雅思培训丨雅思写作考点剖析与语料库
（系列文章之全球化类考点与语料库）
一、话题概述
全球化指的是世界各国之间的经济文化交流联系更加密切。朗阁雅思培训中心资深写作专家分析，雅思写作考点在于分析多元化国家的利弊，主要体现于语言，贸易，旅游这三个方面的利弊影响。
二、历年考试频度
雅思写作的全球化类话题基本属于每年必考类，历年频度如下表：
2016年1月至5月频度：
三、考点分析：
以下，朗阁雅思培训中心的资深写作专家将为大家整理分析2004年至2016年所有全球化类考题。
1. 国际文化融合与差异
考点题1：
Many countries now have people from different cultures and ethnic groups. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development? (121013)
题意：国家有不同文化种族的人口。原因，积极or消极？
考点分析：多元文化multiculturalism的好处是促进文化的融合，鼓励思维的多样性，带动社会创新。而缺点则可能导致文化同化cultural assimilation, 会导致民族间的文化冲突cultural conflict。
近似题：
（1）多重文化的社会（不同种族的人住在一起）利大于弊？ (060825=061021=160402)
考点题2：
Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. (040821=051029=150829)
题意：国家间商务文化交流有积极影响，还是降低国家特性？
考点分析：商务文化交流的好处是促进商务与文化合作共赢，而缺点则可能导致竞争，带来同化或消亡。
近似题：
（1）国与国差异减少，人们选择趋向一致(031206=040327=160109)
（2）全球的风景变得越来越相似，原因？利大于弊？(090829)
2. 语言、贸易、旅游细节考点
以下列举的考点3-7属于考点1与考点2的细节考点，与考点1与考点2语料相通。
考点题3：语言
Across the world today, the use of many languages has been declining. Only a few languages have been increasingly used. Is this a positive or negative development? (131116)
题意：许多语言使用量减少，少数语言使用量增加，积极或消极？
考点分析：语言的灭绝体现出人类文化交流密切与文化多样性cultural diversity的丢失。
近似题：
（1）语言灭绝让人更容易生活，所以不重要 (041030)
（2）英语作为国际性语言的利超过弊 (050416)
（3）一些人认为应该发明一种国际交流的新语言，利大于弊 (070818)
考点题4：贸易
Some people think developing countries should invite foreign companies to open branches, offices and factories to promote their economies. Others say that they should keep the foreign companies out and depend more on their own local companies. Describe both views and give your opinion. (120107)
题意：引进外企or保护本国禁止外企？
考点分析：引进外企，促进合作与竞争，改善地区服务，同时会影响本地企业市场。
近似题：
（1）跨国公司全球化对每个人都有积极影响 (120209)
考点题5：旅游
国际：International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages? (060520)
题意：国际旅游成为一个巨大的产业-弊大于利
考点分析：促进就业，推动地区经济文化，同时影响地区环境与生态，以及文化同化与冲突。
近似题：
（1）国际旅行越便宜，游客越来越多，利弊 (081120=121020)
（2）国际性旅游有负面影响，原因措施 (150530)
考点题6：旅游偏见
International travel makes people prejudiced more than board-mind, why does this phenomenon happen? How to improve the understanding of countries
they visit? (031011=040403=080821=100626=150813)
题意：国际旅行有时会让人们更偏见而不是心胸开阔，原因及措施
考点分析：旅游者自身素质及地区文化宣传与了解不足，引起文化冲突，应从相关方面改善。
近似题：
（1）去他国旅游，是效仿他国风俗习惯，还是当地应该迎合文化多样性 (050305=050820)
考点题7：进口
As global trade increases, many goods, even some daily goods, are exported to another country, which includes long-distance transport during shipping. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks? (081204≈05.11.12)
题意：进口商品，利弊
考点略析：促进各国优势资源利用与自身经济发展，改善地区相关服务，带来环境污染，影响本地相关产业。
近似题：
（1）进口各国食品利大于弊？ (080223)
（2）国家应自产食物而尽可能少进口 (110226)
（3）传统饮食被外国快餐取代对家庭社会产生不良影响 (110623)
考点题8：国际援助
Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion. (090207=090627)
题意：给与多种援助而非经济援助
考点略析：深度合作，授之以渔。
近似题：
有人认为资助贫困国家弊大于利 (071124=131010)
慈善援助应向最迫切的地区or本国 (100109=091121=150606)
与其他话题合并性题：
（1）全球合作有助于环保还是商业 (080726)
（2）国际旅游和贸易促进社会发展 (100617=140821)
（3）出国旅游去了解他国or通过电视和互联网 (110127)
（4）大多数严峻的问题只能通过国际协作解决 (120121)
（5）如今我们面临全世界的各种问题，因此国家之间良好的关系很重要 (070721)
（6）各国科学技术趋向同一性，原因及利弊 (121117)
（7）学生应该花时间在不同的国家生活和学习不同语言和文化，同意与否 (131121)
四、考点论据
朗阁雅思培训中心资深写作专家分析指出，本类别考题应依据十年同类所有话题考点，进行针对性地道性语料补充，地道素材来源于《the economist》,《The Guardian》,《National Geographic》, 《The Atlantic》等。
1. 全球化的原因
（1）经济层面，各个国家生产本国特定优势的产品，通过贸易，可以给进口国和出口国都带来好处。各国经济发展又为贸易旅游及文化方面的全球交流提供物质条件。
（2）技术层面，互联网、媒体科技、交通工具的迅猛发展促进各国经济文化的密切交流。
（3）国家层面，随着国家之间的接触增多，国家之间签署一系列合作规章来促进各国发展与国际性问题处理。
①原因概述：
At least four factors have contributed to globalization:
1.technological change, particularly the ICT revolution;
2.the spread of market-based systems;
3.domestic politics—pro-globalization forces are more politically significant; and inter-
state rivalries.
②原因拓展1：
Technological development, from better transportation and carrier services to the telephone and mass media, has created a smaller, more integrated world，which makes the world even smaller and more integrated. Communications, trade and employment,
personal and political transactions are now occurring on a global scale, in real time, ignoring boundaries between states.
③原因拓展2：
the closer integration of the countries and peoples of the world which has been brought about by the enormous reduction of costs of transportation and communication, and the breaking down of artificial barriers to the flows of goods, services, capital, knowledge, and(to a lesser extent) people across borders.
2. 全球化的价值
（1）经济上，国家与地区经济发展，就业机会增加，产品服务丰富。
（2）技术上，落后国家因此可以学习发达国家的技术或者企业的管理方法等；而发达国家可以依靠技术移民来补充劳动力。
（3）政治上和社会上，国家之间的联系增多，有助于和平地协商处理问题。
（4）文化上，人们开拓视野，增进了解，消除误会，从而可以更融洽地相处。
①全球化促进资源有效利用
The booming international trade can closely integrate a wide range of resources of different countries, which enables many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other’s strengths. For instance, the international business made possible by air travel and telecommunication has enabled businessmen from less developed countries to introduce the state-of-the-art facilities from prosperous nations to develop and expand their business. Besides, affluent nations can make full use of the cheaper labor force in impoverished countries to save the production costs and obtain more economic profits. The effective interaction among countries at different levels has allowed a more sustainable development of the world.
②全球化促进竞争，推动发展
At the same time, globalization creates new possibilities and motivations for local cultural autonomy and identities. This“push down effect” of globalization is the reason for the revival of local nationalism and local forms of cultural identity in all parts of the world. It may seem strange but the more we globalize, the more we localize.
3. 全球化的缺点
（1）经济：发展中国家的劳动力被剥削，资源被取用，国内产业受到冲击。
（2）社会文化：本土文化会被削弱，本土语言会受到威胁，文化多样性会逐步丧失。人们的生活习惯和购买习惯逐渐被改变。
（3）环境上，工业化生产和交通量的加大会增加温室气体的排放；旅游人数的增多会对自然环境构成威胁。
①全球化引发冲突：
Most importantly, critics of recent economic globalization see that these developments are not at all occurring in a vacuum, but feed into ethnic, religious, and factional tensions that lead to wars and help breed terrorism. Furthermore, these terrorists, now globally interconnected and empowered with knowledge, create a whole new category of warfare based, in part, on the disruption of the interconnections which are both created by and necessary for globalization. Some commentators believe the nation-state is ill-equipped to deal with this emergent threat.
②全球化对环境的破坏
The rise in worldwide trade and the increasing interaction between countries previously separated by trade barriers have stimulated a significant increase in transportation progresses at all geographical levels. This has caused a wide variety of threats to the environment. Thus, a demanding problem of globalization is formed by environmental decay caused by the rise in international transportation. The rise in international transportation could be partly blamed on the transport of globalized food. As more global corporations take over most of the aspects of farming, local resources and labors of small farms are decreasingly vanishing. This caused the people to buy and eat food that are grown overseas instead of the local areas, thus, causing and encouraging the amount of international transportation.
③全球化对本地经济的不良影响
The expansion of multinational companies accelerating international economic integration can bring remarkable benefits to the local country. During the process of interaction with foreign staff in multinationals, local staff can have access to the state-of-the-art technology, with which they could later create their own start-up companies
or work for local corporations, thereby promoting technological advances and economic growth in developing countries. Moreover, they have the opportunity to learn the work ethics of another country, and then keep the essence of their cultural conventions, promoting cultural diversity in the host country.
五、核心词组与论句
以下，朗阁雅思培训中心资深写作专家针对此类话题，精选了一些核心话题学术性词汇和词组搭配，并根据核心学术词组搭配核心论句，以便备考时间不充裕的考生直接积累和使用。
●diversity [da?'v??s?t?]
n. 多样性；差异
常见学术词组搭配：
cultural diversity 文化差异 // enormous/extraordinary/rich diversity巨大/非凡/丰富的多样性 // a wide diversity of 多种多样的 // maintain/preserve diversity 保持/保护多样性
雅思写作例句：
(1). Tourists and businessmen make it possible for different nations to maintain continuous cultural exchanges, which substantially helps with preserving rich diversity in the world.（Tips: which引导非限制性定语从句；continuous表示连续不断的；help with doing sth表示有助于做某事）
游客和商人使国家间保持连续不断的文化交流成为可能，大大有助于保护世界丰富多样性的存在。(2). When a country tends to develop a closer relationship with the rest of the world, it does not necessarily give up its culture, or rather it would put more emphasis on the conservation of local features to preserve its cultural identities, so cultural diversity is actually not damaged but promoted.（Tips: when引导时间状语从句；so连接并列句；or rather表示更准确的说；put emphasis on sth表示强调；conservation/preserve表示保护；cultural identities表示文化身份；not...but...表示不是而是）
一个国家与他国发展更亲密的关系并不意味着它会放弃自己的文化，更准确的说，它可能会更加强调保护当地特色及文化身份，所以文化多样性不会被破坏而会被促进。
●exploit [?k'spl??t]
vt. 剥削；利用；开发
常见学术词组搭配：
exploit mercilessly/ruthlessly残忍地剥削 // be open/vulnerable to exploitation 易受到剥削// struggle against exploitation与剥削作斗争 // fully exploit/exploit...to the full充分开发
雅思写作例句：
(1). It is often the case that jobs multinational corporations provide are not paid as much as they have to pay for similar jobs in their countries, by which I mean these companies are virtually making use of the cheaper labor force and ruthlessly exploiting workers in developing countries.（Tips: It is often the case that引导主语从句，表示经常出现的情况；by which I mean引导非限制性定语从句；virtually表示实际上；make use of表示利用；cheap labor force表示廉价劳动力）
经常出现的情况是，跨国公司支付当地员工的工资低于其本国同样工作所得薪水，也就是说这些公司其实是在利用发展中国家的廉价劳动力，残忍地剥削工人。
(2). Due to the backward economic development, employees in underdeveloped countries are usually cheap labor resources, who are vulnerable to exploitation by employers of foreign enterprises, so inviting them to open branches means allowing exploitation of local residents.（Tips: who引导非限制性定语从句；so连接并列句；backward表示落后的；foreign enterprises表示外企；local residents表示当地居民）
由于经济发展落后，欠发达国家的员工通常是廉价劳动力，他们容易受到外企老板的剥削，所以邀请这些公司在本地设立分部就意味着本地居民将会受到剥削。
globalization [?glob?l?'ze?n]
n. 全球化
常见学术词组搭配：
economic/cultural globalization经济/文化全球化 // globalization strategy全球化战略 // the growing/increasing globalization 日益增长的全球化 // turn back the tide of globalization 逆转全球化的大趋势 // anti-globalization groups反全球化群体
雅思写作例句：
(1). It is undeniable that the growing connection and independence of the world’s markets and businesses in contemporary society has made it impossible to turn back the tide of globalization.（Tips: It is undeniable that引导主语从句表示不可否认；make it impossible to do sth不定式做宾语，it为形式宾语，表示不可能做某事）
不可否认，当今社会世界市场和商业中日益增多的联系和依赖已使全球化成为不可逆转的大趋势。
(2). Anti-globalization groups insisting on the negative effects of globalization mainly emphasize its threat to local industries in underdeveloped countries as well as the multi-culture of different nations.（Tips: insisting非谓语动词做后置定语；insist on sth 表示坚持认为；underdeveloped countries表示欠发达国家；multi-culture表示多元文化）坚持认定全球化负面影响的反全球化群体主要强调它对欠发达国家本土产业以及世界多元文化的威胁。
●impoverished [?m'p?v?r??t]
adj. 贫穷的，穷困的
常见学术词组搭配：
impoverished/poverty-stricken countries 贫穷国家 // impoverished areas穷困地区//be impoverished by sth因某物而贫穷 // impoverish the economy导致经济困顿
雅思写作例句：
(1). In the tide of economic globalization, there exist some countries that are impoverished by a lack of advanced technology, so they can hardly benefit from globalization and even become marginalized, which would further enlarge the gap between the rich and poor.（Tips: there exist为there-be句式；that引导限定性定语从句；so连接并列句；which引导非限制性定语从句；a lack of表示缺乏；marginalized表示边缘化的）
在经济全球化的大潮中，有一些国家因为缺乏先进的技术而贫穷落后，因而很难从全球化中获利甚至会被边缘化，这会进一步拉大贫富差距。
●integrate ['?nt?gre?t]
V. 使成整体，使结合；成为一体
常见学术词组搭配：
tightly/closely integrate紧密整合 // integrate…with…使结合// integrate into 融入// international economic integration国际经济一体化 // accelerate/speed up integration加速
一体化
雅思写作例句：
(1). The booming international trade can closely integrate a wide range of resources of different countries, which enables many nations to share resources to achieve the goal of complementing each other’s strengths.（Tips: which引导非限制性定语从句；a wide
Scientists believe that eating fast food is harmful to one’s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however, argue that education does not work.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 科学家认为吃快餐有害健康，有人认为教育可以帮助人们改变这个不良习惯，有人认为教育不起作用，讨论两种观点。(2010年12月11日雅思考试题目) 【名师点评】讨论两种观点，可以使用第一人称口吻，也可以使用第三人称口吻。【作家立场】保障健康饮食，教育是起到一定的积极作用，但是，健康饮食不能仅仅依靠教育。 【思路拓展】 ①青少年是快餐的主要消费者，快餐含有过多的糖分、脂肪、热量，长期食用有害健康。所以，青少年应该成为教育的主体。 ②为了减少快餐对于消费者的不良影响，除了教育以外，政府也该承担责任。例如，美国政府已经限制肯德基捆绑销售儿童套餐的商业行为。 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景介绍+ 作家立场 So prevailing are the fast foods that some teenagers are in the habit eating junk foods nearly every week. From the perspective of some
nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit. 【二段】 Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods. 【三段】 In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those
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雅思写作Task2范文：全球化使文化特征消失 由于通信和交通运输的飞速增长，整个社会迅速全球化。一些人担心这种全球化将导致文化特征的流失。你同意这种说法么？一起来看看这篇雅思范文是如何回答的吧！认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 Write about the following topic: As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Model Answer: Globalization means that in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat the same food, watch the same TV programmes, listen to the same music and we wear the same clothes. Some of this at least can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world. On the surface, it may appear as if the global diversity of cultural identities is being lost. If, the argument goes, people in Tokyo and London look and dress the same, then that must mean that cultural differences are disappearing. However, I would argue that this is a very narrow definition of culture and that in fact cultural differences are as present as ever.
雅思G类大作文话题范文：教育话题 Evaluation of teachers You should spend about 40 minutes onthis task. Some people think that high schoolstudents should be given the freedom to evaluate and even criticize theirteachers, while others claim that this practice will disrupt the order inclassroom and lead to disrespect for teachers. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words. Education: Sample Introduction Whether high school students should begiven the freedom to evaluate and criticize their teachers is a challengingissue in education. Some people support this practice while others believe thatit will be hard for the teachers to maintain classroom order and gain students’respect. Personally, I agree to the latter opinion, which is based on thefollowing three reasons. Main Body 1 First of all, it is difficult for highschool students to adopt a completely objective attitude towards their teacherswhen they are
adolescent(s)/juvenile(s)/youngster(s)/youth(s) n.青少年 adolescent adj.青春期的 parenting/upbringing n.家庭教育，教养 schooling n. 学校教育 aptitude/talent (for) n.（有……的）天赋 cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 specialist n.专才 generalist n.（有多方面知识和经验的）通才 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj.全面的，多面的，多才多艺的awareness/sense/recognition n.意识 the development of students’personality and values 学生个性和价值观的发展mould (or mold美式拼写) one’s character塑造某人的性格 mould (or mold美式拼写) sb. into sth. 把某人塑造成…… a (or the ) sense of responsibility (or duty/obligation)责任感 improve moral standard 提高道德标准
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delete/eliminate/excise v. 删除evaluate v. 评价、评估 the evaluation on 对……的评价或评估 be ?ooded (or ?lled/awash/saturated/inundated) with... 充斥着 excessive and gratuitous violent and pornographic contents 过多的、无端的暴力与色情内容 at the expense/cost of 以……为代价 media hype 媒体炒作advertising hype 广告炒作 hype n. 炒作，大肆吹捧 v. 对 ……大肆宣传，吹捧commercial(s) n. 商业广告public service advertising 公益广告 evoke (or stimulate) impulse buying 刺激冲动性购物shopaholic(s) n. 购物狂promotion n. 促销 marketing tool 市场营销手段 induce sb. to do sth. 诱导或引诱某人做某事 target audience 目标受众sensationalise (or sensationalize 美式拼写) /exaggerate v. 耸人听闻地夸大某事，大肆渲染 over-report...to hook viewers and maximise pro ?ts 为了利益最大化，从而过度报道……来吸引公众的眼球 道德规范（尤指职业的） 良好的/较强的/无懈可击的职业道德adj. 无所不在的，普遍存在的……的流行或盛行对……有着深远的影响 揭露社会问题 监督非常详尽地报道…… 如实的描述、报道adj. 有新闻价值的，有报道价值的adj. 最新的，及时的adj. 客观公正的adj. 不客观的，有偏见的 adj. 可信的，可靠的 adj. 令人误导的，不如实报道的，曲解的adj. 虚假的adj. 欺骗性的 adj. 信息量大的，增长见闻的adj. 娱乐性的，令人愉快的 v. & n. 审查n. 审查制度 对……实施审查 v. 影响，左右 (e.g. sway sb./sb. be swayed by... 影响某人或者某人受到影响)
雅思大作文范文-全球化
雅思大作文范文-全球化
Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
6分作文的评分标准 ? addresses all parts of the task although some parts may be more fully covered than others ? presents a relevant position although the conclusions may become unclear or repetitive ? presents relevant main ideas but some may be inadequately developed/unclear ? arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression ?uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical ? may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately; ? uses paragraphing, but not always logically ? uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task ? attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy ? makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication ? uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms ? makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication 雅思大作文话题之教育类 Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects. Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 3 Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2 Some people think children should obey the rules set by their parents and teachers set, but others think that less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2 Some people think students should go to boarding schools instead of living at home. Do you agree or disagree? 2
Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which way is more effective? 有人认为学生们应该小组学习，有人认为学生们应该自己学习，小组学习和自己学习利好各在哪里，你认为何种方式有效? 【思路拓展】 小组学习的利好： 1. 小组讨论，集思广益，例证展开：小组讨论数学题的解题思路，小组讨论作文的头脑风暴。 2. 有良好的学习氛围，可以帮助缺乏自律性的孩子们专注于学习，提高学习效率。 3. 有效的方式结实新朋友，锻炼人的口才，交流能力以及团队精神。 自己学习的利好： 1. 培养了自己的独立思考以及解决问题的能力，学习上不会对他人产生过度的依赖。 2. 小组学习更加容易培养人的分析性思维，理性思维和辩证思维的能力。 点评：论据支持可以学习历史和哲学，以及中学生学习国际新闻 【作者立场】
小组学习和自己学习各有优势，选择应该由个人做出，我过去常常一个人学习，虽然可以独立思考，但是未能感知小组讨论和交流的乐趣，因此，有机会，我更加渴望小组学习。 点评：主题观点是模仿雅思考官男女分校的范文 【原创语料库】 1. group study 小组学习 2. to study with a group of fellow classmates 和同龄人一起学习 拓展：a group of fellow classmates = peers 同龄人 3. focus on self-improvement 专注于自我提高 4. zero in on academic study = concentrate on learning专注学习(写作亮点) 5. a great many self-leaner 很多的自学者 6. achieve academic success 取得学习的成功 7. enhance the efficiency of learning 提高学习效率 8. face-to-face communication could …… 面对面交流可以…… 9. positive interaction w ith …… 和…… 积极的互动
如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之 逻辑篇 写作老师经验分享, 如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻 辑篇，今天给大家带来如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇,希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 写作老师经验分享如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇 我们来拿一个真题和一个类似于真题的题进行说明： 20XX0328 Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 改编题： Some people say that the use of using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
请各位同学想一想，这两个问题是一样的么?劳烦各位思考个3分钟，然后继续往下翻~如果你觉得并没有很大差别，那估计真的碰到这个题目的话，6.5分是很勉强的。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 我们先来说改编题： side effects: 1. face-to-face communication减少，感情可能变淡 positive effects: 1. be able to contact people without geographical limitation; in the past, it may be impossible to say Hi to a foreign friend. 2. be able to contact friends or partners quickly, no need to wait for responses; in the past, writing letters really wastes a lot of time and sometimes letters may be lost. 我们再来说真题： side effects: 1. writing abilities会下降，因为写信的频率降低了，handwriting当然变差
雅思作文题目必备的十个雅思话题 一、教育类别 1. 教育会囊括一些什么内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是 上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应 当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要 让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？
母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：要不要学国际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏
雅思写作小作文必备语料库 动态图形词汇 上升 -rise, increase, grow, climb, jump，go up, an upward trend shoot up (informal)，ascend -rocket, soar, swell, surge, skyrocket, mushroom, escalate, on the rise，on the increase 相关单词用法 下降 -drop, decrease, go down, decline, fall, descend, sink, dip, an downward trend., -plummet, Plunge, slump, dive, nosedive 相关单词用法 不变、平稳等 -keep/remain/stay stable/steady/unchanged/constant（不变） -maintain the same level -experience a stable trend, -level off at（上升或下降之后）/ level out at（上升之后）/ -hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at 波动 fluctuate/rise and fall, vary, undulating; be volatile/ variable; 高点、低点： ?reach the highest point，reach(arrive at/hit) a peak(summit) at+数字(用hit 时动作较剧烈)，peak at+数字 ?reach/fall to/arrive at/hit the bottom/the lowest point at数字，bottom out at数字，(用hit时动作较剧烈) 其他点 ?起始点： n. starting point v. start/begin/end at ?交叉点： It is worth/deserves mentioning that 1）.A和B在...处拥有相同数值 A and B share the same amount/number in 2）.A在...处超过B A outstrip/overtake/outnumber/go beyond B in... ?表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组 Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at
Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
2020雅思写作语料库教育类：是否全部父母都该学习 育儿课程 教育类： Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 教育的孩子很重要，有人认为，所有的父母应该学习育儿课程，是否认同?(2020年1月19日雅思题目) 题目解析：提问中有典型的错误信息，即所有的父母，所以，本文写作策略为让步反驳，即为三分让步，七分反驳。 雅思小鹏哥让步反驳话题布局图： 首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场 二段：第一次支持作家立场以及细节或例证的展开 三段：第二次支持作家立场以及细节或例证的展开 四段：让步不支持的观点的合理性 + (加以反驳 ) 尾段：再次亮明观点 + (总结理由) 作家立场： 虽然我们不能低估亲自学习育儿课程可能带来的价值，但是不是所有的父母都能够亲自学习育儿培训课程。 雅思小鹏哥头脑风暴导言： 1. 小鹏哥喜欢看芒果台的《变形记》，有一集描述的是贵州贫困地区的留守儿童，他们的父母都在城市里打工，家庭贫困，父母辛苦
赚钱仅仅是维持孩子的基本生活和让孩子有机会接受更好的教育。这些父母，不可能有经济成本去专门学习育儿培训课程。 2. 对于很多社会精英来说，即使他们有经济实力参加育儿培训课程，但是，他们又没有时间和精力，所以，让他们专门学习育儿培训课程也是不现实的，即使他们可能有学习的愿望。 是否同意一种观点提问标志： Some people think that …… to what extent do you agree or disagree? 雅思小鹏哥全文布局图： 首段：背景介绍 +(争议焦点)+作家立场 父母是孩子们最初的老师，他们对于孩子们的性格培养以及精神成长有潜移默化的影响，所以，良好的教育方法是每个父母都应该学习的。我认为，虽然不能低估亲自学习育儿课程对于家长可能带来的利好，但是，不是所有的父母都能够亲自学习育儿培训课程。 二段：第一次支持作家立场 对于很多社会精英来说，例如，繁忙的企业家或文体明星，他们多数忙于事业发展，没有时间和精力去专门学习育儿课程。但是，他们能够努力赚钱，聘请专业的育儿老师来教育孩子，所以，父母的努力同样有助于孩子们的健康成长。 三段：第二次支持作家立场 对于贫困家庭来说，父母的可支配收入有限，学习育儿课程虽有利好，却会增加父母的经济负担，在现实生活中很难实现。例如，我喜欢看芒果台的《变形记》(一部纪录片)，有一集描述的是贵州贫困地区的留守儿童，他们的父母都在城市里打工，孩子们的生活非常贫困和艰苦，父母辛苦工作仅是维持孩子的基本生活和让孩子们接受良好教育。这些父母，不可能有经济成本去专门学习育儿培训课程。
雅思写作核心语料库 Part 1 1 offer a sense of job satisfaction and security 带来工作的满意感和安全感2lay a solid professional working experience 积累扎实的工作经验 3 reduce/cut down expenditure 削减支出 4increase/generate job opportunities 创造就业机会 6promote talent introduction and exchange 促进人才的引进与交流 7keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落伍 9lay a solid foundation for 奠定坚实的基础 10 pave the way for the future/development 为未来铺平了道路 11foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养合作感与竞争感 12cultivate the spirit of team working 培养团队合作精神 13master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧 14widen one’s knowledge 拓宽知识面 15enrich one’s social and life experience 丰富社会与人生经历 16enlarge one’s view/broaden one’s horizon 拓宽视野 17realize the value of life 实现人生价值 18surmount /overcome / win over /master difficulties 克服困难 19grasp good communication skills 掌握人际交流技巧 20remove misunderstanding and discrimination 消除误解与歧视 21keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的平衡 22raise the standard of living提高生活水平 25enrich people’s spiritual life 丰富人们的精神生活 26promote social skills and competence 提高社交技巧与能力 27strengthen the family ties促进家庭团结 28cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 29bring joys and comforts to sb带来愉悦与舒适 30usher in a brand-new life-style引入全新的生活方式 31relieve the pressure of 缓解压力 32maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳定