小学英语作文指导
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小学英语作文写作指导
班级___________ 姓名____________
一、写人篇
1.写单个的人。在写作时,如无特别要求,可以从他(她)的年龄、长相、性
格、爱好、籍贯、上下班(学)的方式等方面去写。
例文1:以“My friend”为题写一篇小作文。例文如下:
My friend
I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Peng. He is tall and strong.
He is very active. He has big eyes and a big nose. He has short hair.
He is twelve years old. He likes riding a bike. He usually goes to school by bike. He likes making kites, too. We often go to the park to fly kites together.
2. 写群体的人物。如班级内的某些同学,家庭中的所有人物等。在写作时,可
以分别从长相、职业、爱好、上下班的方式等方面对所要描述的人物进行描
写。
例文2:以“My family”为题写一篇小作文,介绍一下自己的家人。
My family
I have a warm(温暖的) family. There are four people in my family.
My father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a doctor. He is tall and strong. He works in a hospital. He goes to work by car. My mother is a teacher. She is beautiful. She works in a school. She goes to work by bike. I am a student. I like collecting stamps. I usually goes to work by bus. I am three years older than my sister. I love my family.
3. 其他常见写人物的题目。如:“My pen pal”,“ My English teacher”,“ My
favourite star(明星)”等。
二、写物篇
1.写动态的物,如动物等。在写作时,可以从所要描写动物的外貌特征、喜
好及你对所写动物的感情等方面去展开描述。
例文3:请以My favourite animal为题写一篇小作文。例文如下:
My favourite animal
I have a rabbit. It’s my favourite animal. It’s name is Sweet.
It has long ears. It’s very small. It’s white. It has a short tail.
It has red eyes. It likes ea ting carrots. It likes jumping. It’s lovely.
I like it very much. It’s my best friend.
2. 写静态的物。如描写我的学校,我的家乡,我的房间等等。描写这类事物
时,可以用There be句型来描述。可以写一写这些事物所拥有的景物和物
品等。
例文4:请以My school为题写一篇小作文。例文如下:
My School
I study at Hope Primary School(希望小学). My school is very big and
beautiful. There are three buildings and a playground. There are many trees near
the buildings and the playground. There is a garden in front of our teaching
building(教学楼). There are many beautiful flowers in the garden. We often
read books in the garden .I love my school very much.
3. 其他常见的写物小作文题目:“My village”,“My bedroom”“My little dog”
“Our classroom”等。
三、写事篇
1. 写一写自己或他人在某一天或某个周末的常做的事。在这样的作文题目中,
我们要先通过作文题目来判定整篇文章的时态。再在这种时态的基础上去写出
自己或他人在某一天的日常活动。如:什么时间起床、什么时间上班、怎样上班、什么时间吃饭、什么时间回家、什么时间睡觉以及在白天还做了什么事情等。
例文5:下面是Uncle Bill工作日中的部分生活场景活动剪影,请你依据图片和汉语提示用几句话写一写他的一天。
参考词汇:subway, after lunch, newspaper
乘地铁上班教数学午饭后看报纸
下午5:30回家晚上看电视 10:00睡觉
写作分析:本篇小作文给我们做了要求和提示,依据要求我们可以判断Uncle Bill差不多每天都在做着这样的事,因此我们应该用一般现在时来写这篇文章。在写作时我们只要把提示要点都写出来就可以了(当然我们还可以依据提示要点的提示去写出与提示相关的句子)。同时还要注意,这篇文章的主语都是Uncle Bill, 动词要记着用第三人称单数。例文如下:
Uncle Bill’s Day
Uncle Bill is a teacher. He teaches math. He works in a school. He usually goes to work by subway. He has two classes in the morning. He often read newspaper after lunch. He goes home at 5:30 in the afternoon every day. He watches TV in the evening. He goes to bed at 10:00. He is very busy every day.