word专题复习六短文改错AWhen I first learnt to write in English, I, ran into much,many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and try,tried to translate into my own language.My teacher advised myself,me to keep a diary. I followed his advices,advice and wrote down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk,talking to myself as I was learning to express myself with,in simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed ∧,it to myself as I was learning to express myself to, my teacher. He liked it very,so muchthat he read it to the class. They all said what\ the story was a, good one. Their words were a great encourage,encouragement to me.Bin, the countryside there are some children who drops,drop out of school. The reasons are difference,different. Somefamilies are very,too poor to afford the education of their children. Some parents think it, isn't necessary for girls to go to the\ school, so their daughters lost,lost the chance. Some children don't want to, go to school beca use ∧,of the lack of interest in their studies. In my opinions,opinion, every child should have the chance to receive education, whether boys and,orgirls. Besides, the government should try to help those child,childrenbecause they will play important parts in develop,developingour country in the future.CLast summer, I, got a young pet dog.I named him with\ Max after my favorite toy, robot. The next day, I called her,him like this: “e here, Max！” Then he es,came up to me. I told him to get on the bed. Strange,Strangely, he went to the bathroom. Although,Because/As it was very hot, I thought that Max wanted to go for ∧,aswim, so I put him into the pool. To my surprises,surprise, he enjoyedhimself very, much in the water. Now Max has grown biger,bigger and follow,follows me wherever I go.He has brought me a lot of happy,happiness.DDear Yang Hui，I heard you'll have a two－weeks,two －week summer holiday and have decided to visit as much,many new places as possible. I, don't think it's a good idea. My friend Li Hua goes,went to Europe last July. He visited four countries, and stayed for only three days in every countries,country. He was always in ∧,a hurry. Li Hua was neither,either on a train or a bus, almost every day. When he returned back\ from Europe, he was very tiring,tired. So I suggest that he,you travel to one country and visit only one city. Choose a city on the coast, or,and you'll be able to have a good rest at the seaside.Best wishes!Yours，Wang FengEDear, Frank，I'm happy to, hear that at the end of August you will e to Tianjin to, study and stay with my family. I' m writing to saying,say wele to you.Before you arrive, we ∧,will get a room prepared for you. My mother is going to, cook delicious food while my fatheris going to drive them,us to school. There are many places of interesting,interest in Tianjin. Therefore, we have made a plan to, show you around Tianjin at weekend,weekends.For instance, we can neither,either pay a visit to Tianjin Ancient Cultural Street or enjoying,enjoy the fantastic views along Haihe River by, boat.Besides, I have heard you are, very fond of playing the\ volleyball. Then how about watching the matches among,between Tianjin Women's Volleyball Team against other, teams?I believe we, will have fun together. Looking forward to see,seeing you soon.Li MingFSeveral days ago,, I went to havedinner with my father. We came to the,a restaurant and order,ordered two bowls of noodles.We, waited and, noticed the people around us were all serving,served their meals, though they came late,later than us. We were very puzzled and a little bit angrily,angry. Finally, my father asked for \ the waitress passing by our table. “I know you're all busy，” she,he said calmly, “so you won't mind if we send out for ∧,a pizza, w ill you？” Say,Saying nothing, the waitress smiled and went away. Our meals were in front of, us five minute,minutes later.GI'm Danny. Now, let me talk about my day,daily life. I go to school from Monday on,to Friday. School starts at eight every morning but,so I always get up at seven.Then I make the bed and, feed my pet dog. After eat,eating breakfast, I walk to school. I have four classes in the morning. At the\ noon, I eat, lunch at home. Classes finish at 5：30 in ∧,the afternoon. After school, I often play basketball with my classmate,classmates When I get home，I sometime,sometimes do the dishes for my mother.In the evening，I do, my homework.I am not good in,at math.My brother Jimmy often helps me for,with it, after school.HI have a little brother who is, 11 years old this year. We get on good,will with each other and have had a good times,time together. Several days ago, I bought a book to,for him. The book is wrote,written by a person who has won the Nobel Prize and it aim,aims to help children learn about the unknown world.Before I buy,bought the book, I had read it.I felt that it, would be a good book for him, because of, \ he is, interested in new things and has so much,many questions.I hope that through reading ∧,the book，my brother can learn more about the world and knowing,know how to bee a good person.IThere is always something unforgettable in, my life, especially the story among,between my friend and me. Here is a story.On a rain,rainy day, I suddenly fall,fell down and hurt myselfbadly.My left leg was broken. So I had to, stay in the\hospital for about one month but,and I was worried about my study.Then my friend Bill came to, see me. After knowing about that, he said he could help me of,with my study.On hearing this, I, didn't feel worried any more. From that day on，she,he taught me every day. I was so moving,moved. I didn't fall behind ∧,the other students with Bill's help.I thanked him a, lot.In my opinion, friends are very important in, our life. No matter what happens，truely,true friends will always be friends.JOn April 10th this year, as, Li Ming was leaving his home in the morning, she,he got into the lift together with a woman. When the lift got ∧,to the fourth floor，it stopped and an,a middle－aged man enter,entered. Once the man got in, he grabbed the, woman's handbag. He pushed both Li Ming or,and the woman out of the lift. Li Ming ran to\ downstairs.When he arrived at, the ground floor, he saw the man walked,walking out. He told the caretaker at once and they all,both followed the thief to, a restaurant nearby where they met two policeman,policemen. Li Ming told them all about the case and the thief has,was finally caught.KHello Lisa,，How is it going? It's time for me to leaving,leave school. You ask me how,what I can do for my school. Here are my plans I'd like to, sharewith you. First of all, I plan to write a letter to the younger schoolmates，tell,telling them to value the people around and get along well with him,them.And I will share my success and fail,failure in study, too.Also，I will give some suggestion,suggestions on how to make our school good,better. More trees and flowers must be planted. More after－class activities should be, organized so that our schoolmates can join ∧,in them to relax. I hope all o f our younger schoolmates can live andstudy happy,happily in our school.KateLAll of\ kids want to be good at, learning. However, it is not easy. In my opinion, those kids which,who are good at learning are able to manage his,their time very well. They not only work hard at their subjects but also enjoy play,playing games.Playing also help,helps them learn better.As for balance between learning or,and playing, a,the most important thing is to follow the rule—work hard and, leave some time to, play. Moreover, kids should learn to work happy,happily and relax totally.I'm sure ∧,a good balance between learning and playing can make a difference to kids' grow,growth.MWhat do people need to light their home,homes and drive cars? Energy! Most energy people use e,es from coal，oil, and gas. Burn,Burning them pollutes the air. The air bees dirty. That can be harmless,harmful to people, animals, and, plants. Now more people are using clean energy. Such energy have,has many advantages. It doesn't pollute the air but,and it is reusable.For example, some homes have, solar panels(太阳能电池板)．The panels collect sunlight and turn them,it into electricity. Solar power can also ∧,be used to warm up the water in our homes. People can also put, wind power to a\ good use. They make electricity. But it is very difficulty,difficult to find this kind of, new energy.NHello, boys and, girls! May I have your attentions,attention，please? Today we chose,choose to ride to this beautiful place.To begin with, we need to be, clear about the location of the facilities. After enter,entering the, park, we can see a, big grassland in the\ front of us. On the left side is a, food store which we can buy some food. And on the right side stand,stands a toilet. A beautiful swimming pool lies behind the grassland, where the, water is clean enough for youto swim. What's more, you should keep the followed,following rules ∧,in mind. First, you must park your bikes at,on each side of the gate.Second，you can neither pick flowers in the park, or,nor play football on the grassland. That's all,. Thank you for your listen,listening and have a good day.OOne day last month, a group of, Chinese students arrived in Brisbane. I am,was one of them. After say,saying goodbye to, my dear parents at ShanghaiAirport, I started my long journey. That was, my the \ first journey abroad! How exciting,excited I felt when I got on board. We left Shanghai to,for Hong Kong to change to other,another plane to, Melbourne, the second largest city in Australia. From there we flew ∧,to Brisbane, which is the capital city of, Queensland, Australia. We were exchange students and send,sent to Australia by their,our government to, learn English in Brisbane for twelve months. From the, first few lessons, we found the teachers there really worked hardly,hard, and I am sure everything will go well in the next months.PMy mom is good at cooking and she, prepares dif－ferent dish,dishes for my family.I look forward to have,having meals every day, and sometimes I, invite my friends to have dinner at my home's,home. They always tell me of\ that the dishes taste really deliciously,delicious afterwards. Hearing that，I always felt,fell that I am lucky and proud. However，there is the,a problem. My mom is asked ∧,to prepare food at every party because she is, famous for her cooking skills. She is glad to do, things for my friends, and,but is unfair to let her work all the time. She is always tiring,tired after the parties.QI used to feel sleepy in class and I, couldn't pay attention on,to my lessons. As a result, not only did I do badly in our,my studies, but also my healthy,health went from bad to worse，for which I, was often scolded by myparents. I decide,decided to change my situation. Half a year ago, followed,following my teacher's advice, I began to join ∧,in some sports activities. I now play the\ basketball for 45 minutes every day. My health has improved, but,and at the same time, I've made lots of progresses,progress in my studies. Physical exercise has changed me into an,a new person!RThis autumn, my class went to, the seaside to go camping. We arrived at a sandy beach with a well,good view of the sea and mountains. We set up, our tents on the sandy beach. When night fell,, we started a fire to give we,us light and kept,keep us warm. All my classmates sat around them,it, talking, singing and laughing. Several hours late,later，Robert and I went back ∧,to the tent to have the,a chat.We stayed up all night. We found that we two had a, lot of in the\ mon. The fire and stars saw our happy,happiness and friendship. What,How I wished time would stop at the, moment!SEveryone has only one, life. It is our parents' best wishes to see us grow up safely and healthy,healthily. In return, we should treasure our life,lives. How to protect our, lives?Firstly, now there are more and more cars，but,so when we walk on, the road, we must obey the traffic rules，especially at, the traffic lights. At school, we should get on, well with our classmates. Don't fight with him,them, or we'll get hurt. Stay away from the danger,dangerous places.Secondly，on,in my opinion, we should eat healthy food instead ∧,of junk food. We'd better to\ have enough sleep and do, exercise every day. We must refuse drugs as, well as smoking. Besides, we are supposed to control the time of play,playing puter games. Remember, happiness is the most important things,thing. So smile every, day! Be happy every day!In a, word, we must try our best to protect and value our, lives!TOffering public bikes can, solve traffic problems in cities and protect the environment in,at the same time.New York starts a, new bike－sharing program with a specially,special rule: “The user of a public bike shouldn't ∧,be over 260 pounds, because the weight is much,too heavy for the bike to, carry.” The leaders of the program think a,the rule is very necessary. They think it will be safer unless,if fat people don't ride bikes. However, many people are against to\ this rule,. They think many fat people want to lost,lose weight by riding bikes. They should be allowed to do that. Other,Others say that the rule doesn't,won't because there are so many fat people in, this city.UDo you like walk,walking? Walking is a good way to help people get, active, lose weight and bee health,healthy. Proper walking can be done almost somewhere,anywhere. Before you start，a pair of shoe,shoes is all the things you, really need. Wear loose(宽松的) clothes that allow you move free,freely. If you walk to work, you can just wear your usual work clothes in,with fortable shoes.Getting,To get the health benefits(益处) from walking, it needs to ∧,be faster than a stroll(漫步). Most of us, walk between 3，000 and to\ 4，000 steps a day anyway.Try walking now unless,it you are ready. It's good for you.。
