短文改错2 (1)

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第 1 页 共 9 页 专题限时集训(二十七) 短文改错(Ⅱ) (对应学生用书第142页) A (2017·湖北省八校联考)It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom,the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of which arrived later.I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my father,but he had to leave to home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun. 【答案】

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walkwalked into my new high school. After registeredregistering in the classroom,thea volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of whichwhom arrived later.I got to know my new roommateroommates immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say“Goodbye” to my

father,butyet/﹨but he had to leave tofor home. I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after memyself and live independently.Not until then ∧did I know my senior high school life had realreally begun. 第一处:walk→walked。考查动词时态。根据“It was on a warm autumn day”可知,事情发生在过去,故用一般过去时。 第二处:registered→registering。考查动名词。after是介词,后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语,故用动名词形式。 第三处:the→a。考查冠词。volunteer是可数名词,且第一次在文中出现,故用不定冠词修饰。 第 2 页 共 9 页

第四处:which→whom。考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,应用whom引导非限定性定语从句,在从句中作介词of的宾语,修饰先行词five roommates。 第五处:roommate→roommates。考查名词复数。由上文的“I had five roommates”可知,室友不止一个,故用复数形式。 第六处:删除but或将but改为yet。考查连词。在英语中,although和but不能同时出现在一个句子中,故删除but。也可将but改为yet。补充:此处也可将Although删掉,但是语意上没有修改but好。 第七处:leave后的to改为for。考查介词。leave for意为“前往”,为固定词组,符合语境。 第八处:me→myself。考查代词。与句子主语I呼应,应用反身代词,意为“照顾好自己”。 第九处:then后加did。考查倒装句。not until置于句首时,常采用部分倒装,即把助动词放在主语之前。由时间状语then和下文的时态可知,此处用一般过去时,故用did。 第十处:real→really。考查副词。修饰动词应用副词,故将real改为really。 B (2017·洛阳市第一次统一考试)My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened.I could only tell him a truth.Instead of scold,he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father! 【答案】 My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,﹨however he never fails

to show herhis care and consideration.Once I broke a neighborneighbor's window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what hashad happened.I could only tell him athe truth.Instead 第 3 页 共 9 页

of scoldscolding,he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize ∧to our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health andbut he also teaches me whathow to be a good citizen.How luckilylucky I am to have such a

good father! 第一处:删除however。考查连词。在as引导的让步状语从句中,表语放句首时,从句倒装,分析句子结构可知,however多余。 第二处:her→his。考查代词。与上文人称代词he保持一致,可知,此处应用形容词性物主代词his。 第三处:neighbor→neighbor's。考查名词所有格形式。此处用名词所有格形式作定语,修饰名词window。 第四处:has→had。考查动词时态。与asked呼应可知,此处应用过去完成时,表示过去的过去。 第五处:a→the。考查冠词。tell the truth为固定词组搭配,符合语境,故用定冠词the。 第六处:scold→scolding。考查动名词。介词后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语,故用动名词scolding作介词of的宾语。 第七处:our前加to。考查介词。apologize to sb.意为“向某人道歉”,为固定词组搭配,故用介词to。 第八处:and→but。考查连词,not only...but also...意为“不但……而且……”,为固定结构,故用连词but。 第九处:what→how。考查疑问词。与teaches呼应可知,此处表示方式,故用how。 第十处:luckily→lucky。考查形容词。与I am呼应可知,此处应用形容词lucky作表语。 C (2017·福州市五校联考) Boys and girls, May I have your fully attention, please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends in the United States,the Student Union was going to 第 4 页 共 9 页

hold a party on Saturday evening,February 20.As never,the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.They will begin at 7 pm.There will be music,dancing,singing or exchange of gifts.Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up,sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes.Don't miss the party,where I believe we will have a lot of funs.Everyone is welcome. That's all.Thank you. 【答案】 Boys and girls,

May I have your fullyfull attention, please? I have ∧an announcement to make.To welcome our friends infrom the United States,the Student Union wasis going to hold a party on Saturday evening,February 20.As neverever,the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.TheyIt will begin at 7 pm.There will be music,dancing,singing orand exchange of gifts.Will everyone please ﹨to bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to pack it up,sign your name and writingwrite a few words of good wishes.Don't miss the party,where I believe we will have a lot of funsfun.Everyone is welcome.