高考英语二轮复习与增分策略 专题五 短文改错 第三节 题组练习 题组5

专题五 短文改错训练1AAt present ，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort ，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and with the brightest smile on her face.答案：At present ，I am extreme extremelyhappy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at to the full.It feels good to studyhard with my determining determinedclassmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarshipin middle school topped it them all.It was a time when my family is wasgoing through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped hopingto lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort efforts，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and yet/butwith the brightest smile on her face.BOn September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science andtechnology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.答案：On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science andTechnology Museum.At 8：00，we leave left for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them it to us briefly and told us how whatwe should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but and began our separate visit visits.Some students took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were amazing amazedat the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after beforewe knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly great interest in science and technology.CThis morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried ，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face ，I felt happy that I was able to help.答案：This morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or anda card with a phone number.Believe Believingthat the owner would be worried ，I immediatelytried the number.A man answered it in an amazing amazed voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late later ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an theowner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated repeatedly.Seeing the smile on her hisface ，I felt happy that I was able to help. DWhen it comes to the TV ，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore ，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.答案：When it comes to the TV ，there will be different word wordsin different people's minds.Some people think that watch watchingTV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or and know more about the world by watching latest news andreports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we canpredict that whatmay happen in the future and be prepared. Therefore However ，every coin has its two sides.There is arealso disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do does it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect effecton our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat it in a right way.训练2AMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at st year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.答案：My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on in February 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy happily in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate graduatedlast summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but andI am very good at it them .Last year I winned wonfirst prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp stamps .My favourite sports is areswimming in summer and skating in winter. BOne day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow －covering road.Many people passed by ，and no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance ，I took down my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.答案：One day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy heavily onto the snow －covering snow －covered road.Many people passed by ，and butno one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got getinto a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waitingthe ambulance ，I took down off my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry himinto an the ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this itis our duty to help those who are in troubles trouble. CI'm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but I can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student at school.Maybe I can't sleep good.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoy eat with my classmates.I think it's a great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely.It's so hard to make a decision.答案：I'm going to study in the senior middle school on inSeptember.I can live either at school and or at home.But I can't decide because both has haveadvantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but so/andI can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student students at school.Maybe I can't sleep good well.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoyeat eating with my classmates.I think it's great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely safe.It's so hard tomake a decision.DBeijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better ，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's to change our behaviour when we travel.答案： Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave behavedbadly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting cut down trees and hurt animals.And even better worse，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has havechanged.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at to/towards animals.Everybody Nobodysmokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily happy .As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect theenvironment.Let'schange our behaviour when we travel.训练3A(导学号59430108) Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do exceptsitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend ，Jesus答案：Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked asking my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your lifeyesterday.But I noticed you were too busily busy.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it therewould be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have hadto wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting sit in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot feet.I thought you wanted to talk to meand but you ran to the phone and calling calleda friend. Love always.Your Friend ，JesusBRecently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.答案： Recently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting apackage.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies company that I will not want.But So I will have to go to the trouble of send sending it back.” Late Laterthat day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything somethingin the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on towards/tothe package waiting for me at the post office change changedimmediately.Because I now knew who had sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful delightedto get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.CIt was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across the street.There ，walking into town ，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads “I will work for food.” My heart was sank.We continued with our meals ，but his image lasted in my mind.答案：It was an unusual unusuallycold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So But a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit satwith two friends by the window ofrestaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were was especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across thestreet.There ，walking into town ，was a man which whoappeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She He was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads reading“I will work for food.” My heartsank.We continued with our meals meal，but his image lasted in my mind.DWhen I was seven years old and my sister were only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going on ，but I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that we needed ，but we miss our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.答案：When I was seven years old and my sister were was only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week weeksafter his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing disappointed .Although we were really so tooyoung to understand what was going on ， I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that whatwe needed ，but we miss missedour father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time atKentucky Fried Chicken.His Her boss was a nice young man named Charles which whogot to know my mother and fell in love with her later.训练4A(导学号59430109)Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help improve your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors' advices.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours ，Li Hua答案：Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a an accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me I plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning turnto us if there is everything something we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at aboutyour school work.We will help you make it up when you returnto school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help helpsimprove your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or and drink more water than usually usual.Always follow the doctors' advices advice.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back. Yours ，Li HuaB(导学号59430110)In our life ，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class.Beside ，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses in learning English.答案：In our life ，everyone is surely sureto have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am wasabout my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following follow my teacher in the English class.Beside Besides ，my classmates often laughed at me becausemy poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took part in the English Corner that whereI metmany friends.They willing willingly shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you Italked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses progressin learning English.CThe trip of Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so excited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit many places of interests.I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my own mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.答案：The trip of toShanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so tooexcited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but and we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep keptstanding all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie lyingin bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited excitedly .My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit visitedmany places of interests interest .I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.DI want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that I needed in a big box.The big day had arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then got on the bus by me.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interestedwaiting for me.On arrival I found many student accompanied by their parents.I feel sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying my luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent through it.答案： I want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated dates back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that whatI needed in a big box.The big day arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and thengot on the bus by me myself.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interested interesting waiting for me.On arrival I found many student studentsaccompanied by their parents.I feel felt sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying carrymy luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent independentthrough it. 训练5AI still remember the day which I learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my best friends.We bought what we were needed and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So we were too tiring and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have we reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot away from me.What dangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey the traffic rules.答案：I still remember the day which whenI learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my bestfriends.We bought what weneeded and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly narrow escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So But we were too tiring tired and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have hadwe reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot feet away from me.What Howdangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey obeyingthe traffic rules. BHow often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that provides guidance ，say that the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because their teeth can become bad fast ，while adults without problem can wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are OK for people who have been caring for his teeth.Similar advice is giving elsewhere.An expert group review the evidence in Finland back in 2001 had recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.答案：How often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that which provides guidance ，say saysthat the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because theirteeth can become bad fast faster ，while adults without problem problemscan wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are isOK for people who have been caring for his their teeth.Similar advice is giving given elsewhere.An expert group review reviewingthe evidence in Finland back in 2001 recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.CHi Thomas ，How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting because I have appliedfor a holiday job ，taught English conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit of worried because I don't know if I should bring some present for the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or just smiling? What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do something that will seem rudely? This may seem unimportant with you ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or I'd love to know what you think.You had been to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，Bruno答案：Hi Thomas ， How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting excited because I have applied for a holiday job ，taught teachingEnglish conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit worried because I don't know if I should bring some present presentsfor the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or justsmiling smile ？ What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do somethingthat will seem rudely rude ？ This may seem unimportant with to/foryou ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or so I'd love to know what you think.You had havebeen to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，BrunoDDear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us.I write down a lot of good sides.Time passes quickly ，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far ，I really appreciate for your support.I know that without your properly guidance ，I would not have doneso well.However ，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand.I really need your help.Kate答案：Dear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked uslist what our parents had done for us.I write wrote down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly ，isn't doesn't it? It is three years when sinceI became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses progressthat I have made so far ，I really appreciate your support.I know that without your properly properguidance ，I would not have done so well.However ，what still makes me puzzling puzzled is how to make my dream to go to the atop university come true.Please continue to lend I mea hand.I really need your help. Kate训练6ADear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25－year －old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a English guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well.I have great interest the job.I had much confidence in myself.If I am given to the job ，I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully ，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions position as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me myselfbriefly. I am a 25－year －old young man /graduated graduating from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a anEnglish guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well good.I have great interest the job.I had have much confidence in myself.If I am given the job ，I can assureyou I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient convenienceto discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application willbe high highlyappreciated. Yours respectfully ，Wang YongBDear Mandy ，I'm not doing well in my lessons at school ，especial in maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university.He thinks I'm lazy ，but it's not true.I work really hard ，often study late into the night ！I've tried to talk to my mother ，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does.My brother doesn't study very hard ，and he always gets excellent grades.It's not fair!The only thing I like it is art.My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year.When I told my dad ，all he said was ，“You mustn't waste your time in art.You must focus your mind on your lessons ！”I'm feeling quite puzzling about what to do now.Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely ，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy ，。

训练2 短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2021·全国卷Ⅰ)Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!【答案】Nearly five years beforeago，and with the helpbyofourfather，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year years—wehadhavebeen allowing tomatoes to self－seed where theyplease.As ∧a result，the plants are growingsomewhereeverywhere.Thefruits are small in size，but juicy and tastetasty.There are somuchmanythat we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year afteryear，but或yetwe have never had any disease or insect attackproblems.We are growing wonderfullywonderfultomatoes at no cost!B(2021·南昌一模)A woman was taken to the hospital.While having an operation, she had a nearly death experience.Seeing God, she asked how this was it.God said，“No, you had another 40 years.〞On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery.She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it.Finally she got out of the hospital.While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by.Arriving in the front of God, she demanded，“They said I had another 40 years！〞God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.〞【答案】A woman was taken to the hospital.While having anoperation, she had a nearlyneardeath experience.Seeing God,she askedhowif/whetherthis was it.God said, “No, youhadhaveanother 40 years.〞On recovery the womenwomandecided tohave a plastic surgery.She had someone change her haircolor, thinking since she had so manymuchtime to live, she'dbetter make full use fromofit.Finally she got outof thehospital.While crossing the street, she∧was killed by anambulancespeededspeedingby.Arriving in ﹨the front of God, shedemanded, “TheyYousaid I had another 40 years！〞Godreplied, “But I didn't recognize you.〞C(2021·福州质检)Everyone of us are thinking about the future.I have decided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprisedI have had this dream when I was a child.I love children.I don't think to deal with them all years round is just wastingtime.On the contrary, to me it means happiness.Like we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, and not many of us want to become teachers.One of the main reasons of this is teachers work too hard but get too little.In spite of that, I'm determining to devote all my life into the cause of education.【答案】Everyone of us areisthinking about the future.I havedecided to become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprisedsurprisingI ﹨have had this dream when I was a child. I lovechildren.I don't think to deal with them all yearsyearround isjust wasting time.On the contrary, to me itmeans happiness. LikeAswe all can see, teachers are badly needed in ourcountry, andbutnot many of us want to become teachers.One of themain reasonsofforthis is∧that teachers work too hard butget too little.In spite of that, I'm determiningdeterminedto devote all mylife intotothe cause of education.D(2021·全国乙卷)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that Ilive.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothat whereIlive.Though not very big, ﹨but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at mealtimes.Some people even hadhaveto wait outside.My uncle tellsme that the key to his success is honesthonesty.Every day hemakes sure that fresh vegetablesorandhigh quality oil areusing used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams∧ofbecoming rich in theashort period of time.Instead, he hopesthat ourhisbusiness will growsteadysteadily.E(2021·长沙一模)In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain－climbing on April 10.Hundreds us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8：00 a．m., we gathered at the feet of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All a way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.While some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later, we both reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped or cheered with joy.The activity benefited to us a lot.Not only did it get us closely to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, but it also promoted the friendship among us. How a wonderful time!【答案】In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain－climbing on April10.Hundreds ∧of us took part in it.It was a nice day.At 8：00 a．m., we gathered at the feet footof Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.Alla the way we were chatting, singing and laughing,enjoyedenjoyingthe fresh air and the beautiful scenery.WhileWhensome fellbehind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later,we bothallreached the top.Bathed in the sunshine, wejumped orandcheered with joy.The activity benefited ﹨t o us a lot.Not only did it get us closelycloseto nature and give us relaxation from heavy schoolwork, but it also promoted the friendship among us.HowWhatawonderful time!F(2021·西安质检)People living in the country enjoy several advantages thatpeople lived in a city cannot enjoy.They stay close to the nature.They make friend with trees and stones, and cows and dogs.They breath fresh air.They listen the songs of birds.This contact with nature is beneficial to our health.There are many diseases that is common in the city, but are not to be find in the country.For example, near－sightedness is almost unknown to country people.People living in the country can easy get fresh vegetables, fresh fruit and fresh milk.And they get them at low prices than in the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say that they mean.They make and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.【答案】People living in the country enjoy several advantages thatpeople livedlivingin a city cannot enjoy.They stay close to ﹨thenature.They make friendfriendswith trees and stones, and cowsand dogs.Theybreathbreathefresh air.They listen∧to the songs ofbirds.This contact with nature is beneficial to ourhealth.There are many diseases thatisarecommon in the city,but are not to befindfoundin the country.For example, near－sightedness is almost unknown to country people.Peopleliving in the country can easyeasilyget fresh vegetables, freshfruit and fresh milk.And they get them atlowlowerprices thanin the city.Country people are mostly honest.They say that whatthey mean.They make and keep promises with seriousness.They live simply and directly with happiness.【导学号：90892094】。

英语⾼考短⽂改错增分策略英语⾼考短⽂改错增分策略五．短⽂改错（10分；建议⽤时：6分钟）设题形式及考查内容解题技巧指导做短⽂改错题⽬时，要逐⾏逐句研读，把句⼦切块，每⼀块作为⼀个组合，⼀并推敲错误，可以更节省时间，且准确率更⾼。

⾼频考点：第⼀组：名词、冠词、代词、数词和介词【解题思路】在短⽂改错题⽬中，遇到名词⾸先推敲名词⾃⾝⽤法是否错误，然后推敲其前的冠词、物主代词、数词、介词是否错误。

同时还要结合名词，推敲下⽂中的代词指代是否错误，结合介词，推敲其后的代词是否错误。

（⼀）名词1. Last winter when I went there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken . （chicken —chickens）2.Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. （informations—information）3.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes. （difference—different）4. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. （honest—honesty）5.When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. （Friday’s—Friday）6. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes. （friend—friend’s）（⼆）冠词1.As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons.（the—a）2.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. （第⼀个a—an /one）3.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself.（去掉the）4.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. （去掉flowers之前的the）5.During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.（countryside前加the）6.But in that case, we will learn little about world.（world前加the）7.As result, the plants are growing everywhere.（result之前加a）（三）代词1. I had done myself homework but I was shy.（myself --my / the）2.We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. （ours-- our）3. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. （your---you）4.Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. （all改为both或将all去掉）5.Much rare animals are dying out. （Much--Many）6.The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. （another --other）7. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electricity at home. （Other—Another）8.The doctor thought this would be good for you to have a holiday.(this—it)9.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books. （your—our）10. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. （yourself--- myself）11.I still remember how hard first day was.（在first day前加my 或the）12. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. （need前加I）（四）数词1.In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. （eighteen—eighteenth）2. He left his hometown in his thirty. （thirty-- thirties）．3.Two fifth of the land in that district is covered with trees and grass. （fifth—fifths）4. Shortly after the accident, dozen of police were sent to the spot to keep order.（dozen--- dozens ）（五）介词1.Still I was unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. （for--with）2.It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road.（on—of）3.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. （dreams后加of）4. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening music. （在listening 后加to）5.They have also bought for some gardening tools. （去掉for）6.When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. （去掉第⼆个of）7.I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, and he agreed.（去掉for）第⼆组：谓语动词和⾮谓语动词【解题思路】在短⽂改错题⽬中，主语后的成分是谓语部分，要重点推敲时态、语态、主谓⼀致、情态动词、虚拟语⽓；如果句⼦已经有谓语部分，再出现动词，就考虑⽤⾮谓语动词，即：不定式、动名词、分词。

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校短文改错精讲精炼05 22.George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home．Thank you very muchfor showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals．After we saidgoodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C．, where we stayed for three days．My brotherwas so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another coupleof day．Therefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturdayafternoon．It was really a nice experience．If you'd like to make trip to our city someday, I will be better than happy to be your guide．参考【答案】George,It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home．Thank you very muchSincefor showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals．After we saidus withgoodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C．, where we stayed for three days．My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he beggedmy parents to staying another couple of day．stay daysTherefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon．ItHowever flewwas really a nice experience．If you'd like to make trip to our citysome day, I will be better thanamorehappy to be your guide．Mike23.Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My fatheris very busy everyday outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother’s shoulder.Because my school isfar from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at thestation every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her.However, I always can’t help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and peopleoutside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till theview of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual.The view of my mother’s back will never change in my heart.参考【答案】24.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

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第三节题组练习1（2017·广西柳州、钦州一模)What do you do when there is an earthquake？Most people will try to leaving the building。

Nobody wants to be trap under the building。

I live on the third floor of an apartment building.I guess,if an earthquake came，I would probable just panic.I would not think about that I needed to do，such as hiding somewhere and running out of the building.I feel an earthquake last week.It was a small earthquake and it lasted only few seconds.There were no injury or damages。

I was not frightene d.I didn’t run out of my house。

Instead of,I hid myself under a strong table protecting myself head with a pillow.答案What do you do when there is an earthquake?Most people will try to 错误! the building.Nobody wants to be 错误! under the building.I live on the third floor of an apartment building。

I guess，if an earthquake came，I would 错误! just panic.I would not think about 错误! I needed to do，such as hiding somewhere 错误! runningout of the building.I feelfeltan earthquake last week.It was a small earthquake andit lasted only错误! few seconds。