中考英语作文专题复习课件.ppt

Written Expression - A Big Composition
书面表达—大作文
银杏树的叶子是扇形的，颇像一个蝴 蝶结。 嫩绿的 叶子上 有一根 根的叶 茎，叶 子摸起 来软绵 绵的， 非常舒 服。在 初春的 时候， 银杏树 还是光 秃秃的 。冬天 的寒风 使它褪 去了黄 黄的叶 子。
银杏树的叶子是扇形的，颇像一个蝴 蝶结。 嫩绿的 叶子上 有一根 根的叶 茎，叶 子摸起 来软绵 绵的， 非常舒 服。在 初春的 时候， 银杏树 还是光 秃秃的 。冬天 的寒风 使它褪 去了黄 黄的叶 子。
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银杏树的叶子是扇形的，颇像一个蝴 蝶结。 嫩绿的 叶子上 有一根 根的叶 茎，叶 子摸起 来软绵 绵的， 非常舒 服。在 初春的 时候， 银杏树 还是光 秃秃的 。冬天 的寒风 使它褪 去了黄 黄的叶 子。
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写句子
学 好
淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一 浪盖过 一浪， 连绵不 绝，源 源不断 。海水 在人们 的心中 无非是 易怒的 。可是 ，在现 在的我 眼中， 如同母 亲的手 温柔的 抚摸着 这岸上 的一切 生灵。 贝壳与 螃蟹戏 玩着， 玩累了 ，便躺 在柔软 的沙上 睡上一 会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
学 好 英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈

Ways to help the left-behind children
• family-- go back home to see their children as much as possible
• school-- try to improve the environment of education, which can provide a better study environment for them • government– set up a parents school for these children on holidays
Caring For the Left-behind Children
Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose 1.Linking words parents work away from their hometowns. Most of them (连接词) are from the countryside. It is well-known that they have many problems. On one 2.Good expressions hand, they are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents' love. On the other hand , they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the law, attributive clause because they're short of their families' care. However, instead of having pity on them, we should do adverbial clauses: something to help them. Firstly, their parents should go because原因状语从句 back home to see them as much as possible; Secondly, the if 条件状语从句 government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays; Finally, we can organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. It’s + adj. + for/of As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the sb.+ to do sth. world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

Let’s practice! 常见错误改正：
1.We at school from Monday to Friday .We are at school from Monday to Friday. 2.There are some grass or flowers beside the road. There is some grass and flowers beside the road 3.I think go to school by bus is the best way. I think going to school by bus is the best way. 4. They don’t know how to do They don’t know what to do it. They don’t know how to do it. They don’t know what to do . 5.They have become teachers for 30 years. They have been teachers for 30 years. 6.He teaches our English. .He teaches us English.
多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
人称一致:
Alice is my best friend,she he likes sports.
时态:
He has gone to Guilin yesterday. 去掉 主谓一致: This pair of shoes is are mine. The shoes are new. 习惯用法: He helps me with in my English.
词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文 够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。 不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误 多。 六档0分 空白

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(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
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影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
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把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。

the question to identify the most important information
Language expression skills
Vocabulary
Building a good vocabulary is essential for effective language expression Memorize new words, their meanings, and examples to enhance your language skills
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Conclusion
End your paragraph with a strong conclusion that summarizes your main point Ensure that your conclusion ties back to your opening presence and leaves the reader with a satisfying ending
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Body
Develop your paragraph by supporting your main idea with relevant details and examples Use transitions to connect different senses and ideas, making the paragraph flow smoothly
Grammar knowledge
Grammar knowledge is also essential for writing, but students may make misses in sense structure, tense, or punctation

Write your story about growth according to your story line.
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correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.

中考英语作文
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题： 弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟 写提纲； 2.圈要点： 仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调： 确定时态，人称，开头，结尾 4.写全文： 运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用：
(1) 尽量使用简单句； （2）学会使用意译法，将语义表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中 式英语； 例如：我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. （3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致； 例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组， 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如： “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整（80字左右）语句流畅， 无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分 3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多， 书写欠规范，给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。

一、外貌：1. 描述让My你难fa忘v（or帮i助te过你te）a的ch一e件r 事i情s 、M感r.想（Wa体n会g.）、He祝福is（祝ha愿n）dsome and of medium build. 2. My best friend is Linda. She is a beautiful girl with
- instead of/ rather than junk food diet
同类话题： Survey of Pocket Money Spending
§ buy books --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks ---
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成
都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康” 为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性； 保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起； 4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点 不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺， 表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分 )与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所 写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩 （Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。
was XXX who encouraged me. With his help, I can play
basketball as well as he does now.
六、感想（体会） I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend. He always holds on to achieve his dream. That is his best quality I should learn from him. -----I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I should learn form him.感 想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：

中考英语作文复习PPT 课件
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 1. 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词
B：老师对我说： “下周请准时到校！” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A： Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.

2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4. .......
注意:
1. 词数80~ 100 ;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
应试策略
时间
地点
人物 经过
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原因 结果
应试策略
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列要点
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人物 原因
I'd like to say thanks to my English teacher.
because
时间 once I failed. 地点 when She encouraged me. 经过 after that I turned to her for help.
结果
with her help I made progress.
应试策略
范文
Thank you, my teacher! I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she has helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam.When she found I was very worried, sh e encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I tur ned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English. Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,

2）学习范文结构，列出写作提纲 A. 线状结构图 以8B 第二单元为例 “my best holiday”要求学生描
述难忘的假日经历。这类结构可以以时间发展为 进程，如下图：现状结构图.doc
B. 网状结构 9A第五单元的任务是 my favourite film star.要
求学生为某一电影网站投稿，描述一位最喜爱的 电影明星。教师可以用网状图帮助学生理清文章 结构，此类线索的诸要素之间往往没有先后顺序， 但多有主次之分，写作时要注意详略得当。网状 结构图.doc
Yours, Ann
Dear Julia, I am sorry to hear that you are ill. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and take a good rest. You’d better eat a lot of healthy food. You’d better not drink coffee. You should drink lots of water. It’s good for your health. And you’d better not go to school tomorrow. Please take good care of yourself. I hope you’ll be better soon. Yours, Ann
Main task主要是基于文体的写作训练，以记叙文为 主，包括写人、记事、编写故事等；另有部分应 用类文体，包含书信类，如邀请信、申请信、推 荐信、抱怨信等以及海报、网页设计、演讲稿等。 Main task的写作内容覆盖初中学生学习、生活、 和其他各个方面，涉及个人情况，家庭，朋友与兴趣与爱好，饮食健康，日常生活，学校生活， 文艺体育，语言学习，自然等话题。具体内容如

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Write a paragraph about your favorite place to visit during the summer holidays Use at least three objectives to describe it and provide a reason for your choice
汇报人：可编辑
2023-12-24
Review of English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
Composition type and formatWriting Skills and StrategiesCommon topics and materialsSimulated test questions and analysis
Authenticity
Questions should be based on real life scenarios and contexts to ensure that the students are prepared for the types of challenges they will face in the actual exam
Techniques
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Use descriptive language to create vivid images, and show ratio than tell by depicting scenes and characters
Summary
An argumentative essay presentations a point of view and defends it through logical reasoning and evidence

Task 1: Warm up
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Talk in groups. Make a one-day plan for me.Find somewhere nice in your hometown for Miss Wan to travel.
Where can I go?How can I get there? What can I do there?What should I bring?How will I feel?
Do you have any better ways?
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Advanced ways to give advice:
It couldn’t be better if …
Nothing is more interesting than …
You are supposed to do sth… 应该
A one-day trip guide for Miss Wan
Task 3 :Improve the writing
I think you can go to Deshengyan Hill. You can go there by bus. You can climb the hill there and enjoy the amazing view. You should bring your camera. You will feel happy.
改变主语，丰富句型结构
灵活选用词汇或靓句，提升句子层次
使用从句，使句子形式多样化
Tip 1A clear topic sting details 细节支撑 right linking words连接词 make a great paragraph.

要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息，但不得使用真实姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟； 4. 词数：80-100字左右。
第一步：审 要认真审题，明确写
作体裁、人称、时态、提示和要求
具体做法：用笔勾画或写下
—— 1:体裁 2:人称 3:时态 4:提示 5: 要求
小组合作互批评分标准 满分20分： (1) 找“亮点”。找出好词好句，适当加1--3分； （2）正确使用过渡词和过渡语，加1分； （3）词数不够扣1分； （4）单词拼写错3个扣1分； （5）名词单复数不一致扣0.5--1分； （6）时态用错扣1分； （7）主谓不一致整洁扣2分； （10）文章结构不合理或体裁用错扣3-5分；
书面表达写作技巧 审
列 连
加
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假如你是王林。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。 你想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格和图片的内容，用英语写一封申请信。
姓名 本人特点 “爱心”表现 加入目的 王林
性别
男
身体健康；学习刻苦；乐于助人；与同学友好相处 （见图片） 1.… 2. …
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
语法问题之 代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、 反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主 代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用 物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误 用是考生最容易发生的错误 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 Ｍy mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.