作文得分技巧五点总结：
第一、卷面整洁，书写清楚。由于写作属于主观题型，故考官将依据主观印象进行评判。卷面的好坏将在第一时间冲击考官对你作文的印象。所以，建议各位考生先想清楚后动笔，减少涂改几率，让考官能清楚无误地看清你答卷的内容。另外，新的四、六级考试中会有部分考区的试卷被扫描至电脑，这些考区的考官将会在电脑前批阅作文，因此考生们最好使用黑色水笔做答，以保证扫描效果。写作的格式有两种：齐头式(full block form)和缩进式(indented form)。采用齐头式，要求所有段落的首行都在左边顶格，段落中间空行。缩进式要求每段首行缩进4~5个字母。
第二、构思简单，少犯错误。请大家一定记住，作文只在考核他们的语言表达能力。避免犯错误。（思维。标点，时态一致，单复数，结构。6分
原则。写完后的检查）
第三、中心突出，层次分明。从近几年的四级考试作文看来，尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用“中心句＋1、2、3”模式。即每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的提纲，后面的1、2、3是衔接词，每个1、2、3后接分支观点。这种表达，中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的麻烦。衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，所以不妨尽可能多的使用。比如，“起”的过渡词：nowadays, at present, first of all, firstly；“承”的过渡词：second, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words；“转”的过渡
词：however, on one hand----- on the other hand, but, instead, conversely；“合”的过渡词：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word,in conclusion。
第四、固定经典，名言注目。经典句和名言往往都比较容易引人注目，如果能在文中使用，也比较容易让改卷人为之一振。为了获得经典的使用效果，建议考生们在平时的写作练习中注意积累，并且每个话题背下几句。质量良好的句子一般应该用在文章的开头结尾，或每段的开头，这样才能让别人清楚明白地看到。比如，用于文章开头的句子：
1、 When it comes to …, people’s opinions differ.
2、 There is a public discussion today about ……
3、 There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view
of
用于文章结尾的句子
1、 it is high time that we took measures to …
2、 judging from all evidence offered, we may safely
come to the conclusion that
3、 all the evidence points to the fact that …
4、 It is essential that effective measures should be
taken to control this situation.
用于阐释原因的句子：
1、Some reasons are responsible for this.
2、 There are lots of reasons for the dramatic
growth/decrease. First, … Second, … Finally, …
3、 The phenomenon/change in … mainly results from the
fact that …
4、 One may regard the phenomenon as a sign of …
第五、重在变化，宁简勿滥。作文考试评卷中，大多采用加分原则。“难词长句”不是加分的必然。关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。变化分为，词的变化和句的变化。在用词上，同一文章中相同意义的词要争取不断地用近意词替换，以显文章用词灵活。（换词和短语）在用句上，不一定要用大的从句，主要避免相邻句子句式太多的一致。（变句
模式）
写作实战经验总结
一个中心，两个基本点，七项基本原则：
中心指文章的主体，两个基本点指开头和结尾，七大基本原则主要指写作方法。下面依次来分析。
两个基本点
1．开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：
A proverb says, “ You are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2．开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造：
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式：
1．结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：
Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2．结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写
出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作的“七项基本原则”：
一、长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly （不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
六、多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们
认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。
举例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、挑战极限原则
既然shi挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
一个中心：主要是把握住主题，论证时要紧扣主题。一般情况下是通过主题
句来体现。
文章主体段落三大杀手锏：
一、举实例
思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they find him or her.
更多句型：
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语：
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
怎样写文章的开头？
四级写作技巧 四级写作共一题，所占分数比例为15%，考试时间30分钟。写作选用考生所熟悉的题材，考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、一句话、图画或图表等，写出一篇120~180词的短文。写作要求表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。 4大作文类型及高分模板 1. 现象阐释型 这类作文多为提纲式作文或图表式作文。这类命题要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释，分析产生该现象的原因并加以评论。 写作模式： 第一段描述现象； 第二段解释这种现象产生或存在的原因； 第三段提出解决问题的建议或总结观点。
高分模板： ①Nowadays/Recently, ______. ②As a result/Thus, ______. ③There are various reasons accounting/responsible for ______. ④For one thing, ______. ⑤For another, ______. ⑥In addition, ______. ⑦As far as I am concerned, ______. ⑧On the one hand, ______. ⑨On the other hand, ______. ⑩In a word, ______.
①开门见山，描述现象。 ②说明该现象造成的结果或影响。 ③承上启下，表明产生上述现象的原因是多方面的。 ④⑤⑥具体分析产生上述现象的各种原因。 ⑦表明自己的态度和看法。 ⑧⑨提出解决问题的方法。 ⑩得出结论，总结全文。 2. 对比选择型 这类作文多为提纲式作文，议论文体裁。通常首先论述相反的两种观点，或分析某一社会现象的优缺点，然后提出自己的看法。 写作模式： 第一段提出要讨论的主题，说明人们对此看法不一；
作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字
大学英语四级作文多少字 【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】 大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分 标准 《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。 大学英语四级作文采用总体评 分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 具体评分标准如下： 2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首 先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。 孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首 先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。 【篇二：大学英语四级作文】 大学英语四级作文 1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)
大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧
大学英语四级考试作文高分技巧 学会遣词造句 1）词汇的等级 important – significant –vital –crucial 2) 词汇的准确性 big-huge-enormous-gigantic-vast 3) 适当的运用词组 be of importance – play an important/negligible(微不足道的) role in 写作高分, 高频词汇替换 ?Character, folk, individuals – people ?Joyful/pleasant/satisfied/delighted/glad/thrilled/pleasurable/li ght-hearted/in a good mood/ elated----happy Well- being/joy/delight/euphoria/pleasure/satistaction/elatedness----happiness ?Positive, favorable, perfect – good ?Well of/affluent----rich ?Less impressive – bad ?A host of, an ocean of, a multitude of – many ?Affair, business, matter – things ?Shared – common
?For my part, from my own perspective – in my opinion ?Increasing, growing – more and more ?Beneficial, rewarding – helpful ?Exceedingly, extremely – very ?Hardly inevitable – avoidable ?Sth appeals sb – sb be interested in ?Capture one’s attention – attract ?Desire – want ?Bear in mind that – remember ?Virtually, practically – nearly, almost ?Interaction – communication ?To name only a few –for example ?There are several reasons behind sth – there are several reasons for sth 命题作文加分句型： ?1. the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) ?或 the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/ heard/ had/ read, etc) ?Mr. Zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 ?2. Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
Brainstormig 1.认真看题，确认所给题目为提纲式（with given outline) 还是开放式(without outline). 2. 根据确定的题目类型，从大脑的资料库中选出适合的模板。 3.对于开放型的题目，要认真的理解（interpretation / comprehension), 抓住讨论的 核心，不要仅停留在现象表面。 开放型的题目的文章设计： 1.阐释从现象挖掘到的问题核心（或通过现象向我们传达的道理） ↓古今论证 2.举例论证：↗中外论证 ↘正反论证※ 3.归纳总结（或对自身的启迪） 提纲式作文题目的文章设计： 1. 指出现象或话题（表述题目）,+ 举例说明（或产生的意义，影响） ↓ 2. 分析原因：主题句+“ 你”“我”“它” + 总结 ↓ 3. 我的观点+ 建议或另一个原因 对立观点式 1．A．点明文章主题 2．B．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？ 3．C．我的看法。 Nobody could deny the fact /phenomenon that … Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X outweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned positive effects it might bring about, X also may 一个好处。 社会问题式 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that ________(问题的对象)have
名师指导：英语四级写作高分六大秘诀(4) 六、灵活运用句式变化的规则 前面也提过，四级作文长度要求不少于120个词，按考生作文句子的平均长度11个词估算，一般需要10—12 个句子。在四级作文评分标准里，对于句子长度虽然没有具体描述和量化给分，但是阅卷老师一般都会给文章里使用正确的长句子加上印象分，也会给错落有致的句式变化以奖励分数，如果考生能够在作文中恰当地使用一定难度的复杂句子，则更能起到锦上添花的作用。在写作训练中，考生其实可以欣赏范文，摘录名句，改装结构，模仿使用，直到熟练运用。笔者认为只要努力，下面的策略可以帮助立志争取作文高分的学生可以通过下面的几个措施来提高作文水平。 1、欣赏范文，但不要囫囵吞枣式地整篇背诵。准备一个写作专用的笔记本，从范文欣赏中摘抄自己喜欢的、老师讲评的、值得推荐的句式结构。比如：I love you not because who you are, but because who I am when I am with you.(我爱你，并不是因为你是谁，而是因为我跟你在一起时的感觉。) Few People today, if any at all, would risk their lives swimming across the river dominated by flesh-eating crocodiles.(今天已经很少有人，如果还有的话，愿意冒生命危险游过那条鳄鱼出没的河流。), If you fail to plan, you plan to fail.(如果你没能做计划，你就是计划着去失败。) 2、模仿名句，但不要生搬硬套。准备足够的草稿纸，把自己摘抄来的名句，(如有不懂，应当向明白人求教)拆卸八块，然后重新组合，如是反复数次，直到熟练，甚至于可以自如组装，灵活运用。比如：上面的句子学生就可以在熟练掌握的基础上分别演绎出：I suggest that you choose English as your major not because it is easier to learn, but because it is promising when you take better prospect of employment into account.(我建议你选择英语专业，并不是因为她学起来更容易，而是因为她更有前景，如果你考虑到更好的就业机会。)；Most of the students, if not all, are likely to be absorbed in PC games such as counterstrike, which is more frequently known as CS(大多数学生，如果不是所有的学生，很可能被诸如反击这样的电脑游戏所吸引，这种游戏经常被更多的人叫做CS。). 3、巧用心思，套用经典句型。鼓起勇气，说出自己想说的话，如果是母语，可能还好办，换成英语，大家最怕的是出错，出错扣分当然不好。但是利用经典句型组装一些长句子、靓句子和复杂句子对作文高分非常有帮助。比如作文开头常用句型：It is undoubted that …; there is no doubt that…; undoubtedly, there is…; It is beyond doubt that …. 4、写作是学生英语运用水平的具体体现，写作的功夫又是通过阅读、欣赏、模仿等具体手段训练出来的。写作过程中间很多实用技巧，需要读者舍得花时间、花精力、花心思去挖掘、去发现，只要你定期阅读我们的辅导专栏，相信你一定会收获N多的惊喜。 【
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion
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minutes)Section A Composition (35 minutes) (一)写作题的性质 写作是人们表达思想的一种重要手段，我们称之为comprehensive test的综合测试，体现的是学生综合运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核考生对词汇的掌握、对语法的应用，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：听、说、读、写。 (二) 考试大纲对英语写作的要求和规定 测试目的：按照基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，检查学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能力。 测试要求： 作文。要求根据所给的题目和
列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲) 写一篇200词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟。 (三)英语四级写作的评分标准 (1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。 (2)行文流畅。 (3)组织严密，逻辑性强。 (4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。 (5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。 (6)语法正确。 (7)拼写及标点正确，书写整
洁。 很多学习者翻开作文书籍，就如同想打开一本武功秘籍，只希望看到5个字母trick(技巧) 。技巧固然十分重要，但在应试准备中，常常需要70%的基础和30%的技巧。这里要提醒大家的是，不可高估技巧的作用，犹如在武打片中，要想得到某某宝典和剑法，是需要付出惨痛的代价的。 Writing techniquesWriting techniques Master A: 从文章的形式结构看，一篇文章通常可分为引言（introduction），正文（body）和结束语（conclusion）。引言和结束语，简单扼要，正文具体而明晰，把要论的论清楚。
大学四级英语写作高分攻略 大学四级英语写作高分攻略 四级作文从结构上看，一般由三部分组成：引言部分、展开部分、结尾部分，而且每段往往只有一个主题，段中各支持句围绕主题展开，论证并服务于主题句。整篇文章也是层层推进，环环相扣。由此可见，考试中只要遵循了这一原则，获得高分并不困难，但事实并非如此。探究其因，主要有两个方面：一是错误太多，这里提到的错误既包括语法错误(例如：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等)，也包括拼写、标点错误;二是考生使用的词汇和句型过于单一，整篇文章没有亮点。 针对上述问题，为了在考试中取得高分，我们应注意以下几个方面： 表达方式多样化(包括句子结构、类型以及使用的词汇) 1. 结构词的多样化。 (1) 叙述正反方各自观点或是讲述对某一个问题的看法时，可用first、second、third等来表示，这样可以使文章结构清晰，给人一目了然的感觉。 (2) 举例说明时可用for example、for instance、to illustrate 表示。 (3) 进一步阐述观点或说明问题时可用furthermore、in addition、moreover 表示。 (4) 突出某一点的重要性时，可用surely、truly、undoubtedly、clearly、indeed、as a matter of fact表达。 (5) 归纳总结时，可以使用therefore、in summary、consequently、in conclusion、in short引出结论。 (6) 分析因果时可用because、due to、so that、as a result来表示主从句之间的逻辑关系。 (7) 表示转折时，可以使用but、however、nevertheless、otherwise等，而on the one hand、on the other hand、on one side of the coin、on the other side of the coin则可用来连接两个相反的事实或观点。 2. 文章词汇的多样化。 同一词语在一句话、一个段落甚至整篇文章中最好不要重复出现，尽可能用同义词、近义词替换。例如：think可以用reckon、assume、argue、believe、suppose等词来替换。
2020年大学英语四级写作技巧：平行结构Parallel Structure 平行结构 相似的思想应用相似的形式表达出来。句子的成份相近，则也应以相似的形式出现。请注意以下标有"NO"的句子是不规范的。 No： The school bus skidded, turned sideways, then comes to a stop. Yes： The school bus skidded, turned sideways, and came to a stop. (并列时态) No：I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and a bore. Yes：I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and boring. (形容词平行结构) No： In the wreck the circus lost a panda and elephant. Yes： In the wreck the circus lost a panda and an elephant. (不定冠词的平行结构) No： I debated whether I should give the beggar money or to offer him food. Yes： I debated whether to give the beggar money or to offer him food.
(不定式的平行结构) No： They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes days. Yes： They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes for days. (介词平行结构) No：Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and dust filled the air. Yes：Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and filled the air with dust. (并列谓语) No： The mechanic explained the problem, method, and the tools that he was going to use. Yes： The mechanic explained the problem, method, and tools that he was going to use. (并列带有定冠词"the"的名词) No： He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and his employees loved him. Yes： He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and loved by his employees. (并列被动语态) No： As a young man he had been to Shanghai, fighting in the Anti-Japanese War, and following the Nationalist Party to Chongking.
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of
四级考试作文高分技巧 大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。 一审题 我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末审题要审什么呢？ 1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文） 审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢？它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如： Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a compositi on on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at l east 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below : 做合格大学生的必要性 做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈） 我计划这样做 很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明
大学英语四级作文范文（5篇） 大学英语四级作文范文篇一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a
大学英语四级写作技巧，希望帮助您提升英语写作技能 1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.娱乐活动多种多样 2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3.作为大学生，我的看法 Recreational Activities The twenty-first century has brought with it an 第一段引入现象并举例：现在娱乐活动多种多样。 第二段从正反两面说明娱乐生活的弊益。 第三段表明自己的观点态度：择优律己。unprecedented variety of recreational activities. They range from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones. Some people think those various recreational activities brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they can help people relax from hard work and study and broaden people’horizon. However, some people think that too many recreational activities may have a bad effect on people’s lives. Some people may not resist some temptations and indulge themselves in those activities, such as the online games. At last they are lured away from their studies, work and interpersonal relationships. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是 3.为改变这种状况，我认为 第一段：指出不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，举例说明。 第二段：从学生、电脑的使用和老师三个方面分析原因。 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Quite a few students now neglect spelling in English study. Take the simple word “trouble”for example. Only a few students can spell“trouble”without trouble—others may spell it as truble, touble or something else. For various reasons, spelling is now becoming a neglected art.First of all , many students don’tcare about spelling. Some say they’re going to have a secretary when they get a job, and he or she will correct their spelling. Second, most word processors