英语写作----句子训练(九)

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1 句子结构之(九)——整合句子 基础写作信息量大,头绪繁杂,但却要求考生只能用5个句子表达全部内容,旨在考查考生驾驭语言材料、重组与输出语言信息的能力,因此考生必须学会整合句子。“整合句子”技能可以帮助考生在写作中,用尽量少的句子表达尽量多的内容: 写作中常用的整合句子的方法有以下几种: 一、使用with复合结构整合句子 with复合结构在句中可作原因状语、时间状语、条件状语、伴随状语和方式状语等。with复合结构的使用能使句子简洁紧凑。如: 1.The great writer died. His works were unfinished. →The great writer died with his works unfinished. 2.Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers. It has a population of about 20 million. →Australia covers an area of 7,686, 850 square kilometers with a population of about 20 million. 3.A young man was wandering in the street. A baby was sleeping in his arms. →A young man with a baby sleeping in his arms was wandering in the street. 二、使用并列连词整合句子 并列连词可用来连接一个句子里功能相同的词、词组、分句或从句,甚至是不同的句子。并列连词可将简单句整合成并列句,从而增加句子的信息含量。如: 1.The little boy had a bad cough. His mother took him to the doctor. →The little boy had a bad cough, so his mother took him to the doctor. 2.You are required to get rid of carelessness. Carelessness often leads to serious errors. →You are required to get rid of carelessness, for it often leads to serious errors. 3.You must study harder. You'll fail in the exam again. →You must study harder or you'll fail in the exam again. 4.It is a mainly dry country. Only a few coastal areas have adequate rainfall. →It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have adequate rainfall. 三、使用同位语整合句子 同位语可替代句子,避免重复表达,从而简化句子结构。如: He was Jim Thorpe. He was the greatest American athlete of modern times. →He was Jim Thorpe, the greatest American athlete of modern times. 四、使用非谓语动词整合句子 非谓语动词可充当主语、宾语、表语、定语、状语和补足语等成分。非谓语动词的使用可使句子简洁,重点突出。如: 2

1.The Great Wall has a history of over 2,000 years. It is considered as one of the wonders of the world. →Considered as one of the wonders of the world, the Great Wall has a history of over 2,000 years. 2.They were away for holiday in Japan. They left their children at home. →They were away for holiday in Japan, leaving their children at home. 五、使用从句整合句子 定语从句、名词性从句和状语从句可增加句子的层次感,增强表达效果。如: 1.He is a man of great experience, from whom much can be learned. 2.It makes no difference where we shall have the meeting. 3.He hid himself behind the tree in case his father should see him. 六、使用倒装句 Some valuable books and my credit cards are in it. →In it are some valuable books and my credit cards. 七、使用强调句型 Sun Yang broke 1,500 freestyle world record in the 2012 London Olympic Games. →It was Sun Yang who/that broke 1,500 freestyle world record in the 2012 London Olympic Games. 八、改变句子开头的方式 不要一味地采用“主语—谓语—宾语”的文法语序。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前,放在句子的开头,这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏,增加书面表达的表现力。 We met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together early in the morning. →Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together. The young man couldn't help crying when he heard the bad news. →Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn't help crying. 九、通过整合的方式 把几个松散的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来,也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化,使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。 We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. →After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess. [针对训练] Ⅰ.请按照括号内的要求对下面的句子进行整合 1.①I was assigned to do the laundry work in the Asian Games Village. 3

②The news left me a little disappointed.(用同位语从句整合句子) 2.①There are 350 million people smoking currently. ②The male smokers hold 75 percent and the female smokers hold 25 percent.(用定语从句整合句子)

3.①My country begins to carry out a policy. ②The policy prevents smoking in public places since January 1st, 2011.(用定语从句整合句子)

4.①J.K.Rowling was born in England. ②J.K.Rowling is the writer of Harry Potter. ③J.K.Rowling dreamt of being a writer from an early age.(用非谓语动词和同位语整合句子)

5.①Slightly more than 50% of the students are short-sighted. ②It ranks No.1 in the world.(用定语从句整合句子)

6.①Professor Wang pointed out the reason. ②The reason of short-sightedness is so complicated. ③There is still no cure for short-sightedness.(用宾语从句和状语从句整合句子)

7.①Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ②Shooting was a means of survival originally.(用同位语整合句子)

8.①As for me, Thomas Edison is my idol. ②His inventions have greatly changed our life.(用状语从句整合句子)

9.①John received an invitation to dinner and he gladly accepted it. ②His work was finished.(用with复合结构整合句子)