高二英语短文改错练习题 含答案
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高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
2020届高二英语专题:短文改错(三)1.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
)划掉。
修改:修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
后的词。
Good morning, everyone. It’s great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun, born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influenced by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports. I’m easy-going, get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream constantly that I, along with mine classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swim freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.1.Good morning, everyone. It’s ∧ great honor for me to speak here. My name’s Li Xiaojun,a born in a harmonious family. My father and mother are all high school teachers. Influencedboth 或去掉all by them, I read widely during my early age, but by them, I read widely during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and I’ve developed a great interest in arts andand sports. I’m easy sports. I’m easy-going, -going, ∧get along well with my classmates.and 或get 改为getting It is this personality which It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helps me win over all my classmates’ friendships, and also helpthathelps me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life. Being admitted in your to university has always been a beautiful dream for me.university has always been a beautiful dream for me. I dream I dream constantly that I, along with minemy classmates, will study happy with the help of the respectable professors. I dream that I will swimhappily freely in the sea, enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future. Thank you.dreams2.短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.第一节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加大词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写处修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.【解析】文章介绍现在有很多花店,人们也相互送花表达关心和感谢。
2023年高二英语短文改错练习题及答案下面是一篇关于2023年高二英语短文改错练习题及答案的文章。
题目1:阅读下面短文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
改正每处错误,并将正确的答案写在答题纸上。
Dear Sarah,I'm so exciting to hear that you’ve got the scholarship to study abroad! Studying in a foreign country offers amazing opportunities to improve both the language skill and personal growth. I'd suggest that you should take fully advantage of this experience.First, remember living and studying aboard may bring out the challenges you've never encountered before. However, instead of get discouraged, stay positive and determined. Try to see these challenges as chances to learn and grow which will prepare you for future difficulties.Secondly, be open-minded to embrace different cultures. Communicate with local people and make friends with them. This will not only enhance your cultural understanding, and also help you to build a support network while you are far away from home.Finally, be actively involved in various campus activities. Participate in clubs, sports, and events. This will not just enrich your experience studying abroad, but also provide you the opportunity to make lifelong friends.I’m sure with a positive mindset and hard work, you will have an unforgettable experience abroad. Wishing you all the best in your new adventure!Yours sincerely,Emily答案:Dear Sarah,I'm so excited to hear that you've got the scholarship to study abroad! Studying in a foreign country offers amazing opportunities to improve both language skills and personal growth. I'd suggest that you take full advantage of this experience.First, remember living and studying abroad may bring out challenges you've never encountered before. However, instead of getting discouraged, stay positive and determined. Try to see these challenges as chances to learn and grow, which will prepare you for future difficulties.Secondly, be open-minded and embrace different cultures. Communicate with local people and make friends with them. This will not only enhance your cultural understanding, but also help you build a support network while you are far away from home.Finally, be actively involved in various campus activities. Participate in clubs, sports, and events. This will not just enrich your experience studying abroad, but also provide you with the opportunity to make lifelong friends.I'm sure that with a positive mindset and hard work, you will have an unforgettable experience abroad. Wishing you all the best in your new adventure!Yours sincerely,Emily题目2:阅读下面短文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写作文。
文中共有10处错误,每句中最多两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
It is easy to go downhill than to climb uphill. So it is also easier to fall into bad habits than into good one. Bad habits do not come sudden. It come little by little . School boys first picks up alittle in school and on the street. When they can’t writ e into their homework, they copy from their schoolmates. If they see bigger boys smoking, they also want learn to smoke. When they get bigger, the habits became stronger and stronger, so that they can not longer get rid ofthem. What necessary it is to get rid of the bad habits in the beginning!【解析】俗语说“上山容易下山难”。
同样道理,养成坏习惯要比养成好习惯容易。
但是坏习惯也是逐渐养成的。
比如,孩子先在学校或者街上沾染了坏毛病,然后慢慢带到生活,学习中。
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)短文改错(每篇文章共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(1)Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.(2)Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine(3)Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.(4)Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.(5)Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua(6)Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John(7)Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min(8)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.(9)Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.(10)Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.(11)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.(12)We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!(13)My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.(14)Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua(15)You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time,I woke up and found me still in bed!(16)It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly,I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.(17)I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner(执业者). One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.(18)Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.(19)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(20)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.(21)When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.(22)I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.(23)Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.(24)I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..(25)I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.(26)This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”(27)Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death.As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures.Nor do they care about which happens to consumers.They shall be charged by law.Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua(28)Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(29)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping(30)Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet(31)Abby,How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you.I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes,Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone!I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday,the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas.Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好,常见类型要记牢。
高中英语改错题及答案【篇一:高中英语短文改错(含答案)】ike riding my bike. though it is not very new, but it ismy best friend. i find very convenient to go anywhere with abike. ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. iuse my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warmand dry. it can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold andrain is pouring down. it can also be very danger. of coursei will be very careful on my bike. in facts, accidents are notthe only problem. one day i went to school and come backto find his front wheel was missing. it was a long walk tothe repairer’s shop. now i have two strong locks.【答案与解析】1. 去掉 but。
汉语可说“虽然……但是……”,但英语习惯上不能相应地说though…but…。
(注:不能去掉 though,因为这样还会涉及大小写的改动,而高考短文改错每行只允许改动一处。
)2. find 后加 it。
此 it 为形式宾语,真正的宾语是其后的不定式。
3. ride 改为 riding。
动词原形不能用作主语,要改为动名词。
4. on 改为 in。
表示在某个季节,用介词in。
5. can 后加 be。
短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepareI had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythin g went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s b ooks regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案:A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → so mething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such短文改错专练(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高中二年级英语短文改错20题1. I saw him play football when I passed by the playground yesterday. (答案解析:“saw him play”应改为“saw him playing”,see sb. doing sth. 表示“看见某人正在做某事”)。
2. The book has written by a famous writer. (答案解析:“has written”应改为“has been written”,此处是被动语态,书是被写的)。
3. He told me that he will come back soon. (答案解析:“will come”应改为“would come”,主句是过去时,从句要用相应的过去时态)。
4. We are planting trees on the hill these days. (答案解析:“are planting”应改为“have been planting”,“these days”表示一段时间,要用现在完成进行时)。
5. The door is locking. (答案解析:“is locking”应改为“is locked”,门是被锁的,要用被动语态)。
6. The book is interested and I enjoy reading it. 答案:interested 改为interesting 。
解析:interested 表示“感兴趣的”,通常修饰人;interesting 表示“有趣的”,修饰物,此处修饰书应用interesting 。
7. He stood there, looked at the picture. 答案:looked 改为looking 。
解析:stood 和looked 两个动作同时发生,此处“看着”应用现在分词作伴随状语。
8. The girl dressed herself beautiful. 答案:beautiful 改为beautifully 。
高考英语短文改错连词错误单选题30题1. I like sports, but my brother likes music.A. butB. andC. orD. so答案:A。
本题考查连词的用法。
“but”表示转折,“我喜欢体育,但是我哥哥喜欢音乐”,前后是转折关系,A 选项正确。
B 选项“and”表示并列;C 选项“or”表示选择;D 选项“so”表示因果。
2. He is very tired, yet he keeps working.A. yetB. soC. forD. because答案:A。
“yet”在句中表示转折,“他非常累,然而他还在继续工作”,符合句意,A 选项正确。
B 选项“so”表示结果;C 选项“for”表示原因;D 选项“because”表示原因。
3. The weather was fine, so we went for a picnic.A. soB. butC. orD. and答案:A。
“so”在这里表示因果关系,“天气很好,所以我们去野餐了”,A 选项符合。
B 选项“but”表示转折;C 选项“or”表示选择;D 选项“and”表示并列。
4. She studies hard, while her sister is very lazy.A. whileB. whenC. asD. if答案:A。
“while”在此处表示对比,“她学习努力,而她妹妹很懒”,A 选项正确。
B 选项“when”表示当……时候;C 选项“as”可表示当……时候、因为等;D 选项“if”表示如果。
5. You can come either today or tomorrow.A. eitherB. neitherC. bothD. all答案:A。
“either...or...”是固定搭配,表示“要么……要么……”,A 选项正确。
B 选项“neither...nor...”表示“既不……也不……”;C 选项“both...and...”表示“两者都……”;D 选项“all”用于三者或三者以上。
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?改错四Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward tohear from you soon.Yours, Li HuaTwo months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them,there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改错六Dear Li Ming,I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.改错八One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen.When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the water.Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy.He was about to drag(拖)the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge.One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”答案:改错一:who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate 改为immediately 10.fire前加the改错二:the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.去掉had 7.去掉but8.去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her改错三:1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确10.and改为or 改错四:1. learn 改为learnt或learned。
五、短文改错部分1A few days before, I saw an interesting program on TV. It was about the problem of the traffic in our cities. It seemed that a great deal of damage had done by traffic. But now our cities are still suffered from riffs problem. Some buildings are actually falling to piece. It is often faster to walk than to go by car or bus, The problem has been getting worse for long time. This is only one problem among thousands others in our cities. All sorts of terrible things have happened with our cities. And the biggest question is “What can we do about it?” Our roads have ever been designed for such a heavy traffic.1. _______2. _______3. _______4. _______5. _______6. _______7. _______ 8. _______ 9. _______10. _______Key:1.将before改为ago。
before用于过去完成时,ago用过去时。
2.去掉traf-fic前的冠词the。
traffic指车辆。
为不可数名词。
3.had后加been。
高考英语改错经典十篇(附答案)一、(大纲卷)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…,这是单个的动名词定语,做主语的时候,谓语动词要使用单数形式。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(__),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient togo anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Therefore, I am very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore on my mother’s biketo buy some books and come out to find the bike missed. Now I have two strong locks.【解析】我喜欢骑车,当然也很在乎我的自行车。
2.短文改错,下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
高中英语短文改错练习20道1. I saw him just now, and he go to the library. (错误:go 应改为went,根据saw 可知时态为过去时,and 连接的两个动作时态应一致。
答案:went)2. When I was a child, I often play football with my friends. (错误:play 应改为played,When I was a child 表明是过去的时间,动词要用过去式。
答案:played)3. She is always talk about her hobbies. (错误:is talk 应改为talks 或is talking,is 后不能接动词原形,要么用一般现在时第三人称单数形式talks,要么用现在进行时is talking。
答案:talks / is talking)4. We have learned English for three years ago. (错误:for three years ago 应改为since three years ago 或for three years,for 接时间段,since 接时间点。
答案:since three years ago / for three years)5. He will come back after two weeks. (错误:after 应改为in,after 接过去的时间点,in 接将来的时间段。
答案:in)6. The teacher asked me to explain the meaning of the word "frequently", but I have no idea. (错误:have 应改为had,因为主句是一般过去时,从句时态应保持一致。
答案:had)7. We all know that reading a lot can improve our writing skills easy. (错误:easy 应改为easily,修饰动词improve 要用副词。
短文改错练习(1)Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme well on76. _______________ achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending77. _______________ Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go78. _______________ to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from79. _______________ most students is that they don’ t go to school . In fact ,80. _______________ they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they81. _______________ have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if82. _______________ they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home .83. _______________ As many of the more than one million people who receive84. _______________ home schooling in the United States , they feel if they85. _______________ have gotten a good education .短文改错练习(2)Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I76.’dlike to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing77. _______________ just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’ 78tring,._______________ since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my79. _______________ hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house80. _______________ to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you81. _______________ may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared82. _______________ as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school.83. _______________ So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody84. _______________ was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was85. _______________ locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习(3)Get a good education is more important today than76. _______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public77. _______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments78. _______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in79. _______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children80. _______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees81. _______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend82. _______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different83. _______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was84. _______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens85. _______________ through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习(4)Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to76.our school. The boys were made dig pits( 坑 ).The77.girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits.78.All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we80.began to water it.The water was at the foot of81.第 1 页共 31 页the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails( 桶 )82.of water from one to other up to the hill.83.We did not finish water the trees until it84.was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy.85短文改错练习(5)A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took76. _______________ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to77. _______________ speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be78. _______________ interested to begin studying another language. At the first79. _______________ class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise,80. _______________ in which he would say one word or two in French, and each81. _______________ student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he82. _______________ kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him83. _______________ why. “ I find it great funs. It’ s the first time I’ ve84heard. anAmerican speak French with a German accent. ”he explained it.85. _______________短文改错练习(6)It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’ t take many76. _______________ friends with me because I wanted to row alone.77. _______________ I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center of lake.78. _______________ A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds79. _______________ were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the80. _______________ paddles(桨) and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky81. _______________ over me or green water around me I was extremely82. _______________ relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I83. _______________ knew them. I came back home very l ate. I didn’ t feel84. _______________ tiring at all, for I had really had a good time.85. _______________短文改错练习(7)I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last76. _______________ it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that77_______________ everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually.78_______________ Things here are same now as they were before. The79 _______________ final examination will take place in next week. So80 _______________ I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’ s nice81_______________ to think that the summer vacation is coming82_______________ near. I can’ t say much I wantetoyouse all again.83 _______________ I am looking forward to spend summer days with you.84_______________ Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home.85_______________短文改错练习(8)One afternoon , when I was on my way home , the sky76. _______________ changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began77. _______________ to feel worried because I didn’ t have both a raincoat78. _______________第 2 页共 31 页or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain .79. _______________ Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling80. _______________ me from behind . I turned to have a look and find that81. _______________ he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He82. _______________ offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all83. _______________ the ways home . Without Liu Wei’ s help , I would have84. _______________ got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help !85. _______________短文改错练习(9)I worried about the missed bag all the evening.76. _______________ I tried to remember exact what I had done from the77. _______________ time I left the store until at the time I got home. I78. _______________ remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I79. _______________ was having lunch. So I must have it when I left the80. _______________ store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus.81. _______________ But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus82. _______________ to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I83. _______________ was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages84. _______________ lying on the floor. I should be much careful next time.85. _______________短文改错练习(10)A kind of little car may someday take place of today ’ s big76. _______________ ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be77. _______________ less pollution in there air . There will be more spaces for78. _______________ parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And79. _______________ driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km80. _______________ per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars81. _______________ will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars82. _______________ are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used83. _______________ for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for84. _______________ the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars85. _______________ fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习(11)Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though you find76. _______________ something, but it doesn’ t mean it belongs to you. If you77. _______________ can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back78. _______________ it. I ’ m sure you would want someone to do same for79. _______________ you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep80. _______________ it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office.81. _______________ I went to the office and found the person to who it82. _______________ belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and83. _______________ gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two84. _______________ rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in85. _______________ my heart.第 3 页共 31 页Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习(12)Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired (退休) .He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us76. _______________ chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he77. _______________ taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively.78. _______________ Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict79. _______________ to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework.80. _______________ he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be81. _______________ poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies82. _______________ very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and83. _______________ caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student.84. _______________ As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all85. _______________ the students.短文改错练习(13)I can ’ t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think76. _______________that three reason might explain the fear. The first77. _______________reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water78. _______________when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable79. _______________fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the80. _______________water as something danger. Second, my eyes81. _______________became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my82. _______________glasses in the water, I couldn’ t see anything, but this83. _______________ increased my fear. The worst part of your experience84. _______________is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since85. _______________then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习(14)Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use76. _______________ example from the animal world because there is a biological77. _______________basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as78. _______________fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’ s useless to say79._______________to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his80. _______________ father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can81.’ tmake race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you82. _______________are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians83. _______________ are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If84. _______________you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress.85. _______________短文改错练习(15)Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play76. _______________ make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study77. _______________第 4 页共 31 页all the times you will become a boring person . You must78. _______________ go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will79. _______________ lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only80. _______________ talks about work and study .81. _______________ Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember82. _______________ what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You83. _______________ do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could84. _______________ be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week .85. _______________短文改错练习(16)Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ ve got a wonderful news to tell you .76. _______________ I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77. _______________ further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam78. _______________ for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However ,79. _______________ my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me80. _______________ going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me81. _______________ for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They82. _______________ can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study83. _______________ in the capital instead . Then I’ llntinuebeab l ivingetocowith84. _______________ them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ?85. _______________Best WishesJane短文改错练习(17)I used to love science class— all of them —76. _______________ biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I77. _______________ liked those classes because I felt that it helped me78. _______________ understand what the world works. For example,79. _______________ when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one80. _______________ class, I learned why it rained. I think science classes81. _______________ clear up mysteries. But then there is always more82. _______________ mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class?83. _______________ That was math. After learn the basics of the subject,84. _______________ Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never85. _______________ saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习(18)Some Americans judge success on the length76. _______________ of his vacations . The man who gets a m onth ’ s77. _______________ vacation each year consider himself more successful78. _______________ than the man gets two weeks . Many people want79. _______________ to be teachers because it is teachers who can80. _______________ get three-month vacation every year . Some college81. _______________ teachers who teach the three classes consider82. _______________ themselves less successful than that who teach83. _______________ only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less84. _______________ work Americans do , the less successful they85. _______________ consider themselves .第 5 页共 31 页短文改错练习(19)As is known, that is interesting to teach children to swim whilethey are still babies. Most the large towns in Florida andCalifornia have already run particularly lessons for babies.The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, in several countries, special courses are now offered tothe children who are from 7 to 24 month old. Thefirst step is to have child get rid of fear of water.Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once hecan do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child canmaster the technique and push him forward through the water.短文改错练习(20)Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Roadwhere you have often come to buy things. The other dayif you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I madethe mistake about the price. You looked at two differentprice of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and theother 21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you andyour wife have left. Will you please come to our shop toget in your change or to return your vase and get a 30yuan one instead? I apologize you for it.I ’ m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习(21)In many western countries heavy industry is high developedThe difference between heavy and light industry are basedon the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce machines while light industry uses machines produce thesmaller objects required for various purpose in our home and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on thegeneral level of economic or industrial development.In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. Todecrease (减少) costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on Local supplies of the coal or electric power for their operation短文改错练习(22)It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .76. _______________I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road .77. _______________Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to 76. _______________77. _______________78. _______________79. _______________80. _______________81. _______________82. _______________83. _______________84. _______________85. _______________76._______________77._______________78._______________79._______________80._______________81._______________82._______________83._______________84._______________85._______________76._______________77._______________78._______________79._______________80._______________81._______________82._______________83._______________84._______________85. _______________第 6 页共 31 页78. _______________see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell79. _______________down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes .80. _______________She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the bananapeel 81. _______________and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went to82. _______________apologize her for that ,but my vanity ( 虚荣心 )prevented me .83. _______________The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action .84. _______________And now ,after I do everything , I’ ll think carefully whether85. _______________it ’ s right or wrong . I’ ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习(23)Mr Wang is my physics teacher.He has 1.75meters 76. _______________in the height.He was born on November4,1952.So 77. _______________he is a middle-aged man.He graduated Qinghua 78. _______________University in1978.After graduation,he becomes a middle 79. _______________school teacher.He has been taught physics for more than20years. 80. _______________He is very successful as a teacher.He has been given a 81. _______________lot of honor.He not only is a good teacher in 82. _______________physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83. _______________In his spare time,he likes reading books,collect stamps 84. _______________and listening music.Also,Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85. _______________短文改错练习(24)Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job76._______________interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to77._______________get a job at the TV station, and you ’ve been looking78. _______________for several week now and haven ’tfound anything.79. _______________The job at the grocery store doesn ’tsound badly. If I80. _______________am you, I ’d take it. If you worked there a while, you81. _______________could earn some money. Its your decision, of course,82. _______________第 7 页共 31 页but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you83. _______________decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you84. _______________can think about get a bike later.85. _______________Love短文改错练习(25)Dear Abby :How are you? I’ ve got a wonderful news to tell you76. _______________I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77. _______________further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam78. _______________for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore,79. _______________my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my80. _______________going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me81. _______________for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They82. _______________can ’ t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83. _______________in the capital instead.Then I ’ ll be able to continue living with them.84. _______________How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?85. _______________Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习(26)I went to see film after supper. On my way to the76. _______________ cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her77. _______________ way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards78. _______________ her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her79. _______________ great change had taken place in the past few years and she80. _______________ told me something about Britain and her family.81. _______________ Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy,82. _______________for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also83. _______________ practise my spoken English. If I hadn’ t worked hard at84. _______________ English, I would have been able to help her.85. _______________短文改错练习(27)I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last76. _______________it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that77. _______________第 8 页共 31 页everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually.78._______________Things here are the same now as we were before.79._______________The final examination will take place of next week.80._______________But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’ s nice to81. _______________think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’ 82t. _______________say much I want to see you all again.83. _______________Looking forward to spend summer days with you.84. _______________Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home.85. _______________短文改错练习(28)Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76. _______________us English when I attended training course two77. _______________years before. Helen always made good preparations78. _______________for the lessons, she tried her best to make her79. _______________classes lively. I used to being poor in English,80. _______________especially in written English. But now I’ m able81. _______________to write English letters and reports correct.82. _______________I still remember how she helped me for my83. _______________English patiently. Teachers’ Day ’ s come. I’ m going to84._______________send to her a card and give her best wishes.85. _______________短文改错练习(29)ow I'd like to tell you why I learn English.76._______________ I often read English aloud and try learn something 77. _______________important by hearts,which helps me remember it easily and 78. _______________form the good habit of thinking in English .79. _______________I listen to a lot and talk with others in English.80._______________ In this way,I was improved both my hearing 81. _______________and my spoken English .I keep a diary in English every day but my 82. _______________第 9 页共 31 页spoken English is becoming better and better.83. _______________I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge.By this means,I can express itself 84. _______________in English correct.That's the way I have been learning 85. _______________English . I hope it will be useful to you .That's all . Thank you .短文改错练习(30)I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could76. _______________ never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend77. _______________ several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant78. _______________ cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to79. _______________ make my professor angry.“ I can’ t see everything,” I said. Then80. _______________ he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still81._______________ couldn ’ t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82._______________ microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something83._______________ and drew it quickly on the paper.“ What’ s that?” my professor asked.“ That ’ s what I saw.” I answered.“ No, you don’ t! ” he shouted,84. _______________ and he bent over and looking into the microscope.“ That ’ s your85. _______________ eyes! You’ ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习(31)One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came,76. _______________she tells him that her right leg was very sore( 酸痛 )in the knee.77. _______________The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult.78. _______________She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never before79. _______________ suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful examination,80. _______________the doctor said,“ You are in a very bad state of health for a woman81._______________of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of82. _______________old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will mostly83. _______________clean up in spring!”“ Nonsese, doctor!” she said,“84My.left knee isperfect, and it is exactly same age as my right.”85. _______________短文改错练习(32)May I have you attention please? I have a few76. _________things to tell you. When you have a class here in the77. _________language lab, please be here a little early. Change78. _________your shoes before enter the lab. Don't bring anything79. _________here except your text books. When you are into,80. _________please don't touch these machine without permission.81. _________Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you82. _________第 10 页共31页should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders83. _________ can be used make a copy of the listening materials.84. _________ When class over, turn off your machines and leave85. _________ the lab one by one.短文改错练习(33)Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested76. _________ activity, in which children and their parents play the rich77. _________ and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious78. _________ food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥).79. _________ Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the80. _________ children. They hoped that their children could be taught the81. _________ lesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes.82. _________ Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food.83. _________ The activity was held to make the families understand the84. _________ differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents85. _________ know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习(34)We'll never forget the day which my classmates and76. _________I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week.77. _________It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It78. _________ looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers,79. _________ grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some80. _________ workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We81. _________ talked to them and learned a lot. We understood82. _________ them further. On the way home we felt tiring.83. _________ We all thought that we had a very good day. We84. _________ really hoped that we could get more chances of85. _________ leave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习(35)One morning Mrs Jenkins went to department store76. ___________ to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store77. ___________ before she got there. She had to wait. Then a fat lady.78. ___________ came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve79. ___________ for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy80. ___________ a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she couldn't do.81. ___________ The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let Mrs Jenkins82. ___________ explain anything but insisted that Mrs Jenkins83. ___________。
高二英语短文改错试题答案及解析1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried himback to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.【解析】文章介绍作者在图书馆看书的时候,救了一个落水的小孩的事情。
高二英语短文改错练习题含答案1. I was very exciting when I heard that I had won the lottery. I immediately called my family and friends to share the good news. But when I went to claim the prize, the lottery company told me that I had made a mistake and that I had not actually won anything. I was very embarrassed and disappointed. I learned an important lesson that day, which is to always double-check important information before getting too excited.Correction:I was very excited when I heard that I had won the lottery. I immediately called my family and friends to share the good news. But when I went to claim the prize, the lottery company told me that I had made a mistake and that I had not actually won anything. I was very embarrassed and disappointed. I learned an important lesson that day, which is to always double-check important information before getting too excited.2. My best friend and me have been friends since we were children. We went to the same school and had a lot of fun together. But as we grew older, we started to drift apart. I think it was because we had different interests and priorities. I became more interested in sports and she became more interested in music. We still talk occasionally, but we are no longer as close as we used to be.Correction:My best friend and I have been friends since we were children. We went to the same school and had a lot of fun together. But as we grew older, we started to drift apart. I think it was because we had different interests and priorities. I became more interested in sports and she became more interested in music. We still talk occasionally, but we are no longer as close as we used to be.3. Last summer, I went on vacation to Europe with my family. We visited many famous cities, such as Paris, Rome, and London. Although it was a lot of fun, it was also very tiring. We had to walk a lot and there were many crowds of tourists everywhere we went. In the end, we were all glad to be back home and to rest for a few days.Correction:Last summer, I went on vacation to Europe with my family. We visited many famous cities, such as Paris, Rome, and London. Although it was a lot of fun, it was also very tiring. We had to walk a lot and there were crowds of tourists everywhere we went. In the end, we were all glad to be back home and to rest for a few days.4. My mom always tells me that I should eat more vegetables, but I don't like them very much.I prefer to eat meat and potatoes. However, I know that vegetables are good for me and thatI should try to eat more of them. I have started to experiment with different ways of cooking them, such as roasting them in the oven or grilling them on the barbecue. I have found that I actually enjoy them more when they are prepared in these ways.Correction:My mom always tells me that I should eat more vegetables, but I don't like them very much.I prefer to eat meat and potatoes. However, I know that vegetables are good for me and that I should try to eat more of them. I have started to experiment with different ways of cooking them, such as roasting them in the oven or grilling them on the barbecue. I have found that I actually enjoy them more when they are prepared this way.5. Yesterday, I went to the mall to buy a new pair of shoes. I found a pair that I really liked, but they were too expensive. I decided to look for a cheaper pair, but I couldn't find anything that I liked as much. In the end, I decided to buy the more expensive pair, even though it meant that I would have to cut back on other expenses for the rest of the month.Correction:Yesterday, I went to the mall to buy a new pair of shoes. I found a pair that I really liked, but they were too expensive. I decided to look for a cheaper pair, but I couldn't find anything that I liked as much. In the end, I decided to buy the more expensive pair, even though it meant that I would have to cut back on other expenses for the rest of the month.1.原文:Last weekend, I went to a trip with my family to the countryside. We stayed at a small hotel near the river, which was very beautiful. The weather was perfect, so we went for a walk along the river and took some photos. After that, we went to a local restaurant and tried some traditional food. It was very delicious.改正:Last weekend, I went on a trip with my family to the countryside. We stayed at a small hotel near the river, which was very beautiful. The weather was perfect, so we went for a walk along the river and took some photos. After that, we went to a local restaurant and tried some traditional food. It was very delicious.2.原文:I usually have a lot of homework to do every day, but yesterday was very different. I only hada few homework to do, so I decided to watch a movie. The movie was very good and it made me feel relaxed. After the movie, I went to bed early and had a good sleep.改正:I usually have a lot of homework to do every day, but yesterday was very different. I only hada few assignments to do, so I decided to watch a movie. The movie was very good and it made me feel relaxed. After the movie, I went to bed early and had a good sleep.3.原文:I have been learning English since five years ago. At first, it was very difficult for me, but now I can speak English very well. I think the key to learning a language is practice. If you practice every day, you will improve your language skills quickly.改正:I have been learning English for five years. At first, it was very difficult for me, but now I can speak English very well. I think the key to learning a language is practice. If you practice every day, you will improve your language skills quickly.4.原文:Last week, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball, had a picnic, and went on a boat ride. It was a very fun day. After we left the park, we went to a shopping center and bought some clothes.改正:Last week, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball, had a picnic, and went on a boat ride. It was a very fun day. After we left the park, we went to a shopping center and bought some clothes.5.原文:I love to listen music when I am studying. It helps me to concentrate and focus. My favoritetype of music is classical music. I find it very calming and relaxing.改正:I love to listen to music when I am studying. It helps me to concentrate and focus. My favorite type of music is classical music. I find it very calming and relaxing.6.原文:My sister and I are very different. She is very outgoing and enjoys spending time with friends, while I prefer to stay at home and read. However, we both love to travel and explore new places.改正:My sister and I are very different. She is very outgoing and enjoys spending time with friends, while I prefer to stay at home and read. However, we both love to travel and explore new places.7.原文:I am very interested in history, especially ancient history. I think it is fascinating to learn about how people lived in the past and how they shaped the world we live in today.改正:I am very interested in history, especially ancient history. I think it is fascinating to learn about how people lived in the past and how they shaped the world we live in today.8.原文:My favorite season is summer. I love to go swimming and spend time at the beach. I also enjoy eating ice cream and having barbecues with my family.改正:My favorite season is summer. I love to go swimming and spend time at the beach. I also enjoy eating ice cream and having barbecues with my family.9.原文:I have been studying for my exams for weeks. I have been working very hard, but I am still very nervous about the exams.改正:I have been studying for my exams for weeks. I have been working very hard, but I am still very nervous about the exams.10.原文:I have a lot of hobbies, but my favorite one is playing the guitar. I have been playing for three years, and I have improved a lot. I enjoy playing different types of music, such as rock, pop, and classical.改正:I have a lot of hobbies, but my favorite one is playing the guitar. I have been playing for three years, and I have improved a lot. I enjoy playing different types of music, such as rock, pop, and classical.第一套原文:Dear Mr. Li,I am writing to apply for the position that you advertised on your company’s website. I graduated from a famous university last year, majoring in accounting. During my college years,I have taken a lot of courses on accounting, finance and economics, which provided me witha solid foundation for my future career.I have had two internships during my college years, one in a small accounting firm and the other in a large multinational corporation. These experiences have allowed me to learn a lot about the accounting industry and to develop my communication and teamwork skills.I believe that I would be a good fit for your company and I am very interested in joining yourteam. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application further with you.Sincerely,Li Ming改正后:Dear Mr. Li,I am writing to apply for the position that you advertised on your company's website. I graduated from a famous university last year, majoring in accounting. During my college years, I took a lot of courses on accounting, finance, and economics, which provided me with a solid foundation for my future career.I had two internships during my college years, one in a small accounting firm and the other in a large multinational corporation. These experiences allowed me to learn a lot about the accounting industry and to develop my communication and teamwork skills.I believe that I would be a good fit for your company, and I am very interested in joining your team. I look forward to discussing my application further with you.Sincerely,Li Ming第二套原文:Last weekend, I went to a camping trip with my friends. We had a great time there, but there were also some problems. First, we forgot to bring enough food and water, so we had to ration our supplies. Second, we didn't bring enough warm clothes, and it got very cold at night. Third, we didn't set up the tent properly, and it collapsed in the middle of the night.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We went hiking and fishing during the day, and we sat around the campfire at night, telling stories and singing songs. We also made some new friends with the other campers.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to do it again. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring more supplies and to set up the tent properly.改正后:Last weekend, I went on a camping trip with my friends. We had a great time there, but there were also some problems. First, we forgot to bring enough food and water, so we had to ration our supplies. Second, we didn't bring enough warm clothes, and it got very cold at night. Third, we didn't set up the tent properly, and it collapsed in the middle of the night.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We went hiking and fishing during the day, and we sat around the campfire at night, telling stories and singing songs. We also made some new friends with the other campers.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to do it again. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring more supplies and to set up the tent properly.第三套原文:Yesterday, I watched a movie called "The Shawshank Redemption". It was a very moving story about a man who was wrongly accused of murder and sent to prison. He made friends with some of the other prisoners and used his intelligence and determination to help them and to improve his own situation.The acting in the movie was excellent, and the cinematography was beautiful. The soundtrack was also very good, with a mix of classic rock and orchestral music.Overall, I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who enjoys drama and suspense. It is a powerful story about the human spirit and the triumph of hope over adversity.改正后:Yesterday, I watched a movie called "The Shawshank Redemption." It was a very moving story about a man who was wrongly accused of murder and sent to prison. He made friends with some of the other prisoners and used his intelligence and determination to help them and to improve his own situation.The acting in the movie was excellent, and the cinematography was beautiful. The soundtrack was also very good, with a mix of classic rock and orchestral music.Overall, I would highly recommend this movie to anyone who enjoys drama and suspense. It is a powerful story about the human spirit and the triumph of hope over adversity.第四套原文:Last weekend, I went to a concert with my friends. The concert was held in an outdoor stadium, and there were thousands of people there. We had a great time dancing and singing along to the music.However, there were also some problems. The sound system was not very good, and it was hard to hear the singers sometimes. Also, there were not enough toilets, and the lines were very long.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We met some new people and made some new friends. We also got some great photos and videos of the concert.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to go to another concert soon. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring some earplugs and to use the toilet before I go.改正后:Last weekend, I went to a concert with my friends. The concert was held in an outdoor stadium, and there were thousands of people there. We had a great time dancing and singing along to the music.However, there were also some problems. The sound system was not very good, and it was hard to hear the singers sometimes. Also, there were not enough toilets, and the lines were very long.Despite these problems, we still had a lot of fun. We met some new people and made some new friends. We also got some great photos and videos of the concert.Overall, it was a great experience, and I would love to go to another concert soon. Next time, though, I will make sure to bring some earplugs and to use the toilet before I go.第五套原文:Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. We did some shopping and had lunch at a restaurant. The food was delicious, and the service was excellent.After lunch, we went to see a movie. The movie was a comedy, and we all laughed a lot. The acting was good, and the story was funny and entertaining.After the movie, we walked around the mall some more and did some window shopping. We also had some ice cream and talked about our plans for the weekend.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. We did some shopping and had lunch at a restaurant. The food was delicious, and the service was excellent.After lunch, we went to see a comedy movie, and we all laughed a lot. The acting was good, and the story was funny and entertaining.After the movie, we walked around the mall some more and did some window shopping. We also had some ice cream and talked about our plans for the weekend.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!第六套原文:Last week, I went on a trip to Beijing with my family. We visited many famous tourist attractions, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. We also tried a lot of delicious local food, such as Peking duck and dumplings.One of the highlights of the trip was watching a traditional Chinese opera. The costumes and makeup were very colorful and intricate, and the music and singing were beautiful. It was a great way to learn more about Chinese culture and history.Another highlight was visiting a local market and bargaining with the vendors. We bought some souvenirs and gifts for our friends and family back home. It was a fun and exciting experience, and we got some good deals.Overall, it was a great trip, and I learned a lot about Chinese culture and history. I would love to go back and explore more of this fascinating country.改正后:Last week, I went on a trip to Beijing with my family. We visited many famous tourist attractions, such as the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, and the Summer Palace. We also tried a lot of delicious local food, such as Peking duck and dumplings.One of the highlights of the trip was watching a traditional Chinese opera. The costumes and makeup were very colorful and intricate, and the music and singing were beautiful. It was a great way to learn more about Chinese culture and history.Another highlight was visiting a local market and bargaining with the vendors. We boughtsome souvenirs and gifts for our friends and family back home. It was a fun and exciting experience, and we got some good deals.Overall, it was a great trip, and I learned a lot about Chinese culture and history. I would love to go back and explore more of this fascinating country.第七套原文:Yesterday, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball and soccer, and we had a lot of fun. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk and saw some beautiful flowers and trees. We also saw some birds and squirrels, which was very exciting.Later, we went to the playground and played on the swings and slides. We also played a game of tag and laughed a lot.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the park with my friends. We played basketball and soccer, and we had a lot of fun. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk and saw some beautiful flowers and trees. We also saw some birds and squirrels, which was very exciting.Later, we went to the playground and played on the swings and slides. We also played a game of tag and laughed a lot.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my friends. I can't wait to do it again!第八套原文:Last night, I went to a concert with my girlfriend. The concert was held in a small club, and there were only a few hundred people there. The music was loud and energetic, and we danced and sang along to the songs.The band was very talented, and they played a mix of rock and pop music. The lead singer had a great voice, and he interacted with the audience a lot. It was a very intimate andpersonal performance.After the concert, we met the band and got some autographs and photos. They were very friendly and down-to-earth, and we had a great time talking to them.Overall, it was a great night, and I had a lot of fun with my girlfriend. I would love to go to another concert like this soon.改正后:Last night, I went to a concert with my girlfriend. The concert was held in a small club, and there were only a few hundred people there. The music was loud and energetic, and we danced and sang along to the songs.The band was very talented, and they played a mix of rock and pop music. The lead singer had a great voice, and he interacted with the audience a lot. It was a very intimate and personal performance.After the concert, we met the band and got some autographs and photos. They were very friendly and down-to-earth, and we had a great time talking to them.Overall, it was a great night, and I had a lot of fun with my girlfriend. I would love to go to another concert like this soon.第九套原文:Yesterday, I went to the museum with my classmates. We saw a lot of interesting exhibits, such as ancient artifacts, paintings, and sculptures. We also learned a lot about the history and culture of our country.One of the highlights of the museum was a special exhibition on the life and works of a famous artist. We saw some of his most famous paintings and learned about his inspirations and techniques. It was a very inspiring and educational experience.After the museum, we went to a nearby park and had a picnic. We enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit, and we talked about what we had seen at the museum. We also played some games and had a lot of fun.Overall, it was a great day, and I learned a lot about art and history. I would love to go to the museum again and explore more of its exhibits.改正后:Yesterday, I went to the museum with my classmates. We saw a lot of interesting exhibits, such as ancient artifacts, paintings, and sculptures. We also learned a lot about the history and culture of our country.One of the highlights of the museum was a special exhibition on the life and works of a famous artist. We saw some of his most famous paintings and learned about his inspirations and techniques. It was a very inspiring and educational experience.After the museum, we went to a nearby park and had a picnic. We enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit, and we talked about what we had seen at the museum. We also played some games and had a lot of fun.Overall, it was a great day, and I learned a lot about art and history. I would love to go to the museum again and explore more of its exhibits.第十套原文:Yesterday, I went to the beach with my family. We had a great time swimming and playing in the sand. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk along the beach and saw some beautiful shells and rocks. We also saw some crabs and other sea creatures, which was very exciting.Later, we rented some bicycles and rode along the boardwalk. We saw some street performers and had some ice cream. We also took some photos and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my family. I can't wait to go to the beach again!改正后:Yesterday, I went to the beach with my family. We had a great time swimming and playing in the sand. We also had a picnic and enjoyed some sandwiches and fruit.After the picnic, we went for a walk along the beach and saw some beautiful shells and rocks. We also saw some crabs and other sea creatures, which was very exciting.Later, we rented some bicycles and rode along the boardwalk. We saw some street performers and had some ice cream. We also took some photos and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.Overall, it was a great day, and I had a lot of fun with my family. I can't wait to go to the beachagain!。