高二英语短文改错专题复习
知识总结归纳：
短文改错的题是一篇意思连贯，但有九行文字中各有一个语法或用词错误的英语短文。它所涉及的知识面很广，能力要求较高。而且题中所设的错误常常是考生自己在写作中经常出的语法错误，是专门针对考生的弱点而设的。但它又从另一个角度考查了语法知识的运用。因此，做题时，应从以下几个方面着手解题：动词使用错误；名词使用错误；形容词，副词使用错误；连词使用错误；代词使用错误；冠词使用错误；介词使用错误，上下文逻辑错误等。
在研究每一行的句子时，首先把握句子的意思，然后划分句子的成分：主语；谓语部分；宾语；状语：地点，时间，方式等。如果句子是并列句或复合句，先分开各部分小的分句，根据各个分句之间的关系判断使用的连词是否正确。然后再研究各个分句的成分。
（一）名词使用错误：名词一般在句中做主语或宾语，名词的错误主要在于名词单，复数的错误使用。
1. They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有lots of修饰，应当改为复数形式。
2. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可数名词根据本句的意思，前面有quite a few修饰，应当改为复数形式。
3. We practise three times every week and often watch football
match on TV together.：根据本句的意思match在此应当改为复数形式。
4. Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day. ：return 在此是名词，应当改为复数形式：many returns of the day是祝贺人们生日的固定用语：祝你健康长寿。
5. He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate应当是复数形式。
6. On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture应当改成复数形式，因为作者一路上忙于照相，不止仅照一张像。
另外还要注意名词所有格形式上的错误使用。
That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根据句子意思：有时一个小小的谎言（善意的）可以使你的朋友的感情免遭伤害friend应当改为friend’s
（二）动词使用的错误：
<一> 作为谓语动词，注意谓语动词在时态，语态，与主语是否一致以及用词方面的问题。
1. My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school team. ：全句的基本时态应当是现在时，was应改为am
2. Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主
谓一致的错误。Give的主语是Playing football，动名词作主语是单数形式，应改为：gives
3. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是说过去的事情used to do ：过去常常做某事。use改为：used
4. …the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down.：时态错误。全句是过去时态，passes 改为passed
5. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：动词形式的错误。句中有三个连续的动作做谓语。因此visit不是伴随状语，是第二个谓语动词，应该为visited.
6. The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定语从句中的谓语动词use 的主语是先行词a computer network，是单数形式，所以按主谓一致的原则use改为：uses.
<二> 作为非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词，动名词，不定式形式的使用错误，同时注意非谓语动词在平行结构中出现的错误。
1. Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定语修饰先行词clothes，应改为现在分词形式表示挂着各种衣服。
2. He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定语从句是说：他把业余时间花在学习
上，按句型结构：spend some time doing something.所以studied 应改为：studying.
<三> 形容词，副词使用错误：
注意：①形容词和副词的比较级，原级，最高级使用方面的问题。
②修饰比较级的副词的错误使用。③以ing和以ed结尾的形容词的混用。④形容词和副词的混用。
1. I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修饰比较级形式，在此没有比较级的意义，所以去掉much.
2. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容词与副词混用。Have a wonderful time：过得非常愉快。wonderfully 改为：wonderful
3. …his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very 改为：so
4. People will work few hours than they do now. ：这是一个含比较级的句子。（句中有than），few 改为比较级形式fewer
5. Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比较级smaller 前面的修饰词应该是副词much。More与多音节形容词或副词原形构成比较级。more改为much
6. Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved. 形容词moved指人受到感动。本句的定语从句的主语是movie。应当是moving.
<四> 连词使用错误：并列句连词and与but的误用是历年高考题中常考的内容。复合句如宾语从句，状语从句，定语从句中主，从句的连接词的误用根据主从句的关系可以发现。
1. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后两句的关系是并列关系or应改为：and
2. My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. 前后两句是并列关系不具有转折意义。but改为：and
3. It deosn’t matter that I would win or not. Matter后面的从句是whether…or not结构。That改为：whether
4. An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根据句子意思：在Eskimo男孩杀死他的第一只北极熊之后，才真正成为一名男子汉。Since改为：after
5. The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定语从句修饰先行词The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在从句中做地点状语，应加关系副词where.
解题思路：
首先要理解整个短文的含义，逻辑关系，篇章结构。再仔细研究每一句的意义。借助划分句子成分的方法判断每一部分是否有错误。读句子时一定以整句为单位。
【典型例题】
A（2004全国卷I）
Dear Ralph
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. from describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. quiet
it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3. as
them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4. at
a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. √
Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6. why
don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 7. talk
very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. strangers
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9. but
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. about 去掉
分析：
1. 来自一个小镇的新生。强调“来自于”用介词：from
2. describe oneself as +形容词，所以quietly改为quiet
3. 缺少连词，这是同级比较结构as…as ，加上as
4. 介词错误：词组laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。
6. 宾语从句连词的错误，that 本身没有意义可以省略，本句是说：我不知道他们为什么不喜欢我。
7. 时态错误，全篇用的是现在时。
8. 名词单复数的错误，主语是we，宾语与主语呼应，应该是复数形式。
9. 这是一个并列句，前后为转折关系。
10. 根据句子意思，about多余。
B全国卷III2004
You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1. of
a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3. having your books. Recently even though, many people 4. 去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 5. √
They have been reports in America about people 6. There trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7. personal
Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8. easy
information are good to society. For example, you 9.
is
can find such information like how to kill people. 10. as
The problem will become more serious in the future.
分析：
1. all kinds of是固定词组，of 不能缺少.
2. a few 后面的名词是复数形式。minute是可数名词
3. without是介词，后面跟动词ing形式。
4. even though：即使，此处表示“虽然”。应去掉even
6. 此处表示：在美国有报道说…..应当用表示“有…”的句型：there be…
7. 此处表示“个人的信息”，需要用形容词做定语。personal：个人的。
8. is后面是形容词形式。
9. information是不可数名词。后面的谓语动词用单数形式。
10. such…as是固定句型。
【模拟试题】（答题时间：45分钟）
A
You can find all kinds information in just 1._____
a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books. Recently even though, many people 4. _____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5. _____
They have been reports in America about people 6. _______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 8.________
information are good to society. For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people. 10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future.
B
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________ The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________
Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________
but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just 4._________
couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was 5. _________
about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6. _________
the kitchen looking at me. Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7. _________
isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8.
_________
and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You 9. _________
know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10. ________
参考答案
A
1. 在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短语。这里缺少了介词of
2. 名词“数”的错误, minute是可数名词，有a few修饰，应改为：minutes
3. have改为：having：without是介词，后面的动词应该是动名词形式。
4. 去掉even：even though：即使。此处表示：虽然。
5. 此行正确。
6. They改为：There：本句表示：有一份报告。用there be 句型。
7. person改为：personal：此处指个人的信息，应该用形容词形式。
8. easily改为easy：be后面接形容词。
9. are改为is：主语information是不可数名词。
10. like改为as：such…as为固定句型，表示：象……这样的……。
B
分析：
1. boy是可数名词，第一次提到，前面必须加a
2. 本句是说：欢渡春节。When在此多余.
3. 用词不当，cooker：炊具。Cook：厨师。
4. 前后两个分句是并列关系。
6. be about to do something 是固定句型。
7. Shake her hand在本句中做伴随状语。应该用ing形式。
8. 全句都在叙述过去的事，用过去时。
9. 本句是说：控制自己。宾语应改为反身代词。
10. several后的名词应是复数形式。
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专题五短文改错 训练1 短文改错(Ⅰ) A (2019·东北三省四市一模) One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays.After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities.Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before. 【答案】 One of my happiest childhood memories were was/is having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, ∧ having found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the a week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or and Fridays.After a couple of week weeks of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather ﹨to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual Gradually， though, they began to see these evenings together for in a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since After a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong stronger relationships with the family than we had before. B (2019·河北唐山一模) A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car with a experienced partner.A call came in told them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe a
英语改错 纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错，不难看出，其错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右;正确占一行;多词和缺词一般占3行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中，动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;② and 前后动词时态不一致; ③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用; ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they wantme to devote all my time to my studies.(did 改为do，错误类型属于①) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visitingtemples and told stories. (visiting 改为 visited, 错误类型属于②) There will an important game next month. (will后加be, 错误类型属于④) One evening she told me that something happened whenher parents was out. ( was 改为were，错误类型属于③) 2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。 I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject 改为subjects) Their word were a greatencouragement to me.(word 改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 3. 连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词，一般考查从句关系 who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式，改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growingup. (此处应该是并列的关系而非转折，but改为 and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”，不能再跟but连用，所以去掉but) 4. 冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an 和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the，the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kindsof pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词，所以其前加 a ) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词，故have后加a) 5. 形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词 smell /feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词，terribly改为terrible.) 6. 代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I / me; he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。 Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as Iwas learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为 myself ) One day I wrote a little story and showed to myteacher. (to前加it) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life andstudy, the other would help him out. (other 后加s) What’s more, you have to be friends with your pupilsand take good care of him. (him改为them) 7. 非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词，talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more importantthan playing sports. (go作主语,应改为 going ) Children may not develop the habit of read and theability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语，read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countrysidewith you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致，故saw改为seeing)
短文改错专题 一．改错题型特点： 高考短文改错是知识和能力的综合测试题型。主要考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的准确性及词、句、篇和语法的综合水平。高考短文改错设置的考点灵活多变，知识层次多，覆盖面广，包括词法、句法、行文逻辑以及语篇结构等，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。 二．短文改错常见考点设置： 考点1：名词 命题特点: 本来用复数,却用单数；本来用单数，却用复数。 记住常考的几个不可数名词：news, work(工作), advice, fun, progress, information, luck, weather, music, health, change(零钱),baggage(行李), luggage(行李),furniture, jewellery, equipment等 改正方法: (1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系. 1. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. 2. After class we become stranger at once. 3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get marks in all my subject. 4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. 5. There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. 6. Now we can get millions of informations from the Internet. 7. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. 8. She is one of the most intelligent girl in our class. 9. I looked at his other hands. 10. Most of them are peasant and some often go fishing in the sea. 11. We have made great progresses with Mr. Liu teaching us. 12. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new rules should help students get higher grade. 13. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. 14. He’s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures. 考点2：代词 命题特点：1.男女性代词用反；2.单数指代复数；3.代词词性用错；4.缺少人称代词。 改正方法: 根据上下文的逻辑关系以及人称代词的数和格的一致问题。 15. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much. 16. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. 17. I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. 18. It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. 19. Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself as I was learning to express me in simple English. 20. My story book is much more interesting than her. 21. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 22. Some students may also save up for our college or future use. 23. Do you think necessary for you to learn Japanese well? 24. I dressed me quickly and hurried out the house. 25. You’d better keep that he said in mind. 26. He has three children, two of them are teachers. 27. The population of China is much larger than it of the USA.
高二英语短文改错练习题（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 练习1： Dear Miss Veans, I was wondering that whether you could help us revise a short play adapting from our English textbook. One of the stories we have read interest us a lot. It is about the adventures of three men—a naturalist, his colleague and a sailor, they are captured at sea by Captain Nemo. At board Nemo’s submarine, they take an adventure across the world beneath the ocean, meeting many challenges—huge icebergs, angry sharks and terrified squids. Fortunately, the three men survive. One day the submarine is sucked into a huge maelstrom and the three prisoners made their bid for freedom. In word, it is an exciting story. Could you kindly give us some guidances? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, please give us some advice on our acting. If possibly, could I meet you in your office at 10 a.m. to discuss it with you? We are looking forward to your reply.
高考短文改错专项练习 1 College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. 2 I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
2018高考英语专题---短文改错 压轴题高分策略之错词 一、考点规律分析 短文改错中，错词所占比重最高，常占整篇短文改错10题中的的6个小题左右。错词的情况也最为复杂，常见的有：动词错误；名词错误；连词错误；冠词错误；形容词和副词错误；代词错误；非谓语动词常见错误；介词错误；习惯用法错误以及逻辑上的错误等。矚慫润厲钐瘗睞枥庑赖。 1. 动词的常见错误 ①一般现在时与一般过去时错用； ② and前后动词时态不一致； ③主谓不一致； ④缺少动词，特别是be动词； ⑤第三人称单数形式错用； ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.聞創沟燴鐺險爱氇谴净。 【答案】did改为do As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. 残骛楼諍锩瀨濟溆塹籟。 【答案】visiting改为visited 【思路分析】 通读全句可知，句子的整个时态为一般过去时，有三个并列的谓语动词，分别为fed，visiting和told。很明显，并列连词and前后的动词时态应该保持一致，所以应该把visiting改为visited。酽锕极額閉镇桧猪訣锥。 One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out.彈贸摄尔霁毙攬砖卤庑。
短文改错专练 ①In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but goes to work in the field every day. 1. _______ He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other 2. _______ people. My mother is very much kind and is 3. _______ friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 4. _______ I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 5. _______ When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 6. _______ I’ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 7. _______ Father often thinks I’m silly. He said if I decide 8. _______ To do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 9. _______ This is how I need to improve in the future. 10. _______ ②Dear Ms. Smith, I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 1._______ Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After 2._______ That, you always gave me specially attention and inspired 3._______ to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know 4._______ The other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, 5._______ My life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back 6._______ To school as new person. My grades improved. I became 7._______ Very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that 8._______ Said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just 9._______ Want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 10._______ Yours, Bob ③Dear John. Last summer I take a part-time job in the International 1.________ Camp for children. I have been told one more worker 2.________ will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How 3.________ about join as? The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.________ close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear 5.________ birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in 6.________ tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five 7.________ hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.________ area and have a fun, I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.________ experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 10.________ 3.
高考英语短文改错错误类型及具体表现形式 1.词法错误 即词的使用错误，是改错频率最高的部分。通常包括以下几个方面： （1）形容词与副词形式的错用。比如happy--happily （2）形容词与副词级别的错用。搞清楚什么时候用原型，比较级，最高级。还有前面的修饰语，比如a little, a lot, even等通常修饰比较级。而almost, nearly, second, by no means等修饰最高级。还有注意比较级不能修饰比较级。（3）ed结尾的形容词与ing结尾的形容词错用。太简单了不再赘述。 （4）冠词使用不当。高考题中比较常见的是a--an, a/an--the, the的缺失与多余 （5）名词单复数 2.句法错误 （1）动词时态、语态。一般来说高考题中必有一个动词时态错误。语态错误主要包括被动语态与主动语态使用错误，以及不及物动词使用了被动语态。 （2）非谓语动词。比如to的多余或缺失，过去分词和现在分词错用等，一遍不会很难，细心就好。 （3）主谓一致错误。 （4）对是否是及物动词的判断。动宾间的介词是不是多余，这类错误比较隐蔽。（5)主句从句连接词的错误。名从中连词选择错误；定从中关系代词关系副词的选择；状从连接词的选择错误；主从复合句间缺连接词。 3.行文逻辑错误 （1）代词及副词指代错误。注意指代的对象性别、单复数，代词的格，反身代词错用，副词指代错误（比如there--here)。这类错误较隐蔽，要细心。 （2）副词及连词逻辑意义错误。转折--并列，结果--原因等等。 4.常见搭配错误 （1）介词与名词的搭配 （2）动词与副词介词的搭配 三、细节着手 1.时态是否一致 2.主谓是否一致 3.代词是否一致 4.句子中谓语是否完整 5.是否该用被动语态 6.主从句的连接词是否用对了 7.从句中谓语是否完整