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雅思小作文范文整理自雅思考官simon博客The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Full essay (band 9):The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities.The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year. It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.The London underground is the oldest system, having opened in 1863. It is also the largest sy stem, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more peopl e per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1 927 million passengers per year.Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 12 6 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and L os Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while th e Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.(185 words)water cycle' essayThe diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to air to land during the natural process known as the water cycle.Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates, falls as rain, and eventually runs back into the oceans again.Beginning at the evaporation stage, we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to form clouds. At the second stage, labelled ‘precipitation’ on the diagram, water falls as rain or snow.At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakes o r return to the oceans via ‘surface runoff’. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reaching the impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusion is shown to take place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.August 26, 2010范文：The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.It is clear that the proportion of the population who used the Internet increased in each country over the period shown. Overall, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet in comparison with Mexicans, and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage.In 1999, the proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%. The figures for Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In 2005, Internet usage in both the USA and Canada rose to around 70% of the population, while the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%.By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest in Canada. Almost 100% of Canadians used the Internet, compared to about 80% of Americans and only 40% of Mexicans.Here is my full essay (170 words):The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather.There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.Looking at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Secondly, incoming information may be collected directly by radar and analysed on a radar screen or synoptic chart. Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart.At the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio, or as a recorded telephone announcement.The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in 1980 and 1990.范文：The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians, and research and development spending in developing and developed countries. Figures are g iven for 1980 and 1990.It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations. Also, the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980 to 1990.People in developing nations attended school for an average of around 3 years, with only a sli ght increase in years of schooling from 1980 to 1990. On the other hand, the figure for indust rialised countries rose from nearly 9 years of schooling in 1980 to nearly 11 years in 1990.From 1980 to 1990, the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almos t doubled to about 70 per 1000 people. Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries, reaching $350 billion in 1990. By contrast, the number of science workers in developing countries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and research spending f ell from about $50 billion to only $25 billion.(187 words)November 04, 2010Full essay (159 words):The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008.Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007.In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.pie chart answerThe pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.范文：The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled.Looking a t the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites. This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste in Sweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.While 25% of Sweden's dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all. Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively. (159 words, band 9)'flood diagram' answerThe diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.Here's my full band 9 report:The diagrams compare two different methods of defence for homes which are at risk of being flooded.The key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank. In either case, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level.The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes. The stopbank is a small mound of land next to the river that is higher than the 100-year flood level, and prevents the river from bursting its banks. Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened to allow this ‘ponding’ to drain off into the river.When there is no stopbank, as shown in the second diagram, there will be nothing to stop the river from flooding. In this case, the solution is to put buildings on stilts. The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level. This measurement is called the ‘freeboard’.'waste table' essayThe table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000.In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000.Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.table essayThe table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.The table compares the numbers of people who cycled to work in twelve areas of the UK in the years 2001 and 2011.Overall, the number of UK commuters who travelled to work by bicycle rose considerably over the 10-year period. Inner London had by far the highest number of cycling commuters in both years.In 2001, well over 43 thousand residents of inner London commuted by bicycle, and this figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%. By contrast, although outer London had the second highest number of cycling commuters in each year, the percentage change, at only 45%, was the lowest of the twelve areas shown in the table. Brighton and Hove saw the second biggest increase (109%) in the number of residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total numbers of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,768 in 2011. Figures for the other eight areas were below the 10 thousand mark in both years.(172 words, band 9)process diagramThe diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use.The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of energy from sunlight. The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply.At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the sun and convert it into DC current. Next, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of electricity. At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home from an electrical panel.At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any extra electric power outside the house into the grid. Finally, if the solar panels do not provide enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the meter.Note:I've underlined examples of the two language features that make process diagram descriptions special: 'steps' language, and passive verbs.bar chartThe bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.The bar chart compares the turnover in dollars from sales of video games for four different platforms, namely mobile phones, online, consoles and handheld devices, from 2000 to 2006.It is clear that sales of games for three out of the four platforms rose each year, leading to a significant rise in total global turnover over the 7-year period. Sales figures for handheld games were at least twice as high as those for any other platform in almost every year.In 2000, worldwide sales of handheld games stood at around $11 billion, while console games earned just under $6 billion. No figures are given for mobile or online games in that year. Over the next 3 years, sales of handheld video games rose by about $4 billion, but the figure for consoles decreased by $2 billion. Mobile phone and online games started to become popular, with sales reaching around $3 billion in 2003.In 2006, sales of handheld, online and mobile games reached peaks of 17, 9 and 7 billion dollars respectively. By contrast, turnover from console games dropped to its lowest point, at around $2.5 billion.map essayThe map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.flow chart essayThe chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper.At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill. Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product: usable paper.(160 words, band 9)Note: I joined the introduction and overview together because they were both short. Try to analyse the essay - why is it worth band 9?stacked bar chart essayThe chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games.It is clear that the USA is by far the most successful Olympic medal winning nation. It is also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be fairly similar.The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. In second place on the all-time medals chart is the Soviet Union, with just over 1,000 medals. Again, the number of gold medals won by this country is slightly higher than the number of silver or bronze medals.Only four other countries - the UK, France, Germany and Italy - have won more than 500 Olympic medals, all with similar proportions of each medal colour. Apart from the USA and the Soviet Union, China is the only other country with a noticeably higher proportion of gold medals (about 200) compared to silver and bronze (about 100 each).(178 words, band 9)mobile phones essay范文：The table compares the percentages of people using different functions of their mobile phones between 2006 and 2010.
Throughout the period shown, the main reason why people used their mobile phones was to make calls. However, there was a marked increase in the popularity of other mobile phone features, particularly the Internet search feature.In 2006, 100% of mobile phone owners used their phones to make calls, while the next most popular functions were text messaging (73%) and taking photos (66%). By contrast, less than 20% of owners played games or music on their phones, and there were no figures for users doing Internet searches or recording video.Over the following 4 years, there was relatively little change in the figures for the top three mobile phone features. However, the percentage of people using their phones to access the Internet jumped to 41% in 2008 and then to 73% in 2010. There was also a significant rise in the use of mobiles to play games and to record video, with figures reaching 41% and 35% respectively in 2010.Note:The above essay isn't perfect, but it's still good enough for a band 9. You are not expected to write a masterpiece in only 20 minutes.line graph essayThe line graph compares average yearly spending by Americans on mobile and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly. The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.In 2001, US consumers spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services, compared to only around $200 on cell phone services. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly $200. By contrast, expenditure on mobiles rose by approximately $300.In the year 2006, the average American paid out the same amount of money on both types of phone service, spending just over $500 on each. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones had reached around $750, while the figure for spending on residential services had fallen to just over half this amount.(162 words, band 9)life cycle essayThe diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are:how to summarise the diagram before describing the stages in detailwhether to use active or passive verb formsThe diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full maturity.(169 words, band 9)climate essayThe climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May. While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(173 words, band 9)full essay about 2 bar chartsThe bar charts compare students of different ages in terms of why they are studying and whether they are supported by an employer.It is clear that the proportion of students who study for career purposes is far higher among the younger age groups, while the oldest students are more likely to study for interest. Employer support is more commonly given to younger students.Around 80% of students aged under 26 study to further their careers, whereas only 10% study purely out of interest. The gap between these two proportions narrows as students get older, and the figures for those in their forties are the same, at about 40%. Students aged over 49 overwhelmingly study for interest (70%) rather than for professional reasons (less than 20%). Just over 60% of students aged under 26 are supported by their employers. By contrast, the 30-39 age group is the most self-sufficient, with only 30% being given time off and help with fees. The figures rise slightly for students in their forties and for those aged 50 or more. (178 words, band 9)'chart without years' essayThe chart below shows numbers of incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transportation type in 2002.The bar chart compares the number of incidents and injuries for every 100 million passenger miles travelled on five different types of public transport in 2002.It is clear that the most incidents and injuries took place on demand-response vehicles. By contrast, commuter rail services recorded by far the lowest figures.A total of 225 incidents and 173 injuries, per 100 million passenger miles travelled, took place on demand-response transport services. These figures were nearly three times as high as those for the second highest category, bus services. There were 76 incidents and 66 people were injured on buses.Rail services experienced fewer problems. The number of incidents on light rail trains equalled the figure recorded for buses, but there were significantly fewer injuries, at only 39. Heavy rail services saw lower numbers of such events than light rail services, but commuter rail passengers were even less likely to experience problems. In fact, only 20 incidents and 17 injuries occurred on commuter trains.(165 words, band 9)graph showing future yearsThe graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)'table' essayThe table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category - 2002范文;The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure forleisure/education, at only 1.98%.graph and table essayThe graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.范文：The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.In 1900, around 500km³ of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m³, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m³, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)'house prices' chartThe chart below shows information about changes in average house prices infive different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average houseprices in 1989.范文：The bar chart compares the cost of an average house in five major cities over a period of 13 years from 1989.We can see that house prices fell overall between 1990 and 1995, but most of the cities saw rising prices between 1996 and 2002. London experienced by far the greatest changes in house prices over the 13-year period.Over the 5 years after 1989, the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London dropped by around 7%, while New York house prices went down by 5%. By contrast, prices rose by approximately 2% in both Madrid and Frankfurt.Between 1996 and 2002, London house prices jumped to around 12% above the 1989 average. Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more, with prices rising to 5% above the 1989 average, but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in 1989. The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%, while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.(165 words)。

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剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类精选6篇剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第一篇This bar chart analyzes the percentage of household waste recycled from 1992 to 2023. We can see that the percentage during 2023 increased all the way while other years fluctuated. In the various materials, paper and glass are the ones that with greater percentage that was recycled. In contrast, the plastic and cans had a lower percentage.From the graph we can see that during 1992 cans have the highest percentage about 17% and plastic has the lowest at about 10%. After that, in year 1997, paper and glass became major types of waste that were recycled, at about 31% and 29% respectively. In 2023, glass became the dominant type of waste that was recycled with about 48%. Meanwhile, plastic had grown least around 2% and glass had grown the most around 34% in these 10 years, and paper chasing behind with 26%. Cans were more stable, with ony about 6% total growth.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第二篇Topic: Your neigbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain the reasons for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take 剑桥雅思小作文范文Dear James,I was very shocked to get your letter saying that the noise from my flat has been spoiling your evenings and causing you some distress. I am really, really sorry about that. I had no idea that you would be able to hear so much, so I hope you will accept my apologies.As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evenings when I get home from work. Unfortunately it is all taking longer than expected and I have been having problems with getting things to fit properly. This has meant a lot of banging and hammering.As the kitchen is still not finished, I have decided to call in a professional builder who will finish the work in the next day or two. He will work only during daytime hours, so you won’t be disturbed in the evenings again, I promise.Sorry to have caused these problems.Bill.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第三篇Discuss the difference between fast food and traditional food, such as nutrition,and recipe?Living in a fast-paced society, the modern eaters are not longer interested in the contents of their food, but focused on whether a convenient meal is available at hand to devour. Statistics indicate that even housewives spend much shorter time at kitchen than their predecessors. This writing will compare and contrast advantages and disadvantages of fast food and traditional food.Traditional food has its unshakable position in the human culture both in the social and historical context. Historically, chefs have gone to all lengths to experiment on novelties, invent cooking skills to gratify guests' hunger. Hence, traditional food has secured its incomparable value with a complex of tantalising features, including the variance, flavour, and taste. Its unique charms can nurturesocial relations as well. A family is accustomed to prepare a traditional feast to serve their guests at weekend or on holiday,such as Christmas.Further, traditional food is favourably nutritious and balanced, compared with fast food. Dieticians have suggested audience through millions of televised courses that traditional food can retain more nutrition before being served on the table, for in general, they are cooked with a temperate heat. By contrast, the fast food are made at such a high temperature that nutrition has inescapably vaporised during the cooking process. Meanwhile, cooks pay more attention to the balance of recipe when preparing traditional food, such as combing meat with vegetable.Despite a range of advantages, traditional food is overshadowed by its fast competitor in terms of time. Traditional food can consume a considerable amount of time from choosing materials, to arranging your table for visual appeal. In contrast, fast food cannot be faster when making a five-minute trip to a store around the corner, or even dialling to a fast food company. Needless to say recently, a string of fast food companies have tried their hardest to enrich the menu. To summarise, traditional food has an irreplaceable role in our life, backed with various merits. However, its prevalence isdeclining for people are more and more time conscious.剑桥雅思写作高分范文分类第四篇There are many good reasons to cycle. Cycling is the mostefficient means of getting around London. Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or less and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.。

剑9Test3大作文Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.话题和题型分类社会生活类，双边讨论型题目分析一些人认为改善公众健康的最佳方式是增建体育设施，另一些人则认为那样效果不大，需要其他方式。

讨论双方观点并给出自己的意见。

思路提示增加体育设施数量是改善公众健康的最佳方式体育设施的数量增多可以促进人们多使用它们进行锻炼，增强体质，改善健康A的效果不大，需要其他方式增加的体育设施是否可以让所有人使用，如果否，则“公众”健康难以改善一些人群不适合使用体育设施，如行动不便的人提倡健康生活饮食习惯，创造良好医疗条件、生活条件等也是很好的改善公众健康的方式Sample AnswerA problem of modem societies is the declining level of health in the general population.One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.However,there are some people who doubt whether this solution would have a positive effect.I think that the outcome of such a practice may not be as good as some people believe.内容详细条目段落此段结构1描述现实2表达观点此段功能首段开篇摆明观点:增加运动设施并不一定能改善人们的健康水平。

剑桥雅思真题9—写作（Test 4 附高分范文）Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1：The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030.Petrol and oil are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period, with 35 quadrillion (35q) units used in 1980，rising to 42q in 2012. Despite some initial fluctuation, from 1995 there was a steady increase. This is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030.Consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980，gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase，with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. Consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. Coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31q in 2030, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q.In 1980, energy from nuclear, hydro- and solar/wind power was equal at only 4q. Nuclear has risen by 3q, and solar/wind by 2. After slight increases, hydropower has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to maintain this level until 2030, while the others should rise slightly after 2025.Overall, the US will continue to rely on fossil fuels, with sustainable and nuclear energysources remaining relatively insignificant.参考范文2：The line graph provides information about the consumption of energy by fuel in the United States of America since 1980 with projections until 2030.The most dominant fuel sources throughout the period are petrol and oil. Starting with 35 quadrillion units in 1980, it reached about 42 quadrillions in 2013. It is estimated that by 2030 this fuel source will reach 48 quadrillion units.Consumption of energy derived from coal and natural gas is quite smaller. From 20 and 15 quadrillion units in the beginning of the period, natural gas had a slight decline and coal a gradual increase. The two fuels were equal from 1985 to 1990, when coal began to lead. It is predicted that coal will increase steadily to 32 quadrillion units in 2030, while natural gas will remain stable at 25 quadrillion units.The least prevailing fuel sources in this period are nuclear, hydropower, solar and wind. All of the fuels started with 4 quadrillion units in 1980. Thereafter, nuclear risen to 7 quadrillion units in 2010, while at the same time solar and wind increased only by 1 quadrillion unit. Hydropower had some insignificant rises and fell to the 1980 figure. It is predicted that all these fuels will maintain their levels until 2025, when nuclear, solar and wind will rise slightly.Overall, the United States of America will continue to rely on petrol and oil with less significant usage of sustainable, nuclear and environmentally friendly fuel.Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.参考范文：Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important, because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. I do not agree with this opinion. Language, other than communication, has many other functions.To begin with, different languages make the world more interesting. If all men are speaking the same language, it would be like all men are wearing the same clothes, the world would be monotonic and boring. The society needs different dialects and accents.Another important reason is that language is the carrier of culture. Every specific nation passes their customs and traditions through language. Sometimes language is a symbol of unity. People speak the same language feel close to each other. The language helps keep their culture alive and gives them a sense of belonging.Last but not least, language determines our thinking patterns. When one language dies out, we not only lose a way of speaking, but lose a way of thinking.Some people may think communication would be much easier if we all speak the samelanguage. However, we should commit that sometimes it is convenient to express real feelings in dialects and accents.In conclusion, a language, no matter how few its speakers are, is invaluable cultural heritage of human beings. Therefore, we should cherish this wealth, protect language diversity and carry all languages down from generation to generation.。

剑9Test1大作文Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?话题和题型分类教育类，同意不同意型题目分析有些专家认为少年儿童从小学就应该开始学外语，而不是从中学。

这种想法优大于劣吗？思路提示优点>缺点科研表明，儿童低龄时口舌肌肉尚未定型，是语言发展的重要时期较早开始学习外语，记得快，学得多，接受能力比大龄起步效果好通过寓教于乐的方式让低龄儿童学习外语，可以让其认为学外语很快乐，培养好的学习心态缺点>优点低龄儿童活泼好动，集中力不强，学外语效果打折扣低龄儿童对较难的语言点难以理解Sample AnswerUnder the fast globalization,learning a foreign language tends to be a necessary.Some even advocate that children should start a foreign language since their primary school.Personally,I reckon that this proposal will cause more harm other than benefits to children.内容详细条目段落此段结构1描述现实2表达观点此段功能首段开篇摆明观点:让孩子们从小学开始学习外语这一提议弊大于利。

Admittedly,it will be much more advantageous for children to learn a new language at an early age.Scientists substantiate that young kids have already formed the cognitive capability to distinguish the foreign language from their mother tongue,let alone the children over7year‐old.Indeed,children’s intrinsic curiosity and language gift can make it easier for them to master the foreign language compared with those who have get used to the pattern of their own language.Statistics present that most Swiss children can spontaneously master at least three languages since their9,especially those half‐breed.内容详细条目段落此段结构1反面论据一：七岁的孩子有足够的能力分辨外语与母语。

剑桥雅思9写作解析test2⼩作⽂题⽬：The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995- 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.范⽂：The bar chart shows three types of telephone calls made in the UK between 1995 and 2002, according to how many minutes they lasted in total. Local fixed line calls lasted 72 billion minutes in 1995, rising gradually to 90 billion in 1998. The following year, the number peaked at 91 billion. Thereafter, it gradually declined to 73 billion in 2002. National and international fixed line calls lasted 37 billion minutes in 1995. The figure then rose slowly to 50 billion in 1999. There was a bigger increase in 2000 to 57 billion followed by smaller rises to 60 billion and 61 billion in 2001 and 2002 respectively. Mobile calls lasted 3 billion minutes in 1995, increasing to 10 billion in 1998. Thereafter, the increases were larger, to 15 billion in 1999, 27 billion in 2000 and 38 billion in 2001. In 2002 there was another rise to 44 billion.Overall, the number of minutes for local fixed line calls rose then fell and was always the highest. The number for national and international fixed line calls increased every year and was always the second highest, whilst the number for mobiles rose every year, especially after 1999, but was always the lowest.⼤作⽂题⽬：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?范⽂：参考译⽂1——⽆偿社区服务应该是强制性的In this essay, I shall explain why I think that it is a good idea for secondary school students to do compulsory community service.The main reason that I believe this is that it provides secondary school students with wider knowledge about, and experience of, their community and society in general. Some types of community service involve working with sick or disabled people, giving students the opportunity to help those who are less fortunate. Other kinds of community service give students the chance to work with children or work on projects to improve the community. All of these broaden horizons and demonstrate to students what their place in society is.Another key advantage of community service for secondary school students is that it can provide them with some work experience. This is particularly true in some sectors, such as health care, but I think that community service generally provides people with a work ethic which will obviously be helpful throughout their lives. The fact that the work is unpaid might inspire some studentsto continue with community service even when it is not a compulsory part of their secondary school curriculum.In addition, many community services suffer from a lack of volunteers, so using secondary school students in this way provides enough people to meet this shortfall. The supply of students is very likely to continue as older students leave school but new ones enter, so the provision of these community services is almost guaranteed.To conclude, I think having secondary school students do community service is an excellent idea.参考译⽂2——⽆偿社区服务不应该是强制性的In this essay, I shall explain why I think that unpaid community service should not be compulsory for high school students. For me, the most important reason why community service should not be compulsory for high school students is that they should be focusing on other things. I think it is much more important for high school students to study academic subjects –like maths, languages, science and computing –that will help them to get into higher education and then get better jobs when they enter the workforce. This is the primary purpose of schools. Compulsory community service would be a distraction from this.Of course, there are some students who would like to do community service and would find it useful in their future careers. They could do it during school hours if they wish. However, this does not mean that it should be compulsory for every student. In fact, making it compulsory could have negative effects if the students have to do work that they do not want to door do not see the use in doing. Students who want to do community service can also easily find ways to it outside school hours, e. g. in the evenings, at the weekends or during the school holidays.To conclude, I strongly disagree with the idea that unpaid community service should be compulsory for high school students, but I think that community service is a good thing for society and should be available to high school students who want to do it.。

IELTS 9 test 1 writing task 1The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.These particular two maps represent how an island constructed for tourism with a few facilities.Turning to the first map before construction, it can be seen that an island, which surrounded by sea, had a few palm trees and a beach in the west.Moving to the other map, one can see that there are some facilities have been built on the island. One of the first things to note is that there are 15 tents for tourists to live in. The first six of them have been built around three palm trees on the west of the island while the others have been constructed on the central part of it. Between these tents, there is a restaurant in the north and a reception unit which is surrounded by a vehicle track.Another thing which stands out from the map is that anyone who wants to go sailing should follow the vehicle track which brings to the pier in the southern side of the island. Also, there is a beach for swimming which can be found on the western part of the island.Overall, after the construction, the island has become an amazing place to rest.IELTS 9 test 1 writing task 2Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?[Answer 1]Some school of thoughts argue that a foreign language should be learnt in the primary school while others argue that this strategy would put extra amount of pressure on the innocent children and subsequently considering the importance, necessity and obligation of learning a foreign language then I strongly believe the thoughts of the first party.Apparently the advantages of learning a foreign language in the primary level cross the minor number of disadvantages. Generally the age of childhood is very fresh and no any type of psychological pressure from their home and outside the home is on their shoulders and they are just free to play, enjoy and study, so the structure of the foreign language can easily be copied in their minds and finally they can become more mature when they get qualified to the secondary school due toOn the other hand some school teachers devise quiet complicated teaching methodologies for teaching students and in the result the children get bored and failed in clearing the examinations of the foreign language. Therefore students could get mentally confused and discouraged to follow up the other school subjects as well. For instance my cousin was trying hard to learn the English language but not succeeded to pass the very basic English language examinations and he also complained the identical reason.To sum up all the observations then we can get a perception that teaching a foreign language to the students of the primary school is the best idea and beneficial for the future of the students but meanwhile a very slow and progressive, enjoyable and transparent teaching strategies should be planned in order to provide a very delightful environment to the lower aged students.[Answer 2]Some experts claim that learning a foreign language at primary school is better than secondary school. While it has some undeniable drawbacks, I could suggest that the children should begin learning the second language from being at primary school.Starting learning foreign language at the early age has many advantages for the primary students. Firstly, learning any language other their mother tongue is just a process of repeating and repeating again the words, phrases, sentences and being also familiar with grammar. They are in control of them to remember and use them regularly in many situations to form natural reaction of that language. Otherwise, almost the primary students have no pressure to learn so hardly is there treat in exam instead really learn. Secondly, it is better for the children to have more time to practice when they approach the foreign language soon. Those students will own completely that second language better than others starting at the secondary school. Additional, children have more chances in their life to take advantage of the foreign language which they master.Nevertheless, we cannot deny some disadvantages of learning a foreign language at secondary school. If teachers at primary school are not good enough to teach, children easily have some fundamental mistakes which are very difficult to fix. In another hand, the children at primary school does not have as much awareness of the importance of owning the second language as those of secondary school.In conclusion, learning a foreign language at secondary school have some shortcoming above but I truly believe that the children should start learning other language at primary.IELTS 9 test 2 writing task 1The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995--2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.This chart provides information about the total number of minutes of telephone calls, given in billion minutes, by three different type of call in the UK from 1995-2002. The date can be divided into two groups; one group experienced an increase, while the other group showed fluctuation.With respect to the former group, it can be seen that the national and international fixed line were increase gradually It start at about 38 billion minutes in 1995 and went up to 60 billion minutes in 2002. Likewise, the mobiles also showed the upward trend but the change was significantly. It jumped from about 3 billion minutes in 1995 to about 42 billion minutes in 2002.However, the latter group experienced the highest proportion of the number of minutes of telephone calls but fluctuated. It rose slightly from 70 billion minutes from 1995 to 1999, before falling slightly to the same point in 2002.Overall, over the 8 years observed the most use of the telephone call in the UK was still the local fixed line, while the other 2 groups became more popular.IELTS 9 test 2 writing task 2Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?Community service and pursuits such as charity work are praiseworthy and important ventures. There are both benefits for the individuals who are helped as well as for the volunteers. However, the issue of obligatory community service raises questions as to the extent of the advantages it would provide.If a high school student had to undertake an unpaid position working for a charity, then there may well be a certain amount of resentment on behalf of the student due to the lack of choice and the sacrifices they would have to make in terms of their free time. This could lead to the opposite effect of the programme's intention; to teach teenagers valuable life lessons, such as respect and empathy for others. Conversely, a compulsory volunteering project could have a positive effect on high school pupils as it would become a commonplace and expected situation. As these teenagers grow up, the attributes that they gain from community services could help to shape a better, more caring society.The opportunity to understand hard work, self-discipline and the duty of care that all individuals have is clearly ofmaintain a part-time job in order to support their families or save for their future. Compulsory community service would severely disrupt the requirements of these students and be incompatible with their lives and schedules.To exploit the various advantages that community service offers, it should be available in schools but not be obligatory. If improving the area by picking up litter, for example, was rewarded and respected by institutions, then teenagers would be more likely to happily engage in such activities. In a similar way, if schools were able to provide charitable pursuits that matched an individual's future aspirations, then this would be a better path to follow.In conclusion, I am convinced that offering well-respected and useful opportunities to do community service to high school students is far more beneficial than forced participation.IELTS 9 test 3 writing task 1The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The pie charts illustrate the changes in different ageing sectors of populations in two countries, Yemen and Italy, in the period from 2000 and 2050.In general, the changing patterns of these countries are relatively different. For Yemen, a number of people ageing from 0 to 14 year olds accounted for half of population in 2000, are projected to decrease substantially to just over a third (37%)in 2050. In contrast, 15-19 age group, which just make up 46.3% in 2000, increase to a anticipated high percentage of population in 2050, with 57.3%. Leaving 60-plus category remain almost stable, rising slightly from 3.6% to 5.7% over the same period.On the other hand, Italy shows a opposite pattern of changes, where the aged( 60+ years) tend to more popular, with the predicted dramatic increase from about a fourth to 42,3% from 2000 to 2050. Whilst, people ageing from 15-59 are predicted to decline significantly from nearly two thirds to only 26,2% over the same period, Similarly, young people (0-14 years)also decrease, albeit insignificantly, from 14.3% to 11.5%.Overall, the charts show the two distinctive models of population in two countries: The ageing and young ones.IELTS 9 test 3 writing task 2however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Health is the most important thing in a person life. Some people believe that the standard of public health can be improved by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others refute this statement and emphasis for other methods. These points of view will be discussed in this order.Firstly, it is considered by many persons that the given solution will help people to do the exercise with fun, so more souls will attract to take part in the work out, which is beneficial for health, in their life. For example, in the India, there is a town, ‘Banga’, which has many physical recreation options, such as many grounds, parks and sports clubs. As the result of this, the young and old generations keep busy themselves in the playing and exercising. Consequently, this city has low rate of obesity cases in its region. It is clear from the above instance that the proposed method benefits a city, which leads to the superior public fitness. Thus, it is the reason that many thinkers gravitate towards this suggestion.On the other hand, many individuals disapprove this view and emphasis for the necessity of other ways to improve the health level. For example, they argue that in the 21st century, the life style of humans is very busy, so the people do not have the leisure time to involve themselves into sports activities. Therefore, they prefer other formulas tackle this problem such as the education: the consumption of fast food can be decreased by educating the creatures about the harmful impacts of junk food, and this step contributes in the improvement of the degree of public soundness automatically. Thus, that’s why many people are in the favor of this point of view.From the causes related to the reduction of fatness, time-shortage and education, the issue of increasing the sum of sports facilities has been supported and refuted. However, after the examination of above given facts, it is clear that the other measures are required to raise the level of public health. I strongly believed that the government should take some steps to find the more tactics to improve the level of citizen’s well-being. (Band: 7.4)IELTS 9 test 4 writing task 1The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The line graph illustrates the amount of energy consumed in the USA since 1980 with prevision until 2030 according to a 2008 report.The general overview here is that the consumption by renewable energy as Nuclear, Solar/Wind, Hydro power is always surpassed by fossil fuel as Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural gas.To specify, in the fossil fuel group, the amount of consumed Petrol and Oil fluctuated in the first fifteen year from 35 quadrillion units to 33 quadrillion units before a significant climb to 47 quadrillion units in 2030. Similarly, after an unstable trend from 20 quadrillion units in 1980 to 25 quadrillion in 2014, the figure of Natural gas will stay unchanged until 2030. However, Coal had seen a considerable increase to 22 quadrillion units in the amount of consumption, followed by gradual rise to 28 quadrillion units in 2030.In comparison, in the rest group, the amount of energy consumed by nuclear increased slightly from 4 quadrillion units to 6 quadrillion units in 2006, before keeping unchanged until 2025, and the figure will go up to 7 quadrillion in 2030. On the contrary, the consumption of Solar/Wind and Hydro power fluctuated to 4 and 3 quadrillion units in 2010, followed by an unchanged trend until 2030.IELTS 9 test 4 writing task 2Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion?Nowadays, several languages die out every year. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. I agree with mixed of these opinions. I think if we have fewer or one popular language in word, it will be help us to communicate easier to each other in many fields. But in other hand, it cause ruin many thing such as cultures, religions, costumes and indigenous languages. I try to illustrate these aspects in following paragraphs.To begin with, at the present time, world goes to globalization, and many people in world have to communicate to each other. They have to trade, voyage, and go to university and migration to other countries. Clearly if there is one common and popular language in world, this is very easier for them to go to other countries or have trading with other people in the world. For example, my dad is manager of Car Company; he went to Germany for management courses in last year. Now, he says if I did not have good base on Germany language I could not pass those courses. Hence, a common language could be helpful for all people.In the other hand, extinction of indigenous language cause to ruin many cultures, costumes, religions and literatures. These facts build many people and countries histories. These histories were built along many years and so many wars. For example, Greece language is common language in the old Greek. Greece people do many wars for conquering to other people. But now, with death of Greece language those attempts are destroy. Thus, it is very important to protect old and indigenous languages.To put it in a nut shell, I think it is very good to have a common language in the world, but we should respect to protect indigenous languages from forgetting. We should save our wealthy costumes, cultures and literatures.General training test A (Task 1)You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter.explain why you want to take time off work.give details of the amount of time you need.suggest how your work could be covered while you are awayDear Mr Smith,This is one of your employees in the research section, Fereshteh Dayani. I am writing to request a one-week off work from 22nd to 29th of August.Unfortunately, my aunt had heart attack last night. We took her to a hospital and luckily she narrowly avoided the risk, but she has to be hospitalized for one week. As she has two little children and her husband is on a trip now, I have to look after my aunt’s two children during this week. Therefore I would appreciate your kindness and consideration if you accept my request for one-week off work.However, I will figure out some parts of my work through the internet while I am at home, also I will send the results for the colleagues via email. In addition, I asked one of my co-workers to present the income of my research instead of me in the next meeting which is supposed to be held on Wednesday morning.I really appreciate your understanding and cooperation in advance.Yours Sincerely,Fereshteh DayaniGeneral training test A (Task 2)Being a celebrity-such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?There is no doubt that every gold coin has two sides, in that fashion every famous person also has both the effects in their quotidian life, positive and negative. Undoubtedly, as social icon celebrities are belongs to privilege class. Therefore, they enjoy much higher benefits that a common person. However, problems are not avoidable. Nevertheless, their natural life is not easy like others.Celebrities are belongs to diamond class of our society. They normally do not have economic problems and additionally the famous persons are having very good social, political and administrative contacts. Hence, they do enjoy many advantages without any pain, on the other hand, a simple man has to struggle quite a hard for the same facility. For instance, a child of a famous personality can get an admission to a top class school or college without any hindrance, perhaps, without any pretest or examination. Nonetheless, a common person will not get entry for his/her child in the same school or college, no matter how good the student is.Most importantly, celebrities are leading much secure life. Securities are allows securing a celebrities life and assets from strangers. Additionally, a famous person and his family are highly restricted from a common crowd.However, a celebrity con not lives his/her natural life for his iconic personality and security arrangements, deployed for him. Celebrities are allows surrounded by media, therefore, iconic people do not spend quality time publically. Additionally, famous personalities are role model for many people. Hence, each and every moves of a social icon is ac countable for judgment, for society’s benefits. In this situation, no human being can lead his/her life comfortable.In conclusion, being a celebrity, famous people have much stronger responsibilities towards the nation. Therefore, their life is protected and restricted too. However, being a famous personality, people do enjoy more benefits then hindrance. However, problems are not ignorable.General training test B (Task 1)On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter.describe the item you lost.explain how you lost it.tell the insurance company what you would like them to doDear Sir/Madam,I am writing this letter to you regarding my loss of a valuable item: ‘an Apple iPhone 4S of white color’, during the vacatio n time last week. Allow me to describe the whole situation for you.7 days ago, I was in the London on a holiday trip with my family. At the June 27, a movie , Transformer : Age of Extinction, was being watched by us in a famous London cinema, then the cell phone slipped from my pocket on the theater’s sitting seat, and I was unaware about the happening of this unfortunate event, until we reached our hotel room. Then, the whole matter was come into my notice, and the enquiry was done by me immediately, but it was too late.Given the circumstances, now, it would be greatly appreciated by me if your company could give the claim, which the price, 400$, of the mobile phone, as soon as possible, so that a new cell phone can be bought by me. I shall be very thankful to you for this.Yours faithfully,James Smith.General training test B (Task 2)Some people think that the teenage years are the happiness times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.[Answer 1]Every person wants to enjoy each stage of life happily. Some people believe that the best phase of life is teenage, while others perceive that adulthood is the happiest period.Adults can live joyfully in the following ways. Firstly, they can use the money earned in their profession to buy things which enable them to lead quality life. Further, they can have peace of mind as they start saving for future. Secondly, they are matured enough to understand what really makes them cheerful on a sustained basis with minimal effort. Due to this, they can rejoice every moment of their life as they could foresee and adjust accordingly. Thirdly, they can experience wide variety of events such as becoming a husband, father etc. Hence, they can enjoy life to the fullest possible extent. For instance, I became much happier and enjoying the role of husband after getting life partner. On the whole, adulthood provides plenty of opportunities to please ourselves.On the other hand, teenage is also pleasurable in several ways. Primarily, teenage people do not have any obligations or duties, therefore they can find free time to play the sports they like. Secondarily, the mistakes made by them are forgiven easily as they do not have maturity. Consequently, they can explore novel things which intrigue them. Nevertheless, sometimes they may get addicted to harmful habits such as smoking due to lack of mental maturity.To conclude, I opine that, adulthood is more enjoyable compared to teenage as they can experience diverse things which make life fulfilling despite the responsibilities, whilst teenagers can enjoy only a limited and specific set of things.[Answer 2]A popular topic talked about by people in all walks of life is which the most enjoyable age is. Some people say that it is school life whereas others prefer mature life. This essay will discuss both of these responses. However, in my opinion, adult age outweigh adolescent age.Regarding the young age, clearly its advantages come mainly from the low degree of responsibilities. First, people in thisfrom schools early leading to have a great amount of leisure time, unlike adults who tend to have short rest time because of work. In addition, due to their parent's support, these juveniles have only few things to be concerned about. To illustrate, when they get ill, they could stay on beds, because their parents will look after them. Therefore, they are likely to have a great number of pleasant days.On the other hand, although they are responsible for a variety of tasks, people in working age have two major benefits. Obviously, they earn money for themselves causing them to be able to afford more favorite items. A good example is expensive toys which could not be had in the past because parents though they were extravagant. They can buy it easily when they work. Similarly, adults are likely to be independent from any ones, particularly parents. Thus, they can do what they are keen on without limitations. For instance, sport lovers can come home very late in order to do exercise for long hours. This situation would be difficult to happen if they were children.To conclude, it is unfair to claim any side as a totally correct answer, because this is a subjective question. However, I missed several things in the past resulting from my parent's strictness. Hence, I prefer mature time to teenagers.。

雅思写作高分范文（21篇）雅思写作高分篇1也许是交通问题已经困扰世界各国人民太久了，所以各国政府都纷纷在交通建设和改善方面做出了不小的努力。

但是对于政府花钱建设更多的铁路而不是公路这样的`观点，我本人表示不能完全赞成。

It is perhaps the long-disturbing traffic issue that drives governments all over the globe to make great efforts in establishing or improving theirtraffic system. Nevertheless, I still cannot be enrolled in the camp that claims it is wise to construct railway rather than roads. (45 words)首先，我不得不承认修建铁路在某种程度上是一件利国利民的事情。

毕竟与其他交通方式相比，铁路运输的单位时间运载量最大，陆路运输速度最快。

同时，由于铁路运输依靠强大的运营系统控制其运行，几乎不会造成交通拥堵。

显然，修建铁路是一件有益的事情。

Undoubtedly, the railway construction, in a way, can be deemed as a win-win program for both the country and its citizens. After all, pared with other types of transportation, the transporting load of railage in a unit time is the largest and it is also the fastest approach of conveyance on land. Simultaneously, due to its strikingly strong operating system in running, it can scarcely entail any congestion. Evidently, it is advantageous to implement the plan referred to railway establishment. (80 words)但无论是铁路建设还是公路建设，都要取决于很多综合因素，比如城市发展规模、人口流动范围、地址环境等等。

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