英语作文原因分析类ppt课件

读后续写型作文命题分析

二、对学生能力的要求 与应用文不同，故事续写型文章除了要求学生掌握丰 富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的 能力。 三、教师教学准备 一阶段：增加故事型完形和阅读的赏析和段落背诵 （情节设置衔接、动词的用法、动作的描述）适当增加新 概念故事类文章的讲解和背诵 二阶段：设定主题类继续段落的演练（加强词汇句型 的准确熟练运用；加强情节衔接的顺畅） 三阶段：故事续写类主题文章的大范围练习
读后续写型作文样题

The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （抢劫）！ Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shoutsof people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?” But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he stared to run.

coin has two sides. It still has its negative aspects. Firstly，……Secondly，…… What’s more，……
有关利与弊作文的写作模板
• 个人观点 Through the above analysis, I am in favor of…/ am a big supporter of…/approve
In my opionion, people can travel abroad if possible. But it depends on a person’s finance and health whether to travel abroad.
高中英语作文复习：优劣利弊 (共46张PPT)
B类只说“弊”的方面 缺点、不足之处、不利因素。 (1) (做)某事的不利因素显而易见。 The drawbacks/disadvantages of doing sth. are obvious/ apparent.
(2) (做)某事有好些不利之处。 There are several negative aspects/ weaknesses of doing…
Everyone smiles every day. Smile has a lot of advantages. Firstly,smile can reduce our pressure. In addition,smile helps us develop close relationship with other people. Last but not least, smile can help us keep healthy. In my opinion, ...

There is
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the lack of
作文点评+开头
Example 2: What are the reasons for the fake commodities Keys: In the first place, the lack of the public awareness of copyright protection is mainly responsible for this phenomenon. Furthermore, the government fails to effectively supervise the production of fake commodities. As a result, a large number of fake commodities are produced dramatically. Finally, there is a great profit incentive for manufacturers. Consequently, they produce the fake ones as possible as they could.
A (原因）
B(结果）
作文模板讲解-分析原因型
4. 陈述原因的常用（通用）理由/思路
（1）关于某种现象/趋势出现的原因 talk about the advantages of sth. （for example, convenience, efficiency) A concept of sth. A concept that +句子 a growing demand for a popular demand for Other general statements: P64

injured. When we do sports, do not get ourselves injured. 3. School hallways is always not wide, so don't crowded
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
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