高中英语建议信课件

Dear Lin Hao，
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②In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions： ______(建议的内容).
In my humble opinion， you would be wise to take the following actions：First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.

Style and tone
Advisor the style and tone used in the letter Are they appropriate for the purpose and audience?
Structure and coherence
Assess the overall organization of the letter Is the introduction clear, the body well developed, and the conclusion coherent?
Vocabulary issues
Insufficient vocabulary
Solution: Expand vocabulary
Create vocabulary cards to review and consolidate new vocabulary at any time.
Students often struggle to accurately express their ideas when writing suggestion letters due to insufficient vocabulary, resulting in low quality articles. Recommend students to read more English original works, news, magazines, etc., and accumulate commonly used vocabulary.
Ensure that your writing is not reactive or redundant Repeat important ideas sparsely and use different ways to express similar ideas

常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因

Welcome
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建议信
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文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
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套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
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6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke