2020年英语四级写作思路及范文指导（4）
作文类型：提纲式各抒己见对比论文。
作文话题：
Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phone 手机的利与弊
手机的好处。
手机的弊端。
我的看法。
考点分析：
“手机的利与弊”属提纲式各抒己见类议论文。也有书把此类写
作模式的作文归类于匹配对比类或比较对比类作文。写作的套路是
“一些人认为—— ;而另一些人认为——。我的看法是——。”
本文恰符合这个写作套路：一些人认为手机有很多好处;另一些人
却认为手机也有很多弊端。我的看法是：随着中国入世，手机费用会
随之大大下降，最终手机的利将远远大于弊。
理应指出的是各抒己见类作文与对比比较分析类作文极其相似，
其主要差别在于：前者最后一段是阐述我的看法，而后者仅仅得出一
般性的结论。
各抒己见类与对比比较分析类写作套路是四、六级作文类型中最
常见的，所以应重点掌握。
审题构思：
这是篇提纲式议论文。根据提纲提示，文章可采用三段式行文，
也可开篇引出导言段后，再采用四段式行文。经分析，文中所给的三
个汉语提示均可视为该段的主题句。全文框架如下，第一段主题句为：Cell phones are getting more and more important;二段主题句提
纲点为：advantages of he cell phone;第三段的主题句提纲点为：disadvantages of the cell phone;结尾段的主题句应为：My view is…。其全文及各段落框架具体构思如下：
全文构思
The cell phones are getting more and more popular and important.
Advantages of the cell phone
Disadvantages of the cell phone
My view is…
段落构思
第一段：
Topic Sentence
The cell phone plays a more and more important role.
Developing Sentence
It has both advantages and disadvantages.
第二段：
Topic Sentence advantages of the cell phone
Developing sentence 1 facilitate people’s life
Developing sentence 2 convenient for both callers and callees
Developing sentence 3 can be used as a tool to get on Internet
第三段：Topic Sentence disadvantages of the cell phone
Developing sentence 1 expensive to buy and use it
Developing sentence 2 might be harmful to people’s health
第四段：Topic sentence My view is its positive aspects outweigh its negative aspects
Developing sentence It has a bright future in development
新词拾贝
IT(information Technology)信息技术
cell phone手机
cellular phone users手机用户
e-commerce电子商务
get on Internet上网
wireless mobile telephone无绳移动电话
精品词汇
caller打电话者
callee受话人
via Internet通过因特网
conduct e-commerce从事电子商务工作 multifunction多功能
around the globe service世界通讯服务 pocket computer袖珍电脑
绝妙衔接
Nowadays…but like everything else,….
First,…Second,…Most important of all,…
However, …To make matters worse, …worst of all, …Last but not least,…
In my opinion, …And…
良好开端
Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT, cell phones play a more and more important role in people’s life.
Nowadays, cellular phones are getting more and more popular in China. However, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
With the development of information industry and its service levels being improved, more and more people nowadays use cellular phones.
As a useful communication tool and a good companion in modern life , cellular phones have both positive and negative points.
As is well known, everything has two sides. Likewise,
cell phones have both positive and negative aspects.
成功收口
It will be developed into Internet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers in the future. In a word, the advantages of the cell phone greatly outweigh its disadvantages.
With the rapid development of China’s telecommunications, the expenses of the cell phone will be greatly reduced, so
that everyone will be able to afford one.
组段成篇
读读范文，看范文的篇章结构，先用引言段引出手机既有利也有弊，接着对其利与弊实行对比分析，最后提出自己对手机利与弊的看法。
范文：
Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT, cell phones play a more and more important role in people’s life. But,
like everything else, they have both favorable and
unfavorable aspects.
First ,it’s useful. As a wireless mobile
telephone ,it’s easy and handy to carry it wherever one goes and call the callee however far away he is. Therefore, it greatly facilitates people’s life. Second, it’s convenient. Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can make
a call immediately. Most important of all, it’s a very
helpful companion. With a multifunction cell phone in hand, one can easily get on the net, browsing the useful information, conducting e-commerce and doing whatever one can do via Internet.
However, just as everything has two sides, the cell phone also has many disadvantages,. To begin with, it’s expensive
to buy and costly to pay the bills, esp. that of global service. To make matter worse, it’s also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired. Worst of all, it’s not as clear
as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is
often not available. Last but not least, it’s alleged the micro-waves in it might do harm to people’s health.
In my opinion, with its expenses greatly reduced after China’s entry into the WTO,. Someday most of them will be developed into new Internet-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket computers. And I believe its advantages will not only offset its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.
范文赏析：
这是篇议论文，文章开篇入题，一步到位。先由手机的重要性直接引入议题，手机虽在人们生活中越来越重要，但也是利弊掺半，并以此承上启下，自然过渡。
接着在第二段文章论述了手机的益处：方便、快捷、便于携带，能够用它上网等等。随后，作者用“世上任何事物都是一分为二的”完成段落的过渡，进而引出手机的弊端，如自身价格昂贵、费用难以承受、易于丢失、有时因音量过小不清楚等等。
最后，权衡利弊，通过“In my opinion”作者亮出自己的观点：随着中国入世手机费用的下降，“利”会远远超过“弊“，且手机未来的趋势会向掌上电脑型发展。
现象解释型模板一 1. Recently,__________. 2. What amaze us most is_________. 3. It is true that_________. 4. There are many reasons explaining_________. 5. The main reason is________. 6. What is more__________. 7. Thirdly, __________. 8. As a result_________. 9. Considering all these,_________. 10. For one thing,________. 11. For another,_________. 12. In conclusion,__________. 现象解释型模板二 1. As is known to all,_______. 2. ________seem to get accustomed to_________. 3. In fact,_______. 4. The reasons of ________lie in several aspects. 5. Firstly, ________. 6. Secondly,________. 7. Thirdly,_________. 8. Finally,_________. 9. As a matter of fact,_________. 10. On the one hand,_________. 11. On the other hand,__________. 12. Therefore,___________. 对比选择型模板一 1. Recently, we may hear quite different opinions__________. 2. Most people take it for granted that________. 3. However, others hold________. 4. A dominant idea is that_______. 5. In this view,_______. 6. Nevertheless, the objectors think________. 7. They argue that________. 8. As to me, I prefer________. 9. On the one hand,________. 10.On the other hand,________. 11. Therefore,_________. 12. In conclusion,_________. 现象解释型模板三
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大学英语四级快速阅读技巧 15分钟做完，先看小标题（现只看2-3个，多了也记不住），再通过1-7 小题的题干的名词、动词找出原句来做， 特别注意： 做题顺序，先看文章标题，直到文章主要内容，然后看第一小题，在小题部分的定位词先圈出来，在回原文找。找到第一小题后，再看第二小题。看一个题，作一个；不要把文章看完再做题，或题看完再读文章。 特别注意：比较容易定位的词是： A. 不能用中心思想词定位，因为整篇文章都说的是它。 B. 时间、数字、地点、大写字母的单词容易定位。 C. 比较长，难的名词容易定位，好找。 D. 定位词找2-3个就行，多了也记不住。最好是位置不同的两个词。 一般判断N0和NG的标准如下: NO题: (l)信息与原文相反 (2)将原文信息张冠李戴 (3)将原文中不确定的或未经证实的内容作为正确的或客观的来表述 (4)改变原文的条件、范围、频率、可能性等 NG题: (l)无中生有 (2)以个别代替整体，即将原文所举例子的特殊现象推广为普遍现象 (3)随意比较原文中提到的两个事物 (4)将原文具体化，即题目中涉及的范围小于原文涉及的范围 (5)原文中作者或某个人物的目标、目的、愿望、誓言等内容，在题目中作为客观事实陈述 Promote Learning and Skills for Young People and Adults This goal places the emphasis on the learning needs of young people and adults in the context of lifelong learning. It calls for fair access to learning programs that are appropriate, and mentions life skills particularly.
英语四级写作高分模板 英语四级写作高分模板(1) 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为…… 累了,休息下,去考试大在线网上辅导逛逛 2．另一些人认为…… 3．我的看法…… Thetopicof①________（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit. SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②____ ____（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③________（理由 二）.Moreover,④________（理由三）. WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.First ly,________（支持B的理由一）.Secondly （besides）,⑥____________.Thirdly（finally）,⑦____________（理由二） （理由三）. Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧________（我的观 点）.Thereasonisthat⑨____________（原 因）.Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Form e,theformerissurelyawisechoice. （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat①________（观点
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend t he teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students sh ould not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues. I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, an d to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject. 点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法，管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。
大学英语四级作文范文：朋友 请以朋友为话题，说说自己的想法。 参考例文一： With rapid development of computer technology, making friends online has become a hotspot among people, and people’s views about it vary from individual to individual. As for me,I would like to make friends in the real life rather than make friends online.Firstly,it is a waste of time to spend too much time in chatting online, and we have no enough time in studying. What’s worse,it does great harm to our health.Secondly the Internet is virtual,and there are all kinds of people in the virtual world.We are likely to be cheated.As a consequence,it will do damage to our property and https://www.doczj.com/doc/e32729549.html,st but not the least,the over-reliance on it will bring about psychological problems.For one thing,we will ignore our real parents and friends. Actually,we are becoming lonely. For another,we may avoid facing the fact. In a word,I don’t think that it is wise to make friends online. As an old saying goes great minds think alike,friends are the people who share happy and sorrow with you,not only chat. 参考例文二：