2015年雅思写作大作文真题解析

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2015年6月6日雅思写作(一)

有人认为给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取,有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要,讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。

Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help should be encouraged and respected.

Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, it is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases.

Those who donate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Instead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions children’s life.

In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count:274)

2015年6月6日雅思写作

Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为经济援助之重要的,有人认为实际的帮助和建议重要,你的观点是什么?

解析题目:2015年6月6日雅思考题中向有需要的国家提供帮助指的是一些国家在遭遇自然灾害,经济危机的时候,应该给他们提供直接的援助,例如医疗队,救援组织或者志愿者。对立方观点经济援助指的是直接的捐助。本题为旧题重新,考察的是国家援助的方式。

作家立场:发达国家应该承担对于发展中国家援助的责任。对比经济援助,直接的帮助更加可取可行。

首段;背景介绍+ 争议焦点+ 作家立场

二段:反方观点的展开:

三段:正方观点的展开:

It is not rare to see that some well-to-do countries like to give financial aid or other forms of assistance to poor ones. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not economic donation is the best effective means of assistance. Speaking for myself, those developed countries should assume the responsibility of helping those countries, which are still suffering from the agonies of popular disease, poor education and undeveloped trade. However, financial aids have both its merits and demerits,other suitable ways of assistance should be considered.

Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that those well-off countries ought to give a financial aid to the poverty-stricken nations’charities. For a start, it is out of the reason of humanism and could benefit the straitened nations directly. More precisely, financial beneficence from the developed countries could help to accelerate the construction of infrastructure and establishing more houses. Also, when some rich countries donate large sums of money to those needy countries, more job opportunities could be created and thus living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced. Nonetheless, we should be alert to the possible risks of economic assistance. For one thing, it might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. For another, international aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. Apart from financial aids, there are still many other options available to assist the undeveloped nations. One way is by opening up trade barriers, which enables the poor countries to sell their goods. Another way is to forgive economic debts so that the self-supporting ability of the poor nations could be promoted. Eventually, the teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries to take the responsibilities of educational and medical assistance.

解析:It is not rare to see that ……这一点很常见

解析:Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not 关于是否应该……,人们持有不同意见

解析:Financial aids have both its merits and demerits 经济援助有利有弊