四级考试作文高分技巧
大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。
一审题
我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末审题要审什么呢？
1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文）
审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢？它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如：
Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a compositi on on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at l east 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below :
做合格大学生的必要性
做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）
我计划这样做
很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明
本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“...必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿地三段要求写“...这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。
2．根据不同体裁确定写作方法
我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式：
议论文；要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎末样（这是从正面论述）；不能做合格的大学生，会怎么样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结伦）。
说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面（德智体）来说明合格大学生的必要性。
描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与第二段相互应进行描述。
二确定主题句
通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：
It is very necessary to be a good university student . （议论体的主题句）There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student .（说明体的主题句）
What I will do in the future is the following .(描述体主题句)
如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：
Good Health
Importance of good health
Ways to keep fit
My own practice
这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：
It is very important to have good health .（将名词importance变成形容词importa nt）
There are four ways to keep fit for me .（用there be 句型）
My own practices are the following .（采用原词）
n 主题句又称主旨句或关键句，是一个段落中最重要的句子，是段落的“纲”。说明段落的中心思想和作者的写作目的，是段落发展的依据。
n 段落的每句话都应紧密地联系主题句所表达的中心内容。
n 写好主题句是文章成功的关键。
n (common practice of scoring in CET-4)
主题句的构成
n Topic sentence = a topic + a controlling idea about the topic
n 主题句=主题+中心思想
n 主题：段落所谈的话题，问题
n 中心思想：限定话题的范围，确定话题的发展方向。整个段落都以这个中心思想为依据，围绕它进行。中心思想用关键词(key words)来表达。
Examples: please identify the two parts
n Developing private cars in China has many positive aspects.
n Keeping pets is beneficial to people in several aspects.
n Smoking results in a series of negative effects.
n The following factors contribute to success.
n The reasons why bicycles are so popular in China lie as follows.
主题句位于段首
n 开门见山，点出主题。
n There are many ways through which we can improve our English. Above all, we should read as many English books, newspapers and magazines as possibl e. Next, we may listen to English programs on the radio or watch English pro grams on TV every day. Besides, it is necessary for us to seize every opportun ity to speak English both in and after class. Finally, it is equally important to f orm the habit of taking notes and keeping a diary in English.
主题句的写法：如何写好
n 主题句应尽量清晰明了，简练，用词准确，力求用一句话清楚地表达该段的中心。
n Environmental pollution is important.
n Environmental pollution is an important problem that deserves our special a ttention.
n The more I read, the more hungry I feel.
n The more I read, the more hungry I feel for knowledge.
主题句的写作技巧（1）
n 表示人的名词或代词主语的句子
n College students should take part in social practice and get to know the w orld.
n People take part in recreational activities because of several reasons.
n We benefit a lot from doing part time jobs.
n Young people today are badly influenced by TV.
主题句的写作技巧（2）
n 表示物的名词做主语的句子
n Good health is important to us.
n Information plays an indispensable role in modern life.
n Diligence is a key factor to success.
n Sports benefit people in many ways.
n Recreational activities fall into two major types.
主题句的写作技巧（3）
n 用动名词短语来表达主题，做主语。
nOwning a private car is very convenient.
nKeeping pets can lead to some problems.
nStudying abroad benefits students in many aspects.
主题句的写作技巧（4）
n 用“There +be + 名词”句型来写主题句。
n There are several reasons why we should develop the industry of private ca rs.
n There are innumerable advantages of keeping pets.
n There are diverse solutions to the housing problem in big cities.
n There are effective measures that we can adopt to deal with the issue of ris ing crime rate.
主题句的写作技巧（5）
n 用It is + Adj. +for sb. to do sth. 句型
n It is beneficial for college students to take part in various social activities.
n It is necessary for us to get to know about the society.
n It is desirable/advisable for young people to go abroad to study. Study the Topic Sentences
n Owning a car can be very costly.
n Traveling by air is more convenient than traveling by train.
n Computers play a variety of roles in our life.
n College students dream of going abroad to study mainly on account of the f ollowing three reasons.
n Reading plays an important role in language learning.
n In choosing a career, students should consider various factors.
三确保文章条理清楚
保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Go od health 来说，第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面（With good health ,we ca n...），反面（Without good health ,we ca n do nothing .We can’t do...）为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly) second(ly) third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短（每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,... after that , then, ... The next , ... The following , ... As last ... 。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。
四保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法
考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。
我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-1 50个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。
文章的结构
n 一个完整的段落包括三部分：主题句，推展句和结论句。
n 一篇完整的四级作文包括三部分：引言，正文和结论。又称：三段论。
n 因此，可以说，文章是段落的扩展，段落是文章的压缩。
文章的结构
十二句作文法
n 具体地说，四级作文实际是一个十二句话短文（十二句作文法）
n 引言段三句或四句话：开头句+主题句（中心思想句+承上启下的组织句）
n 正文段四或五句话：主题句+三个扩（推）展句
n 结论段四句或三句话：主题句+扩（推）展句+结论句
Example
n Losing Weight
n 1）减肥已成为时尚。
n 2）人们热衷于减肥的原因。
n 3）减肥的有效方法。
n 1）2 sentences
n 2）4 sentences
n 3）4 sentences
Losing Weight
n 1)Nowadays, many people are very much worried about being overweight.
2)And people, the young and women in particular, are trying various ways to lose weight.
n 3)There are many reasons why more and more people are concerned abo ut losing weight. 4)To begin with, they are all aware of the danger of being o verweight, which may lead to many diseases such as hyper-tension, diabetes and heart attacks. 5)Secondly, more people have become concerned about the ir shape and they want to appear energetic and young. 6)What’s more, losing weight can help them feel mentally healthier and build up their self-esteem.
n 7)There are different means through which people can achieve their goal of losing weight. 8)First of all, some of the people who want to remove their fat eat less or eat nothing. 9)Besides, they take weight-reducing drugs. 10)B ut the most effective and healthy way to lose weight is to take proper exercis es.
文章开头写作的两点原则
n 要紧扣文章标题，即开头点题。
n 要能顺利地引出下文，和下文（文章中间部分——正文）的内容相联系，引发读者兴趣，使人想读下去。
引言段的常用写作方法
n 提问式
n 引用名言谚语法
n 话题式/现象法
1. 提问式
n 以提问开头，激发读者兴趣，可自问自答，自然而然地引出下文。
n What is essential for happiness? Our world is a big world, complex and ful l of many diverse people. So different people may have different opinions. In my opinion, happiness lies in the service that you give other people.
此种开头段的构成
n 这种开头段的构成方法如下：
n 问题+答案（过渡句+提供答案的进一步论述）+中心思想句
常用句型，常见写法
n What is …?Have you ever …?
n Have you ever taken a part-time job? What are the advantages of colle ge students’ doing part-time jobs? As to this questions, different students may hold totally different ideas.
Some students take the position that it is beneficial for a college student to do a temporary job. They have the following reasons…. On the contrary, th ere are still others who disapprove of students’ taking part-time jobs. They ha ve their own reasons against it.
2. 引用名言谚语法
n 引用名人名言或谚语，俗语等，这些语句常具有权威性或为大家所公认，引用在文章中有一定的说服力。
n “Of all treasures”, says an ancient saint, “knowledge is the most precious, for it can neither be stolen, given away, nor consumed,” From that, we can se e the great importance of education.
n Shakespeare said: “One who is unhappy can never get a beneficial result.” That is to say, happiness is very important in our life.
n Francis Bacon once said, “Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallo wed, and some few to be chewed and digested.” Perhaps this is the best advi ce on how to read.
此种开头段的构成
n 引用的谚语或名言+意义+主题（中心思想）
n There is an old English saying which goes “No pains, no gains.” It illustrat es the importance of hard work in the process of success. In other words, dili gence is a key factor to success.
话题式/现象法
n With the rapid development of society/modern life/science and technology /people’s living standard, an increasing number of people have become aware of the importance of …
n Recently, the issue of … has become increasingly controversial.
n Nowadays, a larg e number of students have become concerned about …分析下列开头段落的写法
n Should college students keep part-time jobs while they are in school? This is a very controversial topic and it brings about many heated discussions.
n What do you usually do in your spare time? What is your favorite hobby? L et me tell you something about my hobby. I like to collect stamps in my free time. Stamp collecting is my favorite hobby.
n “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” is a popular saying in Englis h. There is much truth in this old saying. It means that in order to keep us in good health, we must take sufficient recreation.
文章结尾的写法
文章的结尾
n 常言道：“编筐编篓，全在收口”。一篇优秀的文章其结构和气势应为：“虎头，牛身，豹尾。”
n 我们的考生四级考试时所写的文章往往由于时间紧张而“虎头，蛇尾”。
n 其实，文章结尾的好坏也在很大程度上影响文章的global impression.
文章结尾的作用
n 1. 归纳总结概括全文，得出结论。
n All in all, traveling on one’s own has both advantages and disadvantages.
n 2. 突出主要论点，重申强化主题（中心）。
n In a word, my life on campus is really colorful and meaningful.
n 3. 表达自己观点，阐述立场。
n As for me, I take the position that a test of spoken English is extremely n ecessary and it should be included in CET.
文章结尾的常用写作方法
n 重申主题句法
n 总结（结论）法
n 发表个人看法，总结全文
n 反问结尾法
n 引言结论法
n 提倡议号召（喊口号）法
重申主题句法
n In conclusion, nothing is more valuable than health. In good health, we ca n absorb knowledge more readily. In good health we can achieve more succes s and make more contribution to our country.
n 引言段When evaluating a job
n applicant, most companies would place much weight on one’s education al certificate. Of course, one’s education or one’s educational certificate does t ell something about the applicant. However, it is not the only means through which we can judge whether the applicant is qualified or not.
常用句型表达
n In conclusion
n To conclude
n In all
n All things considered
n To conclude, no success can be achieved without laboring. Success is simpl y the fruit of hard work.
n In all, our school life is really interesting and colorful.
总结（结论）法
n In short, the advantages of traveling outnumber the disadvantages. Theref ore, let’s go traveling when we have the time and enjoy the beautiful scenery and broaden our horizon.
常用句型
n To sum up, the a dvantages of …far outnumber/ outweigh the disadvantag es.
n All things considered, the benefits of … are more than the problems.
n Having taken all the factors into consideration, we can see that doing som ething. does more good than harm to somebody.
发表个人看法，总结全文
n In my opinion, the balance of these two kinds of activities might be more useful to those who live in retirement. In other words, physical activities are
necessary for good health but intellectual recreation provides the most pleasu re.
常用句型
n In my opinion
n Personally, I think /believe
n I take the position that
n I hold/take the attitude that
n As far as I am concerned
n Were it left to me to decide
引言结论法
n True friendship cannot be bought with money. The proverb “A friend in nee d is a friend indeed” is really true.
反问结尾法
n Don’t you think it is high time that we took effective actions to fight agai nst fake commodities in the market?
n Don’t you agree with my idea that a test of oral English should be include d in CET-4 and 6?
常用句型
n Don’t you think it is necessary for us to …?
n Don’t you think it is high/about time that we did sth.?
n Don’t you agree with my idea/opinion that …?
提倡议号召（喊口号）法
n Let’s join in our efforts to fight against the fake commodities and protect the interests of our people and our nation.
n Let’s spare no efforts to protect our environment from being further dama ged and save our planet.
常用句型
n Let’s join in the efforts to do …
n Let’s spare no efforts to do …
n Let’s take effective measures to do …
n Let’s take immediate actions to do …
n Let’s take practical steps to do …
Analyze the following paragr aphs
n In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think o f the failure and what we do after the failure. So long as we don’t give up, an d believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something. From failure, we will certainly make our marks in the end. So I am never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, “failure is the mother of success.”
n Pollution can be reduced. But it can only be reduced if people everywhere really address the situation and make a continuing and intensive effort to red uce the quantity of pollutant emissions into the air. Talking about it is not en ough. Positive action will have to be taken.
n Therefore, there is nothing wrong with the media. Comic books can be bad or good. It is a question how they are used.
四六级考试写作检查
四六级考试时间紧张，匆匆完稿之后，疏漏在所难免，因而有必要复查，修改，及时纠正偏差，堵塞漏洞，从而将作文质量再提高一步。检查主要针对四个重点部位：
1）是否切题
它又分三个层面：一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求；二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致；三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相-致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方；增添残缺的、语义表达不足的地方。由于时间所限，删的内容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌动“大手术”。
2）是否连贯
检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通顺，该用连接词的地方用了没有，以及所用的连接词是否合适。
3）是否有语法错误
主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。为避免不必要的语法错误，对把握性不大的词组、句型绝不要用。而应使用那些自己熟悉的词组、句型来表达相同或相近的意思。
4）是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误
在这些细枝末节上，谨慎细心地处理，无疑会进一步提高文章的整体质量。在检查、改错的过程中，切忌乱涂乱抹。保持卷面清洁，无疑会给阅卷者留下好印象。
另外，在上述几个写作关键步骤中，时间的分配大致应该为：审题、拟题纲10分钟，拟主题句、完成段落15分钟，检查5分钟。
总之，对于四六级考试作文，由于其题型比较固定，对应试者要求相对不高，因此，应试者有必要掌握一些写作技巧，多加练习，力争提高写作的质量和水平。
高分作文标志
1：是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使
用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
四级写作中如何选词
Compare the Following Sente nces
n We should use different ways to get to know the society.
n We ought to make use of various methods to get to know the society.
n We are supposed to take advantage of diverse means to get to know the society.
选词的基本原则
n 尽量用四级范围内的积极的,活跃的，常用的词或词组。
n 尽量用表达最贴切,最生动,最有力的词或短语。
n 尽量用最符合所写话题,所用文体的词或表达。
Summary
n 文章无论长短都是由词汇构成的。如果掌握的词汇量不够，写出的文章就会词不达意，严重影响文章的表达。所以，要尽可能学好词汇，掌握词，词组和常用表达，打好写作基础。
四级考生在措词方面存在的问题：
n 1 可供“调遣”的词汇量贫乏，用词大部分局限于中学词汇。
Eg. Good points= benefits, advantages, merits.
Problems, bad points= drawbacks, disadvantages, shortcomings, defects. n 2 表达相近意义时，常重复用一个词，用词单调。
Eg. Good= helpful, useful, beneficial, favorable, advantageous, does good to, b enefit.
策略
n 1 调动大学期间学过的更生动，更丰富的词汇表达意思。
Eg. Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, give rise/birth to
n 2 用具体，生动，有针对性的词语。
Eg. Use, make use of, make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) use of sth, take (full) advantage of
n 3 文中如需要多次表达同一词义时，以原词，同义词，近义词等避免重复使用同一词。
Eg. Adapt to, adjust, make…fit, get used to, be accustomed to
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾200 4年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approac hes were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competiti ve edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , man y, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, i mplement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s comp
etitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a comput er as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i in dulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjo y a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the wh ole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. C oincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring int o the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no ex aggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with …非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With …Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by li ttle, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broaden ed. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, o r delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadene d. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of h uman beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-fil ms emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of h uman beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有h owever作为插入语， function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a posi tive role in the development of people’ lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impact s. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite face
t.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of …使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disa dvantage )
Facet 替换 aspect
30个最经典的替换词
,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romanc e with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to gr aduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替
换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
, rewarding替换helpful,
,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
,extremely, intensely 替换very
necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest i
n / sb. be interested in
one’s attention替换attract one’s attention.
,demension,sphere代aspect
indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
“英语四级写作”技巧总结 开始作文不要天马行空，从规范做起，显把适合自己水平的作文结构摸索出来。——题记 一、提纲式作文 1．对立观点式 A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？ B．有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？ C．我的看法。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。 二、批驳观点式 A．一个错误观点。B．我不同意。 Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。 三、社会问题（现象）式 A．一个社会问题或者现象。 B．产生的原因 C．对社会和我们生活的影响 D．如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话） E．前景的预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况（或者是一个例子）。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated（表达）in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will …….. 四．图表式作文
作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字
大学英语四级作文多少字 【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】 大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分 标准 《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。 大学英语四级作文采用总体评 分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 具体评分标准如下： 2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首 先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。 孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首 先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。 【篇二：大学英语四级作文】 大学英语四级作文 1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/4510361187.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） 现象解释型作文模板： Recently, ＿＿＿＿What amazes us most is＿＿＿＿＿．It is true that ＿＿＿＿＿.There are many reasons explaining ＿＿＿＿＿＿．The main reason is＿＿＿＿＿，What is more, ＿＿＿＿＿，Thirdly, ＿＿＿＿＿．As a result, ＿＿＿＿＿． Considering all these, ＿＿＿＿＿．For one thing, ＿＿＿＿For another, ＿＿＿＿．In conclusion, ＿＿＿＿． As is shown above, the bar chart clearly demonstrates the relationship between the education level and earning in 2010. It is obvious that well-educated persons such as owning Doctoral degree and Master's degree have a high salary than those who have relatively low degree. Isolated as the figure seems to be, as a matter of fact, we can observe that the higher level of education you receive, the higher income you get. People’s opinions about investment in education differ from person to person. Some people say that knowledge could no longer change destiny. To them, it is not only a waste of money, but also a waste of time. Others deem that education is worthy of investment. As for me it is no doubt that education offers favorable working opportunity and handsome income, which enable us to buy what we want ,please what we love, and fulfill what we dream, and correspondingly we are able to build an ideal paradise where life can be enjoyed to the uttermost. In conclusion, we should realize significance of education, which plays a crucial role in personal growth of career. In addition, it is convinced that education is the prospect of a nation. 四级作文范文：Education Pays From the chart above, we can definitely get a conclusion that the more you learned, the higher your salary would be. The figures in the chart denied the claim that knowledge is useless. However quite a few people still hold the opinion that a higher education does no good to a better job since that there are many university students who can not get an ideal job.
1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
Brainstormig 1.认真看题，确认所给题目为提纲式（with given outline) 还是开放式(without outline). 2. 根据确定的题目类型，从大脑的资料库中选出适合的模板。 3.对于开放型的题目，要认真的理解（interpretation / comprehension), 抓住讨论的 核心，不要仅停留在现象表面。 开放型的题目的文章设计： 1.阐释从现象挖掘到的问题核心（或通过现象向我们传达的道理） ↓古今论证 2.举例论证：↗中外论证 ↘正反论证※ 3.归纳总结（或对自身的启迪） 提纲式作文题目的文章设计： 1. 指出现象或话题（表述题目）,+ 举例说明（或产生的意义，影响） ↓ 2. 分析原因：主题句+“ 你”“我”“它” + 总结 ↓ 3. 我的观点+ 建议或另一个原因 对立观点式 1．A．点明文章主题 2．B．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？有人认为X 是坏事，反对X，为什么？ 3．C．我的看法。 Nobody could deny the fact /phenomenon that … Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X outweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned positive effects it might bring about, X also may 一个好处。 社会问题式 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that ________(问题的对象)have
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion
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minutes)Section A Composition (35 minutes) (一)写作题的性质 写作是人们表达思想的一种重要手段，我们称之为comprehensive test的综合测试，体现的是学生综合运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核考生对词汇的掌握、对语法的应用，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：听、说、读、写。 (二) 考试大纲对英语写作的要求和规定 测试目的：按照基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，检查学生在基础阶段末期的英语写作能力。 测试要求： 作文。要求根据所给的题目和
列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲) 写一篇200词的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟。 (三)英语四级写作的评分标准 (1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。 (2)行文流畅。 (3)组织严密，逻辑性强。 (4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。 (5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。 (6)语法正确。 (7)拼写及标点正确，书写整
洁。 很多学习者翻开作文书籍，就如同想打开一本武功秘籍，只希望看到5个字母trick(技巧) 。技巧固然十分重要，但在应试准备中，常常需要70%的基础和30%的技巧。这里要提醒大家的是，不可高估技巧的作用，犹如在武打片中，要想得到某某宝典和剑法，是需要付出惨痛的代价的。 Writing techniquesWriting techniques Master A: 从文章的形式结构看，一篇文章通常可分为引言（introduction），正文（body）和结束语（conclusion）。引言和结束语，简单扼要，正文具体而明晰，把要论的论清楚。
英语四级作文万能模板及范文（多种版）Argumentation型 1） some, others, I 型 （1）模版一 There is no consensus among the people as to the view of ______ ___ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A的例子). On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. Acco rding to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B的例子). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convinc ing. （2）模版二 ___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The att itudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people te nd to ______________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点A的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点A的例子).
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of
四级作文难点分析及考生应对技巧难点一:主观判分，有所影响。 不可否认，考试是目前国内各种英语测试中规模很大、公信度较高、科学性和客观性较强的一种，能够较客观地考察出一个人的实际英语能力。但写作仍然是四级考试中主观性较大的部分，存在主观判卷的弊端。虽然考官依据四级作文评分标准进行阅卷，但由于前文所述的考官在判卷中的弱点、盲点，人为因素不可避免。 难点二:体裁多样，难度较大。 它既有书信作文，演讲稿，图表作文，也有议论文写作。字数要求也是国内英语测试中较多的，30分钟要求考生写一篇150字的短文。书信作文、议论文等尚能有章可循，然而图表作文却无从下手。这是因为国内各个层次的英语教学甚少涉及图表作文，并且要写好图表作文，不仅需要良好的英语语言能力，同时还应具备相应的分析、归纳能力。 难点三:老题新出，千变万化。 四级作文有完善的出题套路，往往通过换关键词的方式可以旧瓶装新酒，老树开新花。请看下面几道考题: 1995年1月四级作文真题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness) 2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil) 3.我的看法
2020年大学英语四级写作技巧：平行结构Parallel Structure 平行结构 相似的思想应用相似的形式表达出来。句子的成份相近，则也应以相似的形式出现。请注意以下标有"NO"的句子是不规范的。 No： The school bus skidded, turned sideways, then comes to a stop. Yes： The school bus skidded, turned sideways, and came to a stop. (并列时态) No：I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and a bore. Yes：I don’t know why I married someone who is miserly, sloppy and boring. (形容词平行结构) No： In the wreck the circus lost a panda and elephant. Yes： In the wreck the circus lost a panda and an elephant. (不定冠词的平行结构) No： I debated whether I should give the beggar money or to offer him food. Yes： I debated whether to give the beggar money or to offer him food.
(不定式的平行结构) No： They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes days. Yes： They would lie on the battlefield for hours and sometimes for days. (介词平行结构) No：Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and dust filled the air. Yes：Michael’s vacuum cleaner squealed loudly, shook violently, and filled the air with dust. (并列谓语) No： The mechanic explained the problem, method, and the tools that he was going to use. Yes： The mechanic explained the problem, method, and tools that he was going to use. (并列带有定冠词"the"的名词) No： He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and his employees loved him. Yes： He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and loved by his employees. (并列被动语态) No： As a young man he had been to Shanghai, fighting in the Anti-Japanese War, and following the Nationalist Party to Chongking.
很多同学在英语四级的考场上常常不知道如何写新闻报道，最后因写译部分的分数少而没达到425+，以下就是四六级过关宝典： 接下来我将在实战中带大家走入作文部分（以2019年6月英语四级的三套真题为例） （一）Write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a local farm organized by your Student Union 写一篇关于参观农场的新闻报道 写作结构框图 开头：介绍新闻要素（活动的时间、人物、地点） 在学生会组织下，6月8日30名学生参观了光明广场。 中间：报道活动详情（新闻稿的基本要素） 首先简单介绍参观对象-光明农场的情况，然后介绍参观过经过，最后引用一个学生的感受具体说明此次活动对于学生的影响 结尾：总结该活动的教育意义 （二）Write a news report to your campus newspaper on a visit to a Hope Elementary school organized by your Student Union 写一篇关于希望小学之行的报道 第二篇的写作框架图与第一个不同的就是结尾（这是一个活动）所以要评价活动效果 学生都积极参与其中，希望小学的校长高度评价了大学生们的奉献、热情、创造力 （三）Write a news report to your campus newspaper on a volunteer activity organized by your Student Union to assist elderly people in the neighborhood 写一篇关于帮助社区老人的新闻报道 第三个作文结构在结尾与前两个结尾有所不同 以组织者的表态结束全文 学生会表示他们愿意举办更多类似有意义的活动 我们发现题目差不多的在表述上还是很不相同的 （1）在活动中要介绍行程注意时态，过去发生的要用过去式 （2）在介绍时最好要简单句与复杂句同步、并且还要有一定的从句（高分作文必备）
大学英语四级作文范文（5篇） 大学英语四级作文范文篇一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a