南昌市外国语学校2017——2018学年下学期
高二英语短文改错专题练习
命题及审题人：邹乐铭2018.4.14
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The Great Wall is a great military fortification project in China that was regarded as a miracle in the history of ancient architecture. It went through more 2,500 years of the Chinese history but bestrides the vast terrain over a dozen of provinces in northern China. Although it has lost the its military value for a long time, it nevertheless reflects the dignity, confident, and independence of the Chinese people.
In 1987, UNESCO listed the Great Wall by a World Heritage Site. The Great Wall is a must-visit site for tourists worldwide where they come to China and Beijing. More of them put on T-shirts with Mao Zedong’s poetry said “You are not a man until you climbed up the Great Wall” when they h appily climb the step of the Great Wall. The experience becomes unforgettable.
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Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease.
A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that during the past two years, she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. Twenty is the age in where one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health.
C【2018届全国26省3月联考】
In my opinion, my father can always give me advices because he has experienced a lot. When he graduated in college, his first job was to work as an office clerk. Later he found life was boring to sit in office, so he decided to quit and then starts his travels to many places. Having been traveled a lot, my father broadened his vision great and then went back home. While he met my mother, she thought it was time to settle down. Interesting in his life experience, I can’t help thinking that if I go with him, I will meet many new persons with who I can make friends. I want to live like my father.
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The good news is whether there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea at the stadium of our city in this Sunday. It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball star will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for you to watch them playing live. I like basketball very much, but I know basketball is also your favorite sport, so I was inviting you to watch the game. If you are interesting, please let me know as soon as possibly. In that case, I can’t buy the ticke ts ahead of time. Remember, match will start at nine o’clock on Sunday morning.
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Lending a hand to people make me happy. One day, I saw Sally, my assistant, cried. I asked her about my problem and she said that her mom was sick. She didn’t have enough mon ey to have her mother fully examining, so I decided to give her one of my diamond ring. It didn’t cost as many as the others, but I knew that it would be in great help if she sold it. I recommended an online shop that I often bought jewelry. Sally sold it and used the money to let her mother to be hospitalized. It is great feeling that you can help other people.
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People celebrate the Lantern Festival across China every year. About two weeks before, I went to Yuyuan Garden Lantern Fair, one of busiest and grandest lantern fairs in China. I enjoyed locally snacks and traditional performances. Craftsmen at different stand sold their delicate handicrafts in reasonable prices. That impressed me most was various types of lanterns. I also learn to make a paper lan tern. Although it wasn’t very beautiful, but it brought back my childhood memories. Today, many lantern fairs are still well preserving. It is a good way for us Chinese to know about my traditional culture.
G【2018届江西省临川二中高三1月考试】
Everyone tends have many problems while gaining knowledge . Therefore , your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out. What I’d like to share is my approaches to solve the problems.
First, you must focus on which you are faced with. There seems to be a lot of attractive things, like computers or game. To stay focused, you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work. Second, believe to yourself. Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning, but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence.
Last , keep modest . Never fee1 embarrassing to turn to your teachers or classmates. Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher.
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On-line voting becomes increasing popular. Many competitions get people involving in it. It is beneficial to some people, but it puts the others into a dilemma over if to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting should be welcomed, since it is just a way to participate public life. It is similar to ordinary voting events, which candidates go around to seek vote. In addition, the Internet make voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.
Things will turn much good if we can work out some rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude of it.
I【2018届安徽六校教育研究会高三第二次联考】
Stockholm, the capital of Sweden, hopes to stop using fossil fuel (化石能源) completely by 2040. Now the city wants larger lorries what cause more pollution to use bio-fuel, which are produced from waste. Stockholm is also working with Fortum, an energy company, to take advantage a city-wide heating system, use waste heat from supermarkets and stadiums to supply heat for homes. However, the city is trying to change people behavior, step by step. On one newly built estate (庄园), people are providing with tablets that show its real-time energy usage. This is to help them good understand how they use and waste gas, water and electricity.
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中考复习改错专项训练 1． Old Sarah was a strange rich woman. He did not 80. ________ hope to see any of her relative. She felt what they 81. ________ were interested in was her money. She was all right 82. ________ After she died, the relatives got together to hear Sarah's 83. ________ lawyer(律师) to read her will (遗嘱). They were sure that 84. ________ Sarah had left many money and they quarreled strongly 85. ________ with each other when they waited the lawyer to arrive. 86. ________ After the lawyer came in the living room, he asked them 87. ________ to sit down. He began to read the will in a seriously 88. ________ voice. Sarah has left all her money to her cats. 89. ________ 2． Mr Green come from England . 81. _________ He teaches English in middle school . 82. _________ He can speak some Chinese. He 83. ________ goes at Chinese classes very week . 84. __________ He likes working in Chinese very much . 85. _________ 3． Have you ever wanted to write a song? Two Sister. 59._________ Mildred and Patty Hill, once write a little song. 60._________ It was a happily song that they loved to sing. It 61._________ was calling "Good Morning to You. "However, most 62._________ other people didn't know the song very well. A day, 63._________ Mildred and Patty had a idea. It turned out (证明) to be 64._________ a very bad idea. They changed the words of the song. They 65.__________ called the new song "Happy Birthday to You." Theirs short 66._________ birthday song is now very famous. Almost every body know 67.__________ the words, Did anyone sing it at your test birthday party? 68.__________ 4. Hundred of years ago, news was carded by 6. _____________ people on foot or by a horse. It took a long 7. _____________ time people to receive news. Now it is possible 8. _____________ to send words and pictures in seconds. Billions of 9. _____________ people learn about news either by watching TV and by reading. 10. ____________ 5. Yesterday I went for shopping for shoes. The largest pair 1. I could find was an size 9 and I wear an 11! Everyone 2.
高三英语短文改错专项训练(每日一篇） (1) Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room. (2) I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can beat them if we won't make any mistakes. (3) Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theater. Most of his students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. . . So art is always changing and
2015全国卷1 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it. 76. think –thought 77. countryside前加the78. or—and 79. on—with 80. been去掉81. seriously—serious82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find85. your—our 2015全国卷2 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案】 71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that 或者去掉 where76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible 改为terribly 2015四川卷 Hi, Janice, It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me
专题练习一 A (2017·山西省大同市灵丘县模拟) The Art of War is an ancient Chinese military book __1__(date) from the 5th century BC.__2__ (write) by the ancient Chinese military strategist Sun Tzu (“Master Sun”，also spelled Sunzi), the book consists of 13 chapters, each of __3__ is devoted to one aspect of warfare. It is__4__ (common) thought of __5__ a great work on military strategy and tactics(战术). It __6__ (place) at the head of China's Seven Military Classics in 1080 by Emperor Shenzong of the Song Dynasty , __7__ it has long been the most influential strategy text in East Asia. It has had__8__ influence on Eastern and Western military thinking, business tactics, legal strategy and beyond. Its first complete English translation was completed and published by Lionel Giles in 1910. __9__ (leader) such as Mao Zedong, General V o Nguyen Giap, General Douglas MacArthur and so on have drawn__10__ (inspire) from the work. 答案与解析 文章介绍了“孙子兵法”这本中国古代杰出的军事作品，以及对后人的影响。 1．dating考查非谓语动词。此处dating from是现在分词短语作定语，修饰book。 2．Written考查非谓语动词。分析句式可知，write和句子主语the book 之间是被动关系，故用过去分词形式表示被动。 3．which考查关系代词。根据句式可知，此处是一个非限制性
高考英语短文改错20篇 1 Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76． play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77． study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78． must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79． you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80． person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81． a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82． you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83． not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84． happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85． 2 Dear Tracy， Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____ me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.77. _ _____ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____ follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”81. _ _____ Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，82. _ _____ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _ _____ bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____ to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____ Puzzled 3 Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________ has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________ to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________ a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________ late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. （二） Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people. According to studies, many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need. （三） I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month. But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time preparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him. But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy. (四) When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties . The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. （五） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei
高一英语短文改错专项练习(一) 命题人：右臂审题人：左膀 2016.11.8 高老师的左膀右臂祝大家期中考顺利~ 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改． 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 A Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! B It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places. C I'm an Australian boy aging 17 and I'm crazy about music. It is one of the most important thing in my life. I listen music whenever I can. I have a minidisk player, with it I can have access to music whether walking in the street or ride on the bus. At home, there has a CD player in my room, and the music is on all the time. I like rock music best of all. My favorite band is Rolling Stones, which had produced 40 albums since 1966. It so happened that there was a living concert of Rolling Stones last Sunday. I decided to go. It was a great fun. I am also fond of classical music. I especially enjoy playing Beethoven once I am doing my homework.
2020英语专题卷 专题十一：短文改错说明类专练 短文改错（每题1分，共40分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 A Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me how 考点11 my Chinese dream is, and 考点12 I will answer it without hesitation：to be a good doctor. The reason when 考点10 I want to be a doctor is because考点11 I want to save as many lives that 考点13 I can. If 考点13 I was young, I got seriously injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors’ efforts, so I was brought back to life. Since then, which考点11 has always encouraged me is to be a good doctor. To make sure of 考点11 my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard so as 考点13 I can be admitted into a good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goal. B As we all know, to change the entire world is absolute考点06 impossible. But a number of small change考点04 can make a big difference. Every one has tasks that they fear to doing考点08. Think of a task that your dear one hated考点09, and do it for him or her! You can imagine the pleasure where 考点13 you see your bathroom unexpectedly cleaned. Next, whether your talent is singing, cooking and考点12 giving good advice, share it. You may not think your talent is interesting, but they
2010-2015年全国卷英语短文改错 2010年（全国卷I） It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer. 2010年（全国卷II） Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, we’ve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future. 2011年（全国卷I） One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together. 2011年（全国卷II） Dear George, It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them
短文改错专项训练 下面短文中每篇各有10 处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分 Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007．I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west．I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital． Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is import ant for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.