创作时间:二零二一年六月三十日之蔡仲巾千创作Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfat hertovisitmygrandparenfindabig changethere.ThefirsttimeI wentthere,theywerelivingina smallhousewithdogs,ducks,and anotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetor aisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohada smallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummerthey earnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelt happilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,Itoldmyfather thatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwo years,butheagreed.217全国1Inthesummer holiday followingmyeighteen birthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirst daywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’s orders,soonceIstartedthecar,my mindgoes blank,Iforgot what hehadsaidto mealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speed up!” “Slowdown!” “Turning left!”Iw assomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirect ionwasleffewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.Itwasarelie fandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthe middleontheroad.216全国1Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothat1live.Thoughno tverybig,buttherestaurantispopularin ourarealwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimemepeopleevenh adtowaitoutsideMyuncle tells methatthekeyto hissuccessishonest.Every dayhemakessurethatfresh vegetablesor highqualityoil are usingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingric hintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.215全国1WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity. IthinkIwould behappy there.NowIamlivinginacity,butI missmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountain saregreen.Unfortunately, onthe developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpol luted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthat globalwarming hasalready become averyseriouslyproblem. Theairswebreathe inisgettingdirtieranddirtier. Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaysto protectyourenvironmenfailtodoso,we’ll live to regretit.Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedSomecherry tomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyears-wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwherethey please.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere. Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Thereareso muchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors. Althoughweallowtomato plantstogrowinthesame place yearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydisea搜索引擎优化rinsectattackproblems. Wearegrowingwonderfully tomatoesatnocost!218全国2WhenI was little,Friday’snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesof all sort inthesittingroom.Asthekid,I lovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesI askedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottolet me.Theywouldsayto usthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillI unwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.I di dn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereI was achildturnedouttobe veryusefullaterinmylife.217全国2Mr. andMrs. Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakes themaboutahourand ahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirspare time,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden, that isontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealso boughtforsomegardeningtools.beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet.When summercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables!216全国2Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday. Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedto spendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyou viewandgainknowledges wecannotgetfrombooks. Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterest nearby.I thoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnot costmany,yetwecanstilllearn alot.Oneday,littleTony wenttoashopping centerwithhisparenasverycrowded. Tony sawatoyona shopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsome time,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansa whimdryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetosee youagain!DadandIwereterribleworried. ”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain. 2014全国2Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandt wo intheafternoon.Wedi dn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-school activitie example, wecando readingforoneanda halfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden .Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaround theclassroom buildings.We canlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachers herearekindand helpfully.Theyarenot onlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.2018全国3ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowould be calledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclass activity,otherswerenervousandanxiouhaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospea k infrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthat moment,Irememberedthat myfatheroncesaid,"Theclassroomisa placeforlearningandthatincludeleaningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,I raisedmyhand.2017全国3WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself.Irealizeofhowfast timefliehadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalso mentally inthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonth afterthisphoto wastook,Ienteredmysecond yearofhigh schoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub. Around meinpicture arethethingstheywerevery importantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments. Ienjoyedstudyingdifference kindsof carsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispicture oftenbringsbacktome manyhappymemoriesof yourhighschooldays.2016 全国 3Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworse yearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,m y parents didn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhat todoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmy parentscouldn’tunderstand mesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependent by wearstrange clotheamleavinghometocollege. Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemy parentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.2018全国1During mylast winterholiday,Iwentto∧ the countrysidewithmy father tovisitmygrandparen find foundabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,they werelivinginasmall house withdogs, ducks, andhereanother otherchickenstwinterwhenIwent∧ there which again,th eyhada bigseparatehousetoraisedozensof .chickensTheyalsohadasmallpondsell或theyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquiteain where happily lotby selling thefish.Ifelt happy thattheirlifehadimproved.Attheend ofourtrip,Itoldmyfather thatI plannedtoreturn for everytwoyears, butheagreed.a n d2017全国1 Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteen eighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessonstillrememberhowhard ∧ the/my firstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,I thoughtI hadlearnedthe instructor ’sorders,sobut/yet onceIstartedthecar,mymind wordgoes went blank .Iforg otwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.TheTurninginstructorkeptrepeating thewords,“Spee dup!”“Slowdown!”“ late Turn left!”Iwasso much nervous thatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleffewminutes suddenly later on,theinstructor asked metostopthecar.It wasa reliefandI cametoa sudden stopjustinthemiddle oftheroad.2016全国1 71. that →where72. but 去失落 73.had →have 74.honest →honesty75. or →and76. using →used 77.becoming 前加of 78. the →a79. our →htead →steadily2015全国176. think –thought 77.countryside 前加thr —and 79. on —with 80.been 去失落81. seriously —serious 82.airs —air 83.much —many 84. found —find 85. your —our2014全国12018全国2WhenIwas little, Friday ’s Fridaynightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplay card gamesof all so rtsorts inthesittingroom.Asthe a kid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhow manytimes Iaskedtowatching watchthem,myp a r e n tswo uldn otto letme.The ywoulds aytothat playingcardgameswould helpmybrain.StillIwas unwi llingtoplaythegames forwith themsometimedi dn’trealizehowrightmyparents are were untilI enteredhighschool.Thegamesmy parentstaughtme where when Iwasac hildturnedout tobeveryusefullaterin mylife.2017全国2Mr.andMrs.Zhangallbothworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemabout a hourandahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirsparetime,they areint erestinginplantingvegetablesinan /one int ereste dtheirgarden, thatwhichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.T heyof tenget up earlie r earlyandwaterthevegetablestogether. 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