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1. Young people may find going abroad appealing because they really enjoy it. (空洞句) Young people may find going abroad appealingbecause we can learn a lot and broad oue view ina different counties.2. The reason I like surfing the Internet because it is my favorite hobby. （句子碎片）The reason why is that ………It is widely accepted/ believed thatIt goes without saying that3. Mobile phone is very common in our society, about 1/3 of city dwellers have become accustomed to using it.Mobile phone is very common in our society and about 1/3 of city dwellers have become accustomed to using it（标点）4. Some students did not choose their courses wisely, consequently, their credits for college admission were inadequate.Some students did nit choose their course wisely ,consequently; (分号)5. I kept on thinking about failing in NINEM for MA/MS in last year. Why? Because of the time.Because of the time is limited. （从句不可以成为主句）6. I am going to have a lot of activities during the summer vacation. For example playing in the field, climbing the mountain, and traveling by train.for example 后一般只跟一样东西such as 可以在后面加许多7. College students doing part-time jobs is good to his family, himself and the society.to their family theirselves and the society(错误指代)8. I will meet with lots of difficulties, but I think I can overcome it. (faulty reference)9. Finding a good apartment is as difficult as to pay the rent.10. The canteen should setup several televisions. Improvement of the Sentence Writing1. Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.2. Many Chinese people have gone to the United States in the past 15 years.3. Such belief is wrong and dangerous.As a matter of fact ,such belief is unfortunately wrong and possible dangerous (副词)4. There are two reasons for the effect.There are two possible resons fot the this dangerous effect (形容词)5. I think we can take three measures to solve the problem.Three measure , I think can be taken to solve the problem. （插入语）6. It seems that the first part is better written than the other parts.the first part ,it seem s is better than the other parts（插入语）7. We are making great efforts to improve our English. Great efforts are being made to improve （多用被动语态)8. Because of social demands, there appear many evening schools.Many eveing schools are made called to existence by social demands(多用被动语态)9. Diplomas are very attractive because it is demanded by our society.Why are these diplones so attractive and charming ?The reason for this is that it is (无中生有)10. English studying is very common because it is widely used in our society.11. Living in the countryside is the best thing for me.Nothing could be better for me than living in the countryside(反问陈述)12. Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisements.It is impossible to pick up an newspaper without fing ads13. We can see from the above graphs that from 1990 to 1995 the price of meat was on the rise, while consumption increased.14. Although we hold different attitudes towards opportunity, no one should neglect its importance.Different as the attitudes one ,no one (as的作用)15. As is shown by the two graphs, from 1800 to 1900, with the rapid growth of U.S. population, the number of species no longer existing shot up, adding up to 70 in 1990.During the period of the time from16. Pollution is an extremely serious problem：the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.17. Beijing has won the bid for the 2008 Olympic Game! Many college students could not sleep that night because they were so excited.18. Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking. But sometimes they feel a little guilty.19. The style of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.20. More and more people agree (realize/are aware) that women should enjoy full equality with men.21. Teachers are called “engineers of human soul”.22. Does television have more advantages than disadvantages?23. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.24. True friends will be very proud of your progress. If you face difficulties true friends will encourage you.①空洞句②句子碎片③标点④分号⑤从句不可成为主句⑥破折号⑦错误指代⑨平行结构⑩被动⑾要用人做主语⑿形容词和副词⒀插入语⒁无中生有⒂⒃陈述⒄冗余结构⒅反面绪论的句型————文章的开头段部分第一类：选择题型的开头For most people today, ____________has become their main source of__________, but as forme, __________should be regarded as a better source.There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of____________. Somepeople suggest that, while others argue that____________, l agree with the latter.It is a quite controversial argument whether_____________. In my opinion, l think that____________is a better idea because of_____________.It is often difficult for some people to decide whether ___________. But for others, the advantages of__________ always outweigh the disadvantages.From my point of view it is more advisable to choose______________ rather than____________.People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people hold the opinion that____________. Others, on the contrary, maintain that ____________. Personally, I stand on the side of____________.Despite the fact that most of them like____________, I would like to choose to_____________. 第二类：判断题型的开头赞成类l agree with the statement to some extent that ___________.I can see both advantages and disadvantages to_____________. Overall, l think it is a good idea. Consequently I agree with the title statement that________________.I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that______________.Many people advocate that___________, they claim that_______________, my opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons.At first glance, it seems very difficult for us to draw a definite concIusion that_______________is right or wrong, because it has both advantages and disadvantages.However, after serious considerahons we can see that under most cireumstances _____________ will do more good than harm.Two different opinions obviously exist to support and to oppose. After pondering theopinions from several aspects, personally, I agree with the idea that____________.反对类Nowadays, the problem of _____________has aroused public attention. Some peoplecriticize that. They believe that____________. However, I firmly objectto this argument.Until recently, ______________ was viewed as the prime argument, but people are taking a fresh look at it.Although it is an admirable idea, ____________ is not always a realistic option.Thinking logically, I can only say that this statement is valid because.Some people think that_______________, frankly speaking, I cannot agree with their opinion for the reasons below.To make it an extreme, the majority would argue that __________．It is essentialFor______________.第三类：论述题型的开头One of the hottest topics many People talk about now is___________.It has become apparent to us that______________.____________ plays a vital part in everyone's daily work and life.In the past few years, there has been a growing trend that____________.One of the universal issues thet draw growing concern is_____________._______________. This view has been shared now by more and more people.____________ is known as one of the most serious problems in today's society. We can see it almost everywhere. This phenomenon is the result of several reasons.With the development of society, _____________.In recent years, many cities have been faced with the serious problem of___________.One of the great writers once said that__________. Now it still has a realisticsignificance.When asked about ___________,people have al1 kind of views concerning it. From mypoint of view, ____________.本论的句型————文章的理由段部分承上启下的过渡句型In my opinion, the phenomenon __________is mainly due to several factors.A number of reasons may help at this point.This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.Putting too much emphasis on ___________ may result in obscuring other facts.To assume that ________ is destined to miss the following points.The reasons and examples 1isted below will strengthen my point of view.阐述理由的句型The main problem with this argument is that ___________.The root cause for __________ is____________.The most immediate reason for ___________ is ___________.One of the factor accounts for is that _____________.举例This offers a typical instance of ____________.Take __________ for example.We may cite a common example of ___________.结论的句型——文章的结论部分In short,___________. In sum,___________.In summary, ___________. In a word, __________.Taking into account of all these factors, I think that ___________.Based on the points discussed above, we can see ___________.With the improvement of ___________, ___________ will prove to hold great superiority over ____________.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that _________. There are a lot of details to consider, but al1 in all, I support the idea that _________.While it is true that the argument I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think that ____________. 问题解决提出解决方案Measures must be taken toIt is high time we had toIt is pressing/indispensable/essential that proper actions/effective measures should be taken to Great efforts should be put into/focused onWe need to take a fresh/clear look/view at this matter/problem/situation /in a new perspective/ from a new standpoint.最佳、最重要解决方案的句型What we can do is simply toThe best approach/solution to … isIt is urgent/pressing/significant/practical/feasible to应用文常用句型常见辩论话题理由1．SmokingFor：1．it is pleasurable and relaxing2．it is one's right3．it is difficult to stop smoking4．it is an old custom going back hundreds of years5．it is not always dangerous to one's health6．it makes socializing easier7．it is an important source of tax revenue8．intoxication is a natural drive (e.g., coffee, drugs, alcohol)Against:1．it is harmful to one's health (e.g., heart disease, bronchial trouble, lung cancer )2．it is harmful to those nearby3．it is a dirty and expensive habit4．it is addictive (i.e., nicotine)5．it is quickly being banned in public areas6．it lives off deceptive advertising2．School UniformsFor：1．they build character2．they eliminate class differences3．they allow students to better concentrate on their studies4．they are popular with parents and administrators5．they are inexpensive6．they are attractive and neat7．they eliminate the need to choose what to wear every day8．many countries have themAgainst：1．they lead to conformity2．they are disliked by students (students like to primp)3．they create a military mentality4．they are an infringement on our freedom (different strokes for different folks) 5．they are ugly and childish6．they deprive youths of an important choice: what to wear7．they are losing popularity everywhere3．Legalized GamblingFor：1．it reduces taxes2．it is a source of government revenue3．it is gaining popularity in the world4．it is an old practice dating back thousands of years5．it is pleasurable (e.g., horse racing, casinos)6．it is voluntary7．many people play poker and mahjongAgainst：1．it is banned in most countries2．it is condemned by most religions3．it can become addictive4．it encourages people to throw away their hard-earned savings5．it teaches people not to work for money6．it can destroy happy families7．it can lead to suicide8．it is easily controlled by the Mafia (e.g., bookmakers )4．City LifeFor：1．it is exciting2．it attracts people from the countryside3．it offers the best schools, hospitals, and stores4．it offers many amenities (e.g., swimming pools, bowling alleys, and sports stadiums ) 5．it offers many chances of employment6．its noise and overcrowding are hardly noticeable7．cities have an efficient public transportation system8．city planners can create a good living environment 9．crime can be found in the countryside as wellAgainst ：1．it is unhealthy (e.g., water and air pollution )2．it is not a good environment for children3．it is devoid of Nature and distinct seasons4．it is noisy and dangerous5．it makes people nervous and even neurotic6．it has created awful slums7．cities are overcrowded and expensive8．many city dwellers long to return to the countryside 9．city housing projects are unpopular5．Informing Patients Of CancerFor：1．patients want to know2．it is wrong to hide the truth3．it is not a shock for the patient but for his family4．it gives the patient a chance to plan his last days5．it is the patient' s body, not the doctor' s6．doctors are for it (in the U. S.)7．it allows a person to choose alternate means of treatment Against：1．it is heartless and cruel2．it may make the patient give up3．it causes depression4．it can lead to suicide5．most relatives are against it6．a white lie can save undue suffering7．doctors are against it (in Japan)6．Social SecurityFor：1．the state should help the poor, aged, unemployed, and sick 2．the state should provide good health care for its citizens 3．the strong must help the weak4．Social Darwinism is outdated5．there will always be social misfits that need help6．all religions stress charity7．all advanced countries have some form of social securityAgainst ：1．it costs too much2．it encourages laziness and destroys the work ethic3．it does not work efficiently4．people should look after themselves5．it results in heavy taxes6．Social Darwinism tells us that life is the "survival of the fittest" 7．there are no freebies in life7．CoeducationFor ：1．it is natural (i.e., adult society is not segregated )2．it gives men and women a chance to better understand one another 3．it gives men and women a chance to compete with one another 4．it is the modern trend5．it has many practical advantages (e.g., school plays, music groups) 6．it produces well-adjusted adults7．most parents prefer coeducation.8．separate schools foster sexual rivalry9．women become neurotic in all-women' s schoolsAgainst ：1．women do better academically in their own colleges2．women are in college to get an education, not a husband 3．women have their own values to develop4．it can lead to intimacy and promiscuity5．it is still rare in some countries6．it is opposed by some parents7．it robs women of their self-confidence8．separate schools have existed for centuries9．marry great men and women attended separate schools8．Corporal PunishmentFor ：1．children are not adults2．children respect discipline3．it is a check on excessive permissiveness4．it does no permanent damage because children are hardy creatures 5．it is opposed only by mixed-up psychologists6．it is a form of training7．it builds real character8．it reinforces the authority of teachers and parents9．it works to control juvenile delinquency10. there is the saying: Spare the rod and spoil the childAgainst ：1．it is barbarous2．Freud said it is wrong3．love is better than physical punishment4．it can cause psychological problems5．it is not necessary if children are raised correctly6．it is an emotional, irrational response7．it can result in a lawsuit8．beatings have been known to result in death9．there is the saying : Violence begets violence9．Organ TransplantsFor ：1．they prolong life2．they are supported by the medical profession3．they enhance medical science4．they are a challenge to surgeons5．critically ill people want transplants in order to live6．costs will come down as the surgery becomes routine7．there is no "time" to die8．death is defined as brain death9．the drugs cyclosporine and FK-506 have helped eliminate the problem of rejection Against ：1．they are too expensive2．they favor the rich3．they encourage the poor in Third World countries to sell their organs4．they are unnatural as seen by the body' s rejection5．they are often unsuccessful6．the idea is sinister7．Nature has decided when we should die8．the process of deciding who gets the next available organ is unfair9．there is as yet no agreement on what constitutes death (brain -dead versus heart-dead)10．Civil DisobedienceFor ：1．it draws attention to unjust of unconstitutional laws2．it is a matter of religious or moral convictions3．it is the only way to fight oppression4．it is usually nonviolent5．it is used only in extreme circumstances6．it goes back to the time of Jesus Christ7．it is common, like cheating on taxes and illegal parking8．God' s laws take precedence over man' s laws9．protestors are ready to accept punishment for their beliefs10．many famous people have engaged in civil disobedience (e.g., Mahatma Gandhi and Andrei Sakharov)11．there are many famous examples such as the Boston Tea Party and conscientious objectors during the Vietnam WarAgainst ：1．no one is above the law2．it can quickly destroy law and order3．it leads to anarchy4．it leads to contempt for all laws5．protestors are cowards trying to escape punishment6．protestors often resort to violence7．the democratic process should be used to effect change11．AbortionFor ：1．it is a woman' s fundamental right, say abortion-rights advocates2．it is necessary for unwed mothers3．it is necessary for rape victims4．it is necessary in some cases to save a mother' s life5．procreation is a couple' s choice6．it is a form of birth control7．poor, illiterate women want it8．most women support it9．it is necessary to prevent overpopulation10．it prevents unwanted babies from coming into the world11．it is not murder because a fetus is not yet a human beingAgainst：1．it is murder (infanticide), say anti-choice groups2．life begins at conception3．it is an unnatural practice4．it is immoral because only God can take a life5．a fetus is a human being-unborn but viable6．the rights of a fetus must be protected7．it is painful for the fetus-a barbaric practice8．it is not the same as other modern birth-control devices9．it causes many women to have guilt feelings10．unwanted babies can be put up for adoption12．CensorshipFor ：1．it is for the good of society2．it protects children3．every society has some form of censorship4．the individual is less important than the community 5．absolute freedom leads to anarchy6．many adults are not mature enough to make their own decisions 7．it can be carried out wisely8．pornography is not art9．pornography is in the hands of unscrupulous people 10．obscene works should be banned11．it is necessary in times of warAgainst ：1．it limits the individual' s freedom and human rights2．it is not consistent with democracy3．it is subjective and not objective4．it creates the problem of who will censor5．it is disappearing in advanced countries6．it deprives adults of their right to make decisions7．it can be applied to all aspects of our lives8．it is the first step toward totalitarianism9．it draws attention to banned works and increases sales 10．voluntary censorship is better13．Equality Of the SexesFor ：1．we all have the same Creator2．matriarchal societies go back thousands of years3．all advanced societies have given women equal rights 4．most companies have adopted equal pay for equal work 5．there are no skills women cannot master6．there are even women body builders7．men have a basic inferiority complex8．women are more interested in peace than men9．some world leaders are women (e.g., Margaret Thatcher )10．women are superior to men in some fields11．no scientific studies back up the stereotypes men have of women Against ：1．women have a different biological function2．women are physically weaker than men3．women can' t be mothers and career women at the same time 4．many women want to depend on men5．most women want to stay at home and be mothers6．women haven' t been given the vote in some countries 7．women are emotional and irrational8．women think intuitively (no famous women philosophers) 9．hormones cause women to behave differently14．Foreign AidFor ：1．it is humane2．the rich should help the poor3．all religions teach charity4．it seeks to end poverty, disease, and illiteracy5．it can be used to help refugees and combat slavery6．it is given by all advanced countries7．it is supported by the Red Cross and the United Nations8．it helped rebuild Japan and Germany9．it increases world trade10．it achieves political objectives11．it promotes national securityAgainst ：1．it is degrading to the recipient2．it is never appreciated3．it leads to feelings of inferiority4．it limits the independence of developing countries5．it subsidizes laziness6．it often goes into the pockets of corrupt officials7．it supports Third World dictatorships8．it can be culturally damaging9．it has divided the United Nations10．the money should be spent at home for one' s own people15．DivorceFor ：1．it is the logical solution to a bad marriage2．it allows both persons to seek happiness in a second marriage3．it dates from as early as ancient Babylonia4．it is legally recognized by most countries5．it is accepted by most people6．remarriage is a right7．it is necessary in cases of adultery, alcoholism, desertion, drug addiction, and mental and physical cruelty8．children are better off living with one parent than with both in an unhappy environment 9．feminists support itAgainst ：1．it breaks up the family2．it makes it too easy for two persons to walk out of their marriage3．it is opposed by various religions4．it is banned by some countries5．it was uncommon until fifty years ago6．marriage is a serious responsibility7．it is a sign of immaturity8．counseling is the solution9．it harms children emotionally10．children need both parents11．child custody decisions are messy16．Compulsory Military ServiceFor ：1．it aims to strengthen national defense2．it teaches young men discipline3．it builds character and physical fithess4．it teaches valuable skills5．it nurtures a spirit of comradeship an equality6．it offers opportunities for overseas travel7．it exists in many countries (e.g., Switzerland, Singapore)8．it reduces unemployment9．it instills a sense of patriotismAgainst：1．it is unnecessary in view of today' s professional armies2．it is a step away from peace3．some countries have abolished it (e. g., the U.S., Japan)4．today' s armies do not need unskilled manpower5．it interrupts young men' s studies and careers6．it is a useless experience7．it is a source of slave labor8．it results in bullying and conformity9．it does not build character10．it can cause mental disorders11．military skills are useless in private industry17．V oluntary EuthanasiaFor ：1．it is a basic right-the right to die2．the Greek origin of the word euthanasia means "good death "3．it allows one to die with dignity4．it allows one to choose the time and place of death5．it is logical and humane6．it can be regulated with safeguards (e.g., the person must be rationally lucid) 7．it is painless8．it is the solution to a terminal illness with suffering9．the dying want it10．some doctors will assist the patient to end his life11．it recognizes death as a natural, biological process12．doctor-assisted suicide is legal in Holland, under certain guidelines Against ：1．it is murder or suicide2．it is illegal in most countries3．most doctors oppose it4．it is a first step to killing the old and infirm5．it is irreversible in the event of a new cure6．only God can end a life7．most religions oppose it8．suicide is always irrational9．the dying are too sick to know what they want10．the dying should look to hospices that dispense painkillers11．it can be abused by greedy persons seeking an inheritance18．Capital PunishmentFor：1．it frightens would-be criminals (acts as a deterrent )2．it serves as a just reward for killers3．it lowers crime rates4．it is more economical than a life sentence (saves the state money)5．in rare cases it may lead to the death of an innocent person, but this cannot be helped 6．most countries practice it7．killers should not be allowed to become hero-figures8．a life sentence is never for life but for only a few years9．killers are heartless and cruel and should not be protected by sociologistsAgainst ：1．it frightens no one2．it is motivated by revenge and not justice3．it does not lower crime rates4．it can lead to the death of an innocent person (a mistake)5．it is a barbaric practice (hanging, electric chairs, gas chambers)6．it is unjust because only God can take away life7．the real solution to crime is the elimination of social injustices and rehabilitation 8．killers are often mentally ill and in need of medical treatment9．the death penalty is being abandoned by many countries19．Trade ProtectionismFor ：1．industries need government protection2．no nation can allow its industries to be destroyed3．agriculture must be protected for national security reasons4．real free trade doesn' t exist and never has5．national security is more important than idealistic trade principles6．it has made Japan, South Korea, and Taiwan prosperous7．every nation ' s economy is shaped by its own culture8．there are various forms of free-market economy9．every nation should have an industrial policy10．governments must provide jobs for their workers by whatever meansAgainst ：1．it invites retaliation2．it invites reciprocity based on a quid pro quo basis3．it impedes world trade and prosperity4．it hurts poor, underdeveloped countries5．it leads to trade wars6．it makes industries less competitive7．it costs taxpayers large sums of money8．it gives consumers less choice9．it is denounced by most nations10．it is based not just on high tariffs but also on government regulations, inspections, certification, and distribution20．Nuclear PowerFor：1．it provides huge amounts of energy from small amounts of fuel2．it is the best source of energy for countries without oil3．the world' s supply of oil will be exhausted in 90 years4．it already produces most of the energy needs of some countries5．it could supply all the world' s electricity for millions of years if fully developed6．it is safe if properly supervised7．nuclear power plants create less air pollution than fossil-fuel power plants8．the issue has become far too emotionalAgainst ：1．it is too dangerous (e.g., Chernobyl accident)2．most people are afraid of it3．the world' s supply of uranium is fast decreasing4．it is better to develop other sources of energy (e.g., fusion)5．radioactive wastes cannot be disposed of6．it can produce nuclear weapons for warfare7．certain radical world leaders are trying to buy nuclear weapons8．nuclear plants are expensive to build9．the U.S. is slowly closing down its nuclear power plants10．nuclear wastes can cause cancer。

中业考研四六级基础写作主讲老师：刘晶第一部分：视频对应版讲义一．基本知识：（1）四级写作要求：1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay/a letter(based on the picture below).2.Suppose you...3.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.（2）六级写作要求：1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay/a letter(based on the picture below).2.Suppose you...3.You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.（3）四六级写作评分标准：1.卷面2.内容3.逻辑4.语言（4）考题形式：1.essay2.letter二．essay写作思路：三段论：第一段：引入话题第二段：具体分析第三段：全文总结1.第一段：（1）介绍表象（2）概括现象/解释话语第一段：Ⅰ-1介绍表象：The cartoon depicts(that)a/an/some人物/事物1is/are doing/done sth,and/but there is/are人物/事物2(doing/done sth.)2015-6四级The cartoon depicts that a person is leading a modern life(from work to home,from play to sleep),but there is only computer occupying his life.2015-12六级The cartoon depicts some staff are reporting information to each other,but there is a man saying“We just don’t have much useful information.”第一段：Ⅰ-1介绍表象：1.Current years/Current world is witnessing that关键词is an issue widely discussed.2.Current years/Current world is witnessing sth.2016-12四级1.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to find a job somewhere and the other to starta business of your own.2.You are to make a decision.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.3.Current world is witnessing that university students own a variety of options upon graduation.2016-12六级4.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on innovation.5.Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation.6.The ever-developing world is witnessing the growing demand of innovation.第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-1介绍表象：The saying/proverb/remark that“...”reminds us of a prevailing phenomenon/tendency among sb (,which is...)2015-12四级1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying"Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission."2.You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning.3.The saying that“Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.”reminds us of a prevailing tendency among individuals around the world,which is lifelong learning.2015-6六级4.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying"Knowledge isa treasure,but practice is the key to it."5.You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view.6.The saying that“Knowledge is a treasure,but practice is the key to it.”reminds us of a prevailing tendency in the sosiety,which is the importance of practice.第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-2概括现象：Indeed/Nonetheless,sb/sth can be frequently/sometimes mentioned/seen/observed+范围,and they have/it has been always doing sth./fail to do sth.2015-6四级1.~~write an essay based on the picture below.2.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid's understanding of going to school.3.“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”4.Indeed,advanced technology can be frequently seen in daily life,and they have been always bringing some drawbacks especially to the young.2016-12六级5.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on innovation.6.Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation.7.Indeed,innovation can be frequently mentioned in not only the field of technology but other industries,and it has been always promoting the social development.第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-2解释话语：That is to say,sb/sth have/has been always doing sth./fail to do sth.2015-12六级1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below.2.You should focus on the difficulty in acquiring useful information in spite of advanced information technology.2015-12六级That is to say,advanced information technology fails to provide human with useful information.第Ⅱ段：逻辑框架：由总到分1.提纲挈领2.第一层面分析3.第二层面分析4.第三层面分析第Ⅱ段：Ⅱ-1提纲挈领：1.Several relative factors should be taken into account,not only A and B,but also C.2.Several relative factors should be taken into account，among which the following ones are the most impressive.第Ⅱ段Ⅱ-2,3,4：三个层面的分析角度:(1)宏观，官方，部门(2)大众，普遍，公众(3)微观，个体，私人第Ⅱ段：Ⅱ-2第一层面：Initially,on top of the list comes角度1.To be more specific,原因句/利弊句1.The truth is that完整句子Consequently，小结原因/利弊句：It is...that...（强调句式）Sth/Doing sth helps sb do sth.Sth/Doing sth facilitates sth/doing sth.Sth/Doing sth guarantees that...Sb lack the awareness of sth/doing sth.2015-12六级1.Several relative factors should be taken into account,not only technology and sources of informationbut also citizens’awareness.2.Initially,on top of the list comes the development of technology.3.To be more specific,advanced technology facilitates acquiring information.4.The truth is that someone will spread information without checking it.5.Consequently,the release of information should be supervised.2016-12六级1.Several relative factors should be taken into account,among which the following ones are the most impressive.2.Initially,on top of the list comes the global and our national development.3.To be more specific,it is innovation that will enable progress and even change the history of human race.4.The truth is that innovation does bring about many benefits as expected.5.Consequently,innovation should be encouraged continuously.2015-12四级1.Several relative factors should be taken into account,among which the following ones are the most impressive.2.Initially,on top of the list comes the official advocation.3.To be more specific,it is listening to others,rather than talking,that will enable us to absorb the essence of others'ideas.4.The truth is that paying attentionto other's opinion does bring about many benefits as expected.5.Consequently,listening should be encouraged continuously.1.Similarly vital,角度2is an indispensable aspect as well.2.It cannot be denied that原因句/利弊句2.3.For example,....4.But for sth/doing sth,sb would(not)do sth.5.Were sth/doing sth to continue,sb would(not)do sth.2016-6四级1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on e-learning.2.Try to imagine what will happen when more and more people study online instead of attending school．3.Similarly vital,the general trend is an indispensable aspect as well.4.It cannot be denied that it is due to excessive e-learning that adolescents neglect the awareness of communciation and cooperation.5.Were e-learning to continue,students would gradually lose the passion for discussion and exchanging ideas with each other.2015-12六级6.Similarly vital,the sources and approaches of acquiring information is an indispensable aspect as well.7.It cannot be denied that some citizens lack the awareness if judging the useful information from the useless.8.For example,a kid may obtain information in an online chat room,which is full of subjective opinions,but the kid is unable to tell whether they are useful or not.1.Ultimately,角度3is also,to some extent,inevitable.2.According to some statistics,原因/利弊句3.2015-6四级1.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.2.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents'role in their children's growth.2015-6四级1.Ultimately,parents'enforcement is also,to some extent,inevitable.2.According to some statistics,some parents lack the awareness that children are not the tools for achieving their own dreams.2016-12六级9.Ultimately,efficiency and convenience is also,to some extent,inevitable.10.According to some statistics,innovation guarantees that work can be dome more efficiently and problems can be solved in a more convenient way.第三段1.判断话题属性2.适当提出建议3.总结第Ⅲ段：Ⅲ-1判断话题属性：In general,话题核心poses a conducive/detrimental impact(on sth.)2016-12六级In general,innovation poses a conducive impact on personal and global growth.第Ⅲ段：Ⅲ-2提出建议：Meanwhile,it is essential that相关建议2015-6四级2016-12六级Meanwhile,it is essential that more rewards should be granted to the innovative figures and more resources should be provided to promote innovation.第Ⅲ段：Ⅲ-3总结：All in all,the sketch/issue deserves deeper analysis and sb should do sth.2015-12六级1.In general,the difficulty in acquiring useful information poses a detrimental impact on the mass public.2.Meanwhile,it is essential that department in charge should work out regulations to control the release of information.3.All in all,the sketch deserves deeper analysis and citizens should learn to judge the usefulness of information.2016-12四级1.In general,making a choice for the future by ourselves poses a conducive impact on our further development.2.Meanwhile,it is essential that the choice should be made from the bottom of our heart and according to our specialization.3.All in all,the issue deserves deeper analysis and everyone should be cautious to make the approprate choice.三．letter写作思路1.格式2.整体框架1.letter格式（1）称呼+逗号（2）结束语+逗号（3）签名2.letter写作思路第一段1.自我介绍/客套寒暄2.写作目的第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-1自我介绍：1.I am a/an定位，定语从句/非谓语动词2.As a/an定位,完整句子第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-1客套寒暄：1.I am sorry for not replying your letter for such a long time.2.Hope everything is getting along well with you.3.I am adj.to hear about the news that完句第Ⅰ段：Ⅰ-2写信目的：I write/am writing(this letter/email)in order to/for the purpose of目的动词常见写信目的动词——有求他人类1.申请信apply for this position/opportunity/scholarship2.订购信order sth3.挂失信inform you that I have lost sth.4.推荐人物信recommend sb to you5.咨询信i nquire about6.邀请信invite you to sth/do sth7.请求信seek for your assistance常见写信目的动词——对他人做好事类1.建议信provide you some advice2.慰问信share my feeling with you3.吊唁信share my feeling with you4.推荐事物信recommend sth to you5.欢迎信welcome you to sth6.祝贺信congratulate you on your sth/your doing sth常见写信目的动词——愧对他人类1.道歉信apologize to you2.拒绝信turn down your offer3.辞职信quit my current job常见写信目的动词——感谢信extend my gratitude for you常见写信目的动词——投诉信complain about sth/doing sth第二段：1.概括介绍2.具体细节3.小结Ⅱ段-1：概括介绍1.It is原因状语that完句2.It is非原因状语+非完句Ⅱ段-2：具体细节1.To begin with,what I have to take into account/priority is名词12.解释短语，完句13.In addition,名词2cannot be ignored as well.4.解释短语，完句25.1名词3/完句3Ⅱ段-3：小结1.Such is/are my...2.What has been mentioned above is my...第三段1.表达情绪2.期盼回复Ⅲ段-1：表达情绪1.It is my sincere hope that you can do sth/sth can be done.2.I do hope that you can do sth/sth can be doneⅢ段-2：期盼回复1.I am looking forward to your reply.2.I would appreciate it if you can send me a reply at your earliest convenience.第二部分：素材版讲义真题回顾：四级真题：2016-121.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.You are to make a decision.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least120 words but no more than180words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay.Suppose you have two options upon graduation:one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture.You are to make a choice between the two.Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.You should write at least120 words but no more than180words.2016-61.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family member upon making a memorable achievement.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a letterto express your thanks to one of your school teachers uponenteringcollege.You should write at least120words but nomore than180words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were in difficulty.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.2015-121.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying"Listening is more important than talking."You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of paying attention to others'opinions.You should write at least120words,but no more than180words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying"Learning isa daily experience and a lifetime mission."You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying"Never go out there to see what happens,go out there to make things happen."You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere on lookers in life.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.2015-61.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid's understanding of going to school.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.“Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”2.For this part，you are allowed30minutes to write an essay based on the picture below．You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life．You should write at least l20words but no more than180words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on parents'role in their children's growth.You should write at least120words but no more than180words.六级真题：2016-121.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on innovation.Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation.You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on creation.Your essay should include the importance of creation and measures to be taken to encourage creation.You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on invention.Your essay should include the importance of invention and measures to be taken to encourage invention.You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.2016-61.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on E-learning,try to imagine what will happen when more and more people study on-line instead of going to school.You should write at least 150words but no more than200words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on living in the virtual world.Try to imagine what will happen when people spend more and more time in the virtual world instead of interacting in the real world.You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.3.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots.Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives.You are requried to write at least150words but no more than200words.2015-121.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short eaasy based on the picture below.You should focus on the difficulty in acquiring useful information in spite of advanced information technology. You are required to write at least150words but no more than200words.2.For this part,you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below.You should focus on the harm caused by misleading information online.You are required to write at least150 words but no more than200words.3.For this part，you are allowed30minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below。

大学英语四六级作文高分讲义四、六级改革后，作文出题方式基本沿袭以往稳健、成熟的出题风格。

以下给大家讲述一下作文应试的战略性理论以及得分技巧即战术操作。

博弈写作考试就好像一次“博弈”。

在写作考试中，考生是真正拥有最多信息的人，考官仅仅只能被动地接受你所给的信息。

所以，作文中遣词造句时请切记两点：一、“不会说的”处理；二、经典句的应用得分技巧分析四、六级作文在准备和对策上基本一致，因为两者评分标准基本一致(除了字数上的差距：四级120词、六级150词)。

英语考试的作文大多可分为：1、正反论证；2、原因现象描述类；3、图表；4、名言谚语。

所谓的书信作文，无非就是在这四类的基础上，套用信件的格式而已。

作文得分技巧总结：1、卷面整洁，书写清楚2、构思简单，少犯错误3、中心突出，层次分明4、固定经典，名言注目5、重在变化，宁简勿滥下面就对以上5点在应试作文中的应用展开具体说明：第一、卷面整洁，书写清楚。

由于写作属于主观题型，故考官将依据主观印象进行评判。

卷面的好坏将在第一时间冲击考官对你作文的印象。

所以，建议各位考生先想清楚后动笔，减少涂改几率，让考官能清楚无误地看清你答卷的内容。

另外，新的四、六级考试中会有部分考区的试卷被扫描至电脑，这些考区的考官将会在电脑前批阅作文，因此考生们最好使用黑色水笔做答，以保证扫描效果。

写作的格式有两种：齐头式(full block form)和缩进式(indented form)。

采用齐头式，要求所有段落的首行都在左边顶格，段落中间空行。

缩进式要求每段首行缩进4~5个字母。

第二、构思简单，少犯错误。

请大家一定记住，作文只在考核他们的语言表达能力。

避免犯错误。

（思维。

标点，时态一致，单复数，结构。

6分原则。

写完后的检查）第三、中心突出，层次分明。

从近几年的四级考试作文看来，尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用“中心句＋1、2、3”模式。

即每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的提纲，后面的1、2、3是衔接词，每个1、2、3后接分支观点。

四级作文类型一：正反观点1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会3. 我的看法范文一As regards the Spring Festival Gala there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. People who believe its necessity argue that the Spring Festival Gala performed by CCTV on New Year’s Eve has already been considered as an indispensable custom by many Chinese people.By contrast, others hold that the 4–hour show is gradually losing its appeal and should be canceled. For one thing, many old looks performing on stage almost every New Year’s Eve has given rise to the audience’s aesthetic fatigue. For another thing, various mass media come out like bamboo shoots after spring rain, making it increasingly difficult to cater to all tastes.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer the program to stay. Served as an occasion for family to get together, the Spring Festival Gala is a tradition and treasure of the Chinese people.范文二A great many people enjoy watching CCTV Spring Festival Gala on the lunar Chinese New Year’s Eve. First and foremost,cross talks and other comic performances bring the audience a lot of laughter. In addition, the Chinese all over the world can share the same happiness and excitement brought by the TV program.On the contrary, others assume that the Gala should be cancelled. To begin with, a great proportion of the programs are not attractive enough. Furthermore, to focus on this hour-long program disturbs family members’ communication and prohibits them from more meaningful activities.Generally speaking, I prefer the program to stay. On the one hand,the program organizers should try harder to figure out some more interesting and originalprograms. On the other hand,the Gala serves not only as entertainment but as an occasion for the families to gather, chat and laugh.Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?1. 很多人认为有必要举行口语考试，理由是...2.也有人持不同的意见，...3.我的看法和打算Recently, we may hear quite different opinions on the necessity of holding a test of spoken English. Some contend that spoken English test helps to evaluate students‟spoken English ability. What’s more, it will definitely stimulate students to lay more emphasis on listening and speaking, which are surely needed in their future career.By contrast, others hold that spoken English test is of no necessity. According to recent survey conducted by China Daily, a sight proportion of college graduate as low as 8.37 percent actually use spoken English in their daily work. In addition, spoken English test may not faithfully reflect the level and therefore cast doubt on college students.As far as I am concerned, I am most happy to attend such a test of spoken English I am most happy to attend such a test of spoken English. I plan to seize every chance to improve my spoken English capability so as to achieve outstanding performance in the coming test.四级作文类型二：现象/观点阐述型1. 娱乐活动多种多样，2. 娱乐可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性，3. 作为大学生，我的看法。

启航 密押内部讲义Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “In order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different.”You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain you can be different and irreplaceable.I assume that you are familiar with the remark, “In order to be irreplaceable, one must always be different.” The quote apparently reveals the jungle law of our society: it gains the competitive edge to be different.If you are different from others, you are hard to be replaced, because others don’t have special qualities as you do. However, if you don’t stand out, the situation is wholly different. China, for example, was known for its cheap labor, which made the products “Made in China”popular in the world. But now, China is being replaced by countries like Vietnam for their cheaper labor. After all, the Chinese model has nothing special and is easy to copy. On the contrary, the American design, for their distinction and originality, has nearly met no rivals yet.As for me, the most important thing to be different and irreplaceable is to dare to be myself. First, I will do what I like to do and what I’m good at. What’s more, I will keep learning skills to keep improving myself. And I will speak out and dare to present the opposite views.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Importance of Good Mental Health.Mental health has aroused great concern in the modern society. The above pictures give us some advice about how to be in good mental health. The left picture shows you should not be always upset and should say to yourself every day, “I’m really good.” The right one tells that you cannot decide what the weather is like, but you can decide what mood you are in.Why do people in amounting number fail to keep a good mental health nowadays? For one thing, teachers, parents as well as students themselves have attached too much significance to academic performance while overlooked the importance of mental health. For another, pressures from all sides, including peers, parents and society, have also caused severe mental health problems.To become a real healthy modern man, we should remember some important points. Firstly, we should be open with people and learn to adjust our mental state by regularly attending various activities, communicating with our friends and parents and so on. Secondly, we should not be preoccupied with working schedules and learn to lessen our pressure by reading books and listening music. It is in this way that we can make progress continuously and enjoy a brilliant future.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On College Students’Craze for Famous Brands.A scene can be always seen in our daily life: a college student wearing fancy clothes shows off her new expensive watch, while her classmate in plain clothes feels very awkward and sad. I assume it is necessary to touch on the bad effects of college student’s craze for famous brands.The craze has negative influences. First, because of vanity and superficiality, some students think that only by using products of famous brands can they show their capability and social status. Hence, they even spend all their pocket money on products of famous brands, regardless of the financial pressure. Second, those who can’t afford famous brands will feel that they are looked down upon by others because of peer pressure.From my point of view, college students should be mature enough to make their own decisions when it comes to the purchase of expensive products of famous brands. What’s more, we should always bear in mind that it is not the famous brand that makes us outstanding, but the knowledge and experience that we gain in our life.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Online Shopping.1.2.3.Online shopping has been gaining in popularity in recent years in China, particularly among young people. As is reported in a recent survey, an increasing number of people choose to do shopping online instead of going to the department stores or shopping malls.As to online shopping, there is no consensus among the public. Some people hold that online shopping is a real blessing, because you can buy products at much lower prices almost anytime anywhere as long as you have access to the Internet. Others contend that online shopping is not a blessing, but perhaps a curse. For one thing, online shopping still has some obvious shortcomings, such as uncontrollable delivery time. For another, chances are that the buyers might be cheated by dishonest online shoppers.I am convinced that the advantages of online shopping far outweigh its disadvantages. Admittedly, online shopping has its shortcomings, but measures can be taken to change them for the better. So, for my part, online shopping is more a blessing than a curse.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the statistics provided in the chart below. Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it.The survey is conducted to analyze the changing percentage of people who get news form the newspaper or the Internet in three years, from 2012 to 2014. As clearly shown in the chart, the percentage of people who get news from the newspaper declined rapidly year by year, from 55% in 2012 to nearly 40% in 2013, and it is only 25% in 2014. While conversely, an increasing percentage of people read news on the Internet, from 45% in 2012 to nearly 75% in 2014.Three reasons, in my opinion, can account for these changes. In the first instance, nowadays, with the development of information technology, people in mounting numbers rely on the Internet to do business and to fulfill their daily need. Because of its convenience and efficiency, people are more willing to gain useful information from this platform. Secondly, the Internet updates the news very quickly so that people can grasp the latest news in time. While, conversely we may just find our some outdated ones in the newspaper. Furthermore, the Internet contains detailed in formation about different aspects. Besides texts and photos, the Internet can use video to present the news.To sum up, with the continuous development of the Internet, people who read new on the Internet will keep on growing in the long future.Directions:You are going to celebrate your 22rd birthday with a big party. Write a letter to invite your friend Jack to the party. In the letter, please specify the time and the location, explain the activities, and express your wish for his attendance.Dear Jack,I wonder if there is the possibility for you to come to my 22rd birthday party at my house on this Saturday night.It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you. Since you are a fan of rock music, I am glad to tell you that I have invited our campus band, the “Breaktime”, to perform. There are also arrangements for dancing and cake-cutting, which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy. The dinner starts at 6 pm so that we can have a nice and long evening.I would like you to attend, so please let me know your decision.Yours,Li MingGiven is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: …. the person expresses his ideas about “…..”; to our surprise, another person answers: “……..”Obviously, this picture can be naturally associated with …….1I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb, who once said, “…” It is obvious that simple as the remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of ( ) Definitely, it values greatly not merely in our study but in our daily work and life as well.2In this constantly changing modern society, nearly every person has a clear notion about the significance of …., with which we can make a great difference to the world. As a proverb goes, “….” Obviously, the saying delivers the message that if people want to…., they should …./As the society and economy rapidly advance, various phenomena have been presented in our routine life, among which deserves most of our attention. Turning around, we can find too numerous examples to list.1If youngsters intend to achieve success, it is advisable for them to begin with ….. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of teenagers to ….. in life. A case in point is the boy in the picture. However, it is … that enable youngsters to build up adequate knowledge, ability and experience. As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the significance of …. for something important.As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by …... Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate this awareness. Sparing no efforts to do so, we can witness a hopeful and promising future of our life, work and study.2Why does play an indispensable role in our life? It enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. . How could we achieve the rapid progress in our study if we fail to ….( ) ? Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of , however, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: Liu Xiang, the former world NO. 1 man runner, is a weak boy, who doesn’t seem to be cut out for sports but owes his success to .From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of Accordingly as a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for our youngsters to ……. Do bear in mind: ……..3There are several reasons accountable for this standpoint. Firstly, people consider …as important because it can help achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. Only by … can we truly develop our understanding of the essence of our world. Secondly, the society has become increasingly intricate and we can seldom genuinely keep up with its pace unless we … and think about it over and over again. Additionally, with … people can adjust themselves to the changes, therefore possibly more new thoughts can be generated during this process and then applied to make our future life more exciting.To sum up, … is essential for people not merely in our study but in our daily work and life as well. It is … that can help us pave a new way for individual fulfillment.4As we all know, we are bound to encounter kinds of challenges and hardships in this modern society, abundant opportunities as well as competition. The difference between winners and losers mainly lies in the spirit of X. Put it another way, X is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for individuals or for a nation. People in all walks of life take substantial notes of this character. Take Edison for an example. Without X, he would have given up after trying over 1000 times in finding a suitable material for the filament of the light bulb. In other words, were there no spirit of X, we would never taste the real happiness of the successful life.In my view, whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of X are more likely to have a high happiness index and more chances to succeed, which can hardly be。

日志返回日志列表YY四六级写作课程讲义2014-5-7 11:21阅读(1.00万)YY四六级写作课程讲义出题内容四六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。

具体说来可以分为两个方面．．．．：（1）关于大学和大学生的话题，例如：My View on University RankingDue Attention Should Be Given to the Study of ChineseCollege Students’ Mental Health（2）常见的社会问题，例如Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?On the Importance of a NameWill E-books Replace Traditional Books?根据这两类既往考题的特点，我们可以设想出更多的四六级写作练习题或模拟题，例如：Should College Students Be Allowed to Live off Campus?More Students Attend Graduate Admission ExamsFood SafetyKeeping PetsIgnore China’s Traditional Cultures评分标准：2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分——切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 wordsand base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below:1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。

大学英语四六级作文讲义篇章段落部分一，引言段四六级作文考试虽然对作文的要求不高。

但 “麻雀虽小，五脏俱全”,如果能有一个自然得体，因人注目的开头肯定会使文章增色不少。

现将主要的开篇方法列举如下：1． 议论文开篇写法第一小类（论辩类）要求列举对立双方对某个问题的不同看法并陈述各自理由，如:2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是。

2．也有人持不同意见3．我的看法和打算这类文章常用开篇的方法有开门见山法和演绎法1. ⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧ with Faced to comes it Whenabout asked When ..., most/many people believe that ..., but other people ⎩⎨⎧y.differentl it consider ... as ... regard 句型1是开门见山法的典型句型，第一段直接说明两类人对于同一问题持不同看法。

2. When it comes to ..., people's opinions differ. Some hold the opinion that ..., while others claim that ... 句型2 是演绎法的典型句型，people ’s opinions differ.是后面句子的综述。

3. There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the ⎪⎭⎪⎬⎫⎪⎩⎪⎨⎧idea view role of .... Some people claim that ..., while othersbelieve that ....第二小类（利弊类）要求作者对某个事物或现象的两面性进行列举和比较。

1996.1 Two-day Weekend1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。

启航大学公共英语四六级强化讲义目录第一章写作一、大纲解读与考题分析二、写作高分技巧三、练习题第二章快速阅读一、大纲解读与考题分析二、快速阅读高分技巧三、练习题第三章听力理解一、大纲解读二、考题分析与高分技巧三、练习题第四章阅读理解一、大纲解读二、考题分析与高分技巧三、练习题第五章完形填空一、大纲解读与考题分析二、完形填空高分技巧三、练习题第六章翻译一、大纲解读与考题分析二、翻译高分技巧三、练习题第七章四级高频词汇第八章四级听力对话必背词汇及短语第一章写作一、大纲解读与话题分析（一）题型介绍写作（Writing）部分测试学生用英语进行书面表达的能力，所占分值比例为15%，考试时间30分钟。

写作选用考生所熟悉的题材。

考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。

写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。

（二）考核的语言技能及要求A. 思想表达1. 表达中心思想2. 表达重要或特定信息3. 表达观点、态度等B. 篇章组织4. 围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5. 连贯地组句成段，组段成篇C. 语言运用6. 运用恰当的词汇7. 运用正确的语法8. 运用合适的句子结构9. 使用正确的标点符号10. 运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）D. 写作格式11. 运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。

能掌握基本的写作技能。

”（三）写作话题分析1.校园生活类关于校园生活类的题材共有17篇，分别在：2010年6月、2009年12月、2008年6月、2007年12月、2006年6月17日（旧题型）、2006年6月24日（新题型）、2005年6月、2004年12月、2004年6月、2003年12月、2002年6月、2002年1月、2001年6月、2000年6月、2000年1月、1999年6月。

大学英语四六级考试写作讲座（一）、（二）、（三）1. 四六级考试写作简介：基本要求：新颁布的《大学英语教学大纲》中对于大学英语四六级写作的要求是：考试时间为30分钟，分值均为总分的15％；四级考试要求在规定时间内写出120~150词（不包括所给出的句子）的短文，文章切题，文理通顺，意思连贯，无重大语法错误。

大学英语六级写作的要求只在字数上比四级略有增加，即要求150～180词，其他方面与四级要求相同。

大学英语四六级作文题采用总体评分的方法，阅卷人员就文章总体印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

总的说来是就其内容及语言运用能力两个方面对文章进行综合评判，内容方面要考虑作文是否切题，是否根据不同的提示充分展开，能否借助英语清楚、确切而完整的表达思想；语言方面要考虑词汇、句法及修辞等方面应用英语的能力，以及用词造句是否准确而又符合英语表达习惯，是否有由语言错误造成的理解上的障碍。

同时，大纲明确规定“应避免趋中倾向，该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括零分。

一名阅卷人员的全部作文试卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

”评分标准：满分为15分，共分五个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。

若认为某篇文章接近某分数段，则以此分数段为基准，可根据优劣加减一分，不得加减半分。

注意，若规定三段的作文只写一段者给0～4分，只写两段者给0～9分。

具体如下：0分－白卷；作文与题目毫不相干；只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。

2分－条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，而且多为严重错误。

5分－基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分－基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分－切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，但有少量语言错误。

14分－切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。

基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

此外，到目前为止还未曾有因字数过多而扣分的例子，因为四六级写作时间有限，考生不能写太长的作文。

2017 年春季四六级作文预测讲义第一讲四六级写作形式与核心句法一、四六级写作的形式：（字数，段落，卷面）二、四六级写作核心语法：1.同位语从句（第一二段）2.as，which 非限定性定语从句（第一段）3.虚拟语气（第三段）4.倒装句（第三段）5.独立主格结构（第一二三）二、四六级写作最核心表达：（词汇量不等于写作词汇）1.连接词（一二三，但是，所以，因为）2.第一段核心词汇：生动地，图画，图表，反映，重要性，危害，必要性，发人深思的，关注，忽略，越来越多。

3.第二段核心词汇：现象背后的原因，不可见的，不可以摸的，随着科技的发展，随着竞争的加剧，信息技术，竞争性的价格，扮演重要角色，解释现象的原因，我认为，带来影响，积极的，负面的。

4.第三段核心词汇：紧急措施，规章制度，解决问题，增强意识，有关部门。

第二讲各题型第一段设置一、图画作文第一段：As is vividly described by the picture, sb is doing sth, doing sth, with sb doing sth. This picture reflects a common problem that more and more people are paying attention to the importance of sth/doing sth/being+adj. （如何改进词句？）二、图表作文第一段：As is clearly shown by the chart, there are many figures showing the changes in the number of sth/people doing sth: the number of A increased by 30%, the number of B decreased by 60%, with the number of C stay at the same level. These figures reflects a common phenomenon that+完整句子。