他的朋友迈克的经历), and later they met each other at such moment that made him feel grateful to life anddidn’t feel lonely.This story reminds me of an similar experience of (这个故事让我想起了自己的一个类似经历)forgetting my mother’s birthday.On the evening of April 9th , I was watching TV while my mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive I was watching TV program when the telephone rang(当电话铃响起的时候我正聚精会神地看电视). It was from a friend of my mother’s, who wanted say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mother . “Today is my mother’s birthday?”I was a little puzzled(疑惑). “How come that I have forgotten all about it”I thought to myself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked and ashamed.(在这件事上,我感到很震惊和羞愧)It is not easy for parents to bring us up.(养育我们)They give us lots of love and care, while/however we don’t care for them enough. Now it’s never too lateto realize this and show our love and care for them. In fact, every one of us wishesour parents to be healthy and happy, so it is with me. So , we really should expressour endless thanks (无尽的感谢)to our parents. And my classmates share my opinion. To sum up, we should be grateful for our parents because of their greatest love and unselfish care.(总之,我们应该对我们父母伟大的爱和无私的关怀表示感恩。
读写任务写作基本模板记叙文写作第一段:1)The story/ The news/ The passage/ The proverb is about…2)The writer mainly tells us that…,whic h…3)According to the passage/ the writer…4) The story teaches us that we should…第二段:1)After reading the story, I am deeply moved by the hero, who reminds me of my mother…2)I have a similar experience at one time, too.3)The story remind me of another story that happened to my friend. One day, my friend was on my way toschool when his bike was broken…第三段:1)Through this experience, I have learned that we should help each other in our daily life.2)As for me/ Personally, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem, only in this way canwe build a harmonious society in the future.结尾段:In a word/ Al l in all/ In conclusion/ To sum up…议论文写作第一段:1)From this passage, we can make a conclusion that2)From the passage, we know that…3)From what is mentioned above, we know…第二段:1)Some people believe that…2)Those who support it say that…3)As is known to all/ As we all know, …第三段:1)This idea sounds right but is actually wrong2)Other people think that…3)Those who don’t agree with it think that…第四段:Personally/ In my opinion/ In my view/ From my point of view/ I agree with the former/ latter opinion.。
专题限时训练(三十八)[议论文型读写任务](限时:每篇30分钟)A阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Some people and businesses get lucky—they happen to be in the right place at the right time. And they often succeed, at least in the short run, despite themselves. But depending on luck isn't a good idea—as the Chinese proverb goes, “Man who waits for roast duck to fly into mouth must wait very long time.”The vast majority of what we call “luck”is the result of vision and purpose, hard work and passion. As another saying goes, “The harder I work, the more luck I have.” Successful people work hard to put themselves into a position where good fortune can find them. The harder a manager works at developing people, the luckier he will be in having a skilled and motivated staff. The harder a salesperson works at satisfying customers, the luckier he will be at gaining referrals. The harder a couple works at it, the luckier they are at having a great relationship.All that success requires is a strong vision, hard work, being passionate about goal s, building relationships, constantly seeking to improve, selfdiscipline and taking smart risks. Beyond that, it's simply luck.[写作内容]1. 以约30词概括短文的内容。
读写任务之夹叙夹议类文章写作负责人:尹红英核对人:郭爱炎第一部分:引言读写任务解题步骤(此处参考《五年高考三年模拟》第327页):第一步:审题1. 读原文材料读写任务题要求对所给的材料进行准确理解, 然后全面地转述所给的观点。
要求考生重视理解通篇文章的综合性,并考查了考生理解文章主旨,理解作者意图、观点和态度等的能力。
2. 读题目要求只有读透要点才不会跑题,而且为第二步“列”打好基础。
何为读透要点呢?首先,弄清楚要点和主题有什么关系;其次,看看要点所体现出来的写作文体是议论文、记叙文还是夹叙夹议的文章;然后,看看要点是否有一定的逻辑关系。
第二步:草稿一打结构,二打关键词,三打句式1. 结构:分几段写,每段写什么2. 关键词:结构拟定后,写下自己文章可能要用到的一些关键词,包括一些漂亮的词和自己可能会忘记的词或短语,主要是动词和名词3.句式使用一些固定句型,例如:强调句、There be句型等。
此外,在保证正确的前提下,可使用一些复合句。
句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句、虚拟语气、独立主格和非谓语动词等。
第三步:正式写◆注:卷面太重要了,一定要把字写整齐、写清晰第四步:检查检查的第一步主要集中在语法上,主要注意以下方面:(1) 句子是否有谓语动词。
(2) 谓语时态、语态是否正确;主谓是否一致。
(3) 代词与其指代的事物是否一致。
(5) 标点符号是否正确。
检查第二步应注意句子的表达:(1) 句子所表达的意思是否准确,尽量使用地道表达方式,避免中式表达。
(2) 上下文之间的逻辑衔接是否通顺、紧密。
(3) 所举例子能否能够说明观点、主题。
检查的第三步主要是通读一遍,注意一下拼写、单复数、大小写是否正确。
卷面参考学生作文一卷面参考学生作文二卷面参考学生习作三第二部分:夹叙夹议类文章写作指导◆夹叙夹议类文章的特点夹叙夹议的文章主要分两种, 一种在写作比例上偏重“叙”,另一种则偏重“议”。
统编教材必修上册第六单元微型写作学习任务—读写心得体会之读后感写作导引第一部分:微型写作学习任务——读写心得体会之读后感一写作任务阐释(一)文体解说心得体会是指读书、实践后所写的感受性文字,一般分为学习体会、工作体会、教学体会、读后感、观后感等。
这里的读写心得体会专指读后感,是指读了一本书、一篇文章、一段话、几句名言等之后,将得到的感触、启示写成的文章,它属于论述文体范畴,也是一种常见的应用文体。
它有与一般议论文一样的论证方法、结构等,但它又有与一般议论文的不同点,即它是由读生感、以联证感。
(二)写作要求读后感的写作主要应注意以下几个方面:1.立足原文,寻找感点“读”是“感”的前提和根本,抓准“感点”,是写好读后感关键的第一步。
通过仔细品读、选择性复读,对某些有朦胧感触的语句进行圈画、摘抄,如富有哲理性的名言警句、人物有价值的品行、事件前后的勾连等,并围绕这种感触有选择性地反复阅读文中的某些内容,强化印象和感觉,为写作读后感捕捉并强化情感的触发点。
2. 引用针对,情真感实在阅读中,有感触的点可能很多,首先要学会取舍。
在取舍的过程中,可以遵循“我被什么触动了—我的心情是怎样的—我为什么被触动”的思路来作选择。
一般的读后感应当充满时代气息,能透过书本内容观照现实生活,来拓宽写作的思路,增加读后感的厚重感。
3. 观点明确,条理清晰选择感受最深、见解最独到、现实感最强烈的触点,以生动简洁的语言进行概述、引用,准确表述“观点”。
所摆的事实、所讲的道理都紧紧围绕基本观点而展开,并为之服务,使论点更加突出。
不盲目联系,使文章前后脱节。
(三)示例引路“《瓦尔登湖》是一本静静的书,一本寂寞的书,一本孤独的书,是一本寂寞、恬静、智慧的书。
”译者徐迟先生在《序言》中如是说。
……梭罗认为:“假如人们能过宇宙法则规定的简朴生活,就不会有那么多的焦虑来扰乱内心的宁静。
”他透過自己的心路历程向读者呈现:如果让生活简单一些,其实不需要很多钱,也能够好好地活着;如果让生活简单一些,就可以腾出时间来深入生命,更从容、更充实地享受人生。
读写任务议论文写作导练(一)阅读下面这篇短文,按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day. Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people. Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger. The Great Wall can be called “great” mostly because of its amazing length. But we should realize that the length was made up of one brick at a time. If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. It began in the rule of China’s first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dynast y (221 BC—206 BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty. The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared. The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties. Some were taken away to build roads. Bricks carved with people’s names are put away as remembrances. Rubbish is spread over the battlements. The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. It will take a long time to let them know this. The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“如何保护我国的文化遗产”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的?b)保护文化遗产有何意义;c)保护我国的文化遗产的建议。
(注:因[写作要求][评分标准]与第一篇相同而省略,以下同)[写作指导](1)确定体裁:阅读材料,可以了解到万里长城目前因为种种原因遭到了破坏,并以小见大,引发对我国其它历史文化遗产保护的必要,要求写一篇议论文。
(2)拟定标题:How to protect the cultural heritages in our country?(3)如何概括:①找出论点(Great Wall might disappear some day)和论据(the Great Wall is being destroyed by people: to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties; to build roads; sold for 15 yuan per tractor load);②用自己的话将上述论点和论据表达出来。
(4)发表看法:①提出问题并加以分析:如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象,并分析其产生的根源;②问题的支持:写保护文化遗产有何意义;③问题的解决:提出保护我国文化遗产的具体措施。
(佛山胡邦仁)(二)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
You must have heard stress contributes to 80% of major illness and is responsible for 75% to 90% of doctor’s visits. But that’s not stress; it’s distress. “Stress is the only anti-aging agent we know of – the exact opposite of what we think,” says psychologist James E. Loehr.What really brings happiness is meeting obstacles and overcoming them. The damage occurs when stress levels never go down. A recent study showed it took nine days longer for the constantly stressed family caregivers of chronically(慢性地) ill patients to heal from wounds than it took otherpeople the same age. Stress is essential. Life without it would be like having a brand-new cherry-red Porsche and driving it only in the driveway.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2) 然后以约120个词就“你如何看待压力”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你是如何看待压力的?b)在你的学习或生活中压力是否大?如何正视压力?[写作指导](1)扼要概括:本文的论点、论据、结论。
用自己的话表达:论点→stress is not an obstacle but a power in our life, it is good for us to stay young.论据和结论→According to the study, we know that stress is necessary in our life, which can motivate us to go ahead.(2)构思经历:作者认为压力是抗衰老的有效药剂,生活的真正快乐来源于压力给予我们的不断的动力。
因此,可以介绍我们在平时学习中是如何将压力变为动力,及如何正视压力。
(中山肖维娜)(三)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average menand women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increase correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease. Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?为什么?b)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?c)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?[写作要求](1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;(2)标题自定。