高二英语短文改错
Test 1 Never shall I forget the writing class presented to our English teacher today. Yesterday Mr Wang, our English teacher, told us that many other teachers would visit writing class he would present to us. We were looking forward to it. It struck us as a big surprise was that Mr Wang, who was used to be punctual, didn’t appear when the school bell had rung. The teachers sit behind the class were quite puzzled. We were quite worried about him, wondered what might have happened to him. Five minutes late, Mr Wang showed out in front of us! On the blackboard was the writing titles: When Our English Teach er Was Later for Class… Only then we realize that he had intended to be late!
Test 2 Some people learn new skills more quickly than others, so don’t be too discouraged unless some of your classmate seem to be learning English more quickly than you. If you keep on practicing, you will master your English in the end. In the meantime, try to make English learn as fun as possibly. I suggest that you watch English language movies on your free time. I also suggest reading some English language magazines on topics that interests you, joining in the fun and games at your school’s English Corner. If your school doesn’t already have a English corner, you might want to think about starting it.
Test 3 Thanks for your letter. You are describing a common problem experiencing by students all over China. What you already know, the competition to get into a good university or college is very fierce, and that by turn means a heavy study load for students. I know that this can feel like terrible burden at times, but my advices to you is to keep on studying as your hard work will pay for in the end. In the meanwhile, do you best to relax. Proper rest and relaxation are extreme important. Although I know that you are very busy, but yet I want you to try to set some time aside after class and at the weekends such that you can unwind properly.
Test 4 If you visit London, you’ll see lots of cars, buses and bikes. You’re very
cheap and quick to use a bike. As you take a bus, you have to wait for half an hour or else. Wha t’s more, the bus moves slowly. The underground is quick but very expensive and often crowd. I used to travel to the work by bus. I often arrive at work late and tired. Then a friend of me suggested we go to work together by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, however, we always arrived on time. Take a bus took fifty minutes when riding a bike took only half an hour. Now I love riding a bike to work. I’ve got a little more money now, I feel much better.
Test 5 We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard time. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day’s study.
Test 6 I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I can’t stand the great pressure. Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and take at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Besides, we don’t even have enough sleep. There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We oft en warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.
Test 7
The Internet can make our life interested and enjoyable. Many of us like go online very much because they can learn how to use the computer and get more informations from the Internet. We can read good newspapers and magazines. It can make us clever in playing computer games. I can send e-mail to our friends quickly. We can chat
online, it can help us get in touch with people from all over the world. But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in the net bars all day and all night. As the result, their life goes very bad with them. In my opinion, we mustn’t go online while it is time for us to study. We can do in summer or winter holidays.
Test 8
My grandpa was used to dislike television. He thought that people spent too much time watching it. A lot of his friends, therefore, always talked about the sports programs and films on it. They never read many books or go out in the evenings so he refused to buy a TV set. Last year he was 60 and retired his job. My father bought him a TV set, said ―It will make you to learn some of the latest news‖. It is quite true. He has watched all the news programs. He knows far much about the world now. And he reads more books, either. In fact, he thinks he may follow one of the Open University TV course next year. Perhaps he’ll get a degree when he is 65.
Test 9 The ―white pollution‖ problem was caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, on which plastic shopping bags play an important role. In China about three billions plastic shopping bags are used every day, that results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution. Lucky, the government put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demand that no stores and supermarkets should provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1, 2007. The rule will undoubtedly reduce use of plastic bags or promote the awareness of environmental protection. He is strongly suggested that everyone turns to cloth bags and shopping baskets.
Test 10
To improve your English reading, you should, first of all, choose something you feel it important or interested to read. Do not try to read everything. You should begin with those which written in simple English. Do not read those which prove difficulty for
you at the very beginning. As reading, do not read too slowly or look up every new word. After reading a passage and having its main idea in mind, you may turn on and read it again. This time you read a passage slowly and
look up some new words if necessary. Keep on reading in this way, and you'll surely make a progress little by little.
Test 11 Like a middle school student of Senior Three, I do sports one or two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing the basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very helpful to me. Take exercise makes me even more healthier so that I won’t be ill very often.What’s more, I also get myself relax in different kinds of sports. Only in this way can I do better job in my study in high spirit. Through doing physical exercise, I’m becoming strong and more confident than before. I do think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day so people’s health is important in modern lives
Test 12 This morning I went to the English corner in the park near my home. It was three years since it was found. Many middle school students as good as college students and foreigners take part the activity. People there practice speak English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is good chance for me to use that I have learnt in my English class.
I was felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best for learn English better, for it is so wide used in the world
Test 13 There are a lot of people learn English in China. How can we learn English well? Firstly, I try to speak as many as I can. Secondly, I listen English as often as possible in and out of class and write down the important things the teacher taught in class. Thirdly, at night I like to enjoy English song at home. Fourthly, I go over my lessons and doing a lot of practice after class. At last, it is also important to remember the English words. I think that we do like this, we can learn English well. In fact, there is not good and easy way to learn English well. So there is nothing difficult if we put our heart into it.
Test 14 Play football is my favorite. I fall in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way to home. I was too curious about the little round ball that I began to play it with my friends. From now on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train ourselves, sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve my skills. Among all the football star, I admire Beckham mostly. It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot. My greatest dream is to become professional football player in the future.
Test 15 About a mile from Mark’s building is many old houses. They are all empty and going to pulled down. His father says they are dangerous and tells him to keep away from it. However, he enjoys playing there very much. One Friday on his way home to school, Mark went into one of the empty old house. He saw a door lead down into a small dark room！. He went into the room to see where he could find. Just then he heard a terrible crash. The roof of the old house fell in. Mark tried to open the door. But he couldn’t. So he had to stay here. Mark was saved three days ago by some police. They used dogs to find him.
Test 16 I used to live in a small town with green trees all around it. The river, run through the town，had clean water in it fish could be seen swimming in groups. The houses, however, was small and simple, and the street wasn’t wide enough to run cars. People worked hard all the year round but still lived a poor life. Now great changes have been taken place there. You can see tall buildings, department store and factories everywhere. Cars and buses are running in broad streets. But as the development of industry, pollution is becoming more and more seriously. A lot of trees are gone, and fish are disappeared because the dirty water. To our joy, people have been done their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.
Test 17
English is living language. It is wide used all over the world. More and more people begin to learn English in order that be able to use it freely at work and learn from other countries. It is not easy for us to learn English well so we do not have a good
condition and our time is limit. But ―where is a will, there is a way‖. If we keep on speaking it and use it, we can learn it well. We should have active in speaking more. Try to be create an atmosphere for speaking and listening. So far as we keep on using it, we can master it.
Test 18 Some people think that playing table-tennis need little strength, but I don't think so. When play table-tennis, we should judge the direction of the ball, and hit them back with great strength so that we can win the game. In the same time we need pick up the ball which falls to the ground. So before one game you will be very tired if you have tried your best. But, as a sport, I think it is more like a art. In the game, you can often find the ball moving quickly, and each of the players' movements are very beautiful. Though I can't play it very well, but yet I still show great interest in it. I think playing table-tennis can build our bodies, keep us healthy, train our brains.
Test 19 As the development of people’s living conditions，more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it good to own car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast and comfortable mean of transportation. You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming rich, and the country stronger. It also makes businesses and industries developed faster. While, others have different opinions. They think that cars give waste gas and pollute the air. Too many cars will have some bad effect, such as more accidents. Besides, parking cars is other big problem. Maybe people should think careful before they buy a car.
Test 20 Health is very important for any of us. In order to stay health, we need some common knowledge. Firstly, pay your attention to the diet. We should eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. Do not have a lot of food that contain too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm for us. Don’t drink too much coffee, too. Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can help keep us from getting too fat. People which do running every day usually have stronger hearts than who don’t. Finally, to form good living
habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. Overwork and few sleep will lead to illness. Also, remembering to stay away from cigarettes.
Test 21 Under the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult work. Just click your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You needn't step out the room. It seems being easy and quick. And there's always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you trouble. You may find the color of the article is different from that you want, or the size is either too small nor too big. If you want to be different, you'd better not to buy clothes online. Once you put up the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find many people in the street wearing the same cloth as you.
Test 22
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m so pleased to hea r of you and was writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have been taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, the playground used to be, now stands other new building —our library. In it there are all kind of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you will visit our school for yourself some day. Best wishes, Li Hua
Test 23 It is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how protect your eyesight? First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. You could better have a rest by looking in the long distance before you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay attention to the following: Don't read under the sun or in a poor light; don't read in a bed or in a moved bus. And when you read, you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And third, do eye exercises every day, that will also help you keep good eyesight. If you obey the rule above, I think, you can protect against your eyesight.
Test 24 There is a new market near my house. My mother often goes here and buys which we need for our meals. But I have never been there before. Yesterday I went to the market with my mother. There were such many people that we could hard make our way out of the crowds. The sellers shouts could be heard every now and then. I remembered that several days ago I had asked Mother to buy some fresh fish. Most of the fish there was frozen, we had not much trouble in finding some fresh fish at the other part of the market. My mother bought something else as well as. It was my first time to go to the market, and I was deep impressed by what I saw in the market.
Test 25 In April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school which we took part in a volunteer labor. We got to there at nine o’clock. After divided into three groups, we began to work. All the groups have their own tasks. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Second picked up litter and cleaned the benches. My group wiped all the equipments in Children’s Playground. Each of us worked hard. At about half passed eleven, we finished working. Though we were tired, but we were happy. It was a meaningful day for us because we had done good deed
Test 26 As we all know that, teachers are very important to us. They not only open our eye to a wonderful world of knowledge, but also teach us how behave. It is undoubted that they are worth of our respect. We should always be grateful to them. Therefore, we ought obey the school rules. We should come to school in time and not make some noise in class when our teacher is conducting out the lesson. That is the more necessary and easiest thing which the students should do. Only by doing so can we show our really respect to our teachers.
Test 27 I’m a senior 2 student. Now MP3 and MP4 are very popular among our students. There are many advantages. Firstly, it’s too small that it’s convenient for us to carry. Secondly, it can help improving our English listening. Thirdly, it can
download music and even films, thus enrich our life. While, there are some disadvantages, too. Scientific researches discover that overuse it can influence our hearing, which is harmful to our health. Besides, some students are addicted into pop songs and music, both in or out of class and others even listen to it on the way, which thought very dangerous. In my opinion, we should make a good use of them in our study and on the other hand we should learn to use them properly and safely.
Test 28 English is my weak subject. Last term, I almost failed in all the English tests, that made me worried and discourage. Knowing that I was in low spirits, Mr. Li, who is charge of my class, advised me read an article. I finished reading it immediately. It was a true story about a girl student who was lost all her arms and a leg at the age of five. But she didn’t lose her heart. Instead, she smoothe d away various discomforts and learn to write with her only foot. I was deep moved by her story. Now I have made up my mind learn English well.
Test 29 Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, specially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get your ideas confusing.
Test 30 Dear Editor, Recently, our class have a heated discussion about if the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are favor of the move. They say large crowd of visitors will lead in traffic jam. They also say that once moving, animals will get large space and better living conditions in the countryside. However, other students against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, was built in 1966, is well-known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is.
What’s more, moving may cause the dea th of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision has to be made by people in Beijing.
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
英语改错 纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错，不难看出，其错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右;正确占一行;多词和缺词一般占3行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中，动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;② and 前后动词时态不一致; ③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用; ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they wantme to devote all my time to my studies.(did 改为do，错误类型属于①) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visitingtemples and told stories. (visiting 改为 visited, 错误类型属于②) There will an important game next month. (will后加be, 错误类型属于④) One evening she told me that something happened whenher parents was out. ( was 改为were，错误类型属于③) 2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。 I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject 改为subjects) Their word were a greatencouragement to me.(word 改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 3. 连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词，一般考查从句关系 who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式，改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growingup. (此处应该是并列的关系而非转折，but改为 and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”，不能再跟but连用，所以去掉but) 4. 冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an 和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the，the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kindsof pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词，所以其前加 a ) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词，故have后加a) 5. 形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词 smell /feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词，terribly改为terrible.) 6. 代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I / me; he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。 Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as Iwas learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为 myself ) One day I wrote a little story and showed to myteacher. (to前加it) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life andstudy, the other would help him out. (other 后加s) What’s more, you have to be friends with your pupilsand take good care of him. (him改为them) 7. 非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词，talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more importantthan playing sports. (go作主语,应改为 going ) Children may not develop the habit of read and theability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语，read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countrysidewith you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致，故saw改为seeing)
高三英语短文改错专项训练(每日一篇） (1) Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. (2) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (3) Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. . . So art is always changing and
高二英语短文改错练习题（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 练习1： Dear Miss Veans, I was wondering that whether you could help us revise a short play adapting from our English textbook. One of the stories we have read interest us a lot. It is about the adventures of three men—a naturalist, his colleague and a sailor, they are captured at sea by Captain Nemo. At board Nemo’s submarine, they take an adventure across the world beneath the ocean, meeting many challenges—huge icebergs, angry sharks and terrified squids. Fortunately, the three men survive. One day the submarine is sucked into a huge maelstrom and the three prisoners made their bid for freedom. In word, it is an exciting story. Could you kindly give us some guidances? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, please give us some advice on our acting. If possibly, could I meet you in your office at 10 a.m. to discuss it with you? We are looking forward to your reply.
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析） 短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 （1） Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn‘t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That‘s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier. （2） Dear Mary, Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people‘s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office. Yours, Christine （3） Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I‘ll think of this experience.
短文改错专练 ①In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but goes to work in the field every day. 1. _______ He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other 2. _______ people. My mother is very much kind and is 3. _______ friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 4. _______ I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 5. _______ When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 6. _______ I’ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 7. _______ Father often thinks I’m silly. He said if I decide 8. _______ To do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 9. _______ This is how I need to improve in the future. 10. _______ ②Dear Ms. Smith, I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 1._______ Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After 2._______ That, you always gave me specially attention and inspired 3._______ to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know 4._______ The other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, 5._______ My life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back 6._______ To school as new person. My grades improved. I became 7._______ Very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that 8._______ Said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just 9._______ Want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 10._______ Yours, Bob ③Dear John. Last summer I take a part-time job in the International 1.________ Camp for children. I have been told one more worker 2.________ will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How 3.________ about join as? The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.________ close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear 5.________ birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in 6.________ tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five 7.________ hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.________ area and have a fun, I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.________ experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 10.________ 3.
高考英语短文改错错误类型及具体表现形式 1.词法错误 即词的使用错误，是改错频率最高的部分。通常包括以下几个方面： （1）形容词与副词形式的错用。比如happy--happily （2）形容词与副词级别的错用。搞清楚什么时候用原型，比较级，最高级。还有前面的修饰语，比如a little, a lot, even等通常修饰比较级。而almost, nearly, second, by no means等修饰最高级。还有注意比较级不能修饰比较级。（3）ed结尾的形容词与ing结尾的形容词错用。太简单了不再赘述。 （4）冠词使用不当。高考题中比较常见的是a--an, a/an--the, the的缺失与多余 （5）名词单复数 2.句法错误 （1）动词时态、语态。一般来说高考题中必有一个动词时态错误。语态错误主要包括被动语态与主动语态使用错误，以及不及物动词使用了被动语态。 （2）非谓语动词。比如to的多余或缺失，过去分词和现在分词错用等，一遍不会很难，细心就好。 （3）主谓一致错误。 （4）对是否是及物动词的判断。动宾间的介词是不是多余，这类错误比较隐蔽。（5)主句从句连接词的错误。名从中连词选择错误；定从中关系代词关系副词的选择；状从连接词的选择错误；主从复合句间缺连接词。 3.行文逻辑错误 （1）代词及副词指代错误。注意指代的对象性别、单复数，代词的格，反身代词错用，副词指代错误（比如there--here)。这类错误较隐蔽，要细心。 （2）副词及连词逻辑意义错误。转折--并列，结果--原因等等。 4.常见搭配错误 （1）介词与名词的搭配 （2）动词与副词介词的搭配 三、细节着手 1.时态是否一致 2.主谓是否一致 3.代词是否一致 4.句子中谓语是否完整 5.是否该用被动语态 6.主从句的连接词是否用对了 7.从句中谓语是否完整
2020英语专题卷 专题十一：短文改错说明类专练 短文改错（每题1分，共40分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 A Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me how 考点11 my Chinese dream is, and 考点12 I will answer it without hesitation：to be a good doctor. The reason when 考点10 I want to be a doctor is because考点11 I want to save as many lives that 考点13 I can. If 考点13 I was young, I got seriously injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors’ efforts, so I was brought back to life. Since then, which考点11 has always encouraged me is to be a good doctor. To make sure of 考点11 my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard so as 考点13 I can be admitted into a good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goal. B As we all know, to change the entire world is absolute考点06 impossible. But a number of small change考点04 can make a big difference. Every one has tasks that they fear to doing考点08. Think of a task that your dear one hated考点09, and do it for him or her! You can imagine the pleasure where 考点13 you see your bathroom unexpectedly cleaned. Next, whether your talent is singing, cooking and考点12 giving good advice, share it. You may not think your talent is interesting, but they
高二英语短文改错练习 ▲按改错题的正确格式改正下列短文中的错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 改错一 David joined the army when he was eighteen. And for several months he taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One day he and his friends are practising their shooting, and all of them did well besides David. At last the officer said, “David! You are quite hopeless! Do not waste your bullet. Go behind the wall, and shoot you.” David felt ashamed. He went behind the wall and a few seconds late the officer and the other young soldiers heard a sound of a shot “Heavens!” the officer said, “has t hat silly man really shooted himself?” He ran behind the wall anxio us. But David was all right. “I am sorry, sir,” he said “And I missed again. 改错二 One day we were having English class when Mr Black saw a boy reading a picture-book and said, “Tom , how do you usually do after
2016高考英语短文改错专练（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Passage 1 Las t Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago. Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. Passage 3 September 15, 2013 Fine One week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt i n my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We can tell others our need for
改错一 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help. 改错二 I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him. 改错三 Dear Ralph, I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter h e said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up? 改错四 Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 改错五 Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them，there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents. 改错六