商志英语09模板

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商志英语09模板

大作文

第一段 :

How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is! It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help

thinking:_____. (这句自己加完整,从宏观上描述一下图画就可以,笼统的,大体的) ______while_______.(这

句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点,必须找到矛盾点,用到while这个单词) Simple as it looks,its

intended(或者用implied) meaning goes far deeper what on earth(究竟) does the drawer(作者) really aim to

convey.

第二段What the image above vividly mirrors(名词用做动词) goes far more than a simple image,insteed,it

carries(有) a thought provoking socia phenomenon:____.(本文的主旨)There are upsetting(如文章不是讽

刺性的,就把upsetting删除) parallels today in our contemporary community,and an acquaintance of mine may

serve as a good example.______.(用一句话或者两句话来举例)Another telling example is my fomer

colleague,who___.(另外一个例子,如果字数够就不用再举)

第三段: Much can be done. To begain with the schools and the mass media should develop noble and worthy

values and qualities among people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening

situation.(of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的句子,如果不换,这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺

性的,就把worsening删除)What is more,the authorities (当局)should play a dominant role in taking

nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是讽刺性的,就把curb换成promote) such practices.In conclusion ,all the

society should actively more sustained(持续) and concerted (一致)offorts.Although we still have a long way

to go ,a promising start has bagun,and a happy,healthy and harmonious(和谐) society may be not be far benind.

注意事项: 1不要写题目 2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副,单数还是复数3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画卡

通cartoon 也可以用以下几个picture image drawing illustration 图画Photo 也可以用以下几个

picture image photograph 4红色字体就是可以直接套用的。任何题材都可以。

小作文:

Dear Sir or Madam,(在没有明确收信人的时候,就用这个)

第一段:第1句介绍自己,按照这这个句型就可以I am a senior in Computer Science Department(计算机系)

of Fudan University. 第2句说明自己的目的__(自己写).第3句 So I am writing to you for help.或者I am

writing to present my reguest. 第4句通用句Thank you in advance for your attention to this letter.

第二段:第1句通用句There are a host of/ many a (许多)factors contributing to this decision(如果是邀请就写勤径论坛 http://bbs.qinjing.cc

invitation,如果是介绍信就写introduction)

如果是两点式 on one thing——。on another——。如果是三点式:首先:to begin with/ initivally/ primarily

第二:What is more/ moreover /in the second place第三:Additionally/in the third place

(以上自己选择一种,固定下来,只要遇到三段式就按照自己选择的词语写,但是注意in the second place

和in the third place不要重复用,可以避开)

第三段:I,d be most grateful if you can ____.Your kind reply to the letter (或者my inquiry)at your earliest

covenience would be very much appreciated.(通用句)

Yours sincerely(必须这样)Liming 商志英语08模板

小作文:介绍自己,说明目的,表示感谢。 ( 与奥运无关。)可能是:inquiry(咨询)invitation(邀

请)introduction(介绍)reguest(求助)complaint(投诉)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a senior in the (Computer science )Departtment of Wuhan(Fudan\Nanjing……)University.(处

境),so I am writing to (ask for your help\complain……)Thank you in advance for your attention

to this letter.

There are several(an array of\a host of)factors contributingto this (inquiry\reguest)(若

是两点)For one thing,_______________._________________.For

another,__________.____________.(若三点)Initially\primarily\To begin with,_______.In the

second place\What is more ,_________.Additionally,___________.

Your kind response to this (inquiry\reguest\ )at your earliest convenience will be

highly\greatly\very much appreciated.(若是邀请可继续写)It would be a great honor if you can

be on such an occasion.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

具体你根据要求再改。

大作文:

第一段:

Whoever in front of this image will be very much interested\amused\fascinated.How amusing

and fascinating it is! What is conspicuously\clearly illustrated\presented in it is that _____

描述__________。______补充描述___________.Odd and funny as it looks\is ,the drawer intends far

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第二段:

What on earth does the painter really attempt \aim\intend to communicate ?There is no denying

the fact that this drawing goes far beyond a simple drawing ,indeed.It carries a thought-provoking

social phenomenon---____主旨________.(普遍性)Nowhere in history have much

happenings\practices\issues\cases\events been concerned so much as in our society today.(史

上任何时期都比不上我们今天这样关切这种事情)Similar stories happened and happening are

available in nearly all walks of life , and one of my former colleagues may serve as a good

example.He_________举例______.

Another telling\persuasive example goes to an acquaintance of mine ,who___举例____.(严重性

及举措)According to a survey conducted by CCTV\China Daily\Wuhan University last May(随便

找个月份),68.2(百分号)(百分之多少自己造,但要超过50)of the people ____主旨_______.Failure

to realize the severity of such practices may inevitably bring about\lead to\result in dire

consequences.(或 Failure to take prompt nationwide cations will significantly reduce the