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中考英语面表达汇编试题及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1．（·富顺第三中学校中考模拟）朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以“My Best Friend ”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。

1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;

2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；

3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的

要求：

1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密

2. 词数80-100

3. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friend

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。

【点睛】

人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介绍长相时用“be+形容词”来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用“have/has +

（straight/curly） hair / （big/small）eyes/nose/mouth”来描述头发或五官。用“wear + 某种

衣服”来介绍某人的穿戴。用be good at doing sth.来介绍特长，用like sth./doing sth.best或“My/His/her favorite + 名词+ is …”来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。

2．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud of

I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. Howev er, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.

I felt proud of cooking on my own.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs

burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。

3．（·东莞市虎门智升学校中考模拟）书面表达

如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。

要求：

1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。

2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。

3. 词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle.

It's________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【答案】An Important Vehicle

As an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it.

On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water. That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all.

I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文。假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

4．（·湖北中考模拟）书面表达

近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。

要点：

要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2.短文必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥；

3.词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.____________________________【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by computer.It save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the computer.Therefore they are active in class. Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.doczj.com/doc/e15934923.html,puters are too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games.

I think students should use iPad in class.The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.It is good for students to use iPad in class.

【解析】

【详解】

根据题意近年来，越来越多的中学将一些电子产品例如电脑、手机，甚至iPad 等引入了课堂。在提高教学质量的同时也使得教育更加多样化。但人们对此的看法褒贬不一。请根据以下表格，在英语课上和同学谈谈你的看法。我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【点睛】

这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some people think students shouldn’t use computers in https://www.doczj.com/doc/e15934923.html,puters a re too expensive.It is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in class.这些重点短语和句型，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达

随着中国国际地位的日益提高，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国。假定你是李明，你

最近认识的澳大利亚笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想更多地了解中国。请认真阅读下

面的邮件，并根据信中的内容及你的了解用英语回复。

注意事项:

1.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯;

2.词数在90个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数;

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear David,

I'm really happy to tell you something interesting about China. China is a country with a long history.

I'm sure you'll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【答案】Dear Thomas,

I’m really happy to tell you some thing interesting about China. China is a country with along history.

It is winter now and Spring Festival is the most popular at this time of year. Family members get together and then have a big dinner, After that, they watch lion dances and fireworks.

“East or west, Gulin landscape is best.” Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. You can take a boat trip along the Lijiang Rive or ride around the countryside. It is great fun.

Guilin is a special city with strong local colour. You can choose many excellent gifts there, such as Chinese paintings, paper fans and colorful clothes.

I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇书信作文，根据电子邮件中的相关信息向澳大利亚笔友David介绍一下中国。所提供的材料中问到了关于中国的几个问题：●What's the season in China now? ●What's the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含电子邮件上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

Guilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜欢自然风光，桂林值得一游。

句子if you like natural views.是由if引导的条件状语从句。

【高分句型二】

I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你会在这里过得很愉快。

you’ll have a wonderful time here. 是宾语从句。

6．（·福建中考模拟）书面表达

随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校园英文报写一篇 80 词左右的报道。

内容要点提示：

Time for sports

Kinds of sports

Change of students’ health and study

Change of school life

要求：

（1）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

（3）内容完整，可适当发挥，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。

Sports in Our School

Sports in our school have changed a lot.

【答案】Sports in Our School

Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day．

Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.

Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，描述学校体育运动的变化。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如more than，at least，more and more,take an active part in, a good way to, what’s more，动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达

今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。短文内容如下：

1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任

Mother Stops Him

_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，主要是第一人称，句型以简单句为主。写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【点睛】

本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

8．（·北京初三）题目2：

常言道，“一分耕耘，一分收获”这告诉我们凡事只有付出努力，才能取得成功。

假如你是李华，你校英文杂志正在开展以“付出与收获”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你个人的一次经历：你付出了什么努力？取得了什么收获？有何感悟？

提示词语：weak，spend，progress，keep trying

提示问题：— What did you do?

—What did you achieve?

—What did you learn from the experience?

【答案】例文It is believed that hard work can lead to success. Two years ago, I was very weak in English, so I decided to work hard at it. I started to take an active part in English class. I spent half an hour listening and reading English every day. I also tried to watch some English movies. Several months later, I did much better in English. I felt proud of my progress and I realized nothing is impossible if you keep trying hard.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇短文关于“付出与收获”，学生可以通过自己的日常经历，来写付出了什么，中间是怎么努力的，以及最后从这段经历中学到了什么。

【详解】

本文写了自己一开始不擅长英语，在自己的努力下，英语成绩取得了进步，每天听英语，阅读英语，也尝试着看一些英文电影，经过几个月的努力，英语成绩有所提升。通过这件事意识到，只要肯努力，没有什么是做不成的。

【点睛】

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．（·四川雅安中学中考模拟）书面表达。

假如你们学校要开展主题为：“如何保护地球”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。

提示：1. 现在存在的环境问题。

2. 采取措施，保护环境。

1）关闭工厂，不乱扔垃圾。

2）节约用水、用电的方法。

3）使用购物袋代替塑料袋, 尽量乘坐公共交通。

4）回收利用废品等。

要求： 1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。

2.词数80--100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不记入字数。

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

Thanks for listening!

【答案】How to Protect the Earth

Hello, everyone!

The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.

However it becomes dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature.

It's time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don't litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.

I hope our home will become better and better.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It's time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等词语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．（·安徽中考模拟）李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：

1. 中秋节的时间；

2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；

3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to

you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

11．（·天津中考模拟）近日中央电视台报道了一个十四岁小男孩何思汗的事迹，介绍了他卖画筹款医治姑姑的感人故事。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文。

（1）何思汗从小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼对绘画有很大兴趣。

（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日渐贫寒。

（3）他作画筹款给姑姑治病。

（4）思汗勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习。

（5）你的想法……

参考词汇：严重的serious 疾病disease

要求：

（1）词数：80?100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The Moving Story of He Sihan

Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a

student in Grade 9. He________________

【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housew ork. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.

I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，介绍何思汗的感人事迹。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比较级and比较级, raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

12．（·杭州市清河中学中考模拟）小明在朋友圈发了一段文字，表达了自己的苦恼，假如你是他的朋友，请回复他，表达你的观点，并给他一些你的建议。要求不少于80个字。

Hi, Xiao Ming!

【答案】例文Hi, Xiao Ming!

In my opinion, you have to take a long talk with your parents. On the one hand, You should let them k now that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself. Interest comes first, and one can do better in everything if it is connected with their interest. So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school.

On the other hand, you should be understanding with your parents because they really care about you. They want you to be better. But everything may happen if you attend Zhong Kao. If you fail, b oth your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see.

Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列结构Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that

you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both you r dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

13．（·北京中考模拟）从下面两个题目中任选一题

．．．．，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①

假如你是李华，本周六龙湖公园将举办端午节游园活动。你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter

和你一起参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们见面的时间、地点，在那儿可以做些什么以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语: meet, take part in, the dragon boat race, m ake Zongzi, camera…

提示问题:

When and where are you going to meet?

What can you do there?

What do you advise Peter to prepare?

Dear Peter,

How is it going?

This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities in Longhu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me.

__________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

题目②

“我们都在努力奔跑, 我们都是追梦人。”有梦想就有目标, 有希冀才会奋斗。某英文网站正在开展以“We Are All Dreamers”为主题的征文活动, 假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投

稿。谈谈你的梦想是什么？你为什么会有这样的梦想？为了实现你的梦想, 你打算怎么做？提示词语：want to be, like, study hard, come true...

提示问题：● What's your dream and why?

● What will you do to make your d ream come true?

【答案】例文：Dear peter,

How is it going?

This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos.

I’m looking for ward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给Peter写一封信，邀请他参加端午节游园活动，告诉我们见面的

时间、地点以及要做的活动。

【详解】

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：This Saturday is……，There will be……，We are going to……，We can watch……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表示我邀请你参加端午节游园活动，接下来介绍我们见面的时间和地点以及可以做的事，最后期望收到你的回复。此处invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

14．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：

1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；

2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；

3. 呼吁大家友好相处。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________

【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.

In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more an d put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.

It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

15．（·天津中考模拟）假设五一小长假期间，你去故宫博物院参观，请根据以下要点提不与一篇英语短文，讲述你在故宫的所见所闻。

（1）你提前在网上购买了故宫门票。

（2）你乘火车到达北京后’转乘地铁来到故宫。

（3）故宫的建筑高大雄伟，展品琳琅满目，精美绝伦。

（4）故宫内游人如织，人们纷纷拍照留念。

（5）闭馆时间到了，你仍然不愿离去。

（6）你的感受……

参考词汇：故宫博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum.

___________________________________________________

【答案】My visit to the Palace Museum

On May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It's closing time. I still don't want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇发言稿。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可以适当发挥。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession.这些给文中增色不少。

16．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达

86.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

（1）父母规矩太多，不允许晚上出去，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己。

（2）你应该理解父母，他们是爱孩子的，希望孩子前程似锦。

（3）你与父母保持良好关系的做法：努力学习，听父母话。

（4）……（至少一条）。

要求：

（1）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。

（3）词数：80～100个。

（4）短文的开头己给出，不计入总词数。

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me...

【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own cl othes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.

【解析】

【详解】

某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。注意文中用第一人称书写；2.时态以一般现在时为主；3.体裁为说明文，可稍加评论；4.合理想象，发表你对压力的看法；5.语句通顺。意思连贯；

【点睛】

本文语句通顺，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t al low me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,这里给文章增色不少。

17．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，作为活动主持人，你打算邀请外教 Smith 先生来参加本周末学校开展的“英语戏剧展示”活动，请用英语给他写一封邀请函，告诉他本次活动的具体时间和地点，安排了哪些内容，以及需要他做哪些事情。

提示词语:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos

提示问题:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?

What are you going to do on the show?

What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm glad to tell you there'll be an English drama show this weekend.

______________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this

Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.

I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.

We’re looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题作文，邀请外教史密斯先生参加英语戏剧展示活动。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

18．（·广州市天河中学中考模拟）书面表达

请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。

提示：1. 出行方式

2. 不浪费纸、水、电等

3. 其他低碳生活的方式（补充一点）

4. 低碳生活的作用

注意：1．词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；

3．文中不得提及真实的人名等相关信息。

My low-carbon life

Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. _______________________

_________________________________________________________________

【答案】My low-carbon life

Low-carbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans; TV sets and lights in time when I don't need them. What's more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.

I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let's take actions.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文。请根据提示内容，以My low-carbon life为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的“低碳生活”，以及你对“低碳生活”的认识。本文时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第一人称。认真阅读所给提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

我的低碳生活

低碳生活是一种生活方式。节约我们周围所有的能源是一种习惯。保护我们的环境很重要。首先，我总是步行去上学，告诉父母步行去上班，而不要开车。其次，当我不需要的时候，我会及时关掉水龙头、风扇、电视机和电灯，以节约用水和用电。更重要的是，我们家里的水一直都在重复利用。第三，我使用纸张的两面。我认为充分利用纸张是件好事。通过这样做，我们可以拯救许多树木。最后，我会带着篮子购物而不使用塑料袋。

我相信如果我们能做这些事情，我们的生活会越来越好。

低碳，快乐生活。我们采取行动吧。

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。

19．（·吉林省实验中考模拟）（B）《朗读者》第五期节目中，主持人在开场白中说道：