北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲 第18讲 书面表达一2(下)

书面表达二经典精讲（上）主讲教师：林斌北京八十中学英语高级教师开篇语柱状和饼状图柱状与饼状图的典型文章一、如何描述图中的各种数字，使之不枯燥。

二、这类文章的基调是一般现在时还是一般过去时。

题一：受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。

请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。

短文的标题及首句已为你写好。

调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种调查范围：北京市的10所中学调查对象：高中生调查人数：1200调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________题二：最近，你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查，调查结果见下表。

第19讲书面表达一2012新题赏析开篇语新题赏析北京卷题一：情景作文（20分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。

请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。

注意：1. 日记的开头已为你写好。

2. 词数不少于60。

Saturday，June2 Fine__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________题二：开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。

2023-2024学年北京全部地区人教版高考专题英语高考复习1.填空题第1题.根据首字母和汉语提示写出适当的单词（1）She was really upset and ________（发誓）that she hadn't told anyone about my failure in the exam.（2）I don't think he actually meant to make an a________. He sounded more like defending himself.（3）Many people thought that economic development and environmental protection________（冲突）with each other.（4）There is no doubt that the famous writer, who was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature last year, has been c________ to writing for decades.（5）The reason why her novels enjoy great popularity among readers is that all the stories area are ________ in everyday experience.（6）There was an a________ silence when no one knew what to say, and then I changed the subject.（7）At universities and colleges you need a certain number of c________ to be awarded a degree.（8）When it comes to his designs, the manager becomes extremely p________, choosing colors carefully, and hard to satisfy.（9）Holding a higher position in the government means taking more r________ for the nation and its people.（10）The president and his family have been accused of corruption and i________ benefiting from his power.【答案】'（1）swore（2）apology（3）conflicted（4）committed（5）anchored（6）awkward（7）credits（8）particular（9）responsibility（10）illegally'【解答】（1）swore 考查动词时态。

2023-2024学年北京全部地区人教版高考专题英语高考复习1.填空题第1题.根据语意或括号中所给的单词提示，完成句子（1）With our knowledge ________（base）on practice, we can make great contributions to our country.（2）Hot ________ the night air was, we slept deeply because we were so tired after the long journey.（3）We were all surprised at the way ________ the young man behaved in the public. （4）That old man lives on the ________（earn）of his daughters.（5）It is requested that no one ________（tell）of the decision made by the president until the next meeting.（6）John held back from social activities because he felt ________（embarrass）with people.（7）You should understand the traffic rule by now. You've had it ________（explain）often enough.（8）Not until he went through real hardship ________ he realize the love we have for our families is important.（9）She looks as if she ________（get）back to her childhood again.（10）In the middle of the forest ________（lie）a deep lake, and we often went fishing when I was a little child.（11）A good teacher never criticizes his or her pupils but uses praise to bring ________ their best.（12）I'd appreciate ________ if you would like to teach me how to use the expression one more.（13）Broad and Narrow Alley in Chengdu is ________ a well-known tourist attraction that thousands of people came here.（14）He said he couldn't risk ________（suffer）from loneliness after getting older. （15）The book I gave you the other day refers ________ education problems.（16）He has two daughters, one of ________ works as a nurse.【答案】'（1）based（2）As（3）that（4）earnings（5）be told（6）embarrassed（7）explained（8）did（9）got（10）lies（11）out（12）it（13）such（14）suffering（15）to（16）whom'【解答】（1）based 考查过去分词。

第18讲书面表达一经典精讲(下)题一：描述下周其凤校长。

题二：介绍下诺贝尔奖得主钱永健先生。

题三：介绍下奥运冠军杜丽。

题四：介绍下航天英雄翟志刚。

题五：用英语写一篇瓦特·迪斯尼的生平简介。

(字数：80左右)提示如下：1. 1901年出生于芝加哥。

2. 年轻时想当画家，无人对他的画感兴趣。

3. 在家里的停车间里画画时，观察一只老鼠。

4. 后来到美国西部，开始画老鼠。

5. 后来成了成功的卡通制作人。

6. 于1966年去世。

题六：写一篇居里夫人的小传。

内容应包括：1. 居里夫人是伟大的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰一教师家庭。

她从小爱科学。

2. 16岁中学毕业，毕业后不能继续受教育，因为当时处于沙俄的统治，后不得不搞家教准去法国留学。

3. 1891年，使年24岁，巴黎大学就学。

1893年以优异成绩毕业并获物理硕士学位；一年后又获博士学位，留校搞研究。

4. 1895年与法国物理学家皮尔。

居里结婚，皮尔和她一样热爱科学。

5. 1903年居里夫妇合得诺贝尔物理奖，1911年居里夫人第二次获化学诺贝尔奖。

6. 1934年7月4日去世。

题七：请根据下列文字写一篇狄更斯的简介：查理·狄更斯是英国19世纪的杰出的文学家。

出生于一个贫苦的家庭。

10岁时，他的父亲负债入狱，狄更斯只好找一份工作谋生。

他从小爱好文学，24岁时，发表了第一部作品《匹克。

威克外传》，并一举成名。

其名作还有《大卫科波菲尔》、《雾都孤儿》和《双城记》。

他的许多作品被翻译成许多种语言而被人们所喜爱。

查理。

狄更斯死于1870年。

参考词汇：《匹克。

威克外传》The Pickwick Papers;《大卫科波菲尔》David Copperfield;《雾都孤儿》Oliver Twist;《双城记》A Tale of Two Cities注意：不要逐字翻译词数：120-150题八：请根据下列提示写一篇中国人民的伟大朋友史沫特莱（Agnes Smedley）的短文。

第23讲书面表达2013新题赏析题一：假如你是李华。

最近，你的美国朋友Tom正在学习汉语，感觉比较困难，因而来信向你询问要求：1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可适当发挥，以使短文流畅。

2. 词数：150词左右。

开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,I am happy to know that you are beginning to learn Chinese. It’s true that Chinese is not easy to learn, but there is no need to feel worried. I will give you some advice._______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________Hope you will be getting on well with your Chinese.Yours,Li Hua题二：结果如下表所示，请根据图中信息简某校高三年级对如何填报高考志愿作了一次问卷调查，注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文中不能出现考生本人相关信息。

2023-2024学年北京全部地区人教版高考专题英语高考复习1.书面表达第1题.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue（美德）. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if it had just happened.I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I said yes without hesitation.I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to a nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare, I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time. When the last movie finished, I looked at my watch: 6 pm. I was two hours late!I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in a corner, waiting patiently. I first apologized for being late, then told him that I wanted to get there as soon as possible, but that something was wrong with some of the main parts of the car.I would never forget the way he looked at me. "I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason." My father looked at me again and said, "When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station and asked if there was anything wrong. They told me you never picked up the car. So, you see, I know there's nothing wrong with the car at all."注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. ________Paragraph 2:"But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back." I begged. ________【答案】Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him, "I'm angry, not with you but with myself. You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years."Paragraph 2:"But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back." I begged. My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down, and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. However it was also the most successful lesson.【解答】Paragraph 1:A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him, "I'm angry, not with you but with myself. You see. I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot even tell the truth to his own father. I'm going to walk home now and think where I have gone wrong all these years."Paragraph 2:"But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back." I begged. My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down, and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty roads. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind. I apologized all the way, telling him how sorry I was, but he simply ignored me. For 18 miles he kept walking. Seeing my father in so much pain was the most awful experience that I have ever faced. However it was also the most successful lesson.第2题.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

第18讲非谓语动词之动词不定式（核心考点精讲精练）1. 三年真题动词不定式考点细目表时间卷次语法填空/短文改错/单项选择2023年新高考I卷语法填空: to bite；作宾语to be lifted 作宾语补足语新高考II卷语法填空:/全国甲卷语法填空: to teach 作目的状语短文改错： /全国乙卷语法填空: /短文改错：to washing改为to wash 作目的状语北京卷语法填空: to address 作目的状语浙江卷(1月)语法填空:/(6月)语法填空: /天津卷单项选择：/2022年新高考I卷语法填空: to increase 作目的状语新高考II卷语法填空: to see作目的状语全国甲卷语法填空: ：to journey作后置定语短文改错： /全国乙卷语法填空: to strengthen 作目的状语短文改错： /北京卷语法填空: to harm 作后置定语浙江卷(1月)语法填空: to continue 作宾语(6月)语法填空:/天津卷单项选择：To keep作目的状语2021年新高考I卷语法填空: /新高考II卷语法填空: to educate 作目的状语全国甲卷语法填空: to walk 固定句型作主语短文改错：全国乙卷语法填空: to have 作宾语短文改错：北京卷语法填空: to invest 作后置定语浙江卷(1月)语法填空: to plant 作目的状语(6月)语法填空:天津卷（第一次）单项选择:（第二次）单项选择:2. 命题规律及备考策略【命题规律】近3年对于动词不定式主要考查：1．不定式作的句法功能（目的状语、定语、宾补、主语和宾语）；2．不定式的一些固定搭配、固定句型；3. 不定式的各种形式及其意义。

【备考策略】1.系统归类不定式的用法;2.熟练掌握不定式的各种形式的意义和用法，尤其是不定式作目的状语及其固定搭配、固定句型。

【命题预测】预测2024年高考语法填空和短文改错对不定式的考查仍然会成为的重点和难点，尤其是考查不定式的一些固定搭配、固定句型。