My pet cat

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My pet cat
Look! This is my pet cat called Miaomiao. How nice it is!
She is black all over except her four feet and a small nose. Her
eyes are round and blue. I love her very much.
Every morning she gets up the earliest. Then she always
climbs up my bed and wakes me up. When we sit at table having
our meal ,she often runs under the table and even climbs onto
our knees. It seems as if she is saying, “Let me join you. I want
something to eat.”
Miaomiao likes to lie on the floor in the sunshine. She feels
comfortable that way. But can you guess what she likes best?
She likes playing with a ball of all. But she often loses her balls,
so I always help her find her balls. When she sees her balls
again ,she jumps and dances. How funny it looks. Miaomiao is
interested in catching mice. One day I saw a mouse ,when I
closed to him ,he ran away at once. While he was running,
Miaomiao saw him. And she ran out to the room in order to
catch the mouse. How interesting it was. At last ,she caught the
mouse. What a smart cat!
Miaomiao brings me much happiness, she is my best friend!
Do you think so?
湖南省岳阳市华容县实
验初中八年级1202班 徐碧瑶
指导老师 徐燕军
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