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雅思写作语料库--重复犯罪

雅思写作语料库--重复犯罪
雅思写作语料库--重复犯罪

Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem? 大多数犯罪分子,释放以后,会重复犯罪,原因何在,如何解决?

相关题目

【犯罪类】:

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committing a crime. 服刑者后来成为好公民,有人认为,释放者(改过自新者)是最好的对象去教育少年人犯罪的危险,是否同意? 题目点评:school 为中小学,因此,本题考察的还是如何帮助青少年避免走入迷途,少年犯罪。

是否同意话题解析:

提问标志:Some people think ……,to what extent do you agree or disagree?

解题思路:原题观点有合理性,但是,不完全正确。

让步反驳话题布局图:

1. 首段:背景介绍(个性开篇)+ 问题影响+ 作家立场

2. 二段:让步原题观点的合理性:(最多两点;可以例证)

3. 三段:反驳原题观点的不合理:(三点反驳;例证展开)

4. 尾段:再次亮明观点+ (总结理由)

写作难点:

1. 没有观点:难以理解题目;理解题目没有立场或者例证

2. 没有语言:写作缺乏相关语料库,巧妇难为无米之催。

3. 表达不够精彩:行文口语化,简单词汇重复,缺乏逻辑性。

解决策略:精彩的语料库的输入到输出的过程,固定表达形成一块块“化石”,(fossilization——指的是固定精彩表达)脱口就说,提笔就写,才高自现,破题如竹。固定表达形成“小狗词汇”(pet words ——指的是作家偏爱表达法),使行文个性鲜明,与众不同。

【头脑风暴导言】:

我成长的岁月里,忧伤苦情歌曾经一度流行,其中代表就是囚歌的流行,以迟志强《铁窗泪》系列为代表,他们以歌曲的方式表达自我的忏悔,人生的反思和对于新生活的渴望,曾经影响一代人。少年犯罪为犯罪之一种,在总体犯罪中比例较高,少年犯罪多为冲动犯罪,过失犯罪,“激情”犯罪,这和他们不成熟的心智,不良的家庭成长环境,教育的压力或者缺失,不良传媒的影响等

因素息息相关,其解决策略,方式多元,仅仅是改过自新者的现身说法,作用有限。

【作家立场】:改过自新者和成长中的年轻人现身说法,是教育他们树立正确的人生观,培养他们的守法意识的有效方式之一,但是,不是最佳和唯一的方式。

【全文布局图】:

1. 首段:背景介绍+ 作家立场

青少年犯罪是困扰很多国家的严重的社会问题之一,关于如何有效地降低青少年犯罪,很少社会学家提出多种建议,我认为:其解决策略,方式多元,仅仅是改过自新者的现身说法,作用有限。

2. 二段:让步段:

成长中的年轻人,通常充满好奇心,同时,有些年轻人不能明辨是非,很容易冲动犯罪或者是过失犯罪。可以想象,如果有人通过亲身的经历,现身说法,帮助他们反思自己的行为,增强他们的自律性,这在一定程度上可以减少他们误入迷途的可能。

3. 三段:反驳段:

帮助青少年远离犯罪的危险方式还有很多:第一,商业化的大众传媒充满了色情,暴力及对于犯罪细节的描绘,这些,会毒害年轻人的心灵,误导其人生

观,诱发其暴力冲动。因此,政府应该加强对于不良传媒的审查,使成长中的年轻人远离精神鸦片的毒害。第二,很多青少年因为无法承载应试教育,填鸭教学的压力,失去学习兴趣,过早地浪迹社会,比较容易犯错,因此,教育者应该帮助年轻人缓解压力,多开设文体课程,培养他们的爱好特长。一个对于学习充满了希望的人,很少会做出反社会行为。第三,很少少年犯是来自单亲或者暴力家庭,缺乏成长的温暖,性格比较容易变得反叛和愤世。因此,父母们应该给孩子提供情感支持和正确引导,即使,他们已经离异。

4. 尾段:

我重申立场:少年犯罪是一个很复杂的社会问题,其解决不是单一的努力可以完成的,因此,需要多方的共同努力。

【原创青少年犯罪的基础语料库】:

1. youth crime =teenage crime = adolescent crime n青少年犯罪

2. juvenile crime = juvenile delinquency n青少年犯罪

3. young offenders = teenage criminals = juvenile law-breakers n少年犯

4. embark on the criminal road v走上犯罪的道路

5. turn to a life to crime v 开始犯罪的生活

6. conduct some anti-social offences v做出一些反社会的行为

7. commit crime = violate the law = perpetrate the law v犯罪

8. misdeed = misconduct n犯罪行为

解析:conduct n 行为(通常指道德行为)

9. domestic violence n家庭暴力

10. violent family n暴力家庭

11. parental divorce n父母的离异

12. might become distrusting,fearful,rebellious …… 容易变得疑虑,恐惧和反叛

13. cynical and aggressive adj愤世嫉俗的和行为具有攻击性的

14. pornographic or bloody contents n血腥的或者血腥的内容

15. blindly duplicate what they have seen v盲目效仿他们看到的一切

16. to be led astray v被引入歧途(被动)

辨析:go astray v误入歧途(主动)

17. enact relevant legislations v颁布相关的法律

18. to severely penalize v 去严厉处罚……

19. crack down youth crime v降低少年犯罪

20. breakdown of the marriage n婚姻的解体

21. strengthen the law-abiding awareness v 增强守法意识

22. self-protection awareness = self-protection consciousness n自我保护意识

23. is besieged with = be flooded by = be full of v充斥着……

24. is more likely to do sth = is prone is to do sth = tend to do sth 倾向于做……

25. stay away from the poison of spiritual refusal v远离……的毒害

26. poison one’s innocent mind v毒害纯净的心灵

27. arouse one’s violent impulse v诱发暴力的冲

28. mislead one’s life outlook = misguide one’s life attitude v 误导人生观

29. frustration or failure in school 学业上受挫或者失败

30. turn over a new leaf v 生活展开新的一页

【原创观点语料库】:

1. The vivid narration of released prisoners does have an indispensable role to play in helping those immature or inexperienced youngsters to reflect on their lives,strengthen their law-abiding consciousness and

thus establish right life attitude. 刑满释放者的生动描绘可以帮助不成熟,无阅历的年轻人反思自己的行为,增强他们的守法意识,因此,帮助他们树立正确的人生观。

解析:have an indispensable role to play in …… 可以发挥不可缺少的作用解析:reflect on their lives v反思他们的人生

解析:strengthen their law-abiding consciousness v增强他们守法意识2. It is highly possible that those who are in the formative years might lose themselves and even be led astray because adult world is so complicated and perilous that those teenagers might fail to read,especially when they lack sufficient parenting. 很有可能的是:成长中的年轻人容易迷失自我,被引入迷途,因为成人的世界是如此复杂,如此危险,以至于很多年轻人是无法读懂的,尤其是当他们缺乏父母的良好教育的时候。

解析:It is highly possible that …… 很有可能

解析:parenting n 父母对于子女的教育。

拓展:perilous = dangerous = risky adj 危险的

3. Some teenagers may find it far from easy to re-adapt to an academic environment when they have to cope with exam-oriented educational system. Thus, if some of them drop out of school, then, they might turn

into street bullies and potential law-breakers. 有些年轻人,也许很难适应应试教育下的学习环境,因此,如果,其中一些人辍学,他们很容易浪迹街头,成为街头霸王,或者,成为潜在的违法者。

解析:street bullies n 街头霸王

4. One of the most essential reasons that triggers high rate of juvenile delinquency is the negative influence of commercialized mass media. 引起青少年犯罪增加的重要的因素之一就是商业化大众传媒的不良影响。

解析:commercialized mass media. n 商业化的大众传媒

5. That X-rated films or on-line games containing violent elements usually have a really adverse impact on the innocent minds of the young. 少儿不宜的电影或者含有暴力元素的在线游戏,通常情况下,对于年轻人纯净的心灵会施加不良影响。

解析:have a really adverse impact on …… v对于……施加了不良的影响6. Teenagers usually have to endure a pool of pressure triggered by tight academic study. 年轻人通常要承载很多学业的压力。

解析:a pool of pressure triggered by tight academic study n 由紧张的学习带来的压力

7. Many research concerning the causes of juvenile delinquency focus either on the individual or on society as the major contributing factors. 很多涉及少年犯罪的研究,将个人或者社会作为其主要起主要的根源。

8. Teenagers conduct some anti-social behaviors because they were not sufficiently penalized for previous misdeeds or that they have learned criminal behavior through emulating negative role models around them. 很多少年犯,做出反社会行为,是因为他们没有因为从前的犯罪行为而受到重罚,或者,他们效仿了周围不良的“偶像”。

解析:conduct some anti-social behaviors v 做出反社会行为

9. One of the reasons of juvenile delinquency have to be owed to teenagers’ disadvantaged families backgroun d. 少年犯罪的原因之一不得不归结为他们不良的家庭成长环境。

解析:disadvantaged families background n 不良的家庭背景

10. Children coming from violent families or single-parent families are more likely to have inadequate guidance and support during the process of growth. 来自暴力家庭或者单亲家庭的孩子们,在其成长的岁月里,通常缺乏足够的指导和支持。

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nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit. 【二段】 Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods. 【三段】 In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those

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小、

,例如色情和

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